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WWF 1994.

(Lack of old years like this on BTB so I decided to do it.)

Roster:
Faces:
1-2-3 Kid
Alundra Blaze
Barry Horowitz
Billy Gunn
Bart Gunn
Bret Hart
Bushwhacker Butch
Bushwhacker Luke
Duke Droese
Fatu
Jacques Rougeau
Jeff Hary
Jim Powers
KoKo B. Ware
Lex Luger
Mabel
Matt Hardy
Mike Maraldo
Mo
PJ Walker
Randy Savage
Razor Ramon
Rick Myers
Ricky Morton
Robert Gibson
Samu
Scott Taylor
Spark Plugg
Tatanka
The Undertaker
Typhoon
Virgil

Heels:
Abe Schwarts
Adam Bomb
Bam Bam Bigelow
Barry Hardy
Bastion Booger
Bob Backlund
Chris Kanyon
Crush
Dan David
Diesel
Double Trouble 1
Double Trouble 2
Duane Gill
Gangrel
I.R.S
Jeff Jarrett
Jerry Lawler
Jim Neidhart
Jimmy Del Ray
J.W Storm
Kwang
Luna Vachon
Mike Sharpe
Nikolai Vollkoff
Owen Hart
Pierre
Reno Riggins
Rick Martel
Shawn Michaels
Steven Dunn
The Barbarian
The Underfaker
Timothy Well
Tom Prichard
Tony Devito
Yokozuna

Teams:
Men On A Mission
The Bushwhackers
The Executioners
The Head Shrinkers
The New Foundation
The Smoking Gunns
Well Dunn

Stables:
Million Dollar Corporation.

Titles:
WWF World Title: Bret Hart
WWF Intercontinental: Diesel
WWF European Title: Vacant
WWF Tag Team: The Head Shrinkers


(I hope this goes somewhere lol )



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Re: WWF 1994.

Interested to see what happens with this. Out of interest, what's the situation with the European Title here? I don't think it even existed in 1994... I mean it is vacant but just curious if you're introducing it early or whether that's an error.

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Interested to see what happens with this. Out of interest, what's the situation with the European Title here? I don't think it even existed in 1994... I mean it is vacant but just curious if you're introducing it early or whether that's an error.
Putting it in early, may make a few more title as time go's on, thanks for the support.



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Re: WWF 1994.

Monday Night Raw Preview

On this weeks Raw taking place from The Sun Dome in Tampa, Florida Bret Hart faces Jeff Jarrett in a non title match, Will Owen and Jim Neidhart play any effect in the outcome of the match?

Also, Diesel will be in IC Title action against "The Bad Guy" Razor Ramon with Shawn Michales at ringside

In one last big match The Narrcasist Lex Luger takes on Tatanka!



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WWF MONDAY NIGHT RAW LIVE FROM THE SUN DOME IN TAMPA FLORIDA!

Before Raw goes live on air Alundra Blayze defeats Luna Vachon after a Airplane Spin

Once Raw goes on air a video package plays highlighting Bret Hart and Owen Harts recent feud before we go the arena.

Pyro shoots around the arena with the fans going mental with the camera panning around showing the crowd, we cut to the announcers Jim Ross and Vince McMahon running down the card but they get inturrupted by Adam Bombs music.

**MELTDOWN**

Adam Bomb makes his way to the ring for his match against Kwang in the opener match of the show.

Match #1: Kwang VS Adam Bomb

Closing Moments: After a very back and forth match Kwang gets the upper hand with a Japanese Arm Drag followed up by a Dragon Suplex and then a Superkick but blocks getting sprayed with the Asian Mist.

Adam then hits a chokeslam and a pumphandle slam but only gets a 2 count before he throws Kwang into the corner, he gets close to finishing the 10 punch combo but he gets Asian Mist to the eyes! Kwang takes advantage with a Jumping High Kick followed by a pin for the 1-2-3.

Winner in 7:34: Kwang!

**COMERCIAL BREAK**

After the break we get a Slam of The Week which goes to Adam Bomb Chokeslamming Kwang through the announce table on last weeks Raw.

**NARCASIST**

Lex Luger makes his way to the ring tagging the crowds hands and flexing and posing in the ring until...

**WARRIOR**

Tatanka comes out to alot of heat as they play a replay from Raw where Tatanka attacked Luger after his match with Yokozuna but also showing a clip from WWF Superstars where Luger repayed Tatanka by putting him in a Torture Rack.

Match #2: Lex Luger VS Tatanka

Closing Moments: Luger gains advantage by hitting a flurry of moves including a Millitary Press Slam a Airplane Spin and a High Knee to the jaw but Tatanka gets out of a Piledriver and hits him with a Tomahawk Chop.

Tatanka goes to the top rope and once Luger gets up he hits him with a diving Tomahawk Chop pins him but only a 2 count, they hit each other with a double clothesline and get knocked down but they get up when the ref is at a 7 count.

Tatanka reverses a Piledriver but Luger reverses a Samoan Drop an ducks a Tomahawk Chop and puts him in the Torture Rack for the tap out victory.

Winner: Lex Luger in: 7:02

After the match we go backstage where Jeff Jarrett cuts a promo basically the run of the mill heel promo where he calls him names and says he will win, also making a random remark of when Bret dies he will spit on his grave.

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

After the break we get a recap of what has happened thus far in the then night when suddenly once again a familiar theme blasts through the P.A system.

**BAD GUY**

The theme of "The Bad Guy" Razor Ramon plays throughout the arena as we see a replay of last Raw where Razor hit Diesel with a Razors Edge onto a chair giving Diesel the DQ win in a title match against Bret Hart.

**DIESEL BLUES**

Nash runs to the ring and the two exchange a few punches before the bell rings.

Match #3: Diesel VS Razor Ramon

Closing Moments: after Diesel reverses a Razor's Edge and Razor ducks a Right KO Hook Razor hits him with a Fall Away Slam and once he gets up a diving bulldog from the top rope, once he gets him in position for the Razor's Edge Diesel slips out of it and throws him into the ref.

Shawn then runs to the ring and hits Razor with a diving elbow and a Super Kick which Diesel follows up with a KO Right Hook and a Jacknife Powerbomb, Diesel pins Ramon as Shawn wakes the ref up and gets the 1-2-3 to retain his IC Title.

Winner in 10:23 and still the Inercontinental Champion of the world: Diesel!

Right after the match Bret Hart cuts a promo on Jeff Jarrett, Owen Hart, and Jim Neidhart saying how he is the main man of the family and not Owen or Jim also saying he will make all three of them tap out.

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

After the break we suddenly hear....

**WITH MY BABY TONIGHT**

The Cringe worthy theme of Jeff Jarrett hits as he walks down to the ring with signature guitar in hand and is about to sing but our ears are saved by....

**HART ATTACK**

The very familiar theme of Bret Hart hits as he runs to the ring while tagging the fans hands but when he gets in the ring they both brawl for a minuet or 2 before the bell rings.

Main Event: Non Title Match, Bret Hart VS Jeff Jarrett

Closing Moments: Jarrett misses a diving dropkick but reverses a Atomic Drop and hits Hart with a Swinging Neckbreaker, he then climbs the top rope and hits a Diving Body Splash onto Hart and pins him but only gets a 2 count, Jarrett then gets out of a Sharpshooter and hits a Grand Ole Dropre and pins him but only gets a 2 count.

After staying down for a tiny bit they both get up and exchange a few punches and kicks before Hart hits his combination of moves which is a Atomic Drop, Back Breaker and then finally he gets the Sharpshooter locked in on Jarrett but as he is going to tap out...

**HIGH ENERGY**

The theme of Owen Hart hits which makes Bret let the Sharpshooter go but gets nailed by one more Grand Ole Dropre after getting distracted by the music, he pins him and gets the 1-2-3 victor.

Winner in 12:45: Jeff Jarrett!

After the match Jarrett gets his guitar and waits for Hart to get up and once he does... HE GETS NAILED BY A ACOUSTIC EQUALIZER! Once Hart falls he signals to the back for something which turns out to be Owen and Neidhart, once Owen gets in the ring he puts on the Sharpshooter while Neidhart puts on a Camel Clutch while the refs try to break it up he finally lets it go as Raw goes off air.

**FADE TO WWF LOGO**

(WOO I REACHED A MILESTONE OF 1 EPISODE! )



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Wrestling Magazine! For all your Wrestling news!

Rumor has it that WWF will be starting up a brand dedicated to their smaller wrestlers, we do not know if this is real or not yet but if it is expect to see people like Jeff Hardy, Matt Hardy, 1-2-3 Kid ETC.

ECW put on a show that critics rated good or average with results being:
Stevie Richards Beats Big Tilly
Ian Rotten and Mikey Whipreck Defeat Rocco Rock and a unknown man
Tommy Dreamer, Cactus Jack, And Terry Funk Deafeat Jimmy Snuka, Shane Douglas and Don Harris
Sabu Defeats Dory Funk JR.

WCW has gotten a wide range of new talent including Eddy Gurrero, New Jack, and 2 Cold Scorpio.



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(I decided to drop the color because I have no clue when and where to use it but if you like it tell me if I should put it back in.)

WWF Superstars! Live from the Viking Hall in South Philladelphia!

We open the now 30 minuet Saturday morning show with a recap of Raw before we go to the arena to show a pretty good pyro opening

The announcers run down the card but get inturupted for the 2nd time this week by Adam Bomb's theme, he gets a pretty good pop when coming out as they show a replay of him getting Asian mist to the eyes on Raw.

Match #1: VS

Closing Moments: Kwang hits a Spinning Heel Kick which allows for Adam to roll out of the ring and for Kwang to try and land a Suicide Dive but Adam moves out of the way, Adam trys to give Kwang a Chokeslam onto the padding outside but Kwang gets out of it and rolls back in the ring.

Kwang gets Adam in the corner so the ref cant see him spit his mist in the face of Adam but Adam blocks it and throws him to the mat, once Kwang gets up he gets hit with a Neutron Bomb and gets pinned but for only a 2 count.

Adam is about to hit a Atom Smasher but Kwang rolls out of it and rolls him up for only a 2 count, once he Adam gets up he ducks a Spin Kick and hits a Atom Smasher pins him for the 1-2-3

Winner in: 7:24: Adam Bomb!

After the match Kwang gets up and spits some mist in the face of Adam which renders him to only being on his knees which allows Kwang to hit a flurry of Roundhouse Kicks, right after the kicks Kwang and Adam Bombs manager announces that at the first In Your House that the 2 will Battle for the European Title!

Backstage Owen Hart cuts a promo right before his match against the 1-2-3 Kid stating the normal sutff like Bret Hart, he will beat The Kid blah blah blah.

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

When we come back we get a promo to hype the first In Your House titled London Calling which will be taking place on July, 16, 1994 live on Pay Per View!

When we get back the 1-2-3 Kid is in the ring with his theme playing but it stops when....

**HIGH ENERGY**

Owen Hart makes his way to the ring splashing his bottle of water onto a fan who then yells at him for doing it.

Main Event!: VS

Closing Moments: The Kid hits a Roundhouse Kick but misses a Diving Moonsault which allows for Owen to lock in the Sharp Shooter on The Kid but he quickly reaches the ropes, Owen hits a Belly to Belly Suplex on The Kid but he lands on his feet and hits a Standing Side Kick to the gut followed up by another Roundhouse.

He once again misses a Diving Moonsault which allows for Owen to hit him with a Reverse Piledriver, he then hits a Diving Dropkick and then locks in the Sharpshooter once again but releases it when he see's Bret at ringside, after getting distracted by Bret Owen gets nailed with the 1-2-3 Kick pins him and gets the 1-2-3 pinfall victory.

Winner in: 10:43: 1-2-3 Kid!

After the match Owen and Bret start brawling but Neidhart comes to the ring to even the odds for Owen but gets nailed by The Kid, Owen and Jim back out of the ring and announce that the main event of Raw will be The Kid and Bret VS Jim and Owen.

**FADE TO WWF LOGO**

After the show on TV a promo plays hyping In Your House I: London Calling.

But after the event at the real arena Randy Savage Deafeats Diesel by DQ in a IC Title match.

Card for Monday Night Raw: The 1-2-3 Kid and Bret Hart VS Owen Hart and Jim Neidhart
Razor Ramon VS Diesel VS Shawn Michaels VS Randy Savage for the IC Title.
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Card so far for IYH I: London Calling:
Kwang VS Adam Bomb for the European Title.

(Tell me if there is anything I can improve on etc, I hope you guys are liking this.)



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**REGULAR WWF INTRO THEN THE 1994 RAW INTRO**

We go to a cold open with no pyro or announcers just Bret Hart's theme and him in the ring, he opens the show with a promo hyping up the main event before Owen Hart comes out with a knocked out 1-2-3 Kid, Owen runs backstage dragging The Kid with Bret coming right behind him.

The announcers finally get to talk and run down the card and announce that raw is now 2 hours before suprise suprise they get interrupted by Adam Bomb's theme, they replay the 2 endings from the Raw and Superstars matches before they get interrupted by "The Model" Rick Martel's theme.

Match #1: "The Model" Rick Martel VS Adam Bomb.

Closing Moments: Martel attempts to go for a Airplane Spin but Adam slips out while he is spinning and hits a Swinging DDT on Martel, he then follows up with a Gutwrench Powerbomb but Martel slips out of the Meltdown and locks in the Boston Crab.

Adam reaches the ropes and hits a Meltdown and then climbs to the top rope but misses a Neutron Bomb, Martel goes for a Slingshot Splash but gets caught by Adam and gets a Atom Smasher for his trouble's he pins Martel and gets the 1-2-3 victory

Winner in 5:38: Adam Bomb!

After the match Kwang comes out and slips out of a chokeslam from Adam and spits some Yellow Mist at Adam which paralyzes him for about 4 or 5 hours, the EMT's come out and stretch him out of the arena and into the ambulance.

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

We get a Slam of the Week when we get back from the commercial break which goes to the Acoustic Equalizer from last weeks Raw, we go back to the arena to get a replay of the Yellow Mist attack but then go to the ring where the newly debuting Hardy Boyz are getting ready for a match against The Men On a Mission.

Men On a Mission come out to a very good pop and both teams shake hands before the match.

Match #2: The Smoking Gunns VS The Hardy Boyz

Closing Moments: In a very short match The Hardy's attempt for the Omega Event but it gets reversed and The Smoking Gunns hit a Double Russian Legsweep and then the Sidewinder they pin Matt and get the 1-2-3 pinfall victory.

Winners in: 3:50 The Smoking Gunns

After the match the announcers state that there is some commotion backstage, as we go backstage Bret is yelling for Owen and Jim before he finds Jim and throws him at the wall, he goes into Owen's locker room and finds The Kid with some burn marks on his face.

He yells something inaudible (Becuase the people at The USA Network are total wuss's)

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

When we get back we get a replay of Bret finding The Kid before we hear the announcer announcing that the 4 Way for the Intercontinental title is next, the rules are that there are no DQ's Count Outs and it is under elimination rules.

Match #3: Fatal 4 Way for the Intercontinental Title: Diesel (C) VS Razor Ramon VS Randy Savage VS Shawn Michaels.

Full Match: Once the match begins Shawn battles with Savage and Razor with Diesel, Diesel throws Razor outside and signals for Michaels to elbow drop Razor but Savage pushes Michaels off the turnbuckle but Diesel then attempts for a Jackknife on Savage but he slips out of it into a roll up but for only a 2 count.

Razor attempts on the outside for a running Razor's Edge but Michaels slips out of it and attempts for a Sweet Chin Music but his foot gets caught by Razor who spins him around for a belly to back suplex, Savage hits a Diving Elbow Drop on Diesel and pins him for only a 2 count.

Michaels then runs in and hits a Sweet Chin Music on Savage pins him and only gets a 2 count Ramon then hits a Razors Edge and pins Shawn for a 2 count Diesel then runs in and hits a Jackknife onto Razor and pins him once again for only a 2 count.

After they all get up they all throw a few punches before Shawn hits a
Superkick on Savage and pins him and gets the 3 count eliminating Savage, Razor then hits a bionic elbow on both Shawn and Diesel and then grabs a steel chair, he knocks Shawn down with one hit.

Diesel signals for him to take his best shot and takes him down in one shot he pins Shawn for only a 2 count, Razor picks up Shawn and hits him with a Razors Edge and pins him for the 1-2-3 eliminating him after Diesel gets up they hit each other with a double clothesline 3 times before they both start punching each other.

After Deisel takes the advantage he hits a Jackknife Powerbomb to Razor onto a, he pins him but Savage runs back down to the ring and breaks up the count and hits a Body Slam and then a Diving elbow, once Razor gets up he hits a Razors Edge onto Diesel and pins him for the 1-2-3 victory.

Winner in: 17:12 and the NEW Intercontinental Champion! RAZOR RAMON!

After the match Savage shakes hands with Razor before we go to Commercial Break.

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

After the break we get a promo for In Your House I: London Calling and a recap of the whole night before we suddenly go backstage to show Bret and Owen fighting with ref's holding them back, Owen breaks free from the refs and smashes a glass bottle over Bret's head before we go back to the ring.

Match #4: Tatanka VS Lex Luger.

Closing Moments: In a short match Luger has the Torture Rack locked in but Bam Bam interfere's in the match and attacks Luger, Tatanka hits the End Of The Road on Luger but a masked Japanese man knocks Bam Bam off of the top rope and hits a standing side kick on Tatanka.

He unmask's and reveal's himself to be Yokozuna, he hits a Samoan Drop on Bam Bam and then follows it up with a Banzai Drop to Bam Bam thus turning him face.

Winner: Lex Luger by DQ in 4:56.

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

We get a commercial for WWF's Recent merchandising including a few new T-Shirts and WWF Raw on the SNES and Sega Genesis.

*DING DING DING*

As the announcer announces that the main event is up next only Jim's theme's plays as him and Owen come out dragging a knocked out Bret Hart, before the match begins Jim and Owen both cut a promo on how they are held back by Bret and Stu before Owen locks in the Sharpshooter while Jim locks in the Camel Clutch while the ref's try to break it up.

As Raw goes off air Jim spits on Bret as they are being held back by the ref's.

**FADE TO WWF LOGO**


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**BEFORE THE SHOW DARK MATCH**

Tatanka Defeats Lex Luger via a Tamahawk Chop.

**WWF 1994 INTRO WWF SUPERSTARS 1994 INTRO**

We begin Superstars with no pyro just Bret and The Kid in the ring cutting a promo and saying that Bret and Owen will face each other at London Calling while The Kid and Neidhart will face at the same Pay-Per-View before Owen and Neidhart appear on the titantron, all 4 of them argue before all of their mic's cut off for some reason (Time Constraints)

**COMMERCIAL BREAK**

Unknown Jobber PJ Walker is in the ring along with The Underfaker for their match.

Match #1: PJ Walker VS The Underfaker

In a very very short match PJ goes for a Super Kick but it gets caught by The Underfaker and he gets hit with a chokeslam and a pin for the 1-2-3

Winner in 2:58: The Underfaker

After the match the lights go out and a few bells gong once the lights come back on The Undertaker hits the Underfaker with a Chokeslam, he picks up a mic and announces in a creepy way that he and The Underfaker will face in a casket match at London Calling.

We go backstage to Kwang and Harvey Wippleman who are getting ready for a match against The 1-2-3 Kid and once they see the camera they push it out we cut back to the ring as The Kid is coming out to the ring and his theme is inturrupted by Kwang's

Main Event: Kwang VS The 1-2-3 Kid

Closing Moments: The Kid attempts for a 1-2-3 Kick but Kwang reverses it into a side kick which allows for The Kid to roll out of the ring but gets caught by a over the top rope senton from Kwang, Kwang throws The Kid back into the ring but misses a roundhouse kick.

The Kid hits a sitout face buster but misses a 1-2-3 Kick once again Kwang knocks The Kid down with a roundhouse kick and hits a diving moonsault, he is about to go for a Michinoku Driver but Adam Bombs theme hits.

He does not come out and turns around to one more Sit Out Facebuster and then a 1-2-3 Kick a pin and the 1-2-3 Pinfall victory.

Winner in: 7:46: The 1-2-3 Kid!

After the match.....

**MELTDOWN**

Adam Bombs theme plays abnormally loud (To melt peoples ears... BA DUM TSSS) and he runs out to the ring to hit a chokeslam, he pulls some of the padding up outside but Wippleman stops him from doing anything to Kwang... Instead he hits a Gutwrench Powerbomb to Wippleman on the concrete floor, Superstars goes off air with Adam Bomb standing over Kwang.

**FADE TO WWF LOGO**

After the show on TV a London Calling promo Plays.

**AFTER THE SHOW DARK MATCH**

Yokozuna Defeats Bam Bam via DQ from The Million Dollar Corp.

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[CENTER]In Your House 1: London Calling Match Card:

Owen Hart VS Bret Hart for the WWF Title

Razor Ramon VS Diesel for the Intercontinental Title

Adam Bomb VS Kwang

A Special Attraction Match

Lex Luger and Yokozuna VS Tatanka and Bam Bam Bigelow

The Undertaker VS The Undertaker in a Casket Match

Jim Neidhart VS The 1-2-3 Kid.



Fate
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You give yourself to him

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Closing Moments: In a short match Luger has the Torture Rack locked in but Bam Bam interfere's in the match and attacks Luger, Tatanka hits the End Of The Road on Luger but a masked Japanese man knocks Bam Bam off of the top rope and hits a standing side kick on Tatanka.

He unmask's and reveal's himself to be Yokozuna, he hits a Samoan Drop on Bam Bam and then follows it up with a Banzai Drop to Bam Bam thus turning him face.
Have to say, this made me LOL. A masked Japanese man? How on earth do we know he's Japanese then? And then it turns out to be Yoko - because we'd struggle to work out it was him with the mask wouldn't we? C'mon mate, that's a strange bit of writing there!

Overall, I've given this a read and, if I'm honest with you, it needs some work. First off, it seems to be a BTB that's had little to no planning as it strikes me throughout that you're writing it on the fly. I'd suggest first of all that you stop, decide what the match card for the next PPV is and have some ideas for the next big PPV (Survivor Series, I think?) Then, you can start planning a story arch for the matches you want to set up at In Your House and look ahead, for the bigger stories, for Survivor Series or whichever it is.

Also, it looks awful - you need to try out some of the formatting tools. Alignment, colour and bold/underline/italics are all useful for making your show look nice to read. At the moment, although it is broken up, it is just a wall of black writing. I'd have a play with formatting for the next show and maybe learn how to add an image or two to make things clear, i.e. the show logo.

You're not getting no feedback because, in my opinion, people aren't taking it serious. Feedback is rare on here anyway with a circle of people who review each other and ignore the rest so I hope you'll take my feedback in the spirit it is meant - to help you improve. I'll keep reading as I love WWF 1994 stuff but I am setting you some improvement targets, mate.
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