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ABW Raw




***Music hits and pyro goes off, camera cuts to Matt Striker and Jerry "The King" Lawler

Striker: Welcome to ABW Raw I'm Matt, and this is Hall of Famer Jerry "The King" Lawler

Lawler: this is the very first episode of ABW Raw, we have an amazing show lined up for all of you tonight.

Crash Hits Mick Foley heads down to the ring

***Massive Pop from the crowd***


Mick Foley: I've got many announcements to announce about tonights Raw, and they will shape Raw's future forever

***Crowd Pops***

Mick Foley: First off we will be have a tag tournament with these four teams, the following teams are
The Hart Dynasty ***Crow Pops***
Motor City Machine Guns***Mixed Reaction***
Priceless ***Crowd Boos***
A Mystery Team is the last team


Mick Foley: My next announcement is about the United States Championship, there will be a 10 man over the top battle royal. These wrestlers consist of Dolph Ziggler, Dustin Rhodes, Evan Bourne, Homicide, Jimmy Wang Yang, Santino Marella, Shelton Benjamin, Sheik Abdul Bashir, The Miz and Vladamir Koslov. All of these men will have a chance to make there mark felt in ABW as the first United States Champion in history.

***Foley has a big smile on his face***

Mick Foley: My last announcement is that the WWE Championship is now the ABW Championship. That title is now vacated so Randy Orton is no longer the champion of that title.

-Legacy Hits-

***Crowd Boos***

Randy Orton: Shut up all of you!!!

***Loud boos echo through out whole arena***

Randy Orton: Foley did my ears just deceive me did you just say I am no longer champ and that title is vacated?

Mick Foley: Yes i did every other title is vacated and will have matches and your title is no different

Randy Orton: Mick you are lucky I don't come down there and beat your ass right now, we both know I could. I mean I am pretty much the man that destroyed your career in the WWE besides you being some crappy commentator.

Mick Foley:
Orton you lay a hand on me and you won't have yourself a title opportunity for a long time. Besides calm down Orton you will get your chance to get your title back. You will be in an eight man tournament for the ABW Championship and your first opponent will be "The Icon" Sting

***Pop from crowd***

***Smurk on Ortons face***



---Commericial Break---


Striker: Welcome back to Raw

Lawler: I can't believe the three announcements that where just made. I also can't believe Orton bad mouthing the GM already anyway on the first show.

Striker: Yes, but you have to feel for him though i mean Orton just lost his title without even getting pinned or having a match

Lawler: Anyway on to our next match.

10 Man Battle Royal For The Vacant ABW United States Championship. Dolph Ziggler, Dustin Rhodes, Evan Bourne, Homicide, Jimmy Wang Yang, Santino Morella, Shelton Benjamin, Sheik Abdul Bashir, The Miz and Vladamir Koslov

***All men are in the ring***


Dolph Ziggler eliminated at 0:05

ziggler tried to shake Koslov's hand, Koslov throws him out with ease

Sheik Abdul Bashir eliminated at 1:13
Bashir got eliminated by Bourne when Bashir got hit by a Hurracurana as Bashir flew over the top rope

Santino Eliminated at 2:01
Santino was up against the ropes as Shelton whent to kick Santino. Santino grabs Sheltons foot, he looks around and laughs then gets hit by the dragon whip and flips over the top rope

The Miz eliminated at 2:11
The Miz saw an opportunity to eliminate Shelton Benjamin, The Miz runs toward Shelton. Shelton turns around and hits The Miz with what look like a T-Bone Suplex as The Miz falls out of the ring.


***Santino laughs at The Miz and The Miz hits him with a Reality Check

Jimmy Wang Yang eliminated at 4:25
Jimmy Wang Yang went to hit Koslov with a flying dropkick, Koslov just grabs wang yang and drops him over the rope

Evan Bourne eliminated at 5:01
Dustin Rhodes hit Bourne with a clothesline over the rope

Dustin Rhodes eliminated at 5:15
Homicide flips Rhodes over while he's catching his breath

***Rhodes slaps the mat and points at Homicide***

Homicide eliminated at 6:30
After Homicide is beat down for about a minute Koslov throws Homicide over the ropes

Matt Striker: It's one on one can Shelton eliminate the monster or will Koslov be champ

Finish: Koslov goes to throw Shelton over, Shelton hangs on , Koslove turns around and runs toward Benjamin. Shelton then drops down and pulls the ropes with him as Koslov flips over.



Winner and new United States Champ Shelton Benjamin at 8 :15

***Shelton Benjamin grabs his title and goes up the ramp***


Striker: Can you believe it Shelton won the United States Championship, by eliminating the monster Koslov.

Lawler:
Shelton Benjamin just won the United States Championship is this enough to get him into the main event though, he seems to always be on the edge of main event status. He has just put his name in ABW history though he is the first ever champ to hold this title, congradulations Shelton.


----Commercial break---

***1967 hits as The Motor City Machine Guns walk down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at a combined weight of 410 pounds, The Motor City Machine Guns...Alex Shelley and Chris Sabin

***Mixed Reaction***



***Hitman hits as the Hart Dynasty walks down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at a combined weight of 455 pounds, The Hart Dynasty...David Hart Smith and Tyson Kidd

***Crowd Pops***


Hart Dynasty vs MCMG: Winner advances in tag-title tournament


David Hart Smith and Chris Sabin start off in the ring. The two lock up and Smith just throws Sabin down on the ground. Sabin backs up to his corner while scooting across the ground, Smith goes to grab him but Sabin drops Smithi into the turnbuckle. Sabin tags Shelley in they both grab Smith on each side and hit him with a suplex. Shelley then runs back to the ropes bounces off and hits Smith with a running senton, Shelley goes for the pin.


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Shelley picks up a groggy Hart, Hart has a hard time standing up. He regains his composure and hits a belly to belly suplex out of no where. Both competitors are down on the canvas crawling to there tag partners standing on the apron. The tag is made Kidd hits Sabin with a running clothesline. Sabin is on the ground, Kidd grabs his legs and locks in a sharpshooter. Right as he does though Shelley hits Kidd with a superkick. Smith throws Shelley outside and the two start brawling. Sabin picks Kidd up and hits him with a Cradle Shock.


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Winner and moving on in the Tag Title Tournament---The Motor City Machine Guns, Alex Shelley and Chris Sabin.


Striker: Motor City Machine Guns win the match man am I impressed with there chemistry in the ring

Lawler: The Motor City Machine Guns picked up the win but I would expect the Hart Dynasty to be back in the title hunt in the future. They are a great young tag team and have been trained well by the Hart's. Next up we will be having our first ABW Title tournament match



---Commercial break---



***Click hits as Matt Morgan makes his way down to the ring.***

Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at 310 pounds from Fairfield Connecticut. Matt Morgan

***Crowd boo's Morgan***



***Man on Fire hits as Kane walks down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: His opponent tonight weighing in at 300 poinds Kane

***Crowd Pops***


Matt Morgan Vs. Kane: Winner advances in the ABW Title tournament


The two competitors start off staring down each other in the ring. Matt Morgan makes the first move and goes to punch Kane, Kane blocks the punch and hits Morgan with an uppercut to the throat. Kane picks up Morgan slowly and goes to give Morgan a chokeslam. Morgan kicks Kane in the stomach, then hits Kane with a drop kick. While Kanes on the ground Morgan goes for the pin.
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Kane gets up to his feel, Morgan and Kane start exchanging punches. Kane now grabs a stunned Morgan and throws him into the turnbuckle and closelines him, Morgan falls down in the corner. Kane starts stomping on Morgan and begins to choke him with his foot as the ref begins to count. Kane lets go of the hold picks up Morgan, seeing an opportunity Morgan hits Kane with a thumb in the eye. Kane can't see he turns around and gets a big boot to the face. Morgan goes for the pin

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Morgan starts arguing with the ref. Kane meanwhile climbs the ropes and Morgan turns around and gets hit by a diving clothesline. Kane now picks Morgan up and grabs him by the throat and hits him with a chokeslam. Kane goes for the pin
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Kane can not believe it he punches the mat, picks Morgan up, goes to give Morgan another chokeslam but Morgan hits Kane with a sidewalk slam. Morgan backs up to the ropes and waits for Kane to get up, when Kane turns toward Morgan he hits Kane with the Carbon Footprint
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Winner and moving on in the ABW Title tournament Matt Morgan



Matt Striker: What an impressive win over a former World Champion

Lawler: Mark my words that Matt Morgan will be a future world champion within the next year, he may be the strongest wrestler I have seen in quite some time.


---Commercial break---


***New Day hits as Priceless walks down to the ring***


Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at a combined weight of 457 pounds the tag team of priceless...Cody Rhodes and Ted DiBiase Jr.

***Crowd boos***

Striker: Who could be the myster tag team

Lawler: All I know that is one is a former Heavyweight Champion and the other is on the edge of main event status


***Crowd is anxious***

***I'm Comin hits as MVP walks down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at 249 pounds MVP

***Crowd pops loudly***
***MVP turns toward the titantron nodding his head with a huge smile on his face***



***The Time Is Now hits as John Cena walks down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at 240 pounds John Cena

***Crowd pops***

***Cena and MVP shake hands, as Priceless looks as if though they are not ready for there opponents***



Priceless vs MVP and Cena to advance in the tag title tournament


DiBiase and Cena start in off in the ring. Dibiase runs at Cena and Cena hits Dibiase with a sitout hip toss. Cena then picks up Dibiase and goes for a right punch Dibase blocks the punch and give's Cena a thumb to the eye. Dibiase grabs Cena and hits him with a scoop powerslam, Dibiase bounces off the rope and hits Cena with a fist drop. Dibiase picks up Cena and tags in Cody Rhodes, Rhodes hits Cena with a dropkick and goes for the pin.

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Rhodes picks Cena up and tries to go for a suplex but Cena punches his stomach and hits him with a close line. Rhodes gets up and goes to punch Cena but Cena moves out of the way and hits Rhodes with the Prototype Cena now tags MVP in. MVP looks around and smiles to the crowd and runs back across the ropes and yells out ballin as he hits Rhodes with a ballin elbow. MVP goes for the pin

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MVP picks up Rhodes, DiBiase gets in the ring and runs toward MVP, MVP ducks and hits him with a close line. Cena gets in the ring and throws Dibiase over the ropes Cena and DiBiase start brawling outside of the ring. MVP hits Rhodes with the Playmaker and goes for the pin

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Winners and moving on in the tag title tournament MVP and John Cena

***MVP and John Cena play to the crowd a bit as they get tons of pops***



Striker: Wow Cena and MVP a tag team?
Lawler: That tag team is huge, I think that they are going to own the tag team division. How are The Motor City Machine Guns going to defeat Cena and MVP?


---Commercial break---


***Backstage we see Orton and Dibiase talking***


DiBiase: Can you believe this, mine and Rhodes's first match on Raw is again John Cena and MVP. Seriously Orton I think Foley is out to get us all.

***Big smile on Orton's face***

Orton: Look Ted tonight I have a match against Sting, for a title that I never lost. You know what I'm going to send a message to Mick Foley and everyone, he think's that I'm going to get stripped of my title and not be pissed. I'm looking to take my anger out on someone. In that match against Sting I'm going to end Sting's career and kill the legend of Sting. In a few short weeks I will have my title back and there's not a damn thing Mick Foley or anyone in this locker room can do about that. You and Rhodes will also be getting those tag titles.


DiBiase: What do you want me to do tonight?

Orton: Go find Rhodes and when the time is right you will know exactly what to do



***Orton walks one direction as Dibiase walks the other way***



***Voices hits as Orton makes his way down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: Weighing in at 245 pounds The "Legend Killer" Randy Orton

***Crowd boos***



***Slay Me hits as Sting makes his way down to the ring***

Lillian Garcia: Weight in at 255 pounds Sting


***Crowd goes crazy and starts chanting Sting***



Randy Orton vs Sting: Winner advances in ABW Title tournament


Orton lunges at Sting, Sting moves out of the way and throws Orton to the corner and then starts to hit Orton with chops as the fans start chanting wooooooo. Orton grabs Sting and throws him in the corner and hits Sting with a european uppercut. Sting falls to the mat as Orton taunt's by slowly raising his hands up in the air. Orton run's backs and hits Sting with a jumping knee drop. Orton picks Sting up he hits Sting with an inverted headlock backbreaker Orton goes for the pin.

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Orton picks Sting up and kicks Sting to the midsection Orton goes to give Sting a right, Sting reverses the move and hits Orton with belly to belly suplex. Both men are now laying on the ground, the ref begins to count

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Sting picks Orton up and throws him to the rope and hits him with a stinger splash. Sting throws Orton to the other turnbuckle, Sting goes for the stinger splash, Orton moves out of the way and hits Sting with an inverted backbreaker. Orton is waiting for sting to get up as he is on the mat pounding the ground, Sting gets up Orton goes for the RKO but Sting pushes Orton as he bounces off the ropes. Sting grabs Orton to go for another Scorpion Death Drop, Orton rolls out of the hold and hits Sting with an RKO.


Winner of the match and moving on in the ABW Title tournament: Randy Orton



Striker:
What a great match
Lawler: I'm suprised Orton picked up the win to be honest.


***Randy Orton gets a mic***

Orton: Mick, you stripped me of my title for no reason, I really hope your watching this Mick, I'm about to kill the legend of Sting for good!


***Orton starts waving towards the back as Rhodes and DiBiase come down to the ring. Orton starts stomping on Sting as Rhodes and DiBiase bring a chair into the ring. Sting starts crawling toward the ropes as Orton runs and nails Sting right in the face with a punt. DiBiase sets the chair on the ground as they lift Sting up, RKO right on the chair as Stings face is pouring blood. Orton picks Sting up as he can barely stand Orton hits him with Sting's finisher the Scorpion Death Drop


Orton: The legend of Sting is now officially dead!




***Raw goes off air***
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Old 06-22-2009, 05:32 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Match Wise:-

Shelton Benjamin winning the US Title, was probably a good choice. Although, the elimination order was slightly off e.g.; Dolph Ziggler being eliminated after 5 seconds. That was something that made me think: WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING!

MCMG winning was probably a good thing, as in all truth I doubt the powers that be will ever give them the shot that they will deserve. Shame it had to be against the the Harts

Morgan beating Kane was expected. The handing over of the platform from one giant to another.


MVP and Cena beating Priceless!!!! Seriously, I don't know what possessed you to do this. Priceless, probably one top five tag-team currently working losing to MVP and Cena. Together both MVP and Cena, but together beating a team of Cody and Ted Jnr NAWWWWW!

Orton vs Sting was an expected win for RKO, but taking him out with Borden's move made little sense to me.

5/10 overall, although need to work on the promos as this lost a lot of structure.
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Like your rosters. Loads of potential on both of them. Just interested in seeing how everything shakes out. there are loads of these types of diaries out there, but this one grabbed my attention for some reason.

Few comments on your first show...

I liked Benjamin as your choice for IC champ. the guy doesn't get near enough credit. i figured he would be in the main-event long time ago. That whole, his momma in his corner angle, just stalled his rise.

I'm a Sabin and Shelly mark. (Even though i like the Hart Dynasty too. that would have been my final) Give them the belts. MVP and Cena...meh not feeling at much. now if you let the MCMG beat those guys and get over....

I knew sting was going to lose, but part of me wanted him to win. I know, I know...he is old. He sucks. Blah,blah,blah...the fact that he competed in a WWE ring (sort of) was big deal to me. hate to see him punked like that.

Like the whole Matt Morgan angle. See him as a big-time talent.

all in all good job. Maybe not what i would have done, but so what? I enjoyed it.
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Well, some pretty good announcements from Mick Foley, who is a great choice for General Manager of Raw, usual customary business with vacating all the titles, it's something that I don't really like being done, but it has to be done in your case, as this is the first show. Orton's entrance was nice, Randy's dialogue was ok, it was in character but with his limits for what is considered 'in-character', I think Randy could have done better. Orton vs. Sting is a huge main event for this show, should be great hopefully. I expected something special to close this segment though, and I was a little confused when I saw that RKO was smirking, but a plus is that it puts over his arrogance, despite the fact that he perhaps shouldn't be too confident going into a match with the Stinger.

A Battle Royal for the United States Championship is cool, it certainly gives out a feel of unpredictability, but I cannot help but voice my concerns for eliminating Dolph 'I am perfection' Ziggler in just 5 seconds: If I was in your shoes, I would have him in the last 3 contestants in this Battle Royal, at the very least! I would have had Sheik Abdul Bashir or Jimmy Wang Yang out first tbh, so I am not particularly thrilled that Ziggler was out after 5 seconds, let alone first. Hopefully you take this into account and start the Jebus push, pronto! But at least you made a good choice in giving Shelton Benjamin the United States Title. His reign wasn't too good in WWE, so I hope you utilise him well as Champion, and give him some good competition for his belt, to spice up the US Title Division a little bit, eh?

Looking at the current tag teams in WWE and TNA at this moment of time, Motor City Machine Guns vs. The Hart Dynasty is a dream match for me, they could really have a fantastic match if they got the opportunity, and nice to see them go at it in this show, I will applaud you if you continue to have matches with as much potential as this contest does. I prefer MCMG to the Hart Dynasty tbh, so I'm pleased that they went through, and please, please, puh-LEASE put the straps on the Guns! If you do, I will read on in the tag team division...

Matt Morgan is somebody I want to see go places in this thread, perhaps even get to the latter stages of this ABW Title tournament, so I was especially glad Matt beat Kane in this match. It definitely puts Morgan over, and gives Matt some credibility, beating a big-man veteran like the Big Red Machine and all that, so I definitely want to see him be a success on this show. If you give him opponents that are within reach of beating, and Morgan advances further, I will have respect for you.

MVP and John Cena is a very interesting tag team to say the least, but you have people like Kane in the ABW Title Tournament and you have John Cena and MVP in the Tag Title Tourney? That doesn't make sense to me, Cena should be one of, if not THE main face of this show, love him or hate him. No surprise to see MVP and Cena go over Priceless in this match, was always going to happen, it was set in stone after the build-up, but I really don't wanna see them win the whole tournament, they shouldn't be wasted in the tag divison. They had an alright match, could have been longer but what matters is that the right team went over.

The first backstage segment of the night is after 4 matches and just before the main event ... Some aspects of this show really baffle me, tbh. Not much to say about this segment, I'm looking forward to seeing the aftermath of the Orton/Sting match though, just to see if Randy Orton has anything hid up his sleeve to do afterwards. I hope there is something to follow the ME, or it will be very unusual.

An average Main Event here, I really think that it should have been much longer. This was the same length as the tag team match and Morgan/Kane by the looks of it, and the ME should be almost double the time of those matches, unless the undercard contests are something special, so bear that in mind for future reference for the rest of your shows. Glad to see Orton go over however, and this always needed something to follow it, especially as the match was a tad bit weak, so the punt and the chair attack was great, highest point of the show, imo. Sting out of the way is something I approve of, pushing the younger talent should be your aim (e.g Orton, Legacy and ZIGGLER), so this is a good choice and hopefully Orton or Morgan wins this tourney.

Overall, it was an average show. Some things were just random, out of the blue and very questionable, and I'm talking about MVP and Cena being a team in the tag tournament, and Dolph Ziggler being eliminated after 5 seconds and Wang Yang staying for 4 minutes longer than Dolph. The lack of backstage segments was a thumbs-down too, so make sure you include them, and maybe you could tweak the presentation too; Italics for descriptions, bolds for people's names when they're talking and underlining for titles of matches and all that jazz. Orton going over and punting Sting, Morgan going over Kane and MCMG vs. Hart Dynasty with the Guns going over were definitely good points of this show though. I would say this was ok, leaning towards decent, but I think there's still certain things to do to get better. Good luck.
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Heres that review I promised you.

First of all, there is some errors with your typing.

But now onto then show:
Foley's announcements were good, then Orton interupting him over the title was good. Surprised I didn't read a classic "Bang Bang" anywhere lol.

The US title BR was good. Kozlov should of been the first eliminated cuz he just sucks Like seeing Benjy pick up the win and the title.

MCMG knocking off the Hart Dynasty is a good choice in my opionion. They are way more over then Hart Dynasty. Put staps on these guys now!

Morgan over Kane was a good idea, it was surprising, but it was good. I think Morgan has a lot of potential. He should be pushed like hell in... Do it.

MVP and Cena being a tag team? Weird combo. But I liked seeing them knock off Priceless. It was a good choice in my opinion.

The Orton/Legacy promo was pretty good. Shows that Orton and Priceless have a lot of bad blood against Foley.

This match, Orton vs.Sting, was match of the night. Was kinda hoping Sting would go over in this match, but hey it's your choice. Orton winning was still a pretty good call on your part since sting is getting kinda old.

Overall, a pretty good show. Some errors in typing were found, but they really don't matter much.

8.5/10
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Foley doesn’t welcome the crowd to Raw? He doesn’t get the cheap pop by saying the crowd’s hometown? Wow. Anyway, kicking things off by running down everything was pretty interesting. I mean, he didn’t talk about the new business, or anything. He just kicked things off with announcing everything that was gonna happen.

A huricanrana is not strong enough to send anybody over the top rope. Not even Bashir. Anyhow, Shelton getting the win is common sense. Koslov’s not ready to carry a championship, nor should he.

This match should’ve been written in recap, man. That way, it would seem more believable. Who ever heard of a tag team match with only two pin attempts, you know what I mean? Anyhow, great to see the MCMG pick up the clean victory. I like how you hint that the Hart Dynasty may not be finished yet. Nice.

Not much I can say about match #3. Don’t know why you chose to put Morgan over Kane (especially with a clean win), but hopefully, this won’t go anywhere.

Match #4 was an interesting match-up. Not sure how likely a tag team MVP and Cena make. Strange bed-fellows and all that jazz. Moving on to the match, other than the fact that it’s incredibly short, I would’ve expected Priceless to advance, mainly with outside interference or MVP turn heel again and turning on Cena. But, it’s your show, and I’m sure you have plans for this.

“Go find Rhodes, and when the time is right…” how much more obvious could you make it that Sting/Orton is gonna result in a screwjob? Anyway, I like this angle Randy’s pulling about how Foley is out to screw the Legacy.

Pretty solid main event, for the most part, despite the fact that it was incredibly short (like every other match). Anyway, an Orton clean victory was very surprising and unexpected. In any case, the Legacy beatdown was a great way to put an exclamation point on things. And what’s this? I see Orton’s going back to his days as the Legend Killer? How quaint.

All in all, you put on a pretty nice program there, bud. It’s always great to see created feds coming around and making a name for themselves. This one is innovative, given the fact that it has its own website. But I’d seriously look into writing matches in short recap mode. That way, it saves you time trying to write it in full and makes it more convincing than a short match written in full.
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