Re: The Future Has Arrived - A Dolph Ziggler Diary -
Here's another review from me!
First off, there were too many spelling mistakes and grammar errors here man. Stop trying to get as much posts as you can. Take it as if this is an actual wrestling show. You need to take it down a notch, and work on detail! Detail is key!
Second off, extremely extremely extremely unrealistic for Nick Nemeth to talk to someone like Joey Styles the way he did. Unless you're portraying him as someone who is big headed, Nick would never talk to Joey like that. "No chance in hell, I'm not doing it" The kid has been in the business for less than 3 years, and he thinks he could talk to a guy who has been in the business for decades the way he did. Now I'm not sure if styles has been in the business for that long, but he's been in the business much longer than Nick has.
Third off, this is BIG! I'm so happy that Ziggler is going to RAW! You have OFFICIALLY broken the WWE trend! That means that everytime someone starts a BTB, they have to do stuff that the real product is doing until they can finally break from that hold, and you've officially done it by moving Ziggler to RAW. I don't care if realisticly Orton would choose someone who isn't 2nd or 3rd born generation superstar. It's not so important, no need for someone to say "unrealistic for that to happen" because it's such a small detail, no big deal. But I like this decision.
Fourth of all, I really feel it's time to start writing shows. Write this particular angle out. You don't have to write the show out, but I feel like you should write every part of this feud.
Let me explain...
You know how you have updates of ziggler and his career, have updates on the feud. Not OUT OF CHARACTER...BUT IN CHARACTER.
You know how on RAW, there are backstage promo's and matches on the show. Sometimes, for a particular storyline, there is a match and a couple of backstage promo's for this storyline. Write those out for this feud. Every show, write out in full the backstage promo's between DX and the one's with Legacy, and the one's with Ziggler. Then write out the match or the matches that have to do with this feud.
Just for the time being, instead of writing the out of character updates, write the updates for this feud as it happens on TV. IF you want, you can have updates out of character, but for this particular feud/storyline...write it out as it would appear on TV!