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[Kaneanite]

All the pics are too blended so you can't make them out easily. Animation is too fast to be able to read the text easily. It's usually better if you keep one cut not as blended into the background. Have one cut that stands out, then some in the background if you wish.

 

[Mike Oxlong]

I wouldn't of blended the outside 2 pics and have the text set on a 5 sec animation

 

[LK]

The BG is to hard on the eyes, blending and animation aren't good

 

[ChristopheR.]

Wow, where's Shelton?

I think it would look better if it wasn't animated, and just had the text still. Seems like one of those 'Hot Nudes' Neon signs on the highway.