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wwe21cena · 10-21-2007, 02:25 PM

Raw:
Champs:WWE Champion: Randy Orton
US Champion: MVP
Divas Champion: Mickie James
Unified Tag Champs: Rated Y2J
Roster:
Alicia Fox
Batista
Beth Phoenix
Big Show
Carlito
Chavo Guerrero
Cody Rhodes
Evan Bourne
Festus
Gail Kim
Hacksaw Jim Duggan
Hornswoggle
Jack Swagger
Jamie Noble
Jerry Lawler
Jillian
John Cena
Kelly Kelly
Kofi Kingston
Lilian Garcia
Mark Henry
Maryse
Michael Cole
Mickie James
Montel Vontavious Porter
Mr. McMahon
Primo
Randy Orton
Rosa Mendes
Santino Marella
Shawn Michaels
Ted DiBiase
The Brian Kendrick
The Miz
Triple H

Inactive:
None

Ecw:
Ecw Champ: Vacant

Roster:
Brie Bella
Christian
DJ Gabriel
Ezekiel Jackson
Goldust
Gregory Helms
Josh Mathews
Katie Lea Burchill
Matt Striker
Nikki Bella
Paul Burchill
Shelton Benjamin
Tiffany
Tommy Dreamer
Tony Atlas
Tony Chimel
Vladimir Kozlov
William Regal
Zack Ryder

Inactive Superstars:
None

Smackdown:
Champs:
World Heavyweight Champion: CM Punk
IC Champion: Chris Jericho
Womens Champion: Michelle McCool
Roster:
Charlie Haas
Chris Jericho
CM Punk
Curt Hawkins
David Hart Smith
Dolph Ziggler
Edge
Eve
Finlay
Jeff Hardy
Jesse
Jim Ross
Jimmy Wang Yang
John Morrison
JTG
Justin Roberts
Kane
Kung Fu Naki
Layla
Maria
Matt Hardy
Melina
Michelle McCool
Mike Knox
Natalya
R-Truth
Ranjin Singh
Rey Mysterio
Ricky Ortiz
Shad
The Great Khali
Theodore Long
Todd Grisham
Tyson Kidd
Undertaker

Inactive:
None

wwe21cena · 10-21-2007, 02:39 PM

Raw live from Charlotte, NC

*Shane comes out*

Shane: As You All Know That I gave Undertaker A Chance to decide tonight if he wants to Relinquish His Title And stay on raw or Keep the title and stay on SD! So Undertaker Come on Out...

*Takers Music Plays*

Undertaker: I Pick.............SMACKDOWN!

First Match Kane Vs The Rock Loser Leaves Wwe match

Kane Does a uppercut on the rock now rock low blows kane *Ding Ding Ding!*

Here Is Your Winner By DQ KANE!!!

* John Cena's Surgery Video is seen*

2nd Match Snitsky Vs Vince

Snitsky Does a big boot and a Snitsky power ON Vince 1...2....3 Here is your winner Snitsky

Last Match Stone cold vs ????

Austin Comes out now there is a wait.................

Y2J IS THE OPPONENT!

Y2J Does a walls of Y2J on austin and he taps!

Here is your winner and new wwe champion Y2J!

Shane: Woah woah woah Cut that damn music!

Shane: y2j You don't think the night is over oh no! Because its only beginning!

Next Match Y2J Vs Shane

Shane does low blow and y2j wins by DQ

*hbks music plays*

HBK: I WANT TO CASH IN MY MONEY IN THE BANK RIGHT NOW

Hbk vs Y2J For wwe title

Hbk does sweet chin music 1...2....3!!!

Here is your Winner And new Wwe Champ HBK!

Quick Recap:

Kane defeats The Rock
Snitsky Defeats Vince
Y2J defeats Stone Cold For wwe title
Y2J Defeats Shane BY DQ for wwe title
Hbk Defeats Y2J For wwe title

Cyber Sunday Matches

Hbk vs Y2J vs (you pick Shane or Stone cold or Bret Hart) For wwe title in the stipulation you pick (Hell In A Cell or Punjabi Prison or Extreme Death Match)

Batista vs ( Hogan or Sting or Kevin Nash) For whc title

Henry vs khali for us title in a (last man standing or Cage or Hardcore match)

Morrison Vs Daddy V for ecw title in a (Backstage brawl or Ladder or TLC match)

wwe21cena · 10-21-2007, 02:44 PM

Cyber Sunday

First match

Morrison Vs Daddy V for ecw title in a (Backstage brawl or Ladder or TLC match)

The match is..... A LADDER MATCH!

Morrison throws some punches to daddy v and puts him in the corner and does a vertical suplex on v and climbs the ladder but v gets up and knocks down the ladder now morrison is knocked down. V sets the ladder up and trys to climb up and falls down

Vince: it looks like hes too big!

Morrison climbs the ladder and gets the title!

Here is your winner and still ecw champion John Morrison!

*back from commercial break*

vince: there will be no more matches there for they are going to be on raw the winners are

hbk vs y2j vs shane for wwe title in a extreme death match : shane wins

henry vs khali for us title in a cage match: Khali Wins

Batista vs Kevin nash for whc title:Nash wins!

Cristian Cage · 10-21-2007, 02:47 PM

Here are some suggestions
-dont space so much in your writing its hard to read
-try bolding thw winner
-explain the matches more, people like to read the matches not just see the winner
-Try explaining why the rosters are different

**Wesson** · 10-21-2007, 02:54 PM

What happened with Cyber Sunday it fell apart midway also why was Ecw and Smackdown cancled for one week?

wwe21cena · 10-21-2007, 02:54 PM

Ok I will in the next show

To Wesson: Because I kinda tired of making alot of shows at once just wait until the next raw.

wwe21cena · 10-21-2007, 04:06 PM

Raw From Greenwich Co

First match Umaga vs Kennedy for ic title
Summary:
Umaga throws a series of punches at Kennedy. Now Kennedy beats umaga up with his arm. Now umaga does a Samoan drop and goes for the cover 1...2... kick out by Kennedy. Kennedy does a superplex and goes on turnbuckle and does a Kenton bomb and pins 1...2...3!!

Your winner And still Intercontinental Champion Mr Kennedy!

Snitsky vs a jobber

Snitsky throws a big punch and knocks down the jobber and picks the jobber up and does a big boot and then picks the jobber up again for a pump handle slam and goes for the cover 1...2...3!!
Your winner Snitsky!

Shawn Michaels vs Booker T Vs. Kane For wwe title

Michaels beats up kane but booker t throws series of punches on hbk now he throws hbk out of the ring and kicks kane in the gut and does a book end and goes for the cover 1...2... kick out by Shawn Michaels. Shawn Michaels Does a sweet chin music on kane making kane go out of the ring now he turns around only to see Booker T do a book end on him and booker goes for the cover 1...2... kick out by Shawn Michaels. Shawn Michaels Struggles to get up but Booker does the book end again and Booker T goes for the cover again and 1...2...3!!!
Your winner and new WWE Champion Booker T!

*show goes off air*

**DDMac** · 10-21-2007, 05:19 PM

~ Take a look at the BTB rules.
~ Take a look at some other BTBs to see how they go, how they're booked, and more importantly, how they're presented.
~ Take your time with your shows. One every five seconds isn't going to help you or potential readers.

**DaveTheJags** · 10-21-2007, 10:40 PM

Okay first of all man not trying to be an ass but:

What the hell is Angle and Henry doing in Low card for SD!?

Second:
Space out your shows more, and don't EVER put it all in build.

This is how I would suggest you put your matches if you do recaps:

Match recap or match finish here, maybe try to use a color for it.

Then, Winner: The winner here in bold.

It would be so much easier for people to read your show.

Again, not trying to be an ass or anything. Just trying to help out.

wwe21cena · 10-22-2007, 11:18 AM

Ok I will try in Ecw.