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post #11 of 12 (permalink) Old 07-25-2011, 04:06 AM
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Re: Redemption Wrestling Federation

3.12 for the first show is a little unrealistic, but whatever. A 2 hour show is a great move as it's not like an extra hour a week is going to strain you that much workload-wise, and it gives you a lot more potential to use your entire roster in your shows and create some more storylines. Sin Cara and Zack Ryder would both be good additions to your thread so hopefully they'll both get signed.

Your first show was really short, but it's 1 hour so I can deal with it.

Opening promo was a little weird with Calaway (its Calaway not Galloway this really pissed me off) being used out of the Taker gimmick and I think him saying heels and faces is breaking kayfabe a little too much.

Joe/Punk was a big match that I think is good for your first show and a clean ending makes the winner, Punk, look strong but Joe not so much, although it's good to see Punk qualify.

Giving someone a title match for coming second is a little weird and I didn't like how you didn't announce all the guys in the match as that's sort of a little bit lazy imo.

I would have liked to see Banks win the title but I guess Low Ki is an okay choice. They have a match now which is a little weird, you may as well have made the match so that the two guys at the end get a title match next week or something.

Not sure about this Evolution 2.0 stable, I like the guys in it but there's already dissention and it's only week one. Hopefully you don't rehash Tista and Orton turning face with Steamboat and Black but we'll see.

Main event is another big match and I'm a big RVD fan so it's good to see him getting the win. Again, a clean loss sort of buries Batista and it already looks like this stable is about to split up. Very weird booking for week one.

Overall, a lot to improve on. Formatting and writing is fine but a few general errors coupled with some weird booking took away from how good the show could be. Looking forward to the 2 hour format next week.
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Re: Redemption Wrestling Federation

Originally Posted by Lords Of Pain

Redemption Wrestling Federation Officials have announced the official theme song for Golden Clash: "Rise Up" by Disciple. Disciple's song "Game On" was used as the theme song for Cyber Sunday 2006 and "In The Middle of It Now" was recorded for the tag team of Curt Hawkins and Zack Ryder. Speaking of Zack Ryder, now word now on whether or not he's signed with RWF. Sources are reporting that he has turned down an offer from TNA and ROH.

RWF has released their first preview for an episode of Madness

Madness Preview

After an amazing inagural Madness, the tournament to crown the very first Redemption Wrestling Federation Champion. Last week, this tournament started off hot with "The Voice of The Voiceless" CM Punk defeating "The Samoan Submission Machine" Samoa Joe; and "Mr. Friday Night" Rob Van Dam defeating "The Animal" Batista, the match ending with Van Dam being pursued into the locker room by Batista.

This week, the first round of the tournament will "The Icon" Sting going one-on-one with Carlito Cool; and Chris Jericho facing off against "The Bare-Knuckle Brawler" Wade Barrett.

Also, a message was sent from a mysterious voice from Television to Television Champion, Low Ki and challenger, Antonio Banks. Will Low Ki focus his attention on the challenger, or the mysterious man?

Announced earlier by, the first RWF Tag Team Champion will be decided tonight in a Fatal-Four Way Cage Match involving Motor City Machine Guns, The Young Bucks, Paul London and Brian Kendrick, and Colt Cabana and Ace Steel.

The first two-hour edition of Madness will be posted sometime within the next two days.


Announced for Madness:

Sting vs. Carlito
Chris Jericho vs. Wade Barrett
Motor City Machine Guns vs. The Young Bucks vs. Paul London and Brian Kendrick vs. Second City Saints (Steel Cage Match)

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