Mmm, i like where ur going with this. Its a good idea (ill prolly try something similar now

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But the font and text effects r bad. Lets it down....Make it bigger (height wise) and make the bottom of the guys fade to completely black, and put the text there. The cage cutting isnt good. But i understand...
Not sure if i agree with everything being luminated...dont like the BG (hardly noticable tho, so its alright)
And the little shaded bars...make them look more like a cage mebbies....
Like the idea, adds an extra point, 6/10