Is it a serious project?? Because you started it a month ago, but you've only posted one show??
First off, I thank you for taking the time for checking my thread. Much obliged.
Regarding if it is "serious" or not, I have commitments i.e: Revision for exams (for which I even had one today).
Your backstory was okay, but personally I'm missing infomation about the returning of superstars such as Muhammad Hassan, Bobby Lashley, Big Daddy V, Super Crazy, Hardcore Holly etc... Why? When? How?
Thanks. Yes, I must have just forgot to put the information on returning superstars down. Thanks for pointing it out.
And also, there's a couple of things in your opening segment that doesn't fit with your first show... For example, in your RAW roster section you've written The Brian Kendrick, which leads people to think he's still the arrogant heel-superstar he was on SmackDown. But in your show you only refer to him as Brian Kendrick, and you have him tagging with Paul London again...?? And in your Backlash-results section, you've written that Big Show "won" the match for Edge like in real life. But in the start of your show you say that a video shows how Edge Speared Cena into the pyrotechnics?? And last, again in you Backlash-results section, you've written that Jeff won after Matt quit... But in the start of the it says that Jeff was given the win as the referee stoppped the match due to Matt being unconsious??
Yes plenty of mistakes there and thanks again for pointing them out. I must have changed plans during the month, however I will edit them shortly.
I'm not exactly a fan of the font as I prefer Verdana and Tahoma to be used for writing shows, but up to you. Hopefully with this show posted a month after the opening post, this thread can progress and get better, without any careless mistakes. Good luck.
I'll take your word for it, as I have edited the font to Tahoma. Yes, I will try my level best in-order to prevent future careless mistakes from happening. Thank you very much