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05-18-2008, 07:20 PM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
The whole point of recaps is so they can 'recap' the action and it is not too much too write and not too strenious. You are not being harsh, you are being too critical. Most of the stuff you are suggesting is related to the fact it is recapped.
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05-19-2008, 10:33 AM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
This upcoming SmackDown will be in full except for the matches. RAW will then be in recap.
EDIT: Scratch that, ECW will also be in recap. I can't get the hang of full and I don't like it to be honest.
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05-19-2008, 11:10 AM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
Some ECW news and notes. After a couple more reviews and comments (hopefully) I will post SmackDown which is in full except for the matches.
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~ Creative are reportedly very happy with how the feud with Chavo and Kane went on ECW. They are pleased that The Undertaker agreed to work with them on the ECW show.
~ Creative wanted The Undertaker to chase Edge out of the ring and to the back, this left Chavo and Kane a chance to fight it out and further their feud. They told Chavo he had to have Kane lying on the floor by the end of ECW and are happy how he did it.
~ The Kelly Kelly vs. Layla match was just a filler, creative are hoping to add some more divas to the ECW roster in due course and will be using the agreement from SmackDown to use the likes of Michelle McCool and Victoria on ECW.
~ The lack of backstage promos/interviews was not intentional. Creative got too distracted with the matches to even remember the promos and interviews. Mr. McMahon has told them to get their act together.
~ Big Daddy V will not be on ECW television for a while, head booker, Adam Lashley has refused to have him on any of the shows until he loses weight. Big Daddy V is not on an intense diet to try and lose weight.
~ Morrison and The Miz's new vicious attacks in matches will be carried on until at least Backlash. They are using this to get The Miz and Morrison more over and to start a feud with them and two other superstars who are yet to be named.
~ Lashley and McMahon are happy that this show was better than the lackluster RAW this past week, ECW got a 3.4 beating RAW by .2
~ Finally a slight spoiler, it is reported on WWE fan sites that Colin Delaney will receive his WWE contract soon. It looks likely with the Cruiserweight open match on SmackDown.
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05-19-2008, 01:42 PM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
Greenstuff's ECW Feedback
Well pretty basic, Edge and Chavo on the mic, but if it was writen out could have been great. Can I just ask why is Edge on ECW? And talking about Smackdown? Well Chavo vs. Kane looks good, Backlash is also looking good so looking forward to that. Wow Edge sure wants too kick Kane's ass!!! Amazing Undertaker coming in, brilliant angle I think that was really WWE Like so again another good spot! 4 on 2 handicap for the main event - alright thats cool! Kofi defeating Shelton is good, I wonder whe you will have him lose?
Good match next although I have never seen a Diva match on ECW before, but I never really watch ECW. Nice match, I like it even though it's in recap, nice detail, liked it. So I see you are continuing the Morrison & Miz vs. Yang & Moore angle, I will look out to see how it develops.
WOW WOW WOW What a main event, very very good although short, you got the description in there and I can't wait for next weeks ECW to see what happens. So yeah overall a good show for the first one I have seen you write and me review it, It's good for a recaped version, so well done!
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05-19-2008, 01:49 PM
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Can I just ask why is Edge on ECW? And talking about Smackdown?
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Edge is on to talk about his loss at Wrestlemania and sometimes appears on ECW with Chavo in real life. Just wanted him to talk abit to continue his feud with 'Taker.
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Wow Edge sure wants too kick Kane's ass!!!
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Haha, yeah, thats what I was looking for. I want Edge to be vicious and damn right crazy!
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Amazing Undertaker coming in, brilliant angle I think that was really WWE Like so again another good spot!
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Thanks, I'm using 'Taker on ECW to give ECW some credibility and to further 'Taker and Edge's feud.
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Thats a question I don't even know the answer too! Will just have to go with the flow. 
Thanks for the review Greenstuff, I have reviewed your RAW too. 
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05-19-2008, 02:09 PM
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Haha, yeah, thats what I was looking for. I want Edge to be vicious and damn right crazy!
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Thanks, I'm using 'Taker on ECW to give ECW some credibility and to further 'Taker and Edge's feud.
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Cool, since thats what there doing at the moment It's a really good idea. 
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05-19-2008, 02:33 PM
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Updated first post with Title History!
Hopefully will receive a few more reviews for ECW. Everyone who has reviewed my shows, either RAW or ECW will receive a review in return.
SmackDown preview up after I get some more comments or reviews (hopefully)
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05-19-2008, 03:36 PM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
RYU Review for ECW
Opening promo: I liked this but Edge on ECW surprised me but it was typical Edge along with Chavo but i do think poor Chavo loss was a fluke as he didnt even got a chance to defend himself but Chavo snatching the mic from Edge seems like he is too frustrated to act in manner with his buddy but you didnt mention that Edge mind it so its fine but Kane coming out was brave of him as thats wht he will do in reality aswell and good promo with great finish and a chokeslam on Edge would have been great but Edge got himself out of it before the deadmen could slam him on the mat. Very good promo to start things off. Wooo you got ur self a nice ME should be interesting.
Shelton vs Kofi: When i watched these two in real ECW match they really got my attention but that was very short match,what were you thinking bro. One great wrestle and one soon to be great wrestler and you should have given them proper time but you jsut wrote a four-5 lines to finish of the match,bad move bro should be a bit more longer anyway i was looking forward for a SHelton victory but Kofi won keeping his undefeated streak alive.
Kelly vs Layla: Im not too interested in divas matches who are not great in the ring but this was bearable and i havent see Kelly doing a little small powerbomb but it was nice to see her win the match.
M&M vs Wangyang&Moore: This had to be a great high flying match but you didnt gave proper time to this one but this was a bit lengthy then your other matches and i would really like to see Wang Yang and Moore get the titles from M*M which will be great but lets see wht you do and this was a good match with nice finish to it.
ME: Nice match but again was short. You had it well planned and Taker leaving Kane all alone was kinda stupid move to do cuz he realises he still leaves 3 wrestlers for Kane anyway Kane foughts back nicely but typical Chavo with his heel tactics. But i liked it as it was good move to put Chavo over and it shows how badly he wants his title back and i liked the ending but i think this was a good way to injure Kane but you didnt think about that i guess.
Overall: You have some good ideas but i dont like the way you write your matches,its too short and you had only one promo and no backstage segments at all. Bad booking there mate but your matches booking were great and if the matches were a bit more longer in recap version that would made ur show a whole lot better. But will chk out your next shows.
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05-20-2008, 12:20 PM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
Just wanna say the part where you said, "Chavo over and it shows how badly he wants his title back and i liked the ending but i think this was a good way to injure Kane but you didnt think about that i guess."
How can you say that? I haven't even done SmackDown yet.
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05-20-2008, 12:24 PM
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Re: Lashley ™ Presents: World Wrestling Entertainment
^^He meant that what you did was a good way to get Chavo over with the crowd.
Anyways I'll get a review up soon I hope.
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