Thanks for the feedback guys. All the points Seabs made were the reasons I didn't think I had won, I removed every bit from the debate I thought the judges would nit pick except for the opening paragraph. Couldn't come up with a reason why, just liked it myself
I didn't want to bring in my own experiences, but felt that they added to my debate this time, I try to leave out sources I can't attribute in a footnote. Though over generalizing is something I definitely have a problem with.
I did know I'd have Aid in the bag if I had him as a judge
Since his feedback was what I incorporated most. And honestly, I didn't get that much negative feed back this time, just caught Rigby on a bad topic.
Well done Rigby.
And I knew I beat RAB