Both cut's and the text are boring. It's far too dull and dark for my liking. The bg is ok I guess, but the wm21 logo looks like it's in no mans land and really doesn't look good, just placed there randomly.
I think I know how to make it alittle better like I the man said put the two guys side by side and add contrast to both of them. Also make the text white and leave the stroke the same color. Also make the logo bigger and find a good spot for it. after you do that post it again I think it would look better.
The color is dull and it's just bad altogether. Taker and RKO being so close together is bad for the concept and you can tell you at one time inverted the background colors. The phrase is good but here's some chopiness on the Taker cut. 4/10.
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