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Premier Wrestling Circuit (PWC)
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Arena: Air Canada Center
Capacity: 19,800
Location: Toronto, Ontario, Canada


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Singles Match:
Xander Black vs. Darius Black


Triple Threat Match:
Microburst vs The Golden Boy vs Louie Spindoli


Singles Match:
Daiko vs Muhammad Islami


Singles Match:
The Duke of the Damned vs Bob McEfoy


Singles Match:
Austin Angel vs Derek Jacobs


Also featuring: Kyle Elric's Championship victory celebration


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Deadline for RP's is 11:59 pm GMT on April 7th (Night after Wrestlemania). You will be given a 24 hour warning before the deadline so don't worry.

Deadline for the show is 1:59 pm GMT on April 14th. For every single day extension provided for the RPs, the show deadline gets extended by an equal duration.


This thread will be used for posting your RP's, if you want to feedback on someone's RP then go ahead, post the feedback in here. Once the show is posted, you can feedback on that, if you like.

GFX Credit: CHAMPviaDQ

Also, let's try something different. Use the match card as a predictions template and post your predictions here. You can post your predictions without even seeing the RPs posted so yeah, it'll just be a guessing game. The winner/winners will get hmm...the joy of winning a predictions contest? Or if they really want something, you can PM me or one of the guys in creative and we can offer some direction for your character. Although, you guys can do this already, we're just waiting for you guys to PM us.​
 

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Singles Match:
Xander Black vs. Darius Black

Yeah, Xander will be looking to get back on the winning side and build up another streak as he heads to the next PPV. Hoping Darius surprises me and pulls off an upset though.


Triple Threat Match:
Microburst vs The Golden Boy vs Louie Spindoli

Microburst has been decent but hasn't been able to pick up a win yet. Spindoli was improving lately too but been some time since we've seen a Spindoli RP. Want TGB to step up coz I think he can do much better. From what I've read so far, the luchador should win.


Singles Match:
Daiko vs Muhammad Islami

Should be close. Daiko winning wouldn't surprise me but his character lacks direction at the moment, while Islami will be more motivated after the loss at Hell's Judgment.


Singles Match:
The Duke of the Damned vs Bob McEfoy

Duke's hype video was good, but can't pick him without having read an RP. McEfoy's a good RP'er so he's the safe pick here.


Singles Match:
Austin Angel vs Derek Jacobs

Can go either way. I do think if Meeks produces an RP to the best of his abilities, he can beat HN. Angel overall has been better than a few weeks ago though, so picking him. Won't be surprised if Jacobs wins.
 

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Singles Match:
Xander Black vs. Darius Black

Darius could pull off an upset, but that depends on how he does with his new friend to work with. Xander however wants to get back to his winning ways so gotta pick him.


Triple Threat Match:
Microburst vs The Golden Boy vs Louie Spindoli

Microburst is the favorite here without a doubt. I'd be surprised if GB or Spindoli even RP honestly.

Singles Match:
Daiko vs Muhammad Islami

Angry Islami to win. Daiko has a shot but he's been slacking off recently so I'm not sure he can best Islami here unless he gives it his best effort.

Singles Match:
The Duke of the Damned vs Bob McEfoy

AwShit has been MIA lately and I have faith in Mav to pull off an upset here. But like I said, it'd be an upset.

Singles Match:
Austin Angel vs Derek Jacobs

Not picking against myself here.




Also, while I'm posting I'm gonna go ahead and ask for a 24 hour extension, I just got the WWE Network so that's very time consuming plus I have a few things going on this week and know I can't get the RP up Sunday.
 

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Backstage Pass

Danny Erikson is with the new PWC Legacy Champion, Dr Nero and his valet Nurse Ellie.

Covered in sweat, Nero is towelling himself down being very careful to ensure his hair stays right where it’s meant to be. Standing beside him is Ellie, wearing Nero’s surgical scrubs shirt to cover her strategically utilised red lingerie, and a very big smile.

Erikson: Congratulations Dr Nero.. sir.. you are now the new PWC Legacy Champion. Can you comment on what’s going through your head right now?

Nero with a stone face almost ignores the question and hands the newly won belt to Ellie and then raises his arms. Ellie then puts the belt around the Doc’s waist. Nero slowly turns his head to Erikson and is almost looking straight through him more acknowledging the microphone the person asking him the question.

Nero: The Legacy Championship is such a fitting name for a gold belt that adorns my waist. PWC has the greatest professional wrestlers in the world, all under one roof, all competing to be the very best in the sport today. I said it before tonight’s match, I said it the day I became #1 Contender and I said it the day I walked into PWC. I will build a legacy in this sport the likes no one has seen before and it will be using the elite federation in this sport as my platform.


Nero’s face starts to become more animated as Ellie becomes enthralled by her meal ticket.

Nero: My legacy begins right now as your Legacy champion. Which is only step one. Which is only my first surgical incision in my systematic total reconstruction of this industry. Very soon all those who have yet to face me will see just what a perfect machine I am. I am more intelligent than anyone in that locker room. I have built my body to be the perfect balance of speed, agility and power. I already know what my opponents’ next three moves are before they do.

No one can match me. No one is in my league. Especially not Moo Ha Mud Iz La Me. Islami you were simply too predictable, simply too easy to plan for, simply too easy to distract. Simply... too...simple. And now... Speaking of simple...

But Nero’s arrogant attitude seems to turn as he frowns and starts looking straight into the camera.

Nero: I win the Legacy Championship. I, Dr Nero, the man who is to take this industry to heights never before seen, and as I am celebrating my victory, I am interrupted by some retarded freak. Some kid who thinks because he’s got a metal arm, which can’t be legal, he thinks he is fit to challenge me?! I am the be all and end all of this industry, I am PWC’s deity and this medical mishap wants to rain on my parade?

Nero snatches the microphone out of Erikson’s hand now and pushes him out of camera shot.

Nero: Famine, instead of disrespecting me out at ringside, you should back here begging me to fix that arm of yours. Begging me to put humpty dumpty back together again, because guess what Famine. I can do that. I can do anything, I can cure cancer, so if instead of disrespecting me out there tonight you came to me for help, I might have been able to make you normal. But now instead I’m going to hurt you.

In fact I’m fascinated by you. I want to know what makes you tick, metal man. So here’s what’s going to happen. When the fools that run this company finally give you your title match against me. I’m going to dissect you like a rat in science class. I’m going to pull that metal arm off your body and beat you so bad, you are going to wish you were back when the Chernobyl reactor exploded and took your family. Because you’ve made a God angry and now you’ll feel his wrath.

The Doctor is in....
 

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Might as well predict shit..

Singles Match:
Xander Black vs. Darius Black

C3K's going to be out to get his title back, and what better way to start than to beat his first challenger.

TFW's lost his touch over the past few months, but even if he hadn't, it would still take something special to win here.

Triple Threat Match:
Microburst vs The Golden Boy vs Louie Spindoli

All three of the guys/girls in this match have really struggled to get out of the starting gates here in the PWC, but out of the three, DoradaFan has looked the best in his showings.

Singles Match:
Daiko vs Muhammad Islami

While I may have won my match at the PPV against Jacobs, I've proven to be incredibly inconsistent in my showings, and often drop off after a half decent RP.

Prinicpino however has something to prove after losing his Legacy Title to Lariatoh, and will no doubt need to put on a good, if not dominant, showing against me to prove that he can still keep up with the Legacy Title scene.

Singles Match:
The Duke of the Damned vs Bob McEfoy

JCMaverick9 wrote a decent little promo for HJ, but outside of that, I haven't seen much of his work, so I can't judge him fairly.

AwShucks has proven that when he really goes for it, he can write a pretty damn good RP. He needs to work on a few things before he can really start challenging for titles, but with his work right now, I think he'll prove to be too much for 'Mav' to handle.

Singles Match:
Austin Angel vs Derek Jacobs

lelhn
 

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Since the other creative members have predicted, figured I should too.

Singles Match:
Xander Black vs. Darius Black

I was told that my PPV RP seemed like the beginning of a story arc, rather than the end of one, which is completely correct. I have an idea in my head of where I want the story to go, and think I can get there by the next PPV which will help in the long run. I've beaten TFW before, and that was when he was writing some really good stuff. He's fallen :)side:) off a lot, his RP's have progressively decreased in quality which is shown by the fact he let lelHN defeat him. I think I should win.


Triple Threat Match:
Microburst vs The Golden Boy vs Louie Spindoli

The last time I read a Spindoli RP was an age ago, but I remember he was improving a lot and that should make for an interesting match with Microburst. I'm not even sure The Golden Boy is still around in this fed, but if he is then hopefully he can put out a solid RP. My votes for Microburst though, as he seems the most involved and will most likely continue to improve.


Singles Match:
Daiko vs Muhammad Islami

Going to go with the former Legacy Champion in this match. Daiko is probably the most inconsistent RP'er in this fed, as one week can be a really good RP then the other can be the complete opposite. Whereas, Islami, along with Nero is probably the most consistent person in the fed. He'll probably pull out another top notch RP, but hopefully Daiko can do the same and makes it difficult to judge.


Singles Match:
The Duke of the Damned vs Bob McEfoy

Going with AwSmash. Mav' is an unknown to me right now, aside from the video package he wrote (which was solid), I've never seen him right anything story driven or such. Whereas I know AwSmash is a solid writer and seems to know exactly what he's doing with his character. Plus he has the most annoying NPC in the fed.

Singles Match:
Austin Angel vs Derek Jacobs

LelHN.

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More predictions, plz.
 

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RP timeline extended to Monday April 7th 11:59 PM GMT, and show deadline to Monday April 14th 11:59 PM GMT.

Also, since all Creative members have made predictions, the rest of the roster better follow suit or we will get very creative with the burials :HHH2

Also C3K naming Islami and Nero the most consistent but not his two PPV opponents so far? :kobe
 

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Also, since all Creative members have made predictions, the rest of the roster better follow suit or we will get very creative with the burials :HHH2
I don't really like making the predictions, especially before seeing the RP's, but the fear of :HHH2's burials compelled me to do this:

Opening segment:
Formatting was interesting with what I thought was the colours switched around.
The graphic descriptions were very short, but I see what you did there - it's supposed to be quickfire scenes and that's exactly what was delivered.
It was very functional in highlighting the main stuffs - Legacy title and battle royale, grudge matches and the massive main-event.
Glad you guys didn't go overboard with the religious stuff and kept it in good taste.

Daiko/Jacobs:
In general, I still feel the theme videos are better than just the song titles, but that's my opinion. Good build-up.
Really great match plot and I appreciated the change-ups like "Scot" instead of "Daiko" the whole time, but I felt the descriptive language was a smooch repetitive. Still, the core is more important than its dressing and the match had great and exciting spots.
Picturing the stuff in my head was definitely a mark-out trip.

Duke promo:
Pretty chilling promo. Is a PPV the place for what was basically a debut vignette? I don't know, but it certainly fit the theme of the PPV. Looking forward to more from this.

Jacobs/Vos segment:
Meeks already pointed out the issues we could have with this, but I think it's good to be on TV, baby! Also, creative gave us a lot to work with here.

Battle royale:
I know there were a couple of no-shows and figured that they would get the chop early, but it just kept going after that.
No complaints here, Vos was made to look a beast and Famine picked up a well-deserved win.
Very good storytelling in the finals match and the aftermath.

Staff-segment:
What I've noticed is that the crowd "pops" a lot of the time. I could do with a "cheer", a "roar", "eruption"s here and there, etc. I know it's not one guy writing everything, but a change-up could make it even better.
Nonetheless, it's a well-written segment and it felt really big.

Daiko/Angel:
Just a teaser here and I thought it was a good reflection of the two characters.

Angel/ D. Black:
This bitter feud comes to a head and the stipulation is a good one, allowing the writer more freedom to have them kick each other's asses across the arena.
What was nice about this match is how immediately the action started - Austin Angel wasn't even fully out of his entrance attire! Exciting way to start things.
Small touches like the IMPACTFUL capitalization were a highlight of this match.
Possibly my favourite match of the night, but storyline-wise it's a little puzzling, because I'm assuming AA's moving on to the tag scene.

Interview with Elric:
What I felt mainly during this part was a type of calm-before-the-storm type of thing, which I thoroughly enjoyed. In my mind it did a lot to hype the main-event.

Nero/Islami:
Very good match here - quite a technical battle for the two and that, coupled with the fact that it was two heels, would've been a challenge. I think it was pulled off beautifully.
The nurse Elle stuff made me laugh, I'll assume it was intentional.

Interview with X. Black:
What was sold extremely well was how big the fight is (and quite rightly so, being the biggest match we've had so far). Black's state of mind was portrayed well.

Elric/ X. Black:
I'm a bit thrown by how Black is portrayed sometimes. He just came off an interview as a tortured but good soul (the vibe I picked up in the RP) and in this match he is more like face Undertaker with that no-sell slap.
This match had greatly thought-out, bone-crunching spots which I loved! Black's grim determination shone through, as did Elric's can-do attitude and I thought it was an entertaining contrast.
The aftermath was good, but considering how absolutely massive this match was, I didn't want it to end.

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Epic show, guys! Great job overall. There have been quite a few cards laid on the table and things like Xander's redemption/vengeance, the Legacy and tag battles, what's next for Duke and all the other relatively new characters are going to be kick-ass! Very excited for PWC.
I didn't really check who did what and if the review's a little schizophrenic, it's because it was done over three days.
 

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Just so everyone knows, the new deadline is Monday 11:59 pm GMT. Try not to no show please.
 

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The wrath of a pissed off HN isn't too much to fear, btw. Take it from someone who used to deal with it every second day..
 

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Wow...

I actually thought my last RP was an improvement and a move away from what I was usually doing. Idk, everyone just keeps saying they're getting worse even when I'm listening to feedback.
 

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I got an idea for ya TFW. PM me if interested and let me know what you think :lol
 

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This is all just a cover-up for the big upset I'm going to pull guise..

But then again...



I shall do that QTR, but it seems feedback has made me turn in to complete shit. :hayden3
 

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This goes for everyone else too btw. Except for C3K :lol

Anyone want any ideas, something to work with, has hit a roadblock, feel free to PM me. Not tooting my own horn but I'm the only undefeated man here :p

And even if my ideas suck, I got that Creative stroke to put you over :lmao
 
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