Take everythign I say in a non malicous manner please, I'm just getting back to long reviews and don't wish to seem mean in any way
- Edge shooting on WWE is odd, he doesn't seeme like he would in show an forward manner. Honestly, I was expecting you to really to mess up Christian with the first line, it didn't flow well, buy you recovered very nicely, also the Rhino Gore confused me becuase I thought we'd be seeing Edge and Christian and now it's Edge and Rhino...Clear this up please
Aries vs Danielson
-I was so pumped for this, I mean this guys deserve so much praise and any time ther ein ring it's awesome, but three minutes? I think (I only say this becuase I've done it)...You really started to right and relaized this match could be really long and decided to go with a short finish, it might nto be fully true, but I belive you had other motives besides just letting Danielson get heat
- Standard promo. Short, but sweet type deal I believe I that it will be Edge and Rhino fued now
-Nice promo from Heyman. Two PPV's? Nice. The other main thing here is the tournament confuses me, so who all is in it? Also, Could Edge v Christian v ??? ruin the Edge v Rhino fued? You need to be careful with this as Edge and Rhino could seriously get tangeled up in another storyline and such...
~*-!Hell Yeah Benoit!-*~
LAX & WGTT promo
- Started off strong. I was real into it, you had great charcter and everything then...
Konnan: It’s time for you gringos to face da facts Holmes, since ‘dere’s no other tag teams in EPW, we have decided that my dogs, Homicide and Hernandez – the LAX, should automatically be awarded that Tag Team titles!
Konnan: The Latin American Exchange is a revolution, you can stop a revolutionary, but you can’t stop a revolution
Semmed like you shoudl have either A) Nixed teh last line or B) Switched them around
I Haas rasicst to Mexicans now or what? That I didn't understand, overall you have incredible potentioal to write good promos, just did not deliver fully with this one.
Benoit & Lesnar promo(type thing)
-Honestly it was too short too tell you could have added some more substance here...
Lesnar v Moore
-Lesnar killed Moore..It was hilarious when Moore had no reaction, just like real life. Why'd you sign him anyway? Anyway, nice squash, while it was pretty boring it gave Lesnar the domination he needed to face Benoit.
Jericho v Hassan
- Okay for starters this match started off real strong, but then teh number of run-ins I didn't feel was needed. Save those for guys who can't pull off a main event like Yokuzana v Undertaker casket match or Maven vs HHH on RAW after Survivor Series. You had such great potentioal, it just never seemed to live up to get there.
- Gave a nice way to end the show kind of liek RAW before NYR last year.
- Nice work here you have potentioal to do a lot more with this, and you honestly could go very far just need to not rush your matches and all I give you a