teddy long promo - it was nice. it got to the point and made sense. why'd he be in his office to say this i don't understand.. but nonetheless, nice speech
Beniot vs. Jericho - The match was exciting but there were a lot of run on sentences and poor grammar. Good ending though
Second Teddy Promo - this was alright. but everything seemed to happen too fast. there was very little arguing IMO
Cruiserweight Gauntlet Match...
**Juvi vs. Kash - This was nice. Fast paced and exciting. Very well written compared to your first match.
**Juvi vs. Crazy - This was not good. It was much shorter and what was with the covers? do you really need 20 thousand spaces between each count? And the ddts at this point were endless.
**Crazy vs. London - Is the 450 splash the only splash you know? you use it a lot.. A lot of spaces between "..." kind of unnecessary don't you think? A lot of covers at the end.. seems unlike a cruiserweight match to do that IMO. aside from those, it was exciting and long. nicely written.
**London vs. Kendrick - Nice match but the overextensive spacing isn't really necessary..
also, you called it a 6 man gauntlet match but there were only 5 people in it..
London Aftermatch Promo - "I know I don’t have the best mike skills" why would someone say that? that makes them and wwe look bad. but, as for the promo it was poorly written IMO. the way it was written was boring, but what actually happened was pretty exciting, and that saved the promo.
Hardy Promo - it was too short. and the grammar was bad. and matt saying "I will face you and then when I beat you next week" is wrong.. it should be "beat jbl nex week" right? still a short promo though
Hardy vs. Jordan - it was nicely written but short compared to your other matches. and you didn't space out count outs which was nice. it just seems you got a little lazy here.. or maybe you just wanted a quick match.
Boogeyman Promo - it was short. too short.
"Exactly when was the last time I was in a storyline or any kind of heated rivalry match, I can’t recall because I am a joke. People call me the toughest person on smackdown but jobbing to heidenriech doesn’t make you tough so screw the creative team tonight I am taking over and to make an impact I am challenging Bobby Lashley. " the point of the show is too make it seem like there are no storylines and it's just people doing their jobs.. that kind of made no sense..
Hassan vs. Evans - well, i wasn't a particular fan of this match, but it was alright.
Taker vs. Orton - Beautiful match. MOTN so far. well written, a little overly spaced out, but nice. Good job on this one. And very exciting!
Lashley vs. Holly - Wow, in the promo i thought holly would win, give himself some glory but i guess not. lol. lashley kicked ass. short match though..
Woah.. for a second there i thought that was the main event.. lol. i was about to say...but it wasn't so that's good
i'm sure the main event would have been great
Side notes:
you seem to skip a lot of periods through out your show.. you need to work on that. some things happen too fast also.. your promos need some help. good luck in the future
7/10
also, using just bold and blue didn't look good at all. i would suggest some more color and whatnot..
and how do i owe you a review? not that i mind but.. anyways, please return