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Old 05-27-2008, 02:24 AM   #31 (permalink)
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Thanks for the short review, thats ok, any feedbacks good.
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Old 05-27-2008, 09:03 AM   #32 (permalink)
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Not going to do a full review, but here are some points:
1. Many of the sentences were run-ons. I would recommend using spell/grammar check in Microsoft Word.
2. Jericho doesn't use an Enziguri as his finisher. However, you might be able to make it work.
3. I like the Holly/Rhodes heel turn. Holly has always been a better heel then face IMO.
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Old 05-28-2008, 05:13 AM   #33 (permalink)
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ECW!


* Pyro plays as ECW's Music hits, The camera pans around the crowd holding up their signs and cheering *

Adamle: Welcome all to ECW! Tonight we have the first rounds of the TV Title Tournament, Miz taking on Kane and Chavo taking on CM punk.

Tazz: This show should be off the charts!

*FBI plays as Little Guido comes to the ring*

*Matt strikers music plays as he comes to the ring*

Match 1: TV Title tournament Round 1, Little Guido vs Matt Striker.


Ending:

Matt striker has Guido is a very painful reverse chinlock, Guido is trying to get up, Nunzio gets to his knees, He throws striker over with a snapmare then dropkicks him in the back of the head. Guido picks up Striker and hits a scoop slam then a knee drop. Cover, 1...2..kickout. Guido then picks up Striker but Striker breaks free and rakes the eyes. Striker then irish whips Guido but Guido reverses and hits a spinning kick, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Guido then picks up Striker and irish whips Striker to the corner, Striker gets out of the way and rolls up Guido and uses the tights for leverage. The Ref doesnt count and Tells Striker off for using the Tights, Guido from behind Striker with a roll-up! 1...2...3!

Guido advances!

*FBI plays as Guido wins.

Winner: Little Guido

Match time: 7:52


*Backstage*

Kelly Kelly and Colin Delaney are seen talking when All of a sudden Mike Knox walks in.

Delaney: What do you want

Knox punches Colin Delaney and they start a huge backstage brawl.

*Commercial*

* Chavo's music plays as Chavo comes out *

* This fire burns plays as CM punk comes out*

Match 2: CM punk vs Chavo Guerrero

Ending

Chavo is stomping away at Punk in the corner, Chavo stops to break the refs count of 5 then starts choking punk with his foot. Chavo then hits the 3 Amigo's before climbing up the top turnbuckle signalling for the Frog Splash. Chavo is about to Jump but then Punk runs up and crotches him on the Turnbuckle, Punk climbs up with Chavo and goes for the PEPSI PLUNGE! Chavo Punches his way out of it but Punk fights back, Punk has a front facelock now on Chavo and hits a Superplex. Punk slowly crawls over for the cover, 1...2..kickout. Punk slowly gets up and then he picks up Chavo, Punk irish whips Chavo, Chavo ducks a clothesline but runs straight into a huge kick by Punk, Punk picks up Chavo and hits a double underhook Backbreaker. Cover, 1...2..kickout, Punk picks up Chavo and irish whips him to the corner, Cm punk runs in and hits a knee to the face of Chavo, Then a bulldog from the corner, cover, 1...2..kickout. Punk picks up Chavo and lifts him up for the GTS but Chavo rakes the eys and gets away, Chavo then runs at Punk but Punk lifts up Chavo for the GTS and nails it, cover, 1...2...3!

*This fire burns plays as Punk wins*

Punk collects his briefcase but gets hit with the briefcase by the time keeper! The time keeper reveals himself to be John Morrison. John morrison throws Punk into the ring and hits the Moonlight driver to Punk on the briefcase.

Morrison grabs the briefcase and stand tall over Punk.

Match Winner: Cm punk
Match time: 10:21


*Commercial*

*Raw highlights video is shown*

*Ballz Mahoney's music plays as he comes out with a chair in hand!*

*Elijah Burke's music plays as he comes out*

Match 3: Tv Title Tournament, Round 1, Elijah Burke vs Ballz Mahoney.


Ending

4 minutes in Ballz Mahoney goes crazy and smashes every1 with the chair he carried to the ring.

Match winner: Elijah Burke
Match time: 4:32


*Backstage*
Morrison and Miz are seen planning something for tonights Main Event which has Miz vs Kane.

*Commercial*

*Slow chemical plays as Kane comes to the ring*

*Miz'z music plays as he comes to the ring*

Main event: Kane vs The Miz

Ending:

The Miz irish whips Kane to the Corner, Kane reverses and irish whips The Miz to the corner, Kane with a huge Corner clothesline to the Miz, Miz walks into a sidewalk Slam. Kane going up top now, Miz gets up Slowly, Kane with a top rope Clothesline! The crowd appreciate Kanes efforts. Kane picks up The Miz and goes for a Chokeslam but Miz counters into a roll-up. 1...2..kickout. The Miz then starts pounding on Kane while Kane is still on the ground, The Miz picks up kane and Irish whips him to the ropes, Kane misses a clothesline and The Miz hits a Back suplex, Cover, 1...2..kickout. The Miz picks up Kane and irish whips him to the Corner, Miz goes for his Modified corner clothesline but Kane gets out of the way, Miz walks straight into a chokeslam, Cover, 1...2...3!

*Slow chemical plays as Kane wins*

John Morrison comes out to ensure to a 2-1 beatdown on Kane, CM punk comes out to even the odds and Kane and CM Punk clear the ring to End ECW

Match winner: Kane
Match Time: 15:21


*End ECW with Punk and Kane standing tall.*

Theirs ECW for yahs.

Thedealer, About Jericho and the Enzuigiri, I seen him Accidentally take out Punk with it on the Raw before WM24, MVP got the pin off it so i assumed its a lethal tv move.

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Old 05-29-2008, 01:47 AM   #34 (permalink)
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Smackdown! Preview.
This week on Smackdown Batista will be looking for revenge on Big show, Noble and Hardy take on Helms and MVP, Jimmy Wang Yang fights Festus and Jesse fights Shannon Moore. We have Christian take on Edge for Number 1 contendership for Backlash and Undertaker vs The great Khali as the awesome Main Event!

Should be posted tomorrow aussie time

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Old 05-30-2008, 06:42 AM   #35 (permalink)
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ECW Review

First match - I liked the way that this match was set up. I liked the end when the ref didn't count Strikers pinfall because of the cheating which allows Guido to get the win! 7/10

Backstage - Like how things are hotting up between Delaney and Knox! I would like Delaney to beat him! Maybe Kelly Kelly could be a mananger for Delaney? 7/10

Second match - Chavo vs CM Punk this ended just like one of there matches would have ended! It was so charcterist of the both of them which is so hard to do but you got it spot on! 8/10

Thrid match - I didn't think that this match was long enough. Also didn't get why Ballz went mad. 6/10

The main event - the Miz put up a good fight! This would have happened in a match with Kane. Again you got it spot on! Liking the end of the match when Kane gets attacked by Morrison I can see a tag match next week! 8/10
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Smackdown!


*Rise up plays as the pyro goes off and the camera pans to the thousands of screaming fans*

Cole: Welcome to Smackdown! Coming to you tonight from little rock arkansas and what a great show we got here tonight Mick.

Foley: Certainly, we have some great matches here tonight as always, It's also great to have Teddy Long back as a full time GM and it's showing already with the Main Event Undertaker vs The Great Khali.

*Im coming plays as MVP comes to the ring*

*Firestorm plays as Helms comes to the ring*

*Jamie Nobles music plays as he comes to the ring*

*Live for the moment plays as Matt Hardy comes to the ring*

Match 1: Matt Hardy and Jamie Noble vs MVP and Gregory Helms

Ending:

MVP Irish whips Noble to the corner, MVP trys for a playa's Boot but Noble gets out of the way and hits a hangmans neckbreaker, noble is trying to make the tag to Hardy but Helms runs over to Hardy and trys to knock him off the apron but Hardy punches Helms and Noble makes the tag to Hardy, Hardy clotheslines Helms, Clotheslines MVP, Scoop Slams Helms and then swinging neckbreakers MVP, Cover, 1...2.. Broken up by Helms. Noble runs in and Clotheslines him and Helms out of the ring to the outside where they Brawl. Hardy picks MVP up but MVP rakes the eyes, He kicks Hardy in the gut and goes for the Playmaker, Hardy spins out of it and hits the twist of Fate! Cover,1...2...3!

*Live for the moment plays as Hardy pulls noble off a beaten helms and they celebrate*

Winner: Helms/Noble
Match time: 10:23


*Backstage*

Cherry is seen alone when Victoria and Natayla walk in, They trash talk her before stealing her roller skates and running off.

*Commercial*

*Gonna punch someone tonight plays as Jimmy Wang Yang comes out to the ring*

*Biscuits and gravy plays as festus comes to the ring*

Match 2: Festus vs Jimmy Wang Yang

Ending

Festus picks up Wang Yang off the ground and irish whips him to the corner, Festus charges at him but misses, Wang Yang trys a kick but Festus catches it, Wang Yang still manages to hit an Enzuigiri. Wang Yang gets up and goes to the apron, He hits a springboard legdrop on Festus, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Wang yang picks up Festus But Festus breaks away, Bounces off the ropes and hits a shoulder tackle, Festus Bounces off the ropes again and hits the seated Senton splash! Cover, 1...2..kickout. Festus picks up Wang Yang and he irish whips him, Wang Yang ducks a clothesline and hits a spinning kick, Wang Yang trys for it again but Festus dodges and hits a big boot, Festus picks up Wang Yang and then hits a firemans carry flapjack. Cover,1...2...3

*Biscuits and gravy plays as festus wins*

Winner: Festus.
Match time: 7:32


*Crank it up plays as Big show heads to the ring*

Batista comes out and nails Big show in the back of the head with a chair, Batista starts pounding on Big show with a steel chair and leaves Big show battered and bloody.

*Commercial*

*Metalingus plays as Edge comes to the ring*

*Just close your eyes plays as Christian comes to the ring*

Match 3: Christian vs Edge, For number 1 contendership

Ending:


Edge irish whips Christian to the corner, Edge charges at Christian then hits a spear in the corner, A groggy Christian walks out straight into a clothesline from Edge, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Edge picks Christian up and Punches him in the head, Then again, Then again, Now Edge runs off the ropes and hits a spinning kick on Christian, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Edge picks up Christian and irish whips him to the ropes, Edge goes for a flapjack but Christian blocks and hits a thunderous clothesline! Christian slowly gets up and now picks up Edge and irish whips him to the corner, He charges at Edge but Edge sticks up his Elbow, Edge runs at Christian and runs straight into a powerslam, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Christian picks up Edge and hits a vertical suplex, Christian climbs the turnbuckle and hits a frog splash, cover, 1...2.. kickout. Christian picks up edge and irish whips him, Edge ducks a clothesline and runs into a press slam from christian which Edge floats right over and hits the Edge-o-matic, cover, 1...2..kickout. Edge gets up and screams at the ref, Edge starts pounding on Christian and punches him about 10 times, Edge goes to the corner and lines up Christian for a spear, Christian gets up but gets out of the way of the spear then falls over groggily, Out of nowhere The Great Khali comes out and hits a brain chop on both men leaving them lying in the ring.

Teddy long comes out with mic in hand.

Teddy: Now hold on a minute player, I Know you want your chance at the title so tonight, your match with the Undertaker is now for the world title!

Teddy: As for the Number 1 contendership for Backlash, It will be the winner of tonights match vs, Edge, He has the rematch clause from WM, vs Christian, He got me this job back after all.


Winner: NO CONTEST ( A first for this BTB if i might add )
Match time: 14:23


*Commercial*

*Biscuits and gravy plays as Jesse comes to the ring*

*I'll do anything plays as Shannon Moore comes to the ring*

Match 4: Shannon Moore vs Jesse.

Ending:

Jesse irish whips Moore to the ropes and hits a clothesline, Jesse then bounces off the ropes and hits a running leg drop, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Jesse then gets up and goes for a splash but Moore moves, More gets up and bounces off the ropes and hits a spinning head scizzor take down. Moore then Arm drags Jesse, An Inverted Atomic drop and then a dropkick, Jesse back up and runs straight into a spinning kick, Cover, 1...2..kickout. Moore picks Jesse up and irish whips him but jesse ducks a clothesline and hits a german suplex. Jesse then Irish whips Moore to the corner but Moore reverses it, he charges at Jesse, jesse dodges and gets a roll up! 1...2...3!

*Biscuits and gravy plays as Jesse wins*

Winner: Jesse
Match time:


*Commercial*

*The darkest side plays as Undertaker comes out*

*The Great Khalis music plays as he comes out*

Main Event: The great Khali vs Undertaker for the world heavyweight Championship.

Ending:

The Great Khali is on the outside with the Undertaker Brawling, Khali then irish whips Taker into the barricade, Khali rolls into the ring then back out to break the count. Khali Then grabs Undertaker and throws him chest first onto the barricade before throwing him in the ring. Khali then throws Taker into the Corner and starts stomping away, The ref counts to 5 before Khali scares the ref off, Khali goes back to Taker but Taker throws a huge right! Taker with another, Another, Another and then irish whips Khali to the corner, Taker with 2 corner clotheslines before hitting an impressive looking snake eyes on Khali, Big boot from Taker which doesnt ground Khali, Taker trys again but Khali with a clothesline, Khali picks up Taker And goes for the double handed Chokeslam, Undertaker takes Khali down with him and locks on the GOGOPLATA! Khali Taps

Undertaker holds onto the GOGOPLATA making Khali bleed internally.


Winner: Taker
Match time: 12:23


*Smackdown Ends with Taker standing tall with the world title.*
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I will review soon ok?
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Thats ok, I will review your show in return.
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Thats ok.

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