[Harbinger]

Yup this is my first design since May. Thoughts please, but be nice, I've always sucked .

Edit: Waaayyy too dark.

 

[Miester]

-like you said, kinda dark.
-text is kinda hard to see, mainly because its clear/transparent-ish
-the middle pic looks stretched, maybe its just me.
-placement of the cuts/pics is ok
-effects could be better i suppose.

Not bad since you havnt done much since May. To me, the darkness kinda kills it. Layout really isnt that bad. Tweak a few things and it could be pretty good. Keep at it man, you'll get better.

 

[Harbinger]

Better?