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12-24-2008, 03:07 PM
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The Whole F'n Show
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Wales, UK
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
Urgh. I don't like Batista defeating Randy Orton. Did that happen in real life?
Plus I would have prefered you not to have put the strap on Hardy so soon.
But apart from that, I wish you the best of luck. I'll be reading.
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12-24-2008, 03:13 PM
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SC2004 = RATINGS
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
Great decision. The Divas title is a joke. Are you going to have the women's champion appear on both brands?
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12-24-2008, 03:19 PM
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Wrestler's Rat
Join Date: Dec 2008
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
The Raw Episode is coming soon, but I just want to comment on the last posts.
I used the Armageddon events exactly as they happened, only changing the Women's match because I have no intention on juggling two diva belts. Batista beat Orton and Jeff beat Edge and HHH, so that's what we have here. I hope my plans for these wrestlers don't disappoint you though.
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12-24-2008, 03:21 PM
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The Whole F'n Show
Join Date: May 2006
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
Nah. I wasn't having a go at your booking. More the WWE's booking
Good luck. I didn't actually notice you had unified the two divas belts. I agree with Sean, it was a great idea. The Divas title was, and still is a waste of space in my opinion.
Looking forward to your first RAW.
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12-24-2008, 04:27 PM
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Wrestler's Rat
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
Raw opens as usual, with the opening theme and fireworks. Michael Cole and Jerry Lawler greet the audience, and are interrupted by Orton’s theme. He walks up the ramp, accompanied by Cody Rhodes and Manu.
Orton: I will admit that last night didn’t go as well as I had planned. Batista managed to wriggle out of my web, and with luck on his side, he managed to pin me. Only after Cody and Manu were unfairly ejected from ringside. I got distracted, and when I get distracted, people get lucky. That… is in the past. Now we must look towards the future, and what the future holds. For the Legacy, it holds unfathomable levels of success. As multi-generational superstars, we are the only ones who can carry the WWE to new heights. We are wrestling royalty and sooner rather than later, we will rule Raw. And tonight, the Legacy’s dynasty will commence. Tonight, tomorrow on ECW, and Friday night on Smackdown, the Legacy will face off against each show’s stars, and each time we will emerge victorious. Anyone who foolishly attempts to stand in our way will be punished.
‘Voices’ plays and Orton leads the Legacy off the stage.
Match 1:
Marella’s theme plays and he enters the ring accompanied by Beth Phoenix. He takes the mic and talks about how it is a travesty that he wasn’t even given a match in the Tournament which saw Punk emerge as #1 contender. He is interrupted by Punk’s theme, who runs in to loud cheers. Both wrestlers square up and Punk dominates from the get-go. Marella gets in a few cheap shots and ultimately attempts to leave. Regal, who had been sitting at the top of ramp for the entire match, gets up, and Marella decides to return to the ring. Punk attempts to GTS Santino, but Beth pulls Santino down. The ref reprimands Beth, as Santino tries to capitalize. Punk reverses and gets him into an Anaconda Vise Grip, causing Santino to tap out immediately.
Winner: CM Punk
Cut-scene: Jericho walks into Stephanie McMahon’s office. He demands to know why he isn’t being given another go at Cena’s title. Steph explain s that it’s time for others to have a chance, and if he truly deserves another match, he should win his match next week. If he wins, he’ll get a place at the Fatal 4-Way #1 Contender’s Match the week after.
Match 2:
JBL arrives in wrestling gear. He is annoyingly satisfied. Shawn Michaels’ theme plays and he enters the ring, the two eye each other and finally shake hands (and are jeered by the crowed), although HBK does so quite reluctantly. Cryme Tyme enter the ring. The match starts and JBL starts against JTG. JBL dominates against JTG, but when JTG tags Shad in, they start gathering momentum by hitting one double-team move after the other. JBL finally tags HBK in, who grounds Shad, but seems unwilling to inflict any real pain. He tags JBL in who has no problem with beating Shad down. Shad tags JTG in and it seems like they might get a win but JBL hits a double clothesline-from-hell, and finally pins JTG.
Winners: JBL & HBK. JBL raises his partner’s hand who does not seem pleased with the win.
Match 3:
Mark Henry enters the ring accompanied by Tony Atlas. Batista is already in the ring. Henry stars out on top, but Batista gets the upper hand after a spear. Atlas attempts to interfere but Batista whips him out of the ring with ease. The distraction gives Henry an advantage, and he locks Batista in a bear hug. Batista breaks the hold and starts beating on Henry by the turnbuckle. Henry irish-whips Batista away following a reversal but Batista uses the momentum to deliver a devastating spinebuster. Atlas comes back into the ring in an attempt to distract Batista again, but finds himself on the bad end of a Batista Bomb. Batista then covers Henry for pin.
Winner: Batista
Match 4:
John Cena’s theme plays and he enters the ring, energized as always. He waits in the ring when his theme plays again. Stunned, he looks on as Charlie Haas enters, impersonating him. Amused, Cena shakes his hand before the match starts. Cena dominates in the beginning, but is hit with a few surprising trademark Cena moves. Haas attempts the 5-knucle shuffle, but Cena escapes and hits him with a flame asser. He then delivers his own 5-knuckle shuffle followed by an FU for a quick win.
Winner: John Cena. Cena helps Haas up before cut to the Legacy backstage. Orton is encouraging Cody.
Match 5:
Rey Mysterio enters the ring, but the tremendous cheers quickly turns to boos when Cody Rhodes, followed by Manu and Orton, comes on. The match starts and Cody tries to stop Mysterio from moving around too much. Cody’s allies watch from ringside, and frequently shout words of encouragement/advice. Mysterio escapes Rhodes’ submission hold and goes to the air, hitting him with several diving/springboard attacks. As he attempts another, Manu hits the ropes, causing them to wobble, and making Rey mess up his move. Cody gains the upper hand and is about to hit his finisher when Rey reverses and hits him with a hurricanara. He trips Rhodes, who falls with his head on the ropes but Manu trips him before he can hit Rhodes. The ref goes to yell at Manu, and Orton takes advantage by hitting Rey with his trademark backbreaker. Rhodes capitalizes by hitting his DDT and pins Rey.
Winner: Cody Rhodes. Orton considers punting Rey as they celebrate, but seems to feel Rey is not worth it. However, he tells Manu to pick him up, who does, placing him in the fireman carry position. Manu then throws Rey behind him, and Orton RKO’s him.
Tune in tomorrow for ECW!
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12-24-2008, 05:16 PM
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Wrestler's Rat
Join Date: Dec 2008
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
ECW starts as always with the theme and fireworks.
Match 1
DJ Gabriel does his little dance number with Alicia Fox as a local competitor waits in the ring. The match starts and as to be expected, Gabriel destroys the competitors, capping a fairly quick match with his turnbuckle uppercut.
Winner: DJ Gabriel, who performs another dance routine with Alicia Fox. Tommy Dreamer interrupts the routine, however.
Dreamer: Is this what ECW has come to? The house of hardcore now wastes its time with previews of High School Musical? This is disgusting, absurd and disrespectful to myself and all of the other extremists who have shed so much blood to make this show what it is. Teddy Long, I know you and I know you want what is best for this show. So I give you my warning. If you don’t stop this crap from continuing, I’ll do it for you.
Dreamer exits leaving Gabriel and Alicia looking at each other with stunned looks on their faces.
Match 2:
Orton enters the arena, flanked by his cohorts. He takes the mic and says that he agrees with Dreamer. ECW is pathetic and he plans on spending as little time as he can there. Evan Bourne’s theme plays and hopeful cheers are heard throughout the arena. He and Orton start the match by walking in circles. Orton debilitates Bourne by putting him in a submission hold, employing the same strategy as Rhodes did on Raw. Bourne escapes the hold and gains the upper hand, but his momentum is halted by Orton who kicks him in the gut as he attempted to launch himself via the ropes. He carries Bourne until only his feet touch the ropes and delivers his devastating DDT. He goes for the pin but Bourne kicks out. Orton methodically stomps on Bourne, who reverses one and trips Orton, he then delivers several dropkicks and other highflying moves before going to the turnbuckle. He goes for the shooting star press, but Manu pushes Orton out of the way. Orton recuperates first and stalks Bourne, jumping up and down like a maniac, his mouth frothing, and hits Bourne with an RKO.
Winner: Randy Orton. Orton taunts the crowd and starts to leave. Before he does, however, Hornswoggle comes out from bellow the ring, jumping up and down, and circles the Legacy like a hyper bunny-rabbit. Hornswoggle signals that he wants to become a part of the Legacy. Orton smirks and walks off without paying Hornswoggle more attention, who hesitates before following them out.
Match 3:
Morrison and the Miz enter, carrying their titles and Slammy. They boast in front of the crowd before Finlay enters, accompanied by a saddened, pitiful Hornswoggle. The ‘Greatest Tag Team of the Century’ mock the Irishmen, as Ricky Ortiz’s theme plays and he comes on, as well. The match begins with the Miz against Ortiz, and the two lock in the middle of the ring. The Miz takes Ricky to his corner, where he and Morrison take charge. Ortiz finally gains the upper hand, and tags Finlay in. Finlay dominates before the Miz distracts both he and the ref, allowing Morrison to get a cheap shot in. Ortiz, outraged, yells at the ref, but this only further distracts him, and the duo beat Finlay. Finally, Finlay manages to hit the duo, and tags Ortiz in. Ortiz builds momentum quickly, and is about to hit the Big O, but Morrison rolls away from danger. Morrison goes for his neckbreaker, but it is reversed by Ortiz, who pushes him away. He stops watching Morrison, however, and pays for it when he gets hit with a superkick. Morrison gets the pin as Finlay looks on, helpless.
Winners: The Miz and Morrison. The tag team taunt their opponents before taking their titles and award and exiting, leaving the disgruntled losers in the ring.
Matt Hardy’s theme plays and he enters the ring, where Tony Chimel is waiting for him. The ECW champion is asked about his thoughts regarding his brother’s Armageddon win, and Matt praises Jeff enormously, claiming that is a historical moment in the WWE for the two to hold two world titles. Kozlov’s theme plays, and sure enough Kozlov walks down the ramp, and enters the ring. Matt stands his ground, but Kozlov overpowers him, finally hitting him with his uranage chokeslam. Kozlov takes the mic. In what can barely be described as English, he says that Matt has yet to truly pay for costing him the title shot, and that he will make sure that he pays the price.
Don’t forget to watch Friday Night Smackdown!
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12-24-2008, 05:35 PM
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SC2004 = RATINGS
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
Eh............ slow down mate. Seriously what's the rush?
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12-24-2008, 05:38 PM
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Mr Money In The Bank.
Join Date: Jul 2007
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
Yes as the above poster said, slow down. I personally think unless in the first post you actually shouldn't post a show on the same night as you aren't giving any readers a chance to be interested and usually that means they won't read the first show.
Like me, i haven't read the first show and hell it may be good however it doesn't seem to be in recap and if not in recap, it is a very short show and certainly isn't the length a Raw show should be.
Don't take to harshly to this as its just some friendly criticism just to help you out a little.
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12-24-2008, 05:44 PM
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Wrestler's Rat
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Re: WWE - Current BTB
The first Raw is 5 matches plus a promo, which is average length. ECW is 3 matches plus promos, again, average length. I don't dedicate much to the actual match writing because I'm more interested in the story behind it, so it might be shorter than you normally expect. I might change to just recap, what do you think? Like WWE.com does it?
anyway, I'll stop for a while. I already have until the Rumble planned, so that';s why I churned it out quick. I'll wait a bio before posting Smackdown.
How long between each show will be best?
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