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Dunk20 · 11-22-2012, 12:59 PM

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Originally Posted by JoeRulz

Get a job, Dual.

People complain when someone creates rants with one paragraph.
People complain when rants are tl;dr
People complain about pretty much everything.

This poem did not rhyme, but it was dedicated to you.

Duncan.

**THE DARK ANDRE** · 11-22-2012, 01:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Keyser Söze

Far too many pictures and please stop taking line breaks when you end a sentence; such an eyesore. Also, your topic, albeit aggravating in my opinion, has been done to death. Finally, I would consider you revamp your writing style just a tad. It's just not connecting the supposed message well, and it seems uninspired, as if you wrote it thinking it was a necessity. Much of your vocabulary utilized carries on from that of the same users you appear to be directing this at.

The time spent in creation is showing, just not the effort.

His rant was far superior to anything that you've ever produced on here.