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EXTREAM!

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Monday Night Raw
New York City
"No Mercy Set"

(Raw comes on air from the Video of Monday Night Raw and a firework display going across the Raw HD entrance stage)

Cole: Welcome to Monday Night Raw laides and gentelmen i am Michale Cole alongside Jerr The King Lawler here to call the Raw action for tonight.

King: Yes and Cole tonight we will be joined in the ring tonight by the Raw GM himself Mr Mike Adamle to discuss Raws matches for No Mercy.

(Raws music begins to play again as the Raw GM Mike Adamle begins to walk out to the entrance stage ready to talk)

Adamle: Welcome to Monday Night Raw! Tonight i am here to talk to you about Raws plans for WWE No Mercy. You see at No Mercy raw dosent have a single match made and that will all change here tonight.Because the first match will be made right here and right now.In six days at No Mercy Raws first match will be for the Intercontinental Championship it will be the winner of tonights 10 man over the top rope Battle Royal vs the winner of tonights Santino Marella vs CM Punk match. That means the winner of the Battle Royal will face Punk or Marella at No Mercy for the Intercontinental Championship.

Cole: Oh boy what a match made by Mike Adamle

Adamle: Also at No Mercy it will be a Womens Championship match in a Hardcore match between Beth Phoinex and Candice Michelle!Also another match made for Raw tonight is our main event for tonight.The World HeavyWeight Champion Chris Jericho will be the special guest ref as the match will be Randy Orton! One on one with Batista!

King: Oh my god what a way to start of Raw.Adamle: And the first match here tonight is our Ten man Battle Royal[/font]

Ace Kyro

Are you posting segement by segment? Its probably easier and better for the reviewer if you post the whole show in one. Also, to make it easier to read, you need to sort out your paragraphs as everything is squashed in at the moment.

Once this is sorted and the whole show is posted i wll def have a look and give you my opinon.

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All feedback appreciated and will definately be returned!

Stojy

you do realize if you do segment by segment you can not make new posts you just have to edit it in to the same post. Just thought i would let you know otherwise it is counted as spamming. Good luck with it anyway mate

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edgehead1000

like them other two, it will be better and easier if you printed the whole show in one. Remember to make it clear whats happening, like the matches in quote boxes, commentary in blue, wrestlers talking in red, and things like *bell rings* in italics, or something similar to that

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Nige™

He has to. Shows have to be in one post, not in parts.

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King of the Ring Card


WWE Championship: Jeff Hardy or Mr. Kennedy vs Kane (c)
Million Dollar Championship: Finlay vs Ted DiBiase Jr (c)
Plus, The King of the Ring Tournament
Qualified So Far: Kenny Dykstra & Elijah Burke





Marking out to the max!


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