I dunno, it's aight, but I'm not sure about the colors of it. And the glow on the text seems too strong and/or doesn't blend well with the rest of the banner, and for me strong glow on text looks n00b. And I like the head popping off the banner, but I think the expression on his face makes it look strange.
It's ok. You're just beginning with graphics. You'll progress as time goes on.
If you read his post more carefully, you would've seen he said he didn't care what you think of the band as alot of people dislike Limp Bizkit. He didn't want that to effect how we rated his banner. Thx.