Sorry for the lateness, had a PPV to review.
Hmmm, starting off with a match ay? I think that is good for a created fed, as most created feds get off the ground with their intentions to have more action and less storylines. Anyway, a bit more detail would have been nice, especially if the match is ten minutes long. I felt ripped off. Good way to keep The United Kingdom strong while also perhaps beginning to plant the seeds for a Natural Franchise/Briscoe .......s feud. Can’t really say anything else as you were clearly just laying down the foundations.
WAPW getting a tour, geez, your fed is getting popular pretty quickly.
MVP as champion, in my personal opinion I really like it, however in terms of a new created fed, not sure if he is the best option to be honest. Anyway seems like you have this whole heel MVP against everybody storyline going/beginning, and well, I personally don’t like it at this stage because Paul Heyman is a heel. Make Heyman a face and this storyline will become a whole lot more interesting. Promo was in character and all that shit though. Christian was nice with the mocking of MVP and all that, I really think Christian needs to be champ, you need a champion who is a terrific wrestler and who can carry the company on their shoulders, I am not sure if MVP is that guy. Once again, nice promo and I am getting off topic but I can’t help it.
Abyss is in the building. What has been up to lately? I can’t remember.
The whole Cabana situation seems interesting enough, don’t know what else I can say really since I don’t know what exactly happened between them. Once again I am loving your characterization, is Cabana possibly falling for the same thing again, if so that is really dumb. Just try not to make these guys to comedic, in a created fed you have got to try and stay away from that.
Geez, now I understand why your other match recap was so short, this one was just so damn long. Luckily though, you kept it entertaining which means I did not get bored and just skim through it. Out of all the participants in this match up, bar ..... Funk, Jamie Noble was the only one worthy of winning, imo. Seriously, he is the only guy who is worth investing in for a long time. Just incase I missed something, is the Hardcore title going to have the twenty four seven rule? Also, don’t make the title a joke how it did towards the end of its tenure in the ‘E, keep all your titles strong mate.
Kevin Steen? I don’t know much about him. I will have to do some research, just make sure you do something good with him, and he should be easy enough for me to get into.
Goldberg is at his best when he is angry and when all of his speech is short and sharp. This was great, by the way Torrie can do better then Evans, not that I care or anything.
Mistico > Puma hands down, pretty easy decision to make if you ask me. Teddy Hart attacking Mistico afterwards and I am sure these two are eventually going to have to have a blow off match. When this happens I say Mistico will get the win but don’t bury Hart.
Team 3D/Gen Ex equals gold. Nice promo here to.
Cabana getting wasted again. Comedy is a no no at this point of time in the thread, your fed is still being established, comedy is a WWE trait.
Alex Shelley unmasks Rey Mysterio, shit, that is a big thing in indy threads and over seas so I expect for it to be made a big deal in this thread. I expect Mysterio to be back with a vengeance, this could seriously be big, especially considering both men can go in the ring, make it happen boyo.
The Adrenaline? Is that going to be a normal weekly show, or is this going to be some kind of show like Sunday Night Heat or something.
Kennedy has had a great night tonight, him > Abyss. I like the monster type but I have never been able to buy into Abyss.
Beautiful main event, you gave everyone their time to shine and then you didn’t job anyone out ending the match in a no contest, for weekly shows I don’t mind no contests. This was terrific. Nice finish with Goldberg, again another nice short burst, keep ti that way k?
Overall, a more enjoyable show then the last one I read from you, you continue to impress me, keep up the good work. Just watch for a couple of errors in your shows, there was only like two or three I found, but don’t make it a common thing. Great work, buddy. <3