Re: Redemption Wrestling Federation
3.12 for the first show is a little unrealistic, but whatever. A 2 hour show is a great move as it's not like an extra hour a week is going to strain you that much workload-wise, and it gives you a lot more potential to use your entire roster in your shows and create some more storylines. Sin Cara and Zack Ryder would both be good additions to your thread so hopefully they'll both get signed.
Your first show was really short, but it's 1 hour so I can deal with it.
Opening promo was a little weird with Calaway (its Calaway not Galloway this really pissed me off) being used out of the Taker gimmick and I think him saying heels and faces is breaking kayfabe a little too much.
Joe/Punk was a big match that I think is good for your first show and a clean ending makes the winner, Punk, look strong but Joe not so much, although it's good to see Punk qualify.
Giving someone a title match for coming second is a little weird and I didn't like how you didn't announce all the guys in the match as that's sort of a little bit lazy imo.
I would have liked to see Banks win the title but I guess Low Ki is an okay choice. They have a match now which is a little weird, you may as well have made the match so that the two guys at the end get a title match next week or something.
Not sure about this Evolution 2.0 stable, I like the guys in it but there's already dissention and it's only week one. Hopefully you don't rehash Tista and Orton turning face with Steamboat and Black but we'll see.
Main event is another big match and I'm a big RVD fan so it's good to see him getting the win. Again, a clean loss sort of buries Batista and it already looks like this stable is about to split up. Very weird booking for week one.
Overall, a lot to improve on. Formatting and writing is fine but a few general errors coupled with some weird booking took away from how good the show could be. Looking forward to the 2 hour format next week.