the thing in the back goes terribly with the rest, its wayyy to crowded and just looks cludered and the blending isnt that great. You should have also matched the gold on the belt with the gold on the ring... 5/10
I dunno....from what I've seen, the people so far are rating you way too harsh.
I like the graphic. Even the grid in the back. The ring could be spruced up a bit better, like the quality of the grid and stuff. It's totally original and nothing I've ever seen, so you get props for that right off the bat. The blending is pretty good, and the colors seem to go well with the golden title, of which sets it off nicely, and is a good focal point. I even like the dotted grid you have on the cuts, and I usually don't like stuff like that. I give it an easy 9/10.