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Jae Jae · 07-16-2008, 11:18 PM

This is a song I composed on Guitar Pro 5. The instruments recorded are artificial ones by Gutiar Pro, so any problems with the playing or sound I cannot really control. I'm working on lyrics right now so I can add vocals, but comments on how this is would be great. Also, any suggestions for what I can base lyrics for this song on are very welcome, thanks.

Hopefully I'm allowed to link this site.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Enertia/

**EGame** · 07-16-2008, 11:31 PM

YOU ARE BY FAR AWESOME!

Seriously dude, I really liked it. Very enjoyable listen, I'm not quite sure what to base the lyrics on, I suggest whatever inspired you in the first place to make the composition would be a good place to start to start looking for lyrics.

Congrats on making something that sounds so nice though, wonderful stuff.

**Rockhead** · 07-16-2008, 11:36 PM

Kind of sounds like "Apologize" by OneRepublic for the first minute or so. Not bad though.

**S2H_Werd** · 07-16-2008, 11:39 PM

Really good work dude. It sounds really good and I could honestly see something along those lines actually becoming a popular Pop or RnB song. Would love to see what you can do for lyrics and the final product.

Keep up the good work.

Jae Jae · 07-16-2008, 11:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Rockhead

Kind of sounds like "Apologize" by OneRepublic for the first minute or so. Not bad though.

Yeah I'm aware of that; it's a common chord progression. I'm sure there will be many other songs that sound similar to it.

And thanks S2H, appreciate it

**Greeny** · 07-25-2008, 02:54 AM

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Originally Posted by Rockhead

Kind of sounds like "Apologize" by OneRepublic for the first minute or so. Not bad though.

Yeah, I agree with that, Jae really nice peice here. Keep it going It was an interesting piece, and I'm sure It'll sound even better when you add in some lyrics It's just that case of if they fit with the music.

But overall a great peice Jae, keep it up!

**Mister** · 08-06-2008, 05:12 AM

really good, you should keep the title as "Untitled for now"

musselman86 · 08-06-2008, 09:21 AM

Being partially deaf on my right, and completely on my left i could barely get a handle on it, sounded pretty good though. I'm not very familiar with the program you used. Do you have any sheet music? If so could you send it? So I can "hear" it better?