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Old 08-18-2010, 09:19 PM   #141 (permalink)
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I would've liked Batista opening the show after his rampage last week ... perhaps an explanation? Still ew'ing over the fact that Big Show is World Champion, but I can get used to it. Matt Striker is money. Just sayin' . I really hope that either Batista/Jericho wins at Royal Rumble, since I absolutely do not want to see Show/Rey main event 'Mania. I could see Jericho winning and a Show/Tista match at Mania. I also liked that you typed into the New York Brawl style of match with the reference to the Empire State Building ... that's smart. I actually was impressed with how well you worked Show on the mic. I love heel Jericho, remind me to turn him heel in my thread ;D. He came across beautifully, nice work. Oh, by the sounds of things, we're going to get Jericho/Taker at WrestleMania. That match is money and would own, especially if the World Title is thrown into the mix. Ah shit, Rey's here. At least you don't have him going all Spanish on our asses. I'm out of the loop as to what's happened at Bragging Rights since I haven't taken the time to go back and read your thread yet, but I figure I should do that soon . I don't know why Show went after Rey since it seemed as if they all wanted to get revenge on 'Tista. If Batista doesn't win at Royal Rumble, I might cry. The way he's being booked just means it has to happen, unless you make someone else look incredibly strong, and fast.

Squash~! I'm not totally sold on Ziggler yet, so I want to see what you do with him. My issue with where you put the match on the card is that we have our opening promo, a 1 minute squash, and then another (fairly) large promo. I'm interested in seeing how you use Hardy's mic skills in this feud, and hopefully, Ziggler can come out looking better than ever. Ziggler sounded pretty decent on the mic, too.

I don't mind that Morrison is face, although he's such a great heel. I'm also a bit surprised that you're pushing Kendrick since he was mis-used after he was with London in the 'E. I guess you're not going with the 2010 PG theme .

"Muffins aside" made me chuckle lawls. Anywho, I was expecting a squash, but thank god you decided to make Maria credible for 5 minutes and not treat us with back-to-back squashes. The good thing is that the only real serious trouble McCool was ever in was after that clothesline .. saving her credibility. Mickie > all, don't ever forget that .

Punk is Jesus. He's just so good at cutting a promo where he takes control of the situation, and you got that across perfectly here. Punk vs. Austin at WrestleMania? The background for it fits perfectly. Wow, Punk was just awesome in this promo. Absolutely fantastic, this is possibly promo of the year in Be the Booker ... I'm serious, it was that good. Although there were more times I would've liked where Punk aimed for cheap heat (a lot of comments about Ohio).

Super Crazy out first, then Hart Dynasty/Finlay, leaving McIntyre/Morrison, imo. Oh good, this happened . This match got way too much time. 13 minutes for a 6-man battle royal seems pointless, and it would get pretty boring unless everyone got eliminated within 5 minutes, except the final 2 who are 2 exciting face wrestlers.

Ironically enough, I was just looking at Caylen Croft's wiki page today and the Dudebusters haha. I'm not too familiar with them, but the name rings a bell, that's for sure.

I was laughing during this promo. Clearly not a PG show with the barn comments and his mom being a big . Thus far, your matches have all been very predictable (except the Battle Royal), although I understand that it's more likely to be like that on weekly shows, but still, it's a bit meh. Kendrick looking strong on both the ic and in the ring is helping him since he's getting an IC Title shot.

When Big Show came in after the heels dominated, I think it would have made far more sense for him to be in the ring with Jericho. I didn't like that he got the upperhand on Batista after 'Tista had been looking so strong. It looks as if you're trying to turn the Codebreaker into a signature move, not a finishing move, considering Rey kicked out of a Super Codebreaker. Ahhhh, Rey pins Batista. This isn't good, Rey could win the title. Batista's momentum seems to be coming to a screeching halt. Oh good, Batista is regaining momentum after the match. The buildup to this Rumble match is absolute chaos, fitting with the style of match perfectly.

Overall, the show was quite good. It's quite clear that your strongest quality is promo-writing. The match-writing was good, although it was somewhat predictable. However, you are slowly establishing yourself as one of the best bookers on the site, especially after that Punk promo. Keep up the good work.
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Old 08-19-2010, 10:29 AM   #142 (permalink)
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ECW Invades: Saturday Night’s Main Event
Location: Wachovia Center, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
Date: 16th January 2010
Tagline: Extreme Returns...


Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???
Triple Threat Tag Team Match

In two weeks’ time, at WWE Royal Rumble, Christian defends his ECW Championship against the Gold Standard, Shelton Benjamin, and the Ripper, Paul Burchill, in a Triple Threat match. Tonight however, each man will have a mystery partner, chosen by themselves, as they hope to chalk up a huge victory heading into that ECW Title match, which is now only 15 days away.

Christian has promised that he and his partner will “take Philadelphia by storm” tonight, and that all alliances are off the table. After pinning Vladimir Kozlov in tag team action this past Tuesday on ECW, Christian’s confidence will be sky-high, and as always, he’ll set the tone for the whole of ECW with a determined performance this Saturday. While he’s had a half-alliance with Shelton Benjamin in recent weeks, Christian says that ends tonight, despite the respect he has for the Gold Standard. However, his relationship is less than friendly with Paul Burchill, as there has been some odd confrontations between Captain Charisma and Burchill’s sister, Katie Lea.

Shelton Benjamin has called himself the “dark horse” coming into both tonight and Royal Rumble. The Gold Standard vowed a few weeks back that he and his partner would do “some serious ass-kicking” here tonight, and whoever Benjamin has in store for us, we can expect an athletic performance from the Gold Standard, who firmly wants to prove that he is a true contender for the ECW Title. Benjamin took a Dangerous Buster from Paul Burchill last Tuesday, and he’ll want to get some revenge tonight.

Paul Burchill has been ruthless and vicious in the lead-up to tonight’s event, having no regard for the safety of others as he beat down his Royal Rumble opponents on various separate occasions. Visibly infuriated by the interactions between his sister, Katie Lea, and Christian, Burchill nearly hit his own sister last Tuesday, until Christian pushed her out the way, and took the Running Clothesline himself. Christian’s selflessness cost him, though, as Burchill knocked him unconscious with the Curb Stomp to stand tall at the end of ECW. Burchill offered his partner tonight “a night with his sister”, a proposition that Katie Lea was clearly angered by, not that the Ripper seems to care. He has called his partner tonight “a high profile man”, and that could mean bad things for Christian and Shelton Benjamin this evening.


Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
Extreme Rules Career Threatening Match
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

Many weeks ago, Zack Ryder promised us all that he would end the career of the last remaining ECW Original, Tommy Dreamer, after the pair had a confrontation backstage. Ryder managed to get the upper hand on Dreamer plenty of times, eliminating him from a Battle Royal, and qualifying for the Royal Rumble at his expense. Ryder declared that Dreamer wasn’t worthy of living in “Ryder’s Era”, and when the Innovator of Violence challenged him to an Extreme Rules match, Ryder agreed – but only if Dreamer agreed to put his career on the line. After some taunting from the self-proclaimed “Long Island Legend”, Dreamer accepted the stipulations, and tonight, we will finally see these two enemies go head-to-head in what should be a brutal contest.

Zack Ryder told us this past Tuesday that he was sick of Dreamer “taking up the spotlight”, and said that Dreamer had never been a star like him. He mentioned that tonight, Ryder is going to take Dreamer “to school”, and prove that Tommy’s dream is all over. Dreamer maintains that while ECW lives and breathes, it’s always the era of Tommy Dreamer, and that he plans to end RYDER’S career tonight, in the dangerous conditions of an Extreme Rules match. In what is sure to be a violent match, Zack Ryder and Tommy Dreamer, two men who truly despise each other, will fight to determine who’s era it truly is, and if Dreamer loses, he will be forced to permanently retire. Will Dreamer’s vast experience in these matches prove vital, or will Ryder make true of his promise, and end Tommy Dreamer’s career tonight, at Saturday Night’s Main Event?


Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

William Regal and Ezekiel Jackson used to form a fearsome alliance, alongside Vladimir Kozlov, as the Ruthless Roundtable. A few weeks ago, however, on Monday Night Raw, in a 3-on-1 Handicap match, Big Zeke left William Regal hanging, refusing to tag in, and leaving him to the mercy of John Cena, who made him tap out to the STFU. The next night on ECW, Regal got some revenge on Jackson, qualifying for the 2010 Royal Rumble at his expense in a Triple Threat also featuring Kozlov. While there are still six places left for Big Zeke to feature in that big match, Jackson will feel aggrieved by his narrow loss a few weeks ago, and after trading insults ever since, these two brawlers go head-to-head tonight, desperate to prove that they are the better man.


Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

When ECW General Manager Tiffany cancelled the Abraham Washington Show, it was a very popular decision with the fans. Needless to say, Abraham Washington wasn’t as pleased, and he vowed he would take away HER show, like she’d taken his. Washington went about this by recruiting the Mastodon, Big Daddy V, to his corner, and would then go on to attack various ECW superstars and staff, including his former co-host Tony Atlas, Josh Matthews, and half the ECW roster in one swoop at the end of ECW two weeks ago. A few weeks ago, Tiffany finally agreed to a contest where she would pick one superstar to face Big Daddy V – if her man won, Washington would be fired, but if the Mastodon won, Washington would get what he always wanted... control over ECW, as General Manager. However, it was two weeks ago, when Tiffany revealed her representative as none other than the Big Red Machine, KANE, setting up a mouth-watering clash of the titans tonight.

This past week on ECW, Tiffany declared that Abraham Washington threatens the very existence of ECW itself, and that she loved the superstars ECW like family. She went on to say that if Abraham Washington became ECW General Manager, it would be the day ECW was dead. Washington replied by saying he already HAD control and authority over ECW, because no-one could stop him doing what he wanted. However, as Washington and Big Daddy V threatened to make a statement at Tiffany’s expense, Kane arrived on the scene, clearing the Mastodon from the ring, and delivering a massive Chokeslam to Washington. Tonight, will the balance of power in ECW finally shift in the direction of Abraham Washington, or will Kane pull out a win against the big 500 pounder, keeping the control in the hands of the woman who calls ECW “her home”, sending Washington packing in the process? Tune in tonight to find out.


Rhyno vs Gregory Helms

This feud began about eight weeks ago, after Gregory Helms was victorious over the re-debuting Manu. The Samoan then unveiled the returning Rhyno, who hit Helms with the Gore to make an impact on his return. Rhyno and Manu have attacked Helms and his friend Yoshi Tatsu on numerous occasions since, and Rhyno said he was only looking to show that he means business here on ECW. These two men, who have never fought one-on-one before, do battle tonight, as Helms looks to get revenge for the persecution he’s received from the War Machine in recent weeks, once and for all. However, with Helms and Tatsu being the current No. 1 Contenders to the Unified Tag Team Titles, they’ve also had to deal with the added threat of the current Champions, Cody Rhodes and Ted DiBiase, who haven’t held back in their insults of Helms and Tatsu, as well as interfering in their matches on occasion. Can Gregory Helms pull out a win against a bigger and stronger opponent here tonight, AND watch his back in case of a possible interruption? We’ll find out tonight.

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Predictions Template

Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order.
2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christian’s partner, Burchill’s partner etc. is fine)
3) Who is Christian’s mystery partner?
4) Who is Shelton Benjamin’s mystery partner?
5) Who is Paul Burchill’s mystery partner?
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who?

Prizes

1st: 100 million credits
2nd: 50 million
3rd: 20 million
4th: 5 million
5th: 1 million

PREDICTIONS CONTEST IS OPEN

Naturally, SmackDown feedback is still welcome if anyone feels like it (thanks to DH, btw, glad you liked the Punk promo), but I'm quite hyped up for writing this, so I thought I'd get the predo's contest up. Enjoy, I'll start writing the actual show at some point.

Quick edit: While I'm here, can I just apologise for the poor writing on my part when it comes to the description for each match in the above preview. I just re-read the whole thing, and each paragraph is just a dull recap of what's happened on ECW, and I'm fairly sure I hyped up Armageddon a lot better than I did for this. So apologies, I didn't hype this efficiently in the preview, it's not my best work.
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Awesome!! This show looks so good lets see what I can predict.

Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno---

Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order. 1.Jackson/Regal, 2.Rhyno/Helms, 3. Dreamer/Ryder, 4. Big Daddy V/Kane, 5. Tag Team Match
2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christianís partner, Burchillís partner etc. is fine)Burchill
3) Who is Christianís partner? An ECW Original? Sandman
4) Who is Shelton Benjaminís partner? Charlie Haas
5) Who is Paul Burchillís partner? Kozlov or some international wrestler
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who? Paul Heyman

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5 - Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

4 - Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

1 - Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

3 - Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

2 - Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order. Done above
2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christianís partner, Burchillís partner etc. is fine) Shelton Benjamin
3) Who is Christianís mystery partner? I wanna say Sabu, but I'll go out on a huge limb and say Edge
4) Who is Shelton Benjaminís mystery partner? Charlie Haas
5) Who is Paul Burchillís mystery partner? Vladimir Kozlov
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who? Yes, I think we could see the Sandman/Sabu/RVD appear in the match between Ryder/Dreamer

The show looks good, you better get a start on it
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SD! Review

Well, we start off tonight with the WHC, who of course I’m not a huge fan of having the title currently but you had his mic skills to a tee here. Really good stuff, and I really wanted to hear from Batista but instead we get the other two competitors which is fine. Batista public enemy number one on everyone’s list is no surprise, and I really like heel Batista, so let’s see how he is on the mic. Walls of Jericho on Show? Is it possible? Interesting if it is. The attack seemed very brutal for an opening promo and with the main event later tonight Rey and Show at a huge disadvantage. Maybe turn down the opening attack just a tad bit.

Kung-Fu doing what he does best in jobber land being a jobber. Anyway Ziggler along with Kendrick is one of my faves in this thread to be honest. You’ve built him up very nicely and while only a squash he is still one of the top guys on SD! Not able to compete Matt Hardy, got dissed pretty hard, but Ziggler had great points. It’s true Matt always post “The year of Matt Hardy”. Please when this feud is over Ziggler walks out victorious.

Morrison's promo was great here, cept’ the Rumble part. Yeah to me no shot of winning especially with his epic feud with TBK. My only concern with this feud is the fact that TBK, is losing steam because he isn’t taking on the best competition (mid-card wise). Sure, he beat JoMo two weeks ago, but JoMo tonight has a huge match which he wins (sorry read ahead) while Kendrick takes on a good but not great Shannon Moore. Maybe I’m just ranting about nothing major but since I’m such a huge TBK mark I want the best out of him.

English Muffin Lay-LA for the win!!! Epic love it IRL and here. So glad you used that line. Wanted a bit of mic time for Lay-Cool but a nice swerve with CM Punk coming out. Right off the bat talking to Lay-Cool I knew this promo was going to be epic. Reading through it hasn’t lost any of it’s epicness, as it is just so golden right now. Punk with the beer and sniffing it was awesome, and his promo about Stone Cold was awesome as well. I just wonder when we are going to see SCSA, and how long Punk can rant about him. You’re best promo with Punk by far. I hope soon this comes full circle soon with it leading to Punk/SCSA at Mania.

Much like DH stated I felt this was a bit long and dragged but the final two was perfect with Mac and Morrison, with Morrison picking up the nice win, and giving himself some momentum. Like I said earlier I don’t think Morrison has a good shot of winning, but the only realistic thing I can see for him right now is getting eliminated by TBK in the Rumble.

Dudebusters getting added to Smackdown is wonderful TBH. The team has a lot of talented and can be real goofballs, so hopefully you can play around with their characters a lot.

Friday Night Kendrick!!!!!! First off I love his jab at Shannon saying it’s a girl’s name, and his mic work has been golden. This week’s promo and last weeks about Super Crazy was amazing. Now back to the match it was good and the attack on Wang Yang was also very good. Like I stressed before, I just want TBK going over some better competition. It’s hard to do that with about two weeks left before the Rumble, so if that can’t happen maybe like I said earlier you give him the rub by defeating Morrison. Loving TBK’s character and marking the hell out for it.

I was very surprised by the victory of Mysterio and Show tbh. They really got beaten up earlier in the night, and Chris Jericho hitting a codebreaker in mid-air only to get a two count even shocked me more. Also not a huge fan of the ending tbh either. Yes it embarrasses the Animal which will only add fire to his character next week, but to me it makes him look a tad bit weak to get pinned off a hurricanrana. Sure the attack helped but like I said he still looked a tad bit weak. Show standing tall to end everything was perfectly fine and a good way to end the show. BTW no spotlight please? So sad.

Overall I enjoyed this show very much while I didn’t like the result of the main event; I felt everything else was fine, but a bit predicable. Ziggler, Morrison and Mac being the final two and Kendrick winning really didn’t surprise me as all are being pushed very hard. However favorite promo by far is clearly the Punk promo as that was just golden. Really great stuff there. Now onto are ECW Predictions.

ECW Predictions

1. Rhyno v. Helms
To me with Helms being number one contender for the tag belts he needs the win tbh. BTW not a huge fan of this match, but I think it would be a good way to open the card.

2. Zeke Jackson v. William Regal
Well depending if Kozlov interferes or anything I can see Jackson winning by DQ. I’m also thinking Kozlov interferes which helps Regal win but I hate Regal so giving it to Jackson.

3. Zack Ryder vs. Tommy Dreamer
This was a hard one to pick but yes, I think Ryder backs up what he has been saying and you make him a legitimate threat and he will defeat Tommy Dreamer and hopefully that will propel him to the ECW title picture.

4. Kane w/ Tiffany vs. Big Daddy V w/Abe Washington
With Dreamer leaving I can’t really see Abe leaving, so I like to see him win and be GM. It is a shame because you do write Tiffany well as a GM character so I hope you can find some place to put her.

5.Christian and ???? vs. Shelton Benjamin and ???? vs. Paul Burchill and ????
The Katie Lea angle really hurts Paul’s chances in this match. I honestly don’t see Benjamin winning for some odd reason so I guess I’m going with the safe pick here and picking Christian and his partner ftw.

Bonus Questions
1.Predict the match order: Done.
2.Who will score the pin fall in the Triple Tag Team Match?: Christian
3.Who is Christian’s mystery partner?: Evan Bourne
4.Who is Shelton Benjamin’s mystery partner?: Yoshi Tatsu
5.Who is Paul Burchill’s mystery partner? I wanted to say Regal, but since he is in competition earlier I’m going with Finlay.
6.Will there be any surprise appearances? If so who?: Uh no?

Good luck with the show
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Good way to start the show, showing the dominance of Batista well in the video package, which, of course, was the big talking point coming out of last week’s show. The little hype job from the commentators was done well too, as I’ve come to expect from you.

Starting things off with Big Show? I don’t mind it, as he has a right to want to call Batista out for redemption, but this show really seemed like Batista’s to come out and own, declaring himself the man on SmackDown! after last week. A small thing, but the commentary from Striker during Big Show’s entrance really didn’t sound like something I would expect from Striker. Big Show was fine to begin with, talking down on how Batista went about the beatdown well, bringing up the low blow to take control, as well as really making the attack seem as brutal as possible by saying he nearly broke Show’s back. The lines about Mysterio and Jericho being pissed too, really bringing up how much of a warpath Batista was on last week were good, leading to Big Show talking about the Rumble, which I thought you did pretty damn well, capturing some good emotion to show how desperate Big Show is to retain the World Heavyweight Title, before calling out Batista. Jericho interrupting instead was fine, and he was instantly on with his normal heel shtick to get the crowd to hate him. The talk of how he’ll become champion was fine too, as was the speech about why he deserves to be the one to face Batista tonight, bringing up The Undertaker well, reminding us of that feud, and connecting it with Mysterio, who has been in the thorn in the side of Jericho in it all. The way in which Jericho called out Batista was good, although again, the interruption of Mysterio instead was expected by now. Rey immediately bringing up his history with Batista as a reason for him to face ‘Tista was a fine way for him to start, in character well, before the little exchange broke out between the three, which I liked in terms of all the characters, working well. Batista interrupting, only to just come out to the stage is a nice little heelish touch on his behalf, before a nice little speech on how destructive he’s been, along with the great line that it’s his ring. The brawl that broke out, with Show’s patience finally snapping was nicely done, again allowing Batista to look strong, while further doing damage to Big Show’s back, in what could prove an interesting little touch. The announcement from Long for the main event is certainly a good one too, and one that brings a lot of possibilities. It should be interesting to see where you go with it.

The squash victory for Ziggler is fine, keeping his momentum roaring along. The sickening post-match attack is good to see following last week, keeping the ruthless streak to his character too, even with no Matt Hardy in the arena. The comparison of Funaki to Matt Hardy after he beat him down in similar fashion was a nice one, keeping the focus of Ziggler on Hardy while also talking about what had just happened well. The lines Ziggler used to get heat, calling Hardy worthless and saying that it wasn’t the year of Matt Hardy were done well too, especially the line about Jeff. Like I said last week, bringing up the real life of Hardy, and how he blogs, using his catch phrases and stuff is all good to see, as is the line that Hardy is a quitter, and that he will die. Ziggler talking himself up in there is good to see too, contrasting himself with Matt, before giving the emphatic statement that Hardy should stay away. I’ve really been enjoying this ruthless streak you’ve given to Ziggler, and what he showed here was certainly no exception. He’s fast becoming one of my favourite characters in BTB.

I liked the way you had Morrison go about addressing The Brian Kendrick here, before moving onto talking about the Rumble and Morrison’s match tonight, giving it a real good flow. The lines about Kendrick were fine for Morrison, talking himself up in a good way for a face, while also talking down on Kendrick’s attitude. Nice promo.

Nice little recap of last week’s beatdown of Mickie before the match here. Nice to see this match not a total squash, since the talent pool doesn’t run too deep in the women’s division, but Michelle comes out looking good, like you’d want.

Very sudden interruption from CM Punk, which I like. A bit surprised to see him owning Lay-Cool, because they’re heels, and I really don’t think the crowd would care about them being insulted, even if his lines about them were gold, really integrating the straight edge stuff in well, with the cheap shot at the crowd topping it off. Again, not so sure at the Lay-Cool stuff that followed, especially when it would get them cheered. The owning of the fans that followed was great again, as was the little Jeff thing, in a smarky little Jeff Hardy reference. Punk then taking his beer and shattering it was great, as were the described mannerisms as he did it, really heeling it up well. The cutthroat motion was also clever, before using JR, which is great for heel heat, especially with him being friends with Austin. The way in which he spoke of Austin, mockingly using JR’s lines, before the “I WAS RIGHT” line was really good, as were the closing comparisons between Punk and Austin, calling Austin the devil, while Punk is the saviour. Every week you’ve come out with a very solid promo from Punk, and while I’ve said in the past I don’t like Austin wrestling again, which appears likely, it is, at least, providing us with some promo gold.

Nice little way to keep Kendrick connected by having him watch from backstage. Not a whole lot to say on this match, other than it did a good job of hyping the Rumble with some of your midcarders, and I also liked how it allowed Morrison to look impressive. Perhaps a nice little feud between Finlay and The Hart Dynasty could be followed up on following the eliminations, which I certainly wouldn’t object to.

I don’t mind the arrival of The Dudebusters to SmackDown! – in fact, I quite like it – but this vignette seemed a little bland for my liking. I would like to see a little more personality shown.

Ah, I love the Friday Night Kendrick live you’re using, and it’s great for some cheap heat for the cocky Kendrick. The little digs at Moore were okay too, if not a little over the top, but the way Kendrick addressed Morrison and hyped both the Intercontinental Title match, that has to be coming soon, along with the Royal Rumble Match. The sunglasses line on Morrison was a little weak, but apart from that, the rest of the promo worked fine for me.

Kendrick attacking Moore with the mic before the match is a nice little heel move for Kendrick. The win, of course, is good for Kendrick, keeping things going, but perhaps what I liked more was seeing the temper of Kendrick at almost being embarrassed by Moore, showing how serious he can get with both that and the attack on Wang Yang after the match.

Nice little reminder of the events of RAW.

Good to see the tension between partners before the main event even kicks off, following on strongly from how things started at the top of the show. The way you worked on that at the beginning of the match, pointing out the forced tags, while also saying Batista and Jericho worked together due to their mutual want to beat down Rey was clever, and I liked how you allowed for that to make the match your regular type of tag match. The action at the end was very exciting, especially with how you incorporated the tags, along with the counter from last week of the Codebreaker on Rey, using some smarts in following up on what you’ve done. That tag at the end from Jericho to Batista was a nice way to show the heat between the two, while Mysterio getting the surprise win works fine for me, because it doesn’t really halt Batista’s momentum at all, and it allows Rey to show what he’s capable of. Batista attacking Mysterio post-match is a good way for him to get his heat back, while having your world champion come out standing tall, having got a measure of revenge on Batista was a good way to close things.


Overall, I found this to be a very enjoyable show. Your promo writing continues to improve, getting to the point where it’s really some of the best in the section, especially with some of your characters (CM Punk in particular). Your feuds are continuing to progress nicely, and with a lot of your young talent looking good week in, week out, this show always has an exciting feel to it. Good stuff my man.

Predictions
3 - Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???
The hype has been all about the other two, so I feel Shelton needs the win to get some momentum going.

5 - Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder
vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire
Woo woo woo, you know it.


2 - Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal
I don't really see the point in Regal winning. Zeke has much more he can do right now.

4 - Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager
While I'm a fan of Tiffany as GM, I can't see you doing this if you wanted to keep her on board.


1 - Singles Match
Gregory Helms
vs Rhyno
Keep his momentum rolling.

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order. Yup.
2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christian’s partner, Burchill’s partner etc. is fine) Shelton Benjamin.
3) Who is Christian’s mystery partner? This is too low key of an event for Edge to return at, imo, so instead I'll go with a young guy who you're giving a rub to. Yoshi Tatsu.
4) Who is Shelton Benjamin’s mystery partner? Charlie Haas.
5) Who is Paul Burchill’s mystery partner? As much as I'd like Regal, he's already competing, so Brutus Magnus it is.
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who? Yeah, we'll get the ECW Originals making an appearance to farewell Tommy Dreamer and possibly interfere in his match. If you want actual names, I'll go with Terry Funk, Sabu and The Sandman.
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4. Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

5. Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

3. Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

2. Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

1. Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order.
Yep

2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christianís partner, Burchillís partner etc. is fine)
Shelton Benjamin

3) Who is Christianís mystery partner?
Don't really know, so I'm gonna go with Rob Van Dam.

4) Who is Shelton Benjaminís mystery partner?
Charlie Haas

5) Who is Paul Burchillís mystery partner?
Probably Vladimir Kozlov

6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who?
I will agree with BKB and say that some ECW Originals will bid Dreamer farewell from the Land of Extreme.
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4 - Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

3 - Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

1 - Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

5 - Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

2 - Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order: Done above.
2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christianís partner, Burchillís partner etc. is fine): Benjamin's partner
3) Who is Christianís mystery partner?
4) Who is Shelton Benjaminís mystery partner?
5) Who is Paul Burchillís mystery partner?
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who? Rob Van Dam
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5 - Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

4 - Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

1 - Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal

3 - Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

2 - Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order. ^
2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? Benjy
3) Who is Christian’s mystery partner? Edge
4) Who is Shelton Benjamin’s mystery partner? Charlie Haas
5) Who is Paul Burchill’s mystery partner? Vladimir Kozlov
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who? Yes, ECW Originals might in Ryder/Dreamer

Show looks pretty good, Melvisboy, I cant wait to see how you deliver on this one. Good luck to you.

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Triple Threat Tag Team Match
Christian and ??? vs Shelton Benjamin and ??? vs Paul Burchill and ???

Winners: Christian and whoever his opponent is.

Career Threatening Extreme Rules Match
Zack Ryder vs Tommy Dreamer
If Tommy Dreamer loses, he must retire

Winner: Zack Ryder, I know you're pretty high on Ryder so see him getting the win here.

Singles Match
Ezekiel Jackson vs William Regal
Winner: Ezekiel Jackson

Singles Match
Kane w/ Tiffany vs Big Daddy V w/ Abraham Washington
If Kane wins, Abraham Washington is fired from ECW
If Big Daddy V, Washington becomes ECW General Manager

Winner: Big Daddy V.... I don't think you will fire Abe, so this keeps both Abe and Tiffany around.

Singles Match
Gregory Helms vs Rhyno
Winner: Gregory Helms

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Bonus Questions

1) Predict the match order.
Helms - Rhyno, Triple Threat Tag, Zeke/Regal, Daddy V - Kane and Ryder/Dreamer

2) Who will score the fall in the Triple Threat Tag Team match? (Christianís partner, Burchillís partner etc. is fine)

No idea.

3) Who is Christianís mystery partner?
4) Who is Shelton Benjaminís mystery partner?
5) Who is Paul Burchillís mystery partner?
6) Will there be any surprise appearances? If so, who? Some ECW originals to say farewell to Tommy.
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