the
blending is bad. the bg is bad and the text it bad. To start with it looks boring and is an ugly colour, a bit of contrast on the pictures would be nice.
Text looks lame. Lame font and lame blending. lame effect.
The background is especially ugly.
The cuts are boring (did I say tht twice?

.) Not particuarly well placed Either.
I'd just say keep experimenting and trying new tutorials.
www.good-tutorials.com 
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3 or 4/10.