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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
Ecw review: My first BTB review but i have read a fair few before i joined.
First match: Good storyline here, Winning cheaply for morrison and nice use of their trademark moves, find the ref bit at the end unrealistic though. 6.5/10
Backstage bit after the match: Decent for what it was. 5/10
2nd match: Nice work here, MOTN IMO, It had some good counters and nice moves here, the ending a bit abrupt though. 7.5/10
Armando promo: Nice bringing back the TV title, nice with the originals coming out and Dreamer stating their claim, then Balls chasing Armando off to lol  7/10
Main event: Decent match here with a few good spots, Nice suprise victory for Burke while setting up the rematch for Backlash. 6.5/10
Overall most things were solid, Cant wait for the TV title tournament and wanting to see where the Punk morrison thing goes. Good luck with your BTB
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04-27-2008, 09:42 PM
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
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Originally Posted by Edgehead9812
ECW
Side note for Ecw commentary, I will not be making Adamle look like a botch freak.
*Pyro hits as ECW'S music plays, Camera Pans Around the screaming crowd at MSG*
Mike: Welcome to ECW on Sci-fi, Tonight we are live from Maddison Square Garden and This will be one hell of a night Tazz.
Tazz: Thats for sure Mike, tonight Our General manager Aramando Estrada Makes a Huge decision and a massive main event involving elijah Burke and Kane.
Mike: Also morrison has a chance to face Cm punk at Backlash for the MITB Briefcase.
Chimel: The following contest is scheduled for one fall, If John Morrison wins he faces Cm punk at Backlash for the MITB briefcase.
*Papparazi plays*
John Morrison walks to the ring with a great ammount of confidence.
Mike: John morrison looking to have a chance to earn a title shot anywhere in the next year, Tazz, do you believe the Tuesday night Delight can do it?
Tazz: Yes i believe he can do it, he has done everything right by weakening up Cm punk before this match, he is a good chance tonight.
*This fire burns Plays*
Cm punk walks to the ring with bandages on his back from where Morrison attacked him.
Ending
Punk with a right hand, Punk starting to build back momentum, goes for a clothes line but oh! Wicked Backbreaker/neckbreaker Combination by Morrison, hook of the leg, 1...2..shoulder up. Morrison now Puts Punk in a surfboard type submission move retargetting the back. Punk now starts to get his way out of his, Morrison with a right hand, Irish whips Punk to the turnbuckle, Punk sticks his leg out but Morrison Grabs it, Punk with the enzuigiri! The ref starts counting as both men are down. 1.....2.....3.....4.....5.....6...
Mike: Turning point in the match!
Punk and Morrison both starting get up, Punk with a clothesline and another and another, now punk picks up Morrison and irish whips him, Punk hits a back body drop and waits for morrison to get back up. Morrison back up and then Punk with a kick to the leg, then to the ribs then a huge spinning kick to the head, cover, 1...2..Shoulder up! Punk irish whips Morrison to the corner, hits the knee into a bulldog, punk ready to go for a springboard clothesline, Morrison gets up but he pushes the ref into the ropes just of Punk gets onto them! Punk is out! Morrison goes to the top turnbuckle, Split leg Moonsault, Pin, 1...2...3! Match Time: 14:34
*Papparazi plays*
Chimel: And the winner of this match, John Morrison!
Morrison Runs back up the ramp celebrating while Punk is lying in the ring looking shocked as we go to a commercial
*commercial*
Backstage Interview
Lena Yada: Right now i am here with John Morrison, John that was a grueling match you just had CM punk but you managed to escape with victory, you will now be heading to backlash to face him for the number 1 contendership for the title.
Morrison: Lena, lets get one thing straight, The tuesday night delight did not escape with victory, he dominated the whole match and could have won at any time, i just felt like giving CM Punk a chance that he could win.
Lena Yada: In all fairness John, You did cheat to win.
Morrison: * gives her a disgusted look and walks out *
Tazz: Looks like Morrison aint to happy about being accused of cheating *mini laugh*
*Ain't No stoppin plays*
Shelton Benjamin comes down to the ring
Mike: These two could easily be future ECW Champions right here Tazz
Tazz: Yeah, two talented young stars looking to pick up the win here tonight
*S.O.S plays*
Kofi Kingston Comes down to the ring
Ending
Kofi Kingston has a version of a sleep on Benjamin, Benjamin is fighting his way up, Benjamin with an elbow and another elbow, Benjamin bounces off the ropes but runs straight into a spinning wheel kick. Kofi picks up Benjamin and irish whips him into the corner, Kofi Runs at him but Benjamin throws him onto the apron, Kofi with a shoulder block to Benjamins gut, Kofi with a spring board crossbody but Benjamin counters it into a Samoan Drop! Benjamin is crawling over for a cover, 1...2..shoulder up.
Benjamin Picks Kofi up and irish whips in to the ropes and hits a powerslam, pin, 1...2..shoulder up. Benjamin picks kofi up but kofi Breaks away, Double legs take down into mounted punches by Kofi, Kofi gets up and hits his double leg drop! Pin, 1...2..shoulder up, Kofi Picks up benjamin and goes for a suplex, countered by Benjamin into a go behind, Benjamin nows lifts up Kofi for an Electric Chair drop! Cover
Tazz: That should be all!
1...2..shoulder up
Mike: No!, Kofi still fighting strong
Benjamin Picks Kofi up and irish whip, Benjamin with the back body drop but no! Kofi lands on his feet and clotheslines Shelton. He goes to the Apron Waiting for Shelton to get up, Sheltons up and a seated senton by kofi, instead of going for the pin he starts punching Benjamin in the face, Kofi Picks Benjamin up, goes for the spinning Enzuigiri, misses, Benjamin with a bridge! 1...2...3.!! Match Time: 17:23
*Ain't no stopping plays*
Chimel: And the Winner of this bout, Shelton Benjamin!
*commercial*
Mike: We're back from the commercial break and now ECW's GM, Armando Estrada, Is in the ring about to make his announcement.
Estrada: Es! Ucho! For those that have forgotten, my name is Armannnndao, Alehannnnndro, Estraddddddddddda.
Estrada: In ECW we have had uhh lets say a 1 title for to long.
Estrada: Starting next week, eh mucho, their will be a tournament to determine who will be the newly revived ECW TV champion
Estrada: This will be a 4 man tournament consisting of el much uhh, Shelton Benjamin, Kofi Kingston, Matt striker and Elijah Burke.
*ECW originals Music plays*
Tommy Dreamer, Nunzio, Balls Mahoney and Stevie richards are all standing at the entrance under the titantron.
Tommy: How dare you make a TV title tournament with not one of the originals in it, we gave our lifes to ECW and this is what we get rewarded with??
Estrada: *Nods with a big grin*
Tommy: We are the heart and soul of ECW, we demand you put us In the Tournament or we will make you.
Estrada: Uhh Let me thinkm about that, uhh No! * Big Grin again *
Tommy: Balls, teach him a lesson
Balls walks down to the ring with a chair chasing away Estrada,
Estrada(still puffing): Ok ok, you are in the tournament. And also one thing, the final match at Backlash will be under, uhh lets say , Extreme Rules! * big Grin again *
Mike: Wow! Tazz, you were an ECW original, Do you think its was right what they did right then.
Tazz: You bet your ass they were, they made ECW and they get rewarded with nothing, without them their wouldnt be this title, i think its only fair.
*commercial*
*slow chemical plays as kanes pyro comes up*
Kane walks down to the ring with his new ECW title:
Chimel: On the way to the ring, he is the ECW champion, Kane!
*video package of highlights from the battle royal, then shows kane winning the ECW world championship*
As we come back from the video we see Elijah already in the ring and his name announced.
Ending
Elijah burke has kane set up in the turnbuckle, elijah hits a huge clothesline! Elijah then hits a nice suplex on kane, hook of the leg, 1...2..shoulder up by kane. Elijah picks kane up, irish whips kane, kane off the ropes, goes for a clothesline but elijah burke blocks it and hits his clothesline leg sweep combo. Pin, 1...2..shoulder up. Elijah picks up kane and irish whips him to the corner, Elijah throws a right hand but Kane blocks it, kane switches elijah to the corner and hits a right, a left a right, a right, a left, a right and a huge right! Kane scares the ref off before irish whiping elijah to the oposite corner, kane with a huge clothesline, kane goes up to the top turnbuckle, kane goes for a top rope clothesline..
*Chavito Ardiente plays*
Tazz: Whats this! Thats Chavos music but wheres chavo!
Elijah regains stableness, hits kane with a few rights while his on the turnbuckle, nails a superplex, cover, 1...2...3! Match time: 11:13
*Sylvester Turkay 3rd plays*
Chimel: The winner of this match, Elijah burke.
Mike: What a huge upset! great way to finish ECW here at MSG!
Tazz: Your right Mike. elijah will have momentum going into the Ecw tv title tournament with a huge win like that.
Mike: hey wait whats this.
Chavo runs through the crowd and beats down kane with a steel chair, chavo grabs the Mic.
Chavo: Just to let you know Kane, my rematch clause has been invoked and i will be getting my rematch at Backlash.
*End of ECW
KK thats ecw for yah. If your thinking what that mucho and uh uh stuff is with Estrada, its just trying to stay in charatcer.
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MORRISON/PUNK: Good match but I am not really a fan of John Morrison and I wouldn't like him to be the MITB man. But I give the match a 6/10.
MORRISON/LENA Interview: Pretty short but she got to the point with the cheating to win.
KOFI/BENJAMIN: Good idea for a match, I like the booking you have going on so far. Since the match was long and the match seemed detailed and exciting I give it a 7.5/10.
Bringing Back TV Title promo with the originals: Very good idea, makes Backlash interesting. The TV Title is definaltly needed. And the promo was little weird but i would give it a 5.5/10.
Burke/Kane: Unique ending with Burke winning. Chavo beating up Kane sets up Backlash. Good match I say a 7/10.
The whole show I will give a 6.5/10. Will be reading on.
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04-28-2008, 06:34 AM
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
SMACKDOWN!
*Rise up plays as the pyro goes off and the camera pans around the screaming MSG fans*
Cole: Hello everybody and welcome to Smackdown! Coming to you tonight from Maddison Square Garden! Joining me tonight in commentary is Jonathan Coachman!
Coach: Yes indeed these Maddison Square Garden Fans loves Smackdown and they sure love the coach.
Cole: Well i dont know about the last statement but they sure do love smackdown! And here comes Edge.
*Metalingus plays as edge comes down to the ring with his edgeheads and Vickie Guerrero*
*Edge stands their looking at the crowd really intense waiting for them to stop chanting you suck*
Edge: As you all know, On Sunday at Wrestlemania, Undertaker stole my World heavy weight championship.
Edge: He doesnt deserve that title, he didnt earn it, he only won because of a fluke!
Edge: And yes i do have a rematch clause, but i dont need it, why, because i have Vickie Guerrero on my side.
Edge: Take it away hun *then they share a kiss*
Vickie: As edge was saying he has me and i have the power to make matches.
Vicke: So tonight for the world Heavyweight championship, without using his rematch clause it will be Edge, Curt Hawkins and Zack Ryder Vs The Undertaker for the world Heavyweight championship!
*Macmiliant plays as the returning Teddy Long Comes out*
Teddy: Hold on playa' your forgetting that we are co General managers, we both have to agree to make the match, and since im back that means i have to agree.
Edge: Hold on a darn minute you peanut head, She already made the match, the match is final.
Teddy: I tell you what edge, you can have a match tonight, but it wont be for the world heavyweight championship, You can have that at Backlash, It will be to decide who is the undisputed General manager of Smackdown. You, Vs a suprise star of mine, We got a deal playa?
Edge: Fine, as long i get the match at Backlash, But thats not fair with Undertaker having the night off.
Teddy: Well he can vs the Animal Batista!
Coach: Wow! 2 blockbuster matches set up for tonight, its gonna be huge
Cole: Sure is partner, And heres a reminder just of what happened wat Wrestlemania.
*Highlights of smackdown superstars at wrestlemania are shown*
*When Highlights are done we cut to the ring with Natalya Neidhart and Maryse awaiting to do battle*
Natalya Neidhart vs Maryse
Ending
Neidhart irish whips Maryse into the turnbuckle, Goes for a clothesline and nails its. Irish whip to the other turnbuckle, Goes for a clothesline but Maryse sticks the elbow up, Maryse climbs up to the top Turnbuckle, Goes for a crossbody and Neidhart ducks, While Maryse is on the ground Neidhart Goes for the Sharpshooter! Shes struggling to get it in, Yes! She got it in, Maryse taps in an instant.
Match time: 5:13
*Neidharts music plays*
Chimel: And the winner of this bout, by submission, Natalya Neidhart.
*commercial*
*Gonna Punch Some1 tonight plays as Wang yang and Moore come out to the ring*
*Sticks and stones plays as jesse and festus come down to the ring*
Shannon moore and Jimmy Wang yang Vs Jesse and Festus
Ending
Festus Irish whips Moore who has been in for half the match taking punishment now into their corner and tags in jesse, festus Holds moore in the corner then Jesse Hits a huge splash into the corner. Pin, 1...2.. Shoulder up!
Jesse Then hits the ropes and goes for a clothesline but Moore ducks and jesse accidently hits Festus, Moore Quickly Runs over and makes the tag to Wang yang, Wang yang with a clothesline, followed by a back body drop, then an Inverted Atomic drop, followed by A Wicked spinning wheel kick that nails Jesse right in the head, Cover, 1...2.. No Broke up By Festus,
Festus The lifts Wang yang Up high into a Military Press position but Wang yang Counters with a head scizzor that sends Festus flying to the outside, Jesse comes from behind and nails Wang yang in the back, He Sets up Wang yang on the Turnbuckle for a back suplex, he starts pounding him with forearms, Jesse then runs and delivers a cheap shot to Moore, Jesse runs back and he runs straight into a Wang Yang Moonsault! 1...2...3.! Match time: 12:07
*Gonna Punch Someone tonight plays as Moore and Wang Yang celebrate*
*Commercial*
*Shows MVP on the titantron ready to make an announcement*
MVP: For those of you who watch that loser brand RAW, you would have known i screwed Matt Hardy out of The IC title.
MVP: It wasnt for the reasons you make think, You see we feuded for months before this happened.
*MVP plays a vid of him attacking Matts leg*
MVP: I thought i had Got rid of the thorn in my side known as Matt Hardy but then this happened.
*Plays clip of Matt Hardy interfering in Wrestlemanias MITB match*
MVP: You see, it was my time! I was going to win MITB! But then Matt Hardy had to ruin it!
MVP: Well Anyway, the reason i didnt want him to win the IC title is because i want to prove that i am better then Matt Hardy once and for all, At Backlash, it will be me vs Matt Hardy for the US title!
*Titantron goes blank*
Cole: What a match that has just been set up by MVP!
Coach: I always told you he was a sportsman.
*firestorm plays as Gregory Helms comes to the ring*
*Pit bulls 2nd plays as Noble comes to the ring*
Jamie Noble Vs Gregory Helms
Ending
Gregory helms has Noble In position for a swinging neckbreaker off the top rope, Noble jumps down and hits a chop, another chop, another chop and another chop, lifts Helms into a firemans carry position and hits a Modified Gutbuster! Pin, 1...2..shoulder up! So close!
Jamie Noble picks up Helms and puts him in position for the Double Underhook powerbomb, Helms reversed into a backbody drop, helms now picks up Noble and irish whips him to the corner, helm with a clothesline which sends noble to the floor, Helms picks noble up and hits a back suplex, Pin, 1...2..Shoulder up!
Helms Picks up Noble and irish whips him to the ropes, Helms kicks him into gut and boucnes off the ropes hitting a running spinning neckbreaker! Helms Goes to the top now, Hits a crossbody! Rolled through by Noble, 1...2..,shoulder up! Noble picks up Helms Now. Noble with an irish whip, reversed by helms, Helms for a back body drop but noble just stops and forearms to the back, Puts him in position for the Double Underhook Powerbomb, nails it, Pin, 1...2...3! Match Time: 15:23
*Pitbulls 2nd plays as Jamie Noble wins*
After the match Noble goes to shake Helms' Hand but Helm Grab his hand and kicks him in the gut then nails a shining wizard, Helms walks away.
*Commercial*
*backstage*
Teddy Long: Well Hello their eugene, what can i do for you playa'
*A shadow walks past the room*
Eugene: B-b-b-but its...
Teddy long cuts eugene off: now now eugene, dont wanna spoil his return for the fans do you know.
Eugene: n-n-n-n-no Teddy.
Cole: Wow i wonder who it could be thats returning!
*I walk alone plays as Batista comes to the ring*
*The Darkest side plays as taker slowly makes his way to the ring*
Undertaker vs Batista
Ending
Batista has Taker in the corner driving shoulders to the Midsection, Batista then sits undertaker on top of the turnbuckle and gits him in position for a running powerslam. Nails the running powerslam and hooks the leg, 1...2..shoulder up. Batista picks up Taker and hits a clothesline, Pin, 1...2.shoulder up. Batista then lifts undertaker up but undertaker hits batistas arms away, Starts throwing rapid lefts and rights and then finishes with a huge uppercut, Undertaker irish whips Batista To the turnbuckle and hits 2 running clotheslines on Batista, Then hits snake eyes into a Big boot! Then Taker drops the Leg on Batista, The pin, 1...2..shoulder up!
Taker Picks up batista and goes for a choke slam, Batista Elbows Taker in the head a few times and hits the ropes, Batista runs straight into taker, Taker picks up batista and nails the Tombstone Piledriver, pin, 1...2...3 Match time including commerical before the ending: 25:22
*The darkest side plays as Undertaker wins*
After the match Taker walks up the ramp but Batista is laying in the ring, Out of the crowd comes big show who takes apart the announce table, grabs batista from the ring and chokeslams him through it.
Cole: Can you believe that! Big show just chokeslammed batista through the announce table for no reason! what was all that about
Coach: Trust me Cole, Show has his reasons
*commercial*
*backstage Teddy long is seen talking on the phone with Jimmy Wang yang and shannon Moore*
Teddy: Hey playas, Good win tonight, and i think its time you two faced Jesse and Festus for number 1 contendership
Teddy: Yeah it will be next week, Catch ya playas.
*Vladimir Kozlov is shown in the ring with a local*
Vladimir Kozlov vs local
Ending
Vladimir Kozlov wins after hitting a inverted DDT. Match time: 5:11
*Commercial*
*Metalingus hits as Edge comes to the ring alone*
Edge gets on the mic.
Edge: Now i hope you fans wont be disapointed when i beat this loser that Teddy Long has Sent out Vickie Guerrero will finally have full power in the General Managers office and i will regain my World Heavyweight Championship.
Edge is sitting on the turnbuckle waiting for the Oponent.
*Just close your eyes plays as Christian Comes out*
*Massive pops and Christian rocks chants come up*
Edge has a priceless look on his face --->
Christian gets on the Microphone.
Christian: Well brother, you didnt expect that did you?
Christian: Dont think i'll go easy on you bro, Theirs no way the Instant classic is losing on his return in the WWE because thats how i roll!
Christian walks down to the ring.
Christian vs Edge
Ending
Edge irish whips Christian, Christian bounces off the ropes and ducks a clothesline, ducks an elbow but runs straight into another clothesline. Edge picks Christian up and irish whips him to the corner, Edge charges at him but Christian dodges it, Christian with a roll up! 1...2..kick out! Edge quickly gets up and stomps on Christian a few times. Edge turns to the crowd and mocks Christians Instant Classic Pose. While edge is mocking him Christian gets up and when Edge turns around Christian nails him with the clothesline, Christian picks Edge up and hits a neckbreaker. Christian stomps on edge 3 times before picking him up the irish whipping him to the ropes, Edge trys a clothesline but Christian ducks and turns it into an inverted DDT, Christian climbs the turnbuckle and hits the Frog splash, pin, 1...2..shoulder up
Christian now picks up edge and irish whips him to the corner, Christian Hits a huge clothesline on edge in the corner, Christian now turns to the fans and hits the real Instant Classic pose, He picks up edge and goes for a Vertical suplex, Edge Flips over onto his feet and hits the edge-o-matic into a pinning predicament, 1...2..shoulder up! Edge Picks up christian and hits the impaler DDT, Cover, 1...2..shoulder up!
Edge starts screaming at the ref while Christian Gets up, Edge goes for a clothesline on christian but christian kicked edge in the gut, Grabbed his arms and goes for the unprettier, Edge pushes him to the ropes and goes for a press slame but Christian goes right over him, Hooks the arms around and nails the unprettier, pin, 1...2...3!!!!!!!! Match time: 27:29
*Just close your eyes plays as Christian wins*
Teddy long comes out with mic in hand
Teddy: Congratulations playa, and as a reward, you will be in a match with undertaker next week and if you win, the match at Backlash will be a triple threat.
Cole: What a way to end smackdown Coach, The return of Christian and the possibility of a triple threat at Backlash, its gonna be huge.
Coach: it sure is cole, its definently great to see Christian back in the wwe.
*smackdown ends with Christian posing to the crowd*
Well thats smackdown for ya, Enjoy.
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04-29-2008, 06:23 AM
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
Opening Promo: wasnt bad but could have been better, set up the main event with a good stipulation, also has Edge vs Undertaker for Backlash made aswell. also Batista and Taker for later that night: 6/10
Natalya Neidhart vs Maryse: For what it was it was decent, used for getting Neidhart over with the crowd i assume? 4/10
Wang yang and moore Vs festus and jesse: Good match it, nicely worked at a good pace and the right time given. 7/10
MVP promo: Good use of past footage, another match set up for Backlash, good overall. 6.5/10
Noble vs Helms: WTf is this! Cruiserweights getting TV time! Unforgiveable! Jk, it was a good match with good time for these 2, i liked the gutbuster with Noble  , i hope that thing with Helms afterwards goes somewhere. 8/10
Eugene and teddy long segment: Short but decent filler segment, Eugene almost gave away The returning superstars name lol. It passes. 5/10
Batista vs Undertaker: Nice use of trademarks here, decent paced. 8/10, also i hope the Big show Batista Match is kept off the PPV, your PPV is getting crowded with these feuds atm i think.
Vladmir Kozlov Vs local: meh, Squash match. 2/10
Christian Vs Edge: Nice little promo before the match, this was MOTN IMO, it was well paced with 2 great peformers going at it with a good stipulation, Christian gets the win on his first night back. 9/10
Overall pretty good, 3 very good tv matches with 2 squashes.
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04-29-2008, 11:13 AM
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
Here is a review for your Smackdown!  It was a good read.
Opening Promo – Its nice to see that you have lengthened your promos a little bit since your previous shows, but Edge still could have said a little more at the beginning. Furthermore, promising a World Heavyweight Championship for the main event, then relinquishing it is not the best move as it may give the fans false hope. However, the two matches booked were good.
Natalya Neidhart vs. Maryse – A poor choice of match really. A better opponent could have been picked for Natalya Neidhart than Maryse, e.g. Michelle McCool. The best result occurred though.
Shannon Moore & Jimmy Wang Yang vs. Jesse & Festus – A good solid tag team match containing a lot of decent action at the finish. Its nice to see that you are utilizing your tag team division, which is something that is not happening on Smackdown at the moment.
MVP Segment – This was an average segment. A decent match was set up, but I think it would have been Matt Hardy who set up the match rather than MVP.
Jamie Noble vs. Gregory Helms – A decent match with entertaining action. Its very nice to see that you are utilizing your cruiserweight division, which is something that is missing from the WWE these days. A possible angle between these two as shown at the end of the match has potential. I’ll enjoy seeing where it goes.
Teddy Long & Eugene Segment – A nice little teaser segment. You had Teddy Long and Eugene both in character, and it adds mystery to who the wrestler is that Teddy Long has chosen.
Undertaker vs. Batista – A good match time to have that would give time for plenty of action. As an avid Undertaker fan as well, I’m glad you chose him to be victorious. However, I do think the finish of the match lived up to its full potential. It would have been nice to add in a few signature moves, e.g. a spinebuster and spear of Batista or a chokeslam and Last Ride of the Undertaker.
Vladimir Kozlov vs. Local – Try to avoid matches such as these. It does not make Vladimir Kozlov look impressive and it does not interest fans. The right way to debut a wrestler would be to make them have an impact, e.g. Kane and Chris Jericho.
Edge vs. Christian – Nice little segment prior to the match utilizing Christian’s catchphrase. This has to be match of the night. This had great use of signature manoeuvres, great connection with the crowd and a great stipulation behind it. Each show’s main event should reflect this. Well done on a fantastic choice of a main event!
Overall: I have been impressed with all your matches throughout your BTB so far. Try and avoid the squash matches though; they decrease the quality of the show. Regarding promos, they are improving. I am slightly concerned with you getting some of the wrestlers in character, e.g. MVP.
Rating: 7/10
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
Thanks man.
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
Raw Preview
The main event will feature Kenedy vs orton to determine the number 1 contender For John Cenas World title. Paul London vs Cody rhodes will take place as hype for their title match at Backlash, Melina will take on Mickie James, A very special Highlight reel and for on night only DX will return to take on Umaga and JBL in tag team action.
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Re: Wrestlemania 24, The aftermath
Note: School is restricting me and sorry i am late posting Raw. My matches will not be as detailed due to time restrictions. Thanks.
RAW
*To be loved plays as the camera pans around the crowd screaming and holding up signs*
JR: Welcome to Raw! Coming to you tonight from Anaheim California in the Honda Centre, Tonights should be huge.
King: Thats right JR, The ME will be Huge determining the Number 1 contender in what should be a huge match.
JR: Cant wait, Also DX return for 1 night only in what should be huge!
King: Also Melina takes on Mickie James in a non title match, PUPPIES!
JR: Oh will you stop, Anyway here comes Jericho.
*Break the walls down plays as Jericho Comes out as the highlight reel is set up*
Jericho: Welcome to.. RAW IS JERICHO!!!!
*Pop*
Jericho: Tonight we have another edition of the highlight Reel and my guest is none other then Santino Marella.
*Heat*
*Santino's music plays as he comes out acting all cocky.*
Jericho: Santino, Last week you lost in the Tag team Turmoil match, as shown on WWE.COM you and Carlito had a fight backstage, I heard you got beat up pretty bad.
*Pop and laughter*
Santino: Yeah, Thankyou for the introduction Mr ayatollah of Roll and Rockah.
Jericho: Its Rock and Rollah to you.
Santino: Yeah yeah Wateva. I am Santino Marella, you need to bow down to me, And who told you i got beat up by that Imbred Carlito? Carlito does not sound like Santino!
Jericho: What about those bruises right their.
Santino: That is a whole different story.
Jericho: The right story?
Santino: No, I have had enough of this, I am leaving, And remember, Raw is Santino!
Jericho gets angry and Jumps santino from behind and they start brawling.
*William regals music plays as he comes out*
Regal: Rightio, I think we have had enough of this, since you to are ready to fight, Jericho, You are putting your title on the line tonight against Santino Marella.
*POP*
*Commercial*
Match 1: Cody Rhodes vs Paul London
*Is anybody home plays as Cody Rhodes comes out to the ring alone*
*London calling plays as London comes out to the ring alone*
Ending
Cody Rhodes has a modified rear chinlock on Paul London. Paul london is fighting his way up, he is feeding off the energy of this crowd, Elbow to the gut, Another Elbow, London Bounces off the ropes but runs into a dropkick from rhodes. Rhodes picks London Up and irish whips him to the corner, Rhodes charges at him and misses a clothesline, London dropkicks Rhodes out of the ring as London stays on the mat recovering. The Ref starts counting. 1....2.....3......4......5.....6...7.. Rhodes back in and London back up, London Hits a clothesline on Rhodes, Inverted atomic drop and then a dropkick. Cover, 1...2..Kickout. Paul London Picks up Rhodes and hits a DEVASTATING Enzuigiri. London to the top but whats this. Hardcore Holly comes out from the back with a steel chair and knocks London off the top with it. The ref rings the bell.
Hardcore holly gets rhodes to pick London up and then Holly levels him with the Chair, Rhodes then grabs London and DDT's him. Out Comes Kendrick but he gets Leveled with a chair then Holly sets him up for the alabama slam. WICKED alambama Slam on the steel chair.
* Holly and Rhodes stand tall as Their music plays while the crowd boos.
Winner by DQ, Paul London
Match Time: 9:10
*Commercial*
Match 2: Mickie James vs Melina
*Papparazi plays as Melina comes to the ring*
*Obsession plays as Mickie comes to the ring*
Match Ending
Melina has Mickie James in a leg Headscizor as Mickie is lying helpless, Melina screams in rage trying to get Mickie to tap. The ref checks Mickies arm, It falls. 1! Again, 2!, Again but no! Mickies Arm is up, She starts fighting her way up, A right hand by Mickie to the leg of Melina, Another, Another and it breaks the hold. Melina gets up and A double axe smash to Mickies back, Again, Again, Again, Again, She rolls mickie over and starts pounding her with right hands. Cover, 1...2..Kickout. Melina picks up Mickie and irish whips her to the corner, Melina charges at her but Mickie runs away, Bounces off the ropes and Lou Thez Press! Right hands by Mickie on Melina. Mickie picks Melina up and hits a Snap suplex. Cover, 1...2...3 No kick out by Melina. Mickie picks up Melina but Melina Rakes the eyes. Melina grabs Mickie by the Hair and climbs to the 2nd rope. Mickie pulls Melina down by the Arm, Kicks in the gut and hits a Tornado DDT, Cover, 1...2...3
*Obsession plays as Mickie wins*
Winner: Mickie James
Match time: 9:32
*commercial*
Match 3: DX vs Umaga and JBL
*Are you Ready plays as DX Come out to the ring and do the Crotch chop pyro entrance*
*Virtual voodoo plays as Umaga comes out*
*Longhorn plays as JBL comes out.
Ending
Umaga has a nerve hold on HBK, The fans are willing HBK by chanting DX loudly. HBK is starting to get up and starts punching Umaga in the gut, Shawn Bounces off the ropes but Umaga with a thrust to the throat downs Michaels, Umaga picks Up Michaels and hits and Inverted DDT, Cover, 1...2..Kickout. Umaga picks up Michaels and then out of nowhere a Enzuigiri from Michaels! Both men are down, 1.....2.....3......4.....5......6.....7....8..., Both men start to get up, HBK is about to tag in HHH when all of a sudden JBL runs and takes HHH out, Michaels clotheslines JBL out of the ring, Umaga pounds Michaels on the back then irish whips him, Michaels Flying forearm, Kip Up! Michaels tags in HHH and Umaga tags in JBL who got back on the apron, Right hand to JBL, Another, Another, Another, JBL down, Right hand to Umaga and hes down, HHH irish whips JBL, JBL ducks the clothesline, HHH with the High knee, he picks JBL up, JBL Reverses the Irish whip, Facebuster and then JBL walks into a spinebuster, Cover, 1...2..Kickout. HHH picks up JBL and goes foe the Pedigree, Umaga runs in and SUPERKICKS HHH in the face. JBL with a jacknife cover just as Umaga takes out HBK. 1...2...3.
*Longhorn plays as JBL and Umaga win*
After the match JBL picks up HHH and hits the clothesline from hell. Umaga picks up HBK and Samoan spikes him.
JBL Picks up the Mic and says.
JBL: We have just destroyed one of the greatest tag teams of all time and at Backlash, The wrestling GAWD and The samoan Bulldozer will once again Stand tall against DX in a Tag team Hardcore match!
Winners: JBL and Umaga.
Match time: 17:82
*Commercial*
Match 4: Santino vs Jericho for the IC title!
*Santino's Music plays as he comes out*
*Break the walls down plays as Jericho comes out.
Ending
Santino Marella has Jericho on the ground trapped in a front facelock. Santino starts throwing knees into Jerichos head. Santino picks Jericho up and hits a bulldog. Santino Does Jerichos pose and shouts, " Ayatollah of Roll and Rockah! ". Santino goes for a lionsault but Jericho gets his knees up! Jericho starts to crawl his way up and Santino is rolling around in pain, Jericho Grabs santino throws a right hand before irish whipping him into the ropes, Back body drop by Jericho, Santino up but down again with a clothesline. Jericho picks up Santino and irish whips him to the corner and clotheslines Santino, Santino comes out groggy then hits a bulldog. Jericho does his pose and yells " Ayatollah of Rock and rollah! ". Jericho hits the Lionsault, Cover, 1...2..kickout.
Jericho now picks up Santino and hits a double underhook backbreaker, cover, 1...2..Kickout. Jericho irish whips santino to the corner and charges at him but misses. Santino then hits an Atomic drop on Jericho and then rolls out of the ring towards the time keeper. Santino grabs a steel chair and throws it into the ring, While the ref is taking the chair out Santino grabs the IC belt, Runs in and swings at Jericho, Jericho ducks and hits a WICKED Enzuigiri, Cover, 1...2...3
*Break the walls down plays as Jericho retains*.
Winner and Still IC champ: Jericho
Match time: 14:13
*Commercial*
Main Event: Randy Orton vs Mr Kennedy
*Turn up the Treble plays as Kennedy comes out*
Mr Kennedy: On his way to the Ring, Weighing in at an awesome 224 pounds, MRRRRRRRRRRR KENNNNNNNNNEDY! KENNEDYYY!
*Burn in my light plays as Randy Orton comes to the ring*
Ending:
Orton has Kennnedy in a headlock, kennedy is bleeding from the mouth after Orton delivered a vicious DDT on the apron to Kennedy, Orton is applying a great ammount of pressure, Kennedy is starting to get up but an Orton knee to the head stops that. The fans are really rooting for kennedy here and are desperately trying to will him on, Its starting to work as Kennedy slowly gets up, He punches Orton in the gut, then again, orton releases, Kennedy off the ropes but runs right into a powerslam by Orton, Cover, 1...2..Kickout. Orton Picks Kennedy up puts him into a headlock, he starts punching him while he is the headlock then lets go, Kennedy groggily gets to the turnbuckle to hold himself up, Orton charges at Kennedy but misses the Stinger splash. Kennedy now Clotheslines Orton, Kennedy picks Orton up, irish whip, Backbody drop by Kennedy. Kennedy picks orton up and another Irish whip, This time Kennedy hits a 1 man Flapjack, Cover, 1...2..Kickout.
Kennedy now picks up Orton But Orton breaks away and hits his inverted Backbreaker, Cover, 1...2..Kickout. The fans are going nuts. Orton picks up Kennedy and hitd a scoop slam, Cover, 1...2..Kickout. Orton picks up Kennedy but Kennedy breaks away and hits a VICIOUS clothesline. Kennedy goes to the ropes and waits for Orton to get up, Orton gets up and kennedy goes for a swinging Neckbreaker, orton blocks, Pushes him off, Kennedy with a clothesline, Orton Ducks, Orton with the RKO, Kennedy Blocks and hits the MIC Check, Cover, 1...2..3!
*Turn up the Treble plays as kennedy wins*
Kennedy: The winner of the match and the number 1 contender for the WWE championship, MR KENNNN
Orton with the RKO!
Here comes Cena! Cena coming to Save Kennedy, Orton flees while Cena And Kennedy are in the ring.
JR: Thank god for Cena.
Cena kicks Kennedy in the gut and F-U's Kennedy!
JR: BY GAWD WHAT HAPPENED! CENA HAS JOINED FORCES WITH ORTON!!
Orton comes in and him and Cena stomp away on Kennedy.
Winner: Kennedy
Match time: 18:23
*End Raw*
So their we have it, CENA IS HEEL, RHODES AND HOLLY ARE HEELS also.
Yes their is a lack of promos but i like writing matches more so meh.
Thats RAW folks. Sorry i havent posted in a while, Mods keep this open i will start posting more reguarly. Reviews are welcome.
Last edited by Edgehead9812 : 05-25-2008 at 07:32 AM.
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