[25CentXan]

The Roster is the current roster of WWE superstars.

Champs:
Triple H: World Champ
Kane: WWE Champ
Trish: Women
Rey: Cruieser Weight
Shelton: Intercontinental



Story: The undertaker was recently burried alive by Triple H, But Undertaker took the World Heavy Weight Champ. With him under the grave. Triple H may be the World Heavy Weight Champ, but doesn't have the belt to show off.

Undertaker has been spotted recently, and rumors has it that there will be another Burried alive match, some people hope for a hell in a cell.

Also the Fact that Batista lost to A WWE diva took down fan support for Dave Batista. What will he do?


Anouncer: Coach, King


Raw: Week 1

Coach: Hello folks and welcome to Monday night Raw
King: Well we sure have a great show for you guys tonight.
Coach: We sure do, Triple H will be facing Big Show in a hardcore match.
King: Not only that, but John Cena will face off with Edge.
Coach: But we start things off with a great match
King: Yup and here they come out now

Announcer: Making his way to the ring, weighing in a 285 pounds, HBK!

Match 1: HBK Vs Carlito
Winner: HBK
HBK going for the sweet chin music, but carlito ducks, and HBK hits the ref. Chris masters run down, and beats up carlito while HBK looks. HBK goes for the sweet chin music again, and this time connects with carlito. He goes in for the pin.

**Commercial**






Match 2: Shelton Vs Chris Masters
Winner: Shelton
As Shelton Benjamin distracts the ref, momma goes for the low blow on Chris Masters. Shelton goes in for the pin



King: Well Coach this is my favorite match, Puppies!
Coach: I cant wait also. Its Trish Vs Victoria for the Women Champ.
King: Lets get the action starting.



**Commercial**






Match 3: Trish Vs Victoria-Women Champ
Winner: Trish
Trish goes for the pin and hold on to the ropes and gets the win. Victoria looks in anger as Trish laughs





Match 4: Cena Vs Edge
Winner: Edge
John Cena was about to go for the FU, And then Lita distracts the ref, edge with the low blow, then goes for the spear. Then for the pin, and wins.


King: Well it has come to this. A hardcore match
Coach: Yes, this should be a good one
King: Its Triple H Vs Big Show

***Commercials***



Match 5: Triple H Vs Big Show-Hardcore
Winner: Triple H
Triple H has been beating Big show all through out the match. Big show hits Triple H with the Steps, but when Triple H gets up he goes and gets the sledge hammer. 5 hits to the skull of big show. Triple H goes for the pedigree. 1-2-3

Coach: Wow what a way to end Raw. This surely was a great show
King: Tune in Next week as Triple H Will go One-On One with The Undertaker
Coach: That is if he shows up

Well what did you guys think?

 

[imprisonedrage]

Firstly aren't you doing a thread already? One thread per month

onto the show mate it's too short, make everything longer and more in detail you'll better eventually though..

 

[25CentXan]

The person who wanted to do it is taking long to do it, so I decided not to do it, also why should it be long?

 

[Flesh]

^^^Wow that's a good one, hee'll get better. Dude, no promos, interviews, or details. My suggestion is do as Taker did Bury your BTB. Now if you do another match next week I will laugh my head off.

 

[Stannis Baratheon.]

No promos? Very short indeed. I'd suggest you check out other threads. I bet your old partner was actually putting effort into their work unlike you.

 

[ocire]

no wonder your partner was taking so long to you.. you wrote this in what... 5 minutes? 10 minutes if you're a slow typer...?

 

[25CentXan]

First show there were no promos and such, until the characters develop.

 

[ocire]

but.. that's how you develop characters. you have to have a promo otherwise you never have any fueds.

 

[simon115]

come on man, put some effort in

 

[HBKHART_screwjob25]

yeah you got to work on your show but you will get better and better

 

[25CentXan]

Smackdown: Week 1

Tazz: Welcome everybody to an exciting eddition of Smackdown
Cole: That it is partner. I can't wait. I heard that someone from Raw might be comming here to smackdown.
Tazz: I heard that also, but can you believe that Mark Henry will face off Rey today in a Steel Cage match?
Cole: It should be good. I can not wait.


Match 1: Boogeyman Vs Booker T
Winner: Booker T
At first the Boogeyman trys to put some worms in Bookers mouth, but Booker quickly gets out of the way and goes for some slaps. Near the end, Booker T goes for the Book End, but Boogeyman reverses, And Booker T Tries again for the book end. This time it connects. 1-2-3.

**Commercial**


Setting: Backstage

*Melina Combing hair* Mark henry comes in
Mark Henry: Ha Ha. I got Rey tonight in a cage, he is all mine
Melina: Hey listen, If you can beat rey tonight, I got a suprise for you
Mark: Don't worry, he is a goner

*MNM comes in*

MNM: Whats this guy doing here?
Melina: Meet Mark Henry, He is going to be helping us a bit
MNM: What this big bear?
Henry: Listen you rat, I am here to help you out, If you don't want me to I can just beat the shit out of you

Tazz: Wow that is one angry guy
Cole: Speaking of Angry, Lashely should be Angry after what Randy Orton did to him last week.
Tazz: I bet he is, But he can take out his anger tonight in his match tonight with Ken Kennedy.


Match 2: Lashely VS Kennedy
Winner: Kennedy
The bell rings, And all of a sudden Randy orton comes down to the ring, Lashely is distracted, Kennedy goes for a quick pin and 1-2-3. What a short match. Randy orton is looking on with a smirk, as lashely is angry.


**Commercial**


*JBL comes down to the ring*

JBL: I fight every day for all you cheap ass bastards, and what do I get? Nothing! Not one thing. I haven't had a title shot in over 2 months, and I am demanding one.

*Manager Comes out*

Long: Well hold on JBL, If you want a title match, I will give it to you...If you beat Benoit Today, you will have your title shot for the US Champ, Good luck

Match 3: JBL Vs Benoit-Contender match
Winner: JBL
When benoit came in to the ring, JBL went with serious punches and kicks, and started working on the lower back, out of no where when the ref was not looking JBL goes for a low blow then for the pin. 1-2-3.


**Commercial**

Match 4: Rey Vs Mark Henry
Winner: Mark Henry
As the match starts Mark Henry is dominating Rey. Then MNM, and Melina come in to the ring. They are watching the match. Rey is distracted. Mark Henry goes for a power bomb, and Melina goes to distract the ref. As the ref is distracted Mark Henry gets a chair, and busts Rey open, he then goes for another power bomb, 1-2-3.


Tazz: Wow what a match, Rey must be angry at what happened
Cole: He sure must, Well tune in next week folks to see what happenes.

 

[imprisonedrage]

the show was still way too short here's some tips

use colours, bolds, italics
make the matches more detailed and longer
make the promos longer

Overall - 4/10 your show is way to short

 

[25CentXan]

So if it was longer it would be better?

 

[The Rock™]

First of all read other guys BTB, then make up yours. It'll help you IMO.

 

[25CentXan]

Well Week 2 Raw will be better.

 

[New School Fire]

Smackdown week one was just as long as Raw week one, so like the others said just take a look at other peoples shows and just try to make the shows longer.

Looking forward to you posting Raw weeks 2