it was alright for a first show 7/10 what really brought the grade down is you didnt use bold and italics. Use bold, italics, and maybe even color next time. Besides that I thought the show was pretty good and I am sure you will improve over time. I will be here to read.
by the way to post pics it is
To get the URL right click on the pic, go to properties and copy and paste it.
Hopefully that sint to confusing for you. If it is scim about in the suggestions and help forum and a better explanation is bound to be in there somewhere.