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The way you bulit up MVP and Matt was way better then what the WWE did after Wrestlemania 24...Good for Finlay going over and hopefully he gets a decent push, not too much of a big one though, kind of would have liked to see Palumbo to go over as I see him with lots of potential. It would be cool to see Hardy get a partner for this handicap match but its got me interested on whats going to go down next week. I would put Kozlov against more credible guys for buliding him up. Surely better then a bunch of jobbers though. I like Umaga and Estrada duo haha so i'm giving up thumbs up for that bud. Good move on putting him on ECW, Makes the show alot more interesting with a monster with credibility like him. Divas match was good for what it was. Good job on buliding up Dysktra as I am big fan of him and think he is underused. Kofi going over is awesome, keep it up with him please. I'm liking this Big Show and Umaga feud. I wanna see them go head to head in Extreme Rules on ECW haha. I like how you got Edge to screw Batista and that your doing the TLC match quicker because that feud dragged on too long tbh.

Overall rating: 7.5-8/10, Great show..Keep it up. I'll be reading more in the future.

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Opening promo was really good. I love the history between MVP and Matt Hardy and you certainly did a good job of bringing that up. MVP seemed strong throughout the entire dialogue whereas Hardy seemed weaker. Porter came off as the cocky, arrogant heel he is – again good job. I would like to see Hardy stick up for himself more than he did; the aftermath with Guerrero coming down was a bit confusing for me. I am guessing there is some history between Guerrero and Porter that I am unaware of.

Finlay = ratings tbh. I love his give hell, no care in the world persona. I wish the WWE would’ve continued his push after ‘Mania, but meh. Him going over is excellent, good booking.

I see Hardy going over Guerrero, giving him some momentum going into Backlash. I liked how Vickie seemed bothered by Chavo btw.

I am not big on Kozloz and cannot see him doing anything important in the ‘E, but maybe you can. I am not big on squash matches but they serve a point.

Patent ‘Tista there, you seem to have a grip on a lot of these guys’ characters.

I LOVE that fact Estrada is again with Umaga – never should’ve broken that up tbh. Huge win for Umaga over Big Show and I can seem the Samoan Bulldozer being ECW Champ real soon.

Kenny Dykstra is sooooo summer ’06 lol. Poor kid never got a chance past his SS days. Funny how he wanted a match and then ended up losing anyway. I am guessing this is going to go into an angle where Dykstra snaps and is sick and tired of losing. Maybe Kingston-Dykstra II at Backlash???

Filler divas match, nothing too special.

A Big Show-Umaga feud would be really good. Both are big men who can wrestle in the ring. Throw them maybe into a Street Fight or something and you got pure gold written all over it. Nice stuff.

Again, good booking in the main event. Not only does a win over ‘Taker help Batista look more powerful, but having Edge cost ‘Taker the match is great. Great finish to the match and all in all a good, but short, recap.

Overall this was a pretty good show. Booking was solid apart from the fillers [squash and divas match]. I guess you could say Finlay-Palumbo didn’t have any meaning either but it was a good contest. Solid booking throughout the entire show, so kudos to you. Good job, keep it up. I can see this thread going far.

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VIP Lounge: A great opening to the show. I did get a little lost when Matt asked why he was the guest, it didn't make much sense to me. Chavo aligning with MVP should make for some interesting moments, and the end was great. Nothing like a good brawl to get the crowd going.

Finlay/Palumbo: Not a big fan of either of these guys (especially since Finlay turned into Horny's sidekick), but man was I glad when Horny got what had coming. A good match between the two, although I'm not sure if it's going to lead into a program.

Chavo/Vickie Segment: Damn. I hope Matt comes out of the match looking strong.

Kozlov/Funaki: Just a squash, not much to comment on.

Batista Interview: Not really an interview, but I hope you don't put Batista into the title program. But if you do, make it short, without Batista getting the title.

Umaga/Show: As good as these two are for their size, I don't think they could put on a very good match. The angle, however, has promise, especially since Umaga is now on ECW. Maybe a future feud over the ECW Title between them?

Vickie/Kenny Segment: I wonder who he'll face? A monster is my guess.

Diva's Tag: Not much to comment on, just a Diva's match with really no kind of background, just Michelle thinking she's all that, and Victoria having a problem with it. I hope this turns into a double-turn for them both.

Edge Segment: Good, but I'm wondering why he's talking to 'Taker under the circumstances of no one being around.

Kenny/Kofi: I guess I was wrong. It was good, and in reality, these two could have a pretty good match with a little more time.

Show Interview: Show gave a heelish vibe in the beginning, but I guess he's still a face after hinting at showing up on ECW.

Main Event: MOTN, but I don't get why Edge would have Batista get the pin over 'Taker. It puts him in the title hunt, and I don't think Edge would like that. It would've been better booking if he caused a DQ, but I like ref bumps, so I'm a little torn here.

Overall: A good show, although it was a little uneventful. The squashes took from the show, and could've been better used to put over a segment, or have a real match. That was pretty much my only problem with the show, as everything else was good. A good return to your BTB, Lashley. 7/10.

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Opening Segment

MVP’s Bears opinions- def works for heat seeking. I don’t really know much about baseball except the Cubs were mentioned in Back to the Future lol. Anyway, back to MVP, the ‘lesser of the Hardy brothers’- definitely a touchy subject and dynamite for this promo. I liked the reference to the MVP-Matt Hardy tag team days because I like it when wrestlers refer to the past, especially half a year back or even longer. Hmm what else, wel the rest worked just fine, and MVP hit the playmaker, haven’t seen that in a while lol. ***1/2

First Match

These two aren’t exactly my favourite superstars. As far as Palumbo goes I wouldn’t mind seeing you completely bury him. This was solid, standard stuff, hornswag distraction and shillelagh ftw. I’ll give it ** as a weekly match.

Second Match

Kozlov vs Funaki- I would have put Kozlov up against somebody a little stronger, even though I understand this is set before Bklash and is still very early days for Kozlov. I won’t score this as it was a squash. I hope you continue to build up Kozlov tho.

Third Match

I liked the build up to this match with Show on the mic, and also that you have reunited Umanga with Estrada as it adds something to the Umanga package. I think this match would definitely work on TV. It’s tough to pick a winner here and the way you booked it made sense, not a total screw job, but a bit of a distraction for Umanga to pick up the win. ***

Umanga to ECW- a boost for ECW, but I would have preferred him to stay on SD.

Fourth Match

Okay I don’t really like it when you say ‘the heels’ because it just seems to break kayfabe. This was a solid divas match. **

The Edge promo- the thing you didn’t make clear was where Taker was while Edge was talking.

Fifth match

Once again a short description but that is fine with me, you can do longer matches at PPVs and I think the storylines are more important anyway. I think you could have had either guy pick up the win, I sort of expected Dykstra to pick up the win as he cut the promo earlier and being his comeback match so the result was a surprise. But its always good to have a bit of unpredictability.

So your building a Big Show/Umanga feud, that has a lot of potential.

Main Event

A revival of a classic feud. The ref took a spear from Batista lol, painful. Wow Batista gets the win, okay with help but still that was a surprise. I’m not complaining tho Batista gets a rough deal from the IWC in general and I think he is a great superstar. ***

Overall: ***

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619s Feedback For Lashleys Friday Night Smackdown!

For starters, I love that the VIP Lounge kicks it off. Lol at MVP getting cheap heat by pegging on the Bears, great stuff. I love the degrading of Matt Hardy to kick it off, and to no surprise, Matt shows up. Matt with his usual weak mike skills. What we get here is Chavo being involved??? Thats interesting. Like to see where you go with this.

Awww, don't squash Chuck. Just personal preference, but I wish ppl in more recent threads stop using Palumbo as squash material, but its your BTB. This was extended squash, and it did its job by putting Finlay over.

No surprise Chavo and MVP attempt to get the upper hand on Matt. I actually expect Matt to go over and look strong if you really want to get the title on Hardy.

Oh, so here was the squash match. I think Kozlav should be a little later in the show, not so early up in the card. No way Funaki should last two minutes, lol.

Batista on the mike is shakey. Nothing different here, just a little bit of hype for his match later tonight. Another Batista/'Taker match? Lets see what you do with it.

HAHAHAHA!!! Props for bringing Armondo Estrada back and a great way to rebuild Umaga's monster form with Estrada and a clubbing of Big Show. It wasn't pretty, but I can tell this will pay off in the long run. Not the greatest segment tonight, but the most excellently booked.

Oh geez. Whenever someone demands a match from the GM it usually doesn't end up pretty.

Women's matches on Smackdown are simply filler unless you have them fighting for something I don't know about. Good for what it was, but it wasn't much.

Could've put a little more of Edge's personality into this segment, but simply more hype. I wouldn't put it past Edge to say he's going but show up later.

Kenny jobs here to Kingston, but some way both of them looked solid here. Props for somehow doing that.

Show/Umaga program = ratings.

...saw this coming . I called it! I don't like the idea of Batista/'Taker being done anymore, whether or not its for a title, seeing as how its been overdone in our world, and cutting it to 12 minutes is a little weak. However, its what happened that mattered. Batista with the win keeps him in things, Edge screwing 'Taker makes things interesting, and 'Taker getting screwed makes him look strong anyway. Can't make 'Taker look weak easily. And seeing as how he had the match won anyway, doesn't hurt him any.

FINAL THOUGHTS: WELL DONE, GOT ME GRIPPED. I can say you've really got me latched as a reader. I absolutley love the Show/Umaga stuff, and the main event was solid enough. Backlash is shaping up to be a spectacle, I'll be back for that. Well I can safley say you've improved since the last time I gave you feedback, though your recap form is still a little tough to read. When you have all your promos in a weird sense of third person. All things considered...
OVERALL: 8/10. I'm on your side, bro

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Alright he we go

I like your promos like everybody else did, MVP lounge was a good way to start off the show so overall I give your promos 8/10

Your matches I liked but advertising Dykstra and Kofi in your preview ruined the suspense of seeing who Dykstra opponent was going to be. The end I don't see why Edge would pull Batista for the cover on the Undertaker possibly putting Batista in postion to make it a 3 way match at Backlash. I think he would have just left the two of down and out. So with that I give you 7/10

The Umaga move to ECW right before the Draft still confuses me. Why wouldn't they just wait to after the Draft in two weeks for a move? This would have the chance of an ECW run for Umaga for less than two weeks if he was to get drafted.So overall the storylines are good but with some holes in the storys will you think about it 6/10

So overall I'll give you a rating of 7/10

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Because he knows 'Taker will be watching on TV in his locker room...

1. Edge would rather Batista win than 'Taker, and I didn't want to end it a boring DQ or No Contest.

2. He isn't yet, as Vickie is still GM and Edge has the match at Backlash, maybe in the future though.

Yeah, that was a mistake

1. I have already explained.

2. There won't be a 3 way match at Backlash

Why waste a draft pick when I can do it now?

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Smackdown feedback.

Opening Segment: Good use of heel heat here, very good build up and good mocking of each other. I liked it alot TBH.

Match 1: Nice use of power from Palumbo, Good to see his aggressiveness, Finaly stciking up for Horny works for me.

Segment 2: Sets up a good heel match for next week.

Match 2: *****. No Jk, But it was a sqaush.

Segment 3: intruiging, Why is Armando back with yoomanga?

Match 3: Good big mans match here, Good use of signature mves etc.. Umaga going over. Aftermath is great aswell.

Segment 4: That damn Kenney always whining. :P

Match 5: Ok Divas match but i didn't expect alot, You did fairly well here and maybe a bit more of heel dominance could establish both sides.

Segment 5: TBS better appear of ECW or this is wasted.

Main event: I like how you bring up past history and stuff, Good promoting for Backlash.

Overall: very good show with lots of Backlash promoting going on, I will keep on reading. Try to give just the smallest bit of detail extra to the ME because its the ME. Anyway good show. 8/10