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thanx for pointing that out, I fixed that and added the general manager and owner.
 

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Monday Night Raw (May 2, 2005) Chicago, Illonois

Raw starts with Kurt Angle's entrance music. Angle makes his way to the ring with plenty of "you suck!" chants from the crowd to his music. An invitationalist is already in the ring. Once Angle enters the ring he grabs a mic.

Kurt Angle: I'm an Olympic gold medalist. And we all know Chicago isn't a city of champions...
(crowd boos)
The Chicago Cubs? Bears? A goat? A cow? Steve Bartman...?... The only thing you had was Michael Jordan, and even he wanted to leave this place.
(crowd continues to boo)
oh it's true, it's true... but tonight I will have yet another Kurt Angle invitational to see if some worthless scum-bag can give me a descent match. So kid what's your name?
Invitationalist: um.. Josh...
Josh, huh? well Josh, do you really think you can beat me?

Angle pretends to hand the mic to him for another response just before Kurt Angle gives a worthless cheap shot to the kid and angle slams him. Before you know it Angle has the ankle lock on him. The kid taps out immeadeatly, but Angle keeps going. Referees and security head down to the ring to take Angle off and do so successfully.
JR: This is just pathetic.
King: oh JR, shut up, Josh should've known better than to step in the ring with an Olympic gold medalist.



--commercials--

Match 1: Super Crazy vs. Paul London
Both enter the ring with descent pops from the crowd.
The match begins.. This wasn't a long match at all, but it was a descent match to kick off Raw. Paul London starts off in dominating fashion with a flying leg drop on Super Crazy. It looked as if the match was all but over, but the momentum shifted once Super Crazy clothes-lined London off the ropes. Super Crazy finishes the match off with the trifeata.

Winner by pinfall: Super Crazy

(backstage)

Christian runs into Teddy Long's office..


Teddy Long: What's up playa.
Christian: yea, yea, look man, I deserve a title shot against Triple H, tonight! There's nothing like seeing Captain Charisma as the Heavy Weight champ, right? whadda ya say?
Teddy Long: Hold on a minute playa. There's a whole lotta other guys out there that want a shot at the title just as much as you do, but I can give you a match tonight.
Christian: you can!?!
(Enthusiastic and happy)
Teddy Long: yes I can playa, but not with HHH.
Christian: What are you talking about?
(smile turned to frown)
Teddy Long: This past week I got some phone calls from someone who's been away from the ring for a while now and well, he said he wants to be back in action. So, I guess you'll be facing him tonight.
Christian: well, who is he?
Teddy Long: that's for me to know, and for you to find out playa.
Christian: What? wait, wait, wait, you expect me to fight someone when I don't even know who he is?
Teddy Long: If you want a shot at Triple H, then yes I do playa.
Christian: Atleast give me a hint..
Teddy Long: well, he's a legend, one of the greatest wrestlers to step in a ring.

(Christian doesn't even respnd, and walks out of Long's office, then Christian begins to talk to himself)
If I beat a legend,... I'll be a legend... yea!(smiles and walks away)

--commercials--

JR: Folks, you heard it yourselves, tonight a so-called "legend" will be facing Christian.
King: JR, tonight is the night Captain Charisma becomes a legend and FINALLY gets his shot at the title

Match 2: MNM
(Tag Team Champs) vs. Hurricane and Rosie
MNM enter the ring in their paparatzi fashion. The lovely Melina did her usual split to entertain the men in the crowd.
The match starts...
MNM dominated this match that lasted less than two minutes. Mercury side-walk slams Hurricane and Melina strip teases Rosey as Mercury gets the count on Hurricane.

Winner by pinfall: MNM


King: I'm tellin you JR, this team's a force to be reckoned with


(As MNM celebrates, their music gets cut, interupted by Muhammad Hussan's music. Muhammad Hussan has a mic in his hand and is not accompanied by Devari.)

JR: Another ignorant interuption by Hussan

Muhammad Hussan: This is a perfect example of the discrimination and prejudice that goes on in the WWE. I have yet to be pinned in a match, yet I don't get any respect. You guys on the other hand... are the perfect example of ignorant and spoiled Americans, thinking your stars. Less than two weeks in the industry and your tag team champions? this is pathetic!


Muhammad Hussan attacks the tag team champs, punch after punch, eventually tossing them over the ropes and chasing them off to the backstage, leading to a commercial break...

--commercials--

Carlito's Cabanna with Edge

Edge makes his way to the ring, with Carlito already in the ring. Edge comes in, in usual fashion showing off his money in the bank briefcase.

Carlito: So, Mr. Money in the bank... when do you plan to use it?
Edge: None of your damn business...
Carlito: no need to get all mad just cause I ask you a question.
Edge: Look "Mr. Cabanna", you wanted me to be in your little stupid segment, and well here I am..
Carlito:your..... not COOOL.
(crowd cheers)
it's funny how you won the money in the bank match.
Edge: Funny? you think that's funny? lemme tell you something nappy boy, I am the most under-rated talent in WWE history, and I finally have my shot.
Carlito: yea, yea, that's all cool, but you screwed Matt.
Edge: what are you talking about?
Carlito: You think nobody knows? Everyone backstage knows you and Lita got Matt Hardy fired.

(Edge in shock)
see, getting somebody fired for no reason,(shakes head) that's not cool.
but you know what is cool?.. that you'll be facing Matt Hardy at Judgement Day.

(crowd goes crazy, as Edge is in shock.)
Edge smacks Carlito. Carlito angrily kicks Edge in the gut and DDTs him. Carlito stares at him on the ground and takes a bite of his apple, and spits it in his face.
Carlito's music plays as he exits...


--commercials--

King: What was that all about JR? Did you know Matt Hardy got fired becuase of Edge?
JR: I had my speculations but I didn't know for sure, but something I do know for sure is that at Judgement Day Edge will be facing Matt Hardy, meaning Hardy is back in the WWE.

Match 3: Gold Dust vs. Rikishi

Gold Dust enters the ring first in his theatrical fashion, followed by Rikishi making his comeback in the ring.
Rikishi enters the ring with the "Too Cool" music.
The match starts...
Gold Dust pokes Rikishi in the eyes, and goes off the ropes and does a running bulldog, Rikishi quickly gets up and as Gold Dust comes off the ropes he gives him a kick to the chin. Rikishi pounds Gold Dust with punches on the ground and then lifts him up and body slams him. Rikishi taunts the crowd to make some noise, but while he's doing that Gold Dust low-blows him, something the ref doesn't see. Gold Dust attempts to do the Director's Cut, to finish the match up, but Rikishi is able to move out of the way. Rikishi headbutts Gold Dust and sends him off the ropes to catch Gold Dust in the Rikishi Driver, he does the move successfully to take the pinfall.

Winner by pinfall: Rikishi


--commercials--

JBL's music plays in the arena as a limo enters towards the ring. A limo driver comes out and opens the door, out come the Bashams followed by JBL, and Orlando Jordan. All four hit the ring, not scheduled for a match. JBL grabs the mic as the other three members of the Cabinet do their Cabinet signal.

JBL: Chicago... you are witnessing one of the most elite groups in WWE history. The Cabinet has taken the WWE by storm. As Orlando Jordan as Intercontinental Champion, and the fact that I will take the Heavy Weight Championship away from Triple H. And the Basham Brothers will be fighting for the Tag Team Championship belts next week on Raw. It just so happens that every member of the Cabinet can be holding a belt in the coming weeks, just to assure our spot as the GREATEST, most respectable, and elite group of talent in the history of the World Wrestling Entertainment.

(crowd boos, as the lights turn off.. a fairly long pause takes place as no one knows what is going on. The lights begin to flash as the attention goes to the big screen, the lights now dimmed, not completely on or off. On the big screen shows up The Undertaker with three people behind him. The three are dressed in black cloacks and unable to know who they are.)

Undertaker: JBL... for years I have reaked havoc in the WWE... and to make such a claim that you have the most elite group in history is obsurd. The Undertaker has reached the point where I must end such pathetic statements made by such a coward as you. Behind me are the three men that along with me form The Ministry, and on Thursday Night, I will team up with one of these men to face you and one of your chief of staff members. It is time to unleash what I've been planning my whole career, to end this industry once and for all. JBL... prepare for your death certificate.

Undertaker rolls his eyes back as the screen goes black and the lights go back up. The members of the Cabinet along with JBL are in complete shock as a torch of fire unlit, stands on all four corners of the ring. They are all visibly frightened and attempt to leave the ring, as soon as JBL tries to leave the ring, the torches light in tremendously large fires. The cabinet run out immeadiately as the show heads to a commercial break

--commercials--

Chris Masters' music goes on and he does his own theatrical entrance, and goes to the ring. He grabs the mic once he's in the ring, and begins to talk..

Chris Masters: Nobody has ever gotten out of my masterlock, so I'm offering one...

Before Masters can even finish his first sentence he gets interupted by none other than the rabid wolverine; Chris Benoit. Chris Benoit, walking towards the ring, begins to speak...

Chris Benoit: You know what kid.. I;ve been watching you backstage for the past couple of weeks and its time someone shuts you up.

Benoit jumps into the ring as Masters begins to pound on him. Referee Earl Hebner runs down and rings the bell to signal the beginning of the match...

Chris Masters continues to pound Benoit, and then picks him up and attempts to put the masterlock on him, just before Benoit breaks out of it before it was even put on. Benoit begins to irish whip Masters. Benoit throws Masters off the ropes as Masters ducks from a clothes-line and delivers a kick to the gut to Benoit. Chris Masters attempts a powerbomb, just to
get it reversed for a pin count.


JR: 1...2...and he's up. What a great match up, seeing Chris Benoit, one of the better wrestlers today up against a future star in Chris Masters.

King: sorry JR, but Masters is going to be a legend, as for Benoit, he's only good for lying through his tooth!


Chris Benoit steps to the top rope and attempts a flying headbutt, but Masters is able to move out of the way leaving Benoit down in agony. Masters slowly gets up and tosses Benoit over the top rope. He gets out of the ring and throws Benoit to the metal railing. Masters then goes to look for a chair. He pushes Lilian Garcia out of the way and gets a chair. Earl Hebner attempts to stop Masters, warning him that he will be DQ'd. Masters tosses Benoit into the ring and then steps in himself with the chair just to recieve a drop kick, with the chair adding even more pain.
Benoit then gets up, visibly exhausted and taunts the crowd with his cutting the neck gesture. He then puts the crippler crossface on Masters. Masters eventually taps out.

Winner by submission: Chris Benoit


JR: What a match king!
King: Good match but the outcome wasn't the way I wanted it to be
JR: well folks, still to come tonight is Christian vs. an unknown legend according to Teddy Long, that's up next!


--commercial--

Christian's entrance music plays as he makes his way to the ring accompanied by Tomko. After he enters the ring a long anticipation waits on who his challenger is. A long pause adds to the anticipation but all of a sudden the sound of two cars crashing happens and the crowd goes wild. And the music plays of Mic Foley!

JR: Oh My God! It is a legend folks. It's Mic Foley!
King: Now this was something I didn't expect!


Mic Foley enters the ring with a huge standing ovation. The bell rings as the match starts. Its starts off as both engage in a grapple, and for the first thirty seconds both start off in grapple fashion. Christian than sends Mic Foley off the ropes and gives him a drop kick, but Foley gets up quickly and smiles. He then gives Christian a kick to the gut, and grabs him in a headlock, Christian is able to get out of it and sends Foley off the ropes once again and clothes-lines him. Christian then attempts the pin..
1...2... Foley breaks out.
Foley uppercuts Christian and sends him hard to the turnbuckle. Mic Foley looks around and then pulls out... MR. SOCKO!
Foley applies the mandable claw on Christian, until Christian sends a knee to the mid-section. Christian then spits on the side of the ring and then attempts to throw Foley off the ropes but instead all he does is knock the referee out. Tomko then grabs a chair and makes his way to the ring and smashes Foley's head with it. Foley, who's still standing though hurt, gets bulldogged by Christian.


JR: This is obsurd king, we get to see one of the greatest wrestlers of all-time and instead we see a bunch of cheap shots by Christian and Tomko.
King: Come on JR!, Christian gives it his all and'll do anything to get the win. That's why he's captain charisma!


As the referee begins to get up Tomko leaves the ring. Christian finishes it off with the unprettier, and gets the pinfall.
1...2...3...

Winner by pinfall: Christian

Tomko enters the ring and congratulates Christian, as Mic Foley lies down on the ground.


JR: This is not a pretty site folks. Christian defeats Mic Foley in unproffesional fashion.
King: JR.. I think we may soon have a new Heavy Weight Champion!
JR: I guess we'll just have to wait and see, King, wait and see...
 

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Excellent show for your debut, good promos, very good matches. I think you can write BTB with flying colors. Good job. One ques., why did you put the show in Quotes?
 

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thanx, interested to see what other people think, since it was my first show. Smackdown will be up in the coming days.

lol @ the quote thingy. Trying to be different and thought it would take up less space. guess not lol.

anyways uppin on further feedback.
 

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WWE.COM- Teddy Long has announced that Chris Benoit will be facing Shelton Benjamin for a shot at the number one contender for the intercontinental title next Monday Night on Raw.

uppin for more feedback on Raw, my first show..


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KANGAROO said:
was pretty crazy but why is jbl on raw. hes on smack down niggoar. carlito is gay
YOUNG MARSUPIALs
I clearly stated that the rosters are put together in my BTB, there is no ''one brand'', it's just one ol' big roster like the old days..

I hope to have Smackdown up by tonight.

p.s- I took the quotes off to make everybody happy. lol.
 

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Thursday Night Smackdown (May 5, 2005) Denver, Colorado

John Cena's "My Time is Now" plays as he makes his way to the ring.

Michael Cole: Ladies and gentlemen welcome to Thursday Night Smackdown, and what a show we have stored for you tonight as John Cena makes his way to the ring.
Tazz: I'm tellin ya Michael Cole, I can't WAIT! to hear what the Doctor of Thuganomics has to say tonight.


John Cena greets the crowd and then grabs a mic...

John Cena: DENVER CHAIN GANG!... MAKE SOME NOISE!!(the crowd cheers)
Next Monday Night on Raw, Christian of all people is gonna get a shot at the Heavy Weight title... BUT NAH! Triple H, I want you!(crowd goes wild)
If Christian can get a shot at it, there's no reason why I can't get a shot at it. Because see, don't get me wrong Triple H... your are an 11 time Heavy Weight Champ, BUT you've never gone through me! See Triple H, your nothin but old, wasted garbage, and trust me, your days are well behind you.
(Muhammad Hussan's entrance music plays and interupts Cena. Hussan stops at the titan-tron fully dressed in a suit and tie. Muhammad Hussan is alone, the same as Monday, without Devari.)
Muhammad Hussan: This past Monday Night... I attacked MNM to show that I am willing to do whatever it takes to make my name in the WWE. And Cena, I'm willing to run through you as well to get my shot at the Heavy Weight Title.
(By this time Muhammad Hussan is walking towards the ring)
Christian can ask for a title shot, and he'll get it... you can ask for a title shot, and you'll get it, but me? NO! the discrimination and prejiduce that goes on in this company disables me from getting that shot, I have yet to be pinned in the WWE, YET NO RESPECT IS GIVEN TO ME!
John Cena: whoa, whoa, whoa... hold on a minute homeboy... all you seem to do since you've been around the ring is complain about this and complain about that... well guess what? I'VE JUST ABOUT HAD IT WITH YOU! So if you think your gonna get by me... go right ahead, cause I'll be waitin

(Theodore Long's music hits as he makes his way to the ring)
Teddy Long: Hold on a minute playa! Niether of you two have done anything to deserve a title shot. But lemme tell you what I can do for both of you TONIGHT!... You two WILL have a match tonight, but not no ordinary match, no sir... The winner of tonight's match will face either Christian or Triple H at Judgement Day... But that's not all!
Tonight's match will be...... a lumberjack match.
(crowd erupts)
That's right, a number one contender's lumberjack match, now can ya'll give me a holla, holla, holla!!
(The crowd gives even more cheers and John Cena stares into the eyes of Muhammad Hussan, as the show heads into a commercial break)

--commercials--

Match 1: Rob Van Dam vs. Lance Storm

Both make their usual entrances, as RVD makes his return to the ring after being out due to injury. The bell rings as the two start the match. Lance Storm gets RVD in a headlock, as RVD reverses it and throws him off the ropes to give him a drop kick. Lance Storm later sends RVD over the ropes and starts pounding on him outside the ring. He then throws RVD in and serves RVD with a spinning heelkick. RVD is visibly hurt as Lance Storm heads for the pin, but RVD kicks out at the 2 count. Lance Storm is shocked that he was able to kicked out and argues with the referee saying it was a three count. Lance Storm then picks RVD up and throws him on the rope and tries for a clothes-line, but RVD ducks out the way and gives another dropkick to Lance Storm. Make way for Air Van Dam, as RVD does his ever popular running summersault body attack (Air Van Dam), which knocks
Storm out. RVD taunts the crowd with his R-V-D point, which makes the crowd go wild. RVD climbs the top rope and gives Lance Storm the five-star frog splash. RVD heads for the pin, and gets it.


Winner by pinfall: Rob Van Dam

--commercials--

(backstage)

Rob Van Dam is seen walking in the hallway towards his lockerroom visibly sweating from his match with Lance Storm. He just so happens to bump into Eric Bischoff.


Bischoff: Hey RVD, nice to see you back in the ring
RVD: yea dude, it's great to be back in action
Bischoff: yea, yea I can tell, but um.. you know RVD,... the WWE's been missing something, and me and Teddy Long, well we were just discussing this the other day. The WWE is missing some excitement, some extreme wrestling, the type of wrestling that makes your mouth drop every single match, the Hardcore Championship

(the crowd is heard going wild)
RVD: yea man, it'd be nice to see that back in the WWE.
Bischoff: It would, wouldn't it?.. and the funny thing is, I have the power to put that back in the WWE, so you know what?, I'm gonna do just that, and well since we're only a couple of weeks away from Judgement Day, I'd thought we'd spice things up... so at Judgement Day, there will be an 8-man Hardcore championship match, and well RVD, since you are a former
Hardcore champion yourself, I'd like to give you the honors and offer you that first spot in the match, so whadda ya say? for old times sake..

RVD: yea, I like that idea, nothin like coming back to the WWE and get a shot at a title, so put me down.. put me down.


The crowd goes wild as the camera returns its focus to ringside..

Michael Cole: You heard it yourself Tazz, at Judgement Day Rob Van Dam, and seven other men will be in a Hardcore Championship match, and Tazz... there's nothin like that Hardcore title.
Tazz: Your perfectly correct Michael Cole, there's no other match that puts you in more danger and excitement than a Hardcore match where the only rule is.. well.. that there is no rules!

Match 2: Heart Throbs vs. Dudley Boyz

Tazz laughs as the Dudley Boyz make their way to the ring. Bubba-Ray and D-Von seemed focused and enter the ring ready to roll. Out come the Heart Throbs in their "show-off male stripper" fashion. Once they enter the ring and begin their little gimmick Bubba-Ray and D-Von waste no time and attack both of the Heart Throbs. The referree stops Bubba Ray and sends him to
the corner as D-Von starts it out for the Dudleyz. The Heart Throbs, who are now outside the ring, look more serious than they have ever been, as the Heart Throbs skip their rock, papers, scissors, and Antonio attacks the ring. He runs towards D-Von just to get a quick spine buster. D-Von goes off the ropes and gives him a leg drop as Romeo steps in the ring to help Antonio, Bubba Ray tries to enter as well, as the ref focusses on Bubba-Ray as The Heart Throbs continue their double team and give D-Von a double drop kick. As the ref turns Romeo gets back to his corner just to get a quick tag and enters and pounds on D-Von. Romeo taunts the crowd not paying attention to the tag that D-Von puts on Bubba Ray. Bubba Ray charges in and sends Romeo off the ropes and gives him a hard kick to the gut. Bubba then gives him the bubba cutter followed by a suplex. Antonio attempts to enter the ring just to get ddt'd by Bubba Ray. Bubba Ray goes down for the pin and is successfull.


Winners by pinfall: Dudley Boyz

Tazz: What a win the Dudley Boyz pulled off here tonight, great match, great match..


The Dudley Boyz stand winners as Bubba-Ray continues to stare at Romeo. Bubba Ray then pushes D-Von...
"D-VON!... GET THE TABLE!".. D-Von exits the ring and looks under the apron of the ring to find a table and tosses it in. They set it up and give the fans what they've all been waiting for.. the Dudley Death Drop.


Michael Cole: Oh my goodness Tazz, a 3D right through the table, just insane.
Tazz: That's gotta hurt!, he won't be wakin up anytime soon


--commercials--

JBL's music plays as a limo enters and out come JBL and Intercontinental champion, Orlando Jordan. They enter the ring seemingly all business. The crowd is just as anxious to see who the first member of the new Ministry actually is and will be teaming up with the Undertaker. The lights turn off as a long pause takes place. Now plays Undertakers music as he comes out
with a man following him with a black cloack, the same as seen on the screen on Raw. Undertaker enters the ring with JBL and Orlando Jordan visibly frightened standing outside the ring. Undertaker rolls his eyes back as the lights turn on. Undertaker steps to the cloaked man, stares and pulls off the hood of the cloak..


Michael Cole: Who the hell is that?
Tazz: OH MY! That's Vampiro!
Michael Cole: who?
Tazz: VAMPIRO! oh man, Michael Cole, that man is a tremendous talent, who wrestled a good while for the WCW.


Match 3: JBL and Orlando Jordan vs. The Undertaker and Vampiro


The crowd seemed shock. The Undertaker was set to start it off as JBL was bossing around Orlando Jordan to enter the ring first, visibly scared. Jordan enters the ring as the bell rings. Orlando Jordan slaps Undertaker as he looks straight at him. Orlando Jordan slaps Undertaker again just to get punched in the mouth, and tossed to the ring as The Undertaker sends a boot
to the face of Orlando Jordan. Undertaker tags Vampiro as he makes his way to attack Orlando Jordan and climbs the top rope and sends a front flip drop kick to Orlando Jordan. Vampiro stares at JBL, JBL stares back. Vampiro pulls up Orlando Jordan and sends him off the ropes just to have Orlando Jordan escape the ring with a baseball slide. Vampiro goes off the other side of the ropes and jumps over the other side and tries to land a high flyer just to have Orlando Jordan move out of the way. Jordan lands a set of punches on Vampiro as Undertaker jumps down and Orlando Jordan runs into the ring and quickly tags JBL. Vampiro also enters the ring and applies the tag on Undertaker. The both engage in a grapple as Undertaker sends JBL off
the ropes to give him a boot to the face.
10 minutes pass...
Undertaker gets the tag by Vampiro and now heads for Orlando Jordan, who is now the legal man. Undertaker sends a kick to the gut and powerbombs him. Undertaker throws JBL into the ring himself and gives him a set of punches and chokes him on the ground. Out come the Bashams running down the ramp way, and attack Undertaker and Vampiro. The ref rings the bell..


Winners by Disqualification: Undertaker and Vampiro

The Bashams and JBL continue to pound on Vampiro and Undertaker, but the lights go off. Out comes running Gangrael and as the lights come out, starts man-handling all of the Cabinet.

Tazz: I've never seen anything like this. Now we know the second member of the Ministry is, it's Gangrael!
Michael Cole: We all remember Gangrael, who spent many years in the WWE, and was actually part of the Ministry back in the Federation days


The lights turn off again, this time for a good while. When they come back the Ministry is no longer there and a torch stands lit on each corner of the ring, similar to what was seen on Raw. The Cabinet laid hurt as the show went to a commercial break..

--commercials--

Match 4: Kurt Angle vs. Hurricane

"Watch out.. there's a Hurricane coming through." Hurricane's music plays as he makes his way to the ring scheduled for a solo match so he is not accompanied by Rosey. Hurricane does his super hero act as Kurt Angle's music interupts. The "you suck" chants are louder than ever as Angle runs to the ring, and puts a beating on Hurricane. Angle delivers a strong set of punches and then does a suplex on Hurricane. At this point Hurricane seems helpless. He sends him off the ropes and does the Angle slam and then puts on the ankle lock. After a little while, Hurricane taps out and the ref calls for the bell.

Winner by submission: Kurt Angle

Tazz: What an impressive show that Kurt Angle just put on.
Michael Cole: I can agree with you to an extent Tazz, but you have to admit that in rescent weeks Angle has been having meaningless matches, which prove nothing.
Tazz: So now your sayin that Hurricane can't fight? Come on Michael Cole, he'll beat you up
Michael Cole: Your probably right, but its just...
Tazz:yea yea, I understand what your sayin
Michael Cole: Thank You.
Tazz: Your sayin Hurricane sucks...(laughs).. I'm gonna tell him that


(Backstage)

Kane walks into his locker room where Lita stands. Kane grabs her by the hair.


Lita: Hey, hey honey..
Kane: Listen to me... did you see what happened on Raw with Edge?
Lita: um,.. no, no why?

(Kane grabs her even harder)
Kane: Don't lie to me!
Lita: I'm not, I'm not
Kane: If I find out that you've had or STILL HAVE an affair with Edge, I promise you that I will destroy
him, and finish BOTH of you off.

Lita: I don't know what your talkin about
Kane: DON'T PLAY STUPID WITH ME! You know what I'm talkin about... so next Monday Night on Raw I'm gonna have a match with Edge, and I WILL get to the bottom of this.

(Kane gives a rough kiss to Lita and leaves the room, Lita extremely frightened)

Tazz: What was that all about?
Michael Cole: I don't know Tazz, but one thing I do know is that coming up next is the number one contender's lumberjack match that co-general manager Theodore Long promised us earlier tonight. That's up NEXT!


--commercials--

Main Event: John Cena vs. Muhammad Hussan

With the lumberjacks already at ringside,Muhammad Hussan makes the entrance first, this time accompanied by Devari, which leads to huge confusions by the crowd. After Hussan enters the ring John Cena's music plays as he runs down to the ring...

Michael Cole: And John Cena wasting no time on Hussan as he attacks in dramatic fashion.

John Cena throws punch after punch on Muhammad Hussan, and Cena quickly taunts Hussan with the "you can't see me".
10 minutes into the match..
Cena throws Hussan over, as Super Crazy and Big Show start pounding on him and then throw him back in, just to get tossed to the otherside as Chris Benoit delivers a german suplex and Matt Morgan throws him back in. Cena begins to laugh and throws Hussan off the ropes, but somehow Muhammad Hussan is able to send a kick to the chin of Cena, who quickly gets up.
Muhammad Hussan begins to gain momentum as he pushes Cena to the corner and begins to irish whip him. Muhammad Hussan then sends Cena over the ropes as Rosey head buts him and Psychosis gives a mini-flying leg drop from the steps. Big Show does the honors of throwing him in.
5 minutes later...
By now the match is fairly even. Hussan nows has Cena in a headlock but Cena reverses it and sends him of the ropes and catches him in the perfect position to do the FU and gets it done. All of a sudden Triple H's music begins to play as he runs down with a steel chair. He hits some of the stars in the way and enter the ring and delivers a shot to the head of John Cena. The ref rings the bell..


Winner by Disqualification: Muhammad Hussan

Tazz: What the hell is HHH doin here? He just messed up a great match.
Michael Cole: Yes indeed Tazz.


A lot of the lumberjacks begin to enter the ring, while others head backstage and attack Triple H and Muhammad Hussan. But Triple H begins going on a rampage with the steel chair and knocks everyone out. As soon as Hussan gets up he also gets hit with the chair. Triple H then throws Hussan over and pedigrees Triple H. Triple H then asks for a mic...

With Cena knocked out, laying on the ground, Triple H bends down and begins to talk at his face level on the ground.


HHH: I'm a piece of trash Cena? huh? well guess what, it looks like your the one who looks like wasted trash. I mean, you lost to a rookie in that no-good, shit talkin sunavabitch right there.
(points at Hussan who's knocked out outside of the ring)
See this title right here Cena?... this will never be worn around your waste.
(John Cena begins to attempt to get up but keeps falling due to being hurt so severely and blood is coming down from a cut he suffered from a hit he recieved by the chair)
Cena, today you lost your pride AND a shot at the Heavy Weight title. You will NEVER, NEVER! be at the level that I have reached

Teddy Long's music hits as he make his way to the ring with a mic in his hand. Triple H seems suprised..

Teddy Long: Hold on a minute playa. You dare step in and end this match by a DQ? no, no playa. I had this as the main event tonight, and I should've known better than to let you in the arena tonight.
HHH: You know what Long, you might as well leave, cause I can care less if your the general manager, cause the fact is I'll get by every curve you wanna throw at me to loose this title. On Monday Night I'm gonna beat Christian, and at Judgement Day I am gonna defeat Hussan. And the night after Judgement Day I'm gonna rub the Heavy Weight Title all over your
face, because the fact is.. this business wouldn't last without me as champion.

Teddy Long: Hold on a minute playa,.. you got a lot of things wrong.


Cena begins to get up just to get hit by a chair again by HHH, Long tries to stop him.

HHH: Don't try me Teddy, because I'll hit you over the head as well.
Teddy Long: No you won't playa. Because you won't be facing Muhammad Hussan at Judgement Day, nor will you no longer be facing Christian on Raw. No sir, you will be facing Christian, John Cena, AND Muhammad Hussan in a Fatal 4-Way Steel Cage match for the Heavy Weight championship, THIS MONDAY ON RAW!


The crowd goes insane and Triple H is seething in anger as he begins to stomp the ground and smash the chair and almost makes it as if he will hit Teddy Long

Teddy Long: And if you dare touch me, you will be stripped of your title. So you might as well head home and start thinkin about Monday Night, so give me a holla, holla, holla!

Triple H is extremely mad and has no where to put his emotions, and is in huge fustration.


Michael Cole: Ladies and gentlemen I can't believe what I just heard. Fatal 4-Way Steel Cage match with the Heavy Weight Title on the line, this coming Monday Night on Raw. Christian, Muhammad Hussan, John Cena, and Triple H. Tune in!
 
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WWE Sunday Night Heat

Preview for Tomorrow's Raw


Kane will be facing Edge after Kane warned Lita this past Thursday Night on Smackdown on any past or present relationships with Edge.

Chris Benoit will be facing Shelton Benjamin for the number one contender for the Intercontinental Championship.

MNM will defend their tag team titles against The Basham Brothers.

Triple H* vs. Muhammad Hussan vs. Christian vs. John Cena (Fatal 4-Way Steel Cage match for the Heavy Weight Title)


Heat Results

Paul London defeats Juventud Guererra by pinfall

Akio defeats Tajiri by pinfall

Booker T defeats Rosey and Hurricane in a Handicap match


New Signing

Test has been re-signed with the WWE, something many fans have hoped for. He is set to come back to the ring sometime in late May or early June.

UPPIN ON FEEDBACK ON SMACKDOWN, AND EVEN RAW!!!


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lol, damn my shit is getting slept on.. uppin for some feedback to see if I'm doing this shit right. PLEASE GIVE ME FEED ON RAW and or SMACKDOWN!!!!!!!!

it'd be greatly appreciated

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Realism:The characters seem to be in character except for afew places. 9/10

Length:Your matches could be a bit longer and your promos could be longer if you made these longer it would improve your show a great deal. 8/10

Quality / Entertainment: The matches and promos are entertaining and you have created some good storylines, however I am not keen how you have made the Edge, Lita affair come together. 8/10

Spelling / Grammar:I have seen a few mistakes but nothing major. 9/10

Matches / Booking:You have good matches however you need to make some a bit longer. 9/10

Total: 43x2= 86/100

Good shows. In some places change the colours because they are basically the same.

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thanx man, I'll try and work out all my flaws for Raw, which is sure to be great with all the beef that's been taking place in the past week. Raw should be posted in the coming days, latest would be Monday.

Any other feed on my first Raw and/or Smackdown would be greatly appreciated!


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WWE.COM- Super Crazy has officially stated that he will take part in the 8-Man Hardcore title match at Judgement Day. There are still 6 spots remaining, and the question continues to be ask who will take part in this match that Bishoff announced this past Smackdown.
 

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Cool shows man, I will be a regular reader. I think some of the colours you use do kinda look the same so you should use different ones. But anyway, good show, Cena vs. Hassan was the best, I like HHH's interfearence, and the 4 way cage match should be awesome. Look forward to seeing it. Smackdown - 8.5/10
 
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