Bragging Rights Review
Starting off, just for the next Pay-Per-View, I like how you interspersed things with guys doing stuff with your theme song, but maybe next time put that part in quote box, it kinda adds a "movie" type feel to it. IMO. Small quip.
Brutus Magnus & Paul Burchill vs. Motor City Machine Gunz:
Good move putting the Gunz over. They are gonna have a totally badass feud with Edge and Jericho over the titles, perfect booking there. This match was good too. You gave the Brits a nice amount of offense, and your pins and stuff were good, apart from a few typos and such. Good job with this one.
Backstage with Long, Jericho, and Edge:
A coin flip? You did a good job building suspense and I could see this happening in real life. Just the flip was a bit odd.
Jack Swagger vs. Shelton Benjamin:
YAY! For Shelton winning. (: This was actually probably my favorite match on your show. Besides the typos and stuff, it is not too big of a deal, you just have to do a little better spelling things. But the match was pretty good with Shelton picking up the W.
Backstage with Ryder:
Great in-character segment from Ryder. Tiffany played her part well too, and this relationship is going places I hope.
World Tag Team Title Match Legacy vs. Chris Jericho & Edge vs. Cryme Tyme:
Gah, this is where things went downhill for you to me. The match itself was average and decent enough. But they did the exact same thing in real life with these two. I applaud you for going in this direction and trying to change it up a bit with the coin flip. But the thing as a whole did not work for me.
Backstage interview with Punk:
In character, and I am glad he is not just sucking up to Jeff because he is a face. Dig the videos too with Punk and Burke.
United States Title Match: John Morrison vs. Zack Ryder:
Meh. This match was alright. Morrison won it kind of too easy, but I am thinking this fued is not over which would be good, I guess with Tiff as his manager at least Woo Woo Woo has something to do now either way.
Backstage with Orton & Legacy:
Ouch. Ted is about to get a push. *Yawn* But this segment wasn't so bad, you are kind of selling the titles short and stuff but Ted getting pissed about is a good sign. We will see where this goes.
Intercontinental Title Match: MVP vs. Dolph Ziggler:
Good job with this match, MVP has looked pretty cool in your thread so far and Ziggler is not so bad. I still wish Ziggler would go back to his debut stuff. D: But this match was kind of a rebound match for you and I think the right guy won and the match was good.
Main Event - WWE Title Match: CM Punk vs. Randy Orton vs. Jeff Hardy:
I hate all three of these guys so I do not wanna comment on that aspect because I will be biased against them. But out of everyone, the right man won here. The match was good reading and kept my interest. Cody standing on the stage was kinda weird, I kinda think the mentor should be doing that, not the student guy.
As was said before your entrances are too light, just add a little more detail to polish things out. But that is only minor, along with the grammar bits. You have most of the important stuff at a good level. Also, you are very in-character with your promos, that is one of your strongest points as a writer. This was a good show, pleasant to read with good storylines and aftermath and such. You have not written your best stuff yet though, and I can tell when you do it is going to be pretty awesome.
For Bragging Rights: 8/10
Also woo-hoo! 2nd place on predictions! =D