[OnlyMe]

This one's probably my best yet.

 

[OlympicZero]

Its not that bad, but the text box is way too big...

 

[T-MAC]

Yeah, make it smaller

 

[Guitar Pl4yer]

You could also make the text bigger, that's what I would to. I would change the text where it says "The Real Mr. America" to something else, that's too gothic for it.

 

[Korupted]

Change the Font (Top One), Then adjust the size of the text box cause its too big for the font size you've done.
apart from this, Good Job. :agree:

 

[BabyBoy]

I like it, except for the gothic looking text.

 

[REAL SEXY BOY]

i think its good,text box is a bit big.

 

[Dark Assassin]

Will Smith don't gotta cuss in his raps to sell his records
Well I do, so f**k him and f**k you too!

What'd i do.

 

[BabyBoy]

That is a rap that Eminem had in his song The Real Slim Shady.