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Old 02-03-2007, 11:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Backstory: After the poor results of WrestleMania, Vince decided to do a Draft Lottery. He put everyone's name in a bucket and pulled them out in a Raw, SmackDown! order. He also announced the new general manager of SmackDown! Paul Heyman. He came up with these results.

Raw Roster
Randy Orton
Test
Chavo Guerrero
Spirit Squad
The Rock
Stone Cold Steve Austin
Braian Kendrick
Goldust
Hardcore Holly
Michelle McCool
Gene Snitsky
Jeff Hardy
Euegene
Paul London
MNM
Victoria
Triple H
Brock Lesnar
Kurt Angle
Al Snow
Chris Jericho
RVD
Lita
Trish Stratus
Shawn Michales
Rey Mysterio
John Bradshaw Layfield
Tommy Dreamer
Matt Hardy
Candice Michelle
CM Punk
Edge
John Cena
Sabu
Kelly Kelly
Samao Joe
Charlie Hass
Scott Stiener
Chris Benoit
Scott Hall
Kevin Nash
Big Show
Ron " The Truth" Killings
Christopher Daniels
Scotty 2 Hotty
Grand Master Sexy
Rikishi
Miss Jackie

Raw Champions
WWE Champion - Chris Benoit
Intercontental Champion - Chris Jericho
Tag Team Champions - MNM
Women's Champion - Vacant
Hardcore Champion - CM PUNK

Raw General Managers and Announcers
General Manager - Vince McMahon
Play By Play - Jim Ross
Color Commentary - Jerry " The King" Lawler
Backstage Announcer - Todd Grisham


SmackDown! Roster
Kane
Hulk Hogan
A-Train
Goldberg
Maria
Mr.Kennendy
The Sandman
Ashley
Chris Masters
Finaly
Batista
Bobby Lashley
Monty Brown
Val Venis
Gregory Helms
Torrie Wilson
Mick Foley
Terry Funk
Ric Flair
Kevin Thorn
Rhyno
Mickie James
Sting
Christian
Carlito
Shelton Benjamin
Mark Henery
Undertaker
Booker T
Boogeyman
D-Von Dudley
Bubba Ray Dudley
Umaga
The Great Kahli
Balls Mohney
The Highlanders
Simon Dean
Tatanka
Mike Knox
Ariel
AJ Styles
Lance Cade
Trevor Murdoch
Tyson Tomko
Cassidy Riley
Abyss
Spike Dudley
AMW
Simon Dean
Chris Sabin

SamckDown! Champions
World Heavyweight Champion - Vacant
United States Champion - Vacant
Tag Team Champions - Vacant
Cruiserweight Champion - Vacant
Hardcore Champion - Vacant

SmackDown! General Manager and Announcers
General Manager - Paul Heyman
Play By Play - Michael Cole
Color Commentary - Tazz
Bacgstage Announcer - Josh Matthews


PPV Schudle
January - Royal Rumble
Febuary - No Way Out
March - WrestleMania
April - BackLash
May - Judgement Day
June - Vengeance
July - The Great American Bash
August - SummerSlam
September - Unforgiven
October - No Mercy
November - Surivior Series
Decmeber - Armagedon

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Old 02-04-2007, 05:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Raw Preview

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wow! your first show looks really good man i will be reviewing good luck
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Will review but all seems very sudden. This sucks away any shock factor.
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I look forward to writing Smackdown and I hope to have a preview up after D-XFann9933 posts RAW.
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this thread looks ok, I will fully review the next show matey
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Thanks guys and Raw should be up sometime today!
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I KNOW ITS NOT THAT GREAT IT IS THE FIRST SHOW FROM MY PAST BTB AND THIS BTB FOLLOWS THE SAME CONCEPT


Monday Night Raw
April 1,2007
Baltimore, Maryland

"Pyros go off"

"To Be Loved" plays and the crowd goes crazy.

"No Chance" hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd. Vince walks out with a mic and stays at the top of the ramp.

Vince: As all of you know last night was WrestleMania so I decided to shake things up a bit. This morning I put everybody's name in a bucket and pulled them in a Raw, SmackDown order. Tonight there will be matches to decided the champions of Raw. since I am the new general manager of Raw I will announce the Raw matches. In the opening contest we will see a Ten Man Battle Royal for the WWE Hardcore Championship. There will be 5 Raw and 5 SmackDown! superstars. There will be an Intercontental Championship Match between Chris Jericho and Goldust. The Tag-Team Championship match between The Hardy Boyz and MNM. In the main event we will see Chris Benoit Vs Edge for the WWE Championship. Thank you and have a great night.

Raw cuts to a commerical.

Ten Man Over The Top Rope Battle Royal

Lillian: The following contest is the tem man over the tope rope battle royal for the Hardcore Championship. In this contest to elimiate an oppent you must throw him over the top rope and both feet must touch the floor. The last man in the ring will be the Hardcore Champion.

"What does everybody want" hits the PA System and there is a small pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 238 punds from Lima,Ohio Al Snow.

Kevin Thron's music hits and there are boo's heard throught out the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 270 pounds Kevin Thron.

"One of A Kind" Hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 235 punds from Battle Creek, Michagan Rob Van Dam.

Balls Mahoney's music hits the PA System and there is a small pop from the crowd.

Lillan: Making his wat to the ring weighing in at 305 pounds from Nutley, New Jersey Balls Mahoney.

CM Punk's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillan: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 196 pounds from Chicago, Illions CM Punk.

The Sandman's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 240 pounds from Philadephia, Pennsylvania The Samdman.

Hardcore Holly's music hits the PA System and there are boo's heard from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 235 pounds. From Mobile, Alabama..Hardcore Holly.

Terry Funk's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillain: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 247 pounds from Amarillo, Texas..Terry Funk.

Sabu's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 220 pounds the Suicidal, Homicidal, Geonicidal, Deat Defying Sabu.

Mick Foley's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillam: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 326 pounds from Long Island, New York..Mick Foley.

The bell rings and the match is under way. Balls starts hitting prople with a chair. Sandman starts hitting prople with his Kendo Stcik. Mick gets out of the ring and throws a couple of street signs in the ring. Funk picks one and nails Thron right between the eyes. He then picks up Thorn and throws him out of the ring.

Kevin Thron elimated by Terry Funk(4:25)

Thorn gets right up and back into the ring. He punches Funk and than throws him out of the ring.

Terry Funk elimated by Kevin Thorn(5:01)

Funk and Thorn countine to fight walking up the ramp. Meanwhile back in the ring all eight remaining contests fight in the ring. CM Punk and Foley are teaming up to take out the rest of their oppents. They take out Balls and They Sandman. Tey pick up Balls and throw him out of the ring.

Balls Mahoney elimated by CM Punk & Mick Foley (6:37)

CM Punk picks up a sign and hits Foley in the head with it. Punk picks him up and throws him out of the ring.

Mick Foley elimated by CM Punk(6:59)

Sabu grabs a chair and gives CM Punk the arabin face buster. Rvd gets out of the ring and grabs a 20 foot ladder. He puts the ladder in the ring and sets it up. He climbs to the top of the ladder and does a five star frog splash right onto CM Punk. Al Snow grabs head and starts wacking people with it. He picks up RVD and throws him out of the ring.

RVD elimated by Al Snow(8:49)

Sabu gets up and starts to hit people with the chair. Sandman steats hitting people with the Kendo Stick. Al Snow starts hiiting prople with head. Snow tries to hit Punk but he ducks, Punk then hits him with a drop kick. Punk countinues to work on Snow until Sabu comes over and starts to wrok on Punk. Sandman and Hollyjoin in and all five remaning guys are fighting. Holly does the Alabama Slam to the Sandman. Holly picks up Sandman and throws him out of the ring.

The Sandman elimiated by Hardcore Holly(11:02)

Holly then picks up a kendo stick and starts hitting people with it. He hits Sabu with it and knocks him out of the ring.

Sabu elimiated by Hardcore Holly(11:35)

The three remaing contesnts countine to fight. Snow and Punk team up to take out Holly. They Irish Whips Holly into the ropes. Holly comes back and ducks and gives them both a clothesline. Holly picks up Snow and throws him out of the ring.

Al Snow elimiated by Hardcore Holly(13:09)

Punk and Holly lock up and do a series of grapple moves. Punk quickly does a snap suplex. He goes to throw Holly out of the ring but Holly quickly gets out of it. Holly slides out of the ring and looks for weapons. Holly gets a table and a chair. He throws the chair and slides the table into the ring. He gets in the ring and him and Punk lock up. Holly lets hold of him and quickly does a dropkick. He then picks up the chair and waits for Punk to get up. Punk gets up and Holly swings the chair but Punk ducks and drop kicks the chair right into his head. Holly falls over the top rope and unto the floor.

Lillian: Here is your winner and the new WWE Hardcore Champion CM Punk.

Raw cuts to a Commerical

BACKLASH 3 WEEKS AWAY!

Raw comes back.

Lillian: The following contest is schulded for one fall and it is for the Intercontental Championship.

Goldust's music hits the PA System and there is a large boo from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 243 pounds from Hollywood, Califorina..Goldust

Chris Jericho's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 275 pounds from Tronto,Canada...Chris Jericho.

*The Bell Rings*

The two lock up and Jericho gets a quick suplex in. He goes for the cover.

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Goldust gets up and the two men lock up. Jericho gets him in a headlock. Goldust elbows Jericho in the gut and then gives him a suplex. He then gives him a powerbomb. Goldust goes for the cover.

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Goldust gets very mad and gets out of the ring. He grabs a chair and throws it into the ring. Goldust picks up that chair and hits Jericho with it.

*Ding, Ding, Ding*

Lillian: Here is your winner and the new Intercontental Champion Chris Jericho.(3:56)

Goldust countines to hit Jericho with the chair.

"Break It Down" hits the PA System and the crowd goes crazy.

D-X runs down to the ring and Goldust jumps out.

HHH is handed a mic.

HHH: There is one reason and one reason only why we are out here and that is to announce the newest member of D Generation-X.......Chris Jericho.

*There is a huge pop from the crowd*

J.R.: Holy cow king what a superstar to joing D-X

King: I am sweating just thinking about it. Can you imagine what D-X could do now.

J.R.: Folks we have to take a short commerical break.

Raw cuts to a commerical.

Raw comes back from a commerical and cuts backstage.

Todd: Ladies and Genmy guest at this time Chris Benoit!

*Huge pop*

Benoit: Todd I have worked my ass offf to get a title rematch and I get it tonight.

Todd: What are your thoughts on this huge match tonight.

Benoit: My thoughts? You want to know my thoughts? Well let me tell you, every single night I dream about becoming the Champion once more and tonight that dream will become a reality.

Raw cuts to a commerical.

Raw comes back.

Lillian: The following contest is schudle for one fall and it is for the World Tag Team Championships.

MNM's music hits the PA System and there is a large boo from the crowd.

Lillian: Making there way to the ring weighing at 423 pounds from Hollywood, California...MNM

The Hardyz music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making there way to the ring weighing in at 419 pounds from Cameron, North Carolina...The Hary Boyz

The match starts out with Jeff and Nitro. They lock up and Nitro gets Jeff into an armbar. He tags in Mercury. Mercury gets on the top rope and does a missle drop kick. He goes for the cover.

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Mercury tags in Nitro. Nirto I rish wips Jeff into the rope. Jeff ducks and drop kicks Mercury. Jeff craws over to Matt and tags him in. Matt hits Nitro and Mercury. Matt gives the Twist of Fate to Nitro. Nitro rolls out of the ring. Matt tries to give Mercury a Twist of Fate but he gets out of it and turns it into a german suplex. Mercury goes for the cover.

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Jeff gives Mercury a legdrop from the top rope. Nitro comes in and throws Jeff out of the ring. Nitro and Mercury setup for the Snapshot and nail it. Mercury goes for the cover.

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Lillian: Here are your winners and the new Tag Team Champions MNM.(6:53)

J.R.: What a match King.

King: J.R. did you lose you hat?

J.R.: King did you even watch the damn match? Never mind. Folks we have to take a short commerical break.

Raw cuts to a commerical.

Raw comes back.

J.R.: Folks coming up next the WWE Championship will be decided.

Brock Lesnar's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Brock steps into the ring and grabs a mic.

Brock: Damn it feels good to be back. The reason I left was to play football and I relaized that thats not the sport for me. Wrestling is and has been the only sport for me. In my contract I was given a WWE title shot. I plan to use that title shot at backlash. Thank God I'am back.

Brock drops the mic and walks out of the ring.

Raw cuts to a commerical.

Raw comes back.

*The Bell Rings*

Lillian: The following contes is schulded for one fall and it is for the WWE Championship.

Edge's music hits the PA System and the crowd boo's.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 245 pounds form Troanto, Canada...Edge.

Chris Benoit's music hits the PA System and there is a huge pop from the crowd.

Lillian: Making his way to the ring weighing in at 232 pounds from Atlanta, Georiga...Chris Benoit.

The two men lock up and Edge gets the advantage. Edge nails a suplex. Edge puts Benoit in a head lock. Benoit starts to fade away. The ref lifts his arm. It drops once. It drops again. The ref picks his arm but Benoit fights it off. Benoit starts to elbow Edge and Benoit gives him a suplex. Both men lay flat on there back and the ref starts his count.

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Both men get back to their feet and start to punch each other. Edge tries to punc Benoit but he ducks. Benoit gives him three German suplexs. Benoit gets up on the top rope and nails a headbutt. He goes for the cover.

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Benoit Irish Whips Edge. Edge comes back and tries for a spear but Benoit reverses it into the crossface. Edge taps out after 30 seconds.

Lillian: Here is your winner and the new WWE Cahmpion Chris Benoit.(7:46)

Benoit celebrates as Raw goes off the air.

Quick Results
CM Punk won the Hardcore Battle Roayl to become the Hardcore Champion.

Chris Jericho deafeted Goldust to become the Intercontental Champion.

MNM deafeted The Hardy Boyz to become the Tag Team Champions.

Chris Benoit deafeted Edge to become the WWE Champion








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Over The Top Rope Contest- This was a good match could get some fueds going but too much weapons 8/10

Intercontinental championship- No Offense but this was just a terrible match you could have made it longer it was too short but him being with DX is interesting like 2 see how this goes 5/10

World Tag Team Champs- Again far to short it was good though it was pretty fast paced too much if ya ask me 6/10

World Title Match- This was the main event it should be well long it should be amazing it was too short this would no where near fill up a two hour show 5/10

Overall - Try and make your matches longer and better and try to make the main event longer 6/10 ***

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Raw Review

Over The Top Rope Contest- Nice match to begin things, I enjoyed the hardcore, and there was some nice entertainment in this match, and I liked the result.

Intercontinental championship- Didn't really enjoy this match, I guess it was just all about a storyline, so I hope you can get soemthing out of it. However, the finish was enjoyable.

World Tag Team -
Decent but rushed, and you should have made the result go the other way. Nice spots near the end though.

World Title Match-
A poor main event, it was just too short. If you don't want to write full matches, just say so, give a brief overview or something. It was ok, but poor.

Overall -
The show was fair. Work on layout, match length etc. 6/10
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