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the roster is mixed up and the braindead chairman wich is me. will get rid of three people once a month and sign three people once a month here is the roster
braindead
SHANNON MOORE
MARK JINJRAK
AL SNOW
SHAWN MICHEALS
ORLANDO JORDAN
EDGE
SHAWN MICHEALS
JIM ROSS
JEFF HARDY
JEFF JARRETT
RIC FLAIR
REY MISTERIO
ERIC YOUNG
BG JAMES
CHRISTEN
EDDIE GUERRIO
JBL

MY FIRST SHOW WILL BE UP NEXT WEEK
AND ANY COMENTS OR SUGGENSTIONS OR QUESTIONS WILL BE APRECEATED

AND THE GENERAL MANAGERIS:JIM ROSS
WORLD CHAMP IS:JBL
US CHAMP IS:ORLANDO JORDAN
TAG CAMPS ARE:JEFF HARDY-REY MYSTERIO

THE PPV ARE THE SAME AS WWE

RAW
JR:WELCOME TO RAW LIVE FROM..
AS:A DUMPSTER
JR:NO SHOW SOME RESPECT FOR PHILADOLPHIA
AS:TONIGHT WE HAVE THE SIGNINGS AND THE RESLSES WHAT A NIGHT
JR:IM GOING UP THERE RIGHT NOW
(JR ENTERS RING)
JR:FROM THE BARREL IT SAYS TO BRING IN ... WHAT A SECOND IT SAYS CHUCK LIDDILL

(CROWD POPS)



(THEN THEN "NEVER ENOUGH" FROM EMENIM PLAYS AND CHUCK COMES OUT)

JR:HI ICEMAN
CHUCK:WWWHHHHAAADDAAPPPPPPP
THEN YOU THINK YOU KNOW ME PLAYS AND OUT COMES EDGE
EDGE:LOOK IM ON FIRE OUR ICE I BURN YOU
CHUCK HAD ENOUGH IT LOOK LIKE HE WAS GOING TO DO A REVERSE DDT OF THE TOP ROPE BUT DOES REVERSE SUPLEX OF THE TOP ROPE AND EDGE IS OUT COLD
CHUCK:THAT IS THE LIDDIL DRIVER
MATCH 1 EDGE VS. CHUCK LIDDIL
THE FINISH:CHUCK LANDS A LIDDIL DRIVER FOR A THREE COUNT
WINNER CHUCK LIDDIL
AS:WOW
JR:...

WELL BE BACK AFTER THESE COMMERCILL


JR:WERE BACK AND JEFF HARDY WILL TAKE ORLANDO ON FOR THE US BELT

MATCH TWO JEFF HARDY VS.ORLANDO JORDAN
WHILE MATCH 3 WILL BE IN BOILER ROOM FOR BOILER ROOM BRAWL
JEFF JARETT VS JBL FOR WORLD BELT
MATCH TO ENDING:AFTER A SWANTEN BOMB JEFF WINS
MATCH 3 ENDINGS AFTER GUTAR SHOT AND CLOTHENE FROM HELL JBL RETAINS

END OF SHOW

I KNOW IT SUCKED BUT THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I WROTE A WHOLE SHOW





CARLITO CANT SPIT IN OUR FACES RIGHT

MAJOR NEWS


THE OTHER TWO PEOPLE THAT WERE SIGHNED WAS BOOKER T AND KEN SHAMROCK AND THE THREE TAHT WAS RELISED WAS SHANNON MOORE AND CHRISTEN AND ERIC YOUNG WE WISH THE BEST OF LUCK
 

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Don't do it all in caps. Also your idea of dropping three and gaining three each month is creative. Your roster seems kinda weak to me. Two matches is never enough. Do atleast four and do some promos and stuff. Hopefully this could help.
 

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Re: wwe brain dead

Okay thank you. I was thinking of adding more from different companies or if you have suggetions on what stars to bring in post it here please. Okay I know my roster is weak but the other wrestlers are on a tour and will be back in 2 weeks.

One last thing there was a match in the ring and a match backstage so there was three. I know it doesn't prove a point but so what?

I will do Braindead on Wednesday.

Also if you would like to (optional) I have a lot of people on tour so when they get back only if I get a partner I will split the roster into two and we will have a draft. If you want to do a draft, then PM me.
 

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Re: wwe brain dead

The men are back. This is the roster:

Mark Jindrak
Paul London
Joey Mercury
D-Von Dudley
Jonathan Coachman
BG James
Ken Shamrock
Josh Matthews
Spike Dudley
Justin Credible
Abyss
Michael Cole
Stone Cold Steve Austin
Daniel Puder
Jeff Hardy
Mike Mizanin
Sting
Funaki
Jeff Jarrett
Simon Dean
Eddie Guerrero
Christopher Daniels
Triple H
Kenzo Suzuki
Chuck Liddell
Scott Hall
Antonio
CM Punk
Rey Mysterio
Shawn Michaels
Charlie Haas
Christian
Chris Benoit
Mick Foley
Rob Conway
Billy Kidman
Chavo Guerrero
Gene Snitsky
Carlito Caribbean Cool
Eric Bischoff
Edge
Mike Awesome
Maven
Akio
Booker T
Tazz
Steven Richards
Jerry Lawler
John Bradshaw Layfield
Jim Ross
Chris Masters
Andy Douglas
Ric Flair
Al Snow

It's a big roster which is why I would like to split in to two things only if I find a partner if not I will do like ten shows a week.
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

Yeah you see he was my pick from the beginnning of Tough Enough but any way I was thinking of a fration of the Miz, Josh Matthews and Jeff Hardy, Rob Van Dam Rey Mysterio, Sting and Chuck Liddell. I will call it the New Team Extreme, What do you think of me?

Also I will need a banner of Chuck Liddell vs. Edge at the Royal Rumble. Can anybody do it?
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

1. It's Chuck Liddell; you keep on spelling it Liddil.

2. No one's going to read it if you can't even form a proper sentence.

3. I know you're only 11 years old, but if you're doing this for people to read, you might want to wait a few more years.

4. I hope you improve your writing soon because reading your posts gives me a major headache. Are you going into 6th grade soon; or are you already there? I admire you're determination but until you know how to use proper grammar, I among most people probably won't read it because to be brutally honest, it looks like a bunch of chicken scratch.

5. Proofread your posts. If you've ever tried to read one of your own posts it probably wouldn't make any bit of sense to you either.

5. Good luck. If you keep on writing, and you improve, I might look back someday.
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

News
WWE signed Teddy Hart.
There will no longer be Tag Team Match

Raw
Jerry Lawler:Whhhhhhwhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

AS: What's wrong Jerry?

Jerry Lawler: No more puppies.

AS: Here we go again, any way we have a lot of macthes tonight.

(Jim Ross walks into the ring)

Jim Ross: Tonight we become united. I don't know what that means but it sounds cool.

(Never Enough plays and Chuck Liddell comes out to a pop)

Chuck Liddell: As you know I work for my chances and I thought, I want to go for the World Title and if Edge wins his match tonight we could finish our rivarly in a hardcore match. What do you say JR?

Jim Ross: You'll have a match next week in a fatal four way match for the number one condeters spot. Your oppenents are Sting.

AS: Up next we will have D-Von Dudley versus Rey Mysterio.

Match 1. D-Von Dudley vs. Rey Mysterio
The finish: D-Von hit the saving grace for the three count.
Winner: D-Von Dudley

Jerry Lawler: That was an upset.

AS: uh huh

Jerry Lawler: Josh Matthews is interviewing CM Punk.

Josh Matthews: How do you feel facing Teddy Hart next?

CM Punk: I don't care about him, he is a worthless SOB just like you.

Josh spears him on gravel and beats the hell out of him.

Commercial

Match 2: CM Punk vs. Teddy Hart
The finish: Teddy hits the crucifix for the three count.
Winner: Teddy Hart

AS: That move looks painful.

Jerry Lawler: No it doesn't

Electrical problems, I'll tell you what happened.

Heres what happened:
Kenzo Suzuki defeated Chavo Guerrero and Simon Dean
Mike Mizanin defeated Jeff Hardy to become the new United States Champion.
Billy Kidman defeated Justin Credible
Mark Jindrak defeated Steven Richards

AS: Were back in time for our main event.

(John Bradshaw Layfield said I won't need a rematch clause)

Match 3: John Bradshaw Layfield versus Edge
The finiish: Edge spears JBL to knock him out. Then Chuck Liddell hits the Liddell driver and Edge is also knocked out on top of JBL and the referee counts to three.
Winner: Edge

End of Show.
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

better, but speelling (jk) could still be better. Make the matchs longer as one line matches dont make good reading, looking at the Request for partner thread, it looks like you've found someone to help you. Read what you write first, and if nessercary type them in Microsoft word first to check the spelling.
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

Well I have edited your show to at least make it readable. Anyway, you need to make your shows longer, add more interviews and backstage segments. I also advise that you take a look at the characters of AS (who I presume is Al Snow), Jim Ross, Jerry Lawler and Josh Matthews, who were all very out of character. Not to mention Chuck Liddell said he earns his spot, yet he was just given a title match. Not to mention that there is meant to be a fatal fourway, but there's only Edge, Chuck Liddell and Sting announced. I suggest you use Microsoft Word nd it's spell check or re-read your show next time before you post your show. An electrical fault seems a bit odd, especially considering it must have gone through about half of the show.

I believe though that you do have some good ideas for who to feud. CM Punk/Josh Matthews for example should be great, and I hope you will have Sting/Edge feud. Hopefully you can also bring people like Christian, Scott Hall, Chris Benoit, Eddie Guerrero, Shawn Michaels etc. in because it seems pointless to have them on the roster and then not use them. Keep this up, but please use Microsoft Word or re-read your show.

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

okay next week there will be a battle royal for the final spot in the fatal four way match at the royal rumble

what kind should it be regular,elemation,hardcore,hell in a cell,cage?
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

Put spaces in between your commas, please.

Also I wouldn't mind seeing a hardcore, over the top rope, battle royale. Just put a couple of weapons in the ring during the battle royale, and it would be cool.

I hope you improve dramatically, and just don't rely on A-Dust editting your shows to make them readable.
 

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Re: WWE Brain Dead

okay hardcore it is i only named 3 because a great thing will happen only tna showed

if my partner has the time he will do it we will have a drapht and instead of realsing 3 and gaining 3 each show will lose 2 and gain 2. first week they will lose 2 persons next week they will gain 2
 

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hi guys im dodgeball64's new booking partner. i will be doing wwe meltdown and dodgeball64 will be doing wwe brain dead.

news: at the moment me and dodgeball64 are holding a draft to figure out the rosters for each. so far the rosters are

wwe brain dead: shawn michaels

wwe maltdown: triple h, jbl


shows coming soon once draft is done.
 

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im getting the short end of the stick here hets hhh ,jbl, and chris beniot

here is the round 1 results
 

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breaking news
brain dead is despertly trying to cut a deal for cm punk to continue with the fued
 

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breaking news: wwe meltdon is plesed to make a deal for cm punk, for a good trade of course, stayed tuned for all the latest draft news

extra news: wwe meltdown picks double j, jeff jarret

wwe meltdown roster: hhh
jbl
hbk
eddie guererro
rey mysterio
jeff jarret
cm punk (subject to trade)
 

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breaking news brain dead traded edge for cm punk

extrea news this drapht for braindead is a lot of up and coming stars

like cm punk, chuck liddell, josh matthews and thier next pick



chris masters
 
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