Text is bad, try some tutorials and download some good fonts, BG is boring, cuts are okay save some which are bad, some of the cuts are overly-blended. 4/10,Its good for your first attempt but work on it.
Cutting is bad...you manage to get the rough outline, but a lot of bits from the original pic are still showing.
I use the polygonal lasso tool tool to cut out the pic, then the eraser (brush) of about 1-3pixels to brush away any bits that are from the original pic.
Background is bad. Again go to good-tutorials to find some different backgrounds u like.
Also the girls in the background that r supposed to be blending in with the background are almost showing infront of the middle girl. Take away the effects on the middle girl...but do something different than reduce optaincy on the bg girls...
... ... ...well the important thing is that u tried.
lol, jk. Its not bad for a first time photoshop. The bg girls are acutally not too bad, cept they r visible thru some of the girls infront.
first try...every one has a first try, yours was better than mine...do more tutorials, dowload more fonts and brushes, blending was a bit to over exagerated, could work on background and cuts are fine for a first timer. 3/10