Re: Presenting: Paul Heyman's Evolution Pro Wrestling.
Thanks for the feedback so far.
I look forward to yours AS, Crazian and Alim as well as hopefully others to come. To let everyone know I will post an analysis of this event in time once a few more reviews come in, just to explain a few things.
Also, 619 bought up a good point. I know the opening video is short, but it was a last minute thing. I literally added it in about 2 minutes before i posted the show. I initially wasn't going to have one, but I thought I should have something brief at the last minute. I know the feeling towards it will probably be pretty bad, but that's okay. lol.
Anyways, thanks guys. As I said, Analysis soon. Some news and notes possibly at the same time, if not a little while after before a Preview and the fallout edition of Enslaved...but that'll be a while yet. I'm talking a good 3 or 4 weeks as i haven't even written it yet and time for me for a while is going to be of the minimum as I'm still in the process of renovating my house, I've only been able to be this active for the past few days because I've been sick off work and my girlfreind has been on holidays, plus I'm going to Sydney this weekend for the NRL GRand Final, so time will be of the minimum again soon.
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R/P/C Feedback: Out of Exile
= The Intro could of been a little longer but it doesn't make too much of a difference to me.
? Could that Hammerstein Ballroom have a big pyro display?
- I was a little surprised about the reaction Punk got in the opening match especially after what he did at the last show. I figured maybe a mixed reaction would have worked.
+ I marked out for the shining wizard lol.
+ Awesome opening match. All three wrestlers got out of their signature moves. Danielson played the heel role very well. 9/10
= An okay promo from Rhyno, i guess he was in character. It's not like he talks that much anyway.
++ This match out did the first one. I loved Christian's role in this match and his resiliance and not staying down. I like how you made Lesnar still look almost unstoppable as it took 3 unprettiers to take him out. 10/10 Amazing write-up
? I'm wondering where Konnan could be
+ I expect a SCS/Hassan Feud brewing, possibly going on to the next PPV.
++ For Jericho pwning LAX. "Who the hell are you?" I could actually see him saying that.
+ Finally some heels win lol. Another great match!
? LAX vs. Mexicools (?) feud in the works
+ So I'm guessing that Noble means business lol. I like his little psycho gimmick thing going on.
+ Joe looked like a complete monster in the last man standing match. I loved the ending with him trash talking him at the end of it.
- I'm confused with the Jericho/Joe thing, who exactly is the face or the heel. Both seem to to do completely heelish acts but the crowd cheers for them. You need to clear that up IMO.
? Monty Brown sounds interesting.
+ Amazing main event, I already knew Benoit had no chance of winning the match. But you still kept me interested in it.
MOTN: Christian vs. Lesnar
Overall: Amazing PPV it was well worth the wait. All the matches were great and I actually had a lot of fun reading it. Amazing work once again.
Re: Presenting: Paul Heyman's Evolution Pro Wrestling.
This is my first PPV review so bare with me.
Bryan Danielson v CM Punk v Austin Aries
I like this as the opening match and how CM Punk won it. The crowd were behing him all the way , good length for this sort of match as well. I would have liked Danielson , and I thought he was but being cocky cost him I guess. Good opening
Rhino Promo
I liked this very in charecter , poor old Maria . LAX coming in a bit random .
Cage v Lesner
WOW. An amazing match will looks of near falls and Lesner wouldn't give up would he but Cage finally got the win. Couldn't have been writen any better.
Hassan Interview
Never liked him or his gimmick but at least you got though the interview well. I guess it was okay but thats just I never really got his gimmick. Being great , him and CM fueding for the title?
Hassan v Colt
Well nicly set up with the CM Punk bit and once he came down I could just feel a Colt win . So I guessing the fued will now happen with Punk.
Joe Interview
Aaaaaaaa classic Maria , racks me up andthen Joe's rant was good as well , shaping up for a good match.
Ladder Tag Match
Super ... I didn't think anything could beat the second match but it just did. Perfect
Jamie Noble Interview
Didn't like this I can't really see Noble saying this but the STU was good add piece to it . Maybe someone could have broken it up and a fued could start like that.
Joe v Jericho
Well, the match was good and the ending was nicly put together but the ending totally confused. Why would Joe go to shake his hand if he is the heel and just trashed talked Jericho. And then Chris goes completly heel. Who is heel and face?
Monty Brown Promo
I love him! I want to see what fued he will enter and title he wil go for.Also nice build up to main event.
Main Event
Well Benoit out was easy predicted but I would love for Rhino to win. Nicely written match. But hat damn Edge . I hope he losses it soon! Hopefully to Monty Brown ! But I liked this match with good spots and good ending . Nicly written.
Overall
Nice PPV , good interviews and nice fueds are going to build up when you go into your nexted shows . This is a high standard you have set yourself. PPV was a good length maybe could have been one more short mtch in thier but still was fine for me. I'd give it 8.5/10
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First of all, I’ve never read or reviewed any of your shows before – but I’m going to make sure I never miss another. Quite simply, I thought this was phenomenal.
Punk/Aries/Danielson – Great match. It had me on the edge of my seat cheering them on. I’d been hoping for a CM Punk win, and was delighted to see him actually do it. Solid, and sets the tone for the rest of the night. 9/10.
Rhino promo – Not bad, a fairly simple promo, but effective. Builds hype for the main event. 7/10.
Lesnar/Christian – Loved it. Even better than the match opener. Really brutal, and I tried not to blink whilst reading it. I was really caught up, and the ending was great. Nothing was held back, I liked that. Lesnar looked like he’d just never die, it was awesome seeing Cage topple the monster. Maybe it should’ve been a bit later in the show? But as a match, this was near perfect. Instant Match of the Night, I’d be surprised to see you top this. So far the PPV is spot-on. 10/10.
Hassan Interview – Never paid much heed to Hassan, so I can’t really say whether or not he was in character. However, I enjoyed this. It could set up a decent feud. Second time LAX show up, I’m starting to wonder what happened to Konnan. 7.5/10
Cabana/Hassan – I had a feeling Punk would involve himself in one way or another. Another good match, but didn’t surpass the two before it in my opinion. 8/10.
Joe interview – Maria as half-witted as ever. Can’t say she wasn’t in character. A nice interview, can’t say I laughed, but a broke a smile reading it. Jericho’s short appearance afterwards was rather amusing. Again, he was definitely in character. Can’t really comment on Danielson, as one word isn’t enough to judge. Finding Konnan on the floor, I’m definitely interested to see what happens from here. I’ll rate it all together. 9/10.
LAX/Haas and Benjamin – Another good match, very brutal. The only one that came close to challenging Lesnar/Christian for match of the night so far. 9.5/10
Noble interview – Never really heard him talk much, so hard to judge. With all the talking himself up, and then the assault, it was kind of hard for me to see him saying/doing all that, and therefore I can’t really take him that seriously. Hopefully you’ll change my perceptions of this over coming shows. 7/10.
Joe/Jericho – Great match, Jericho very resilient. I liked Joe trash-talking all the way through the 10 count. The aftermath was just as good, if not better. 9.5/10
Edge interview – By favourite non-match piece of the show. I could picture him saying all that whilst reading through it. 10/10.
Edge/Rhino/Benoit – Rhino’s elimination was the highlight of the night. Very nice. This one didn’t need the pure brutality and extremeness as the others, I liked how it ended plain and simply with the classic finishing move. Another very good match, but not quite on the same level as the likes of Brock/Cage. 9/10.
Overall, a very nice PPV. It certainly drew a new constant reader (me). Altogether, I’ll give this 9/10.
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Alim's Out Of Exile Review
Finally the you got the pay-per-view up. I was really anxious to reading it because of the great card you put together. I haven't reviewed any of your other work before, but let's see how you can make a good first impression for me. Let's get the show on the road! Or should I mean the review on the road.
The pay-per-view starts off with a video package, which is necessary imo. The video wasn't too bad, it could have definatly been better. Atleast you got some of the moments which lead up to the show in there, which is good enough. Again, not the best video package, but it does the job, especially if it was made under two minutes. Opening commentary was good. Both Nash and Styles did their jobs by hyping up the event. Not much else to say here.
Really good choice to kick off the pay-per-view. To be honest, I really thought this match would be higher up the card, but a good choice none the less. I love the fact that you have all these great indy wrestlers in the promotion, it's really something different. The match started off good, with the basic chain wrestling between the three, going for quick covers too. I loved the last few minutes off the match with the close calls and such. I'm a bit pissed off to see Danielson tapping out to the Anaconda Vice, I would have prefered Aries to be in that situation, but it really doesn't take anything away from me, because CM Punk won. I'm a huge CM Punk mark, and I glad he won, even though my prediction was for Danielson to win. ***3/4
Rhino interview with Maria, it was alright. Rhino isn't really much of a talker imo, or maybe it's just that I've never actually heard him cut a good promo, but he did sound like he was in Man Beast character, with the destroying and all that. He sounded intense, and determined, just like I could picture it. I don't understand the reason for LAX just to pop out of nowhere, maybe this is some sort of signal for an upcoming feud?
Brock Lesnar verses Christian Cage, the match doesn't seem that good on paper to me, but you proved me wrong. The match was fantasticaly put together. The use of the steel chair, the three unprettiers, the high impact spots, even an unprettier on the steel steps. Christian Cage getting the win was a huge suprise for me, I was exprecting Lesnar to pull out the win. Blood was involved too, and you didn't over do it, which is great. Again, I really enjoyed this match, just a bit off on Lesnar not getting the win. Christian Cage vs Rhino, Christian Cage vs Chris Benoit, Christian Cage vs Edge all seem like great matches, either of these are a possibility. ****
Hassan Promo was great. I have always been a fan of Muhammed Hassan, and it's great to see him in this BTB. I'm not sure if CM Punk and Cabana are playing tweener or face, because Hassan stated that they attackes Sonjay Dutt. Cabana vs Hassan should be good, but I don't remember much of Hassan's in-ring work, but if he's in this promotion, he should be good. LAX again, what happened to Konnan? Suspense is certainly building up.
Muhammed Hassan vs Colt Cabana actually went longer than I expected. I didn't expect it to actually go over ten minutes, but I was shocked once again. I'd like to take the time to compliment on your match writing skill, it's fantastic. You're doing 200:1 which is great, and I love the detail as well. Hassan losing was another shocker, I thought he'd win, bit disappointed. But I guess the interference by CM Punk to help get Cabana get the win makes it pretty much confirmed, Muhammed Hassan vs CM Punk, Pacific Championship. So far all my predictions have been wrong. ***
Samoa Joe promo was pretty good. I've always found Joe a good mic worker, and you showed it in this thread that what he's capable of. Joe looks to be playing heel in this thread. Me being a big Chris Jericho fan, still wants to see Samoa Joe get the win tonight. It would really push him up the ranks as the top dog. LAX again, this is really getting freaky. What the hell is going on with Konnan? Oh just the WGTT attacking them. It was kind of predictable after the second time LAX was featured in the show. Let's see what they will do without him.
The Ladder Match was off the hook, seriously. It started with high flying action and bumps right off the bat, and from then, I knew the match would flow extremely well. The spots were pretty awesome, bulldog off the ladder, powerbombs, suplexes, ranas, knocking the ladder down, everything. And the good thing is you also had them utilize the ladder as weapons by having them do moves on them like the Falcon Arrow and Border Toss. Psicosis and Juvi make it out, finally. But whats this?? They turn on LAX! I didn't see that coming at all. I didn't even expect them to come out. This should start up a feud definatly. Great match once again, glad to see you gave it a good amount of time as well. I should take notes. ****1/2
Jamie Noble was great. I'm glad you signed him, he's a wasted talent that's being jobbed out to Hornswoggle. You did a good job of getting Noble known in just one promo, with him saying he's around, and saying he's the best in the world. The Most Dangerous Man in EPW, I like the sound of that, this should be good.
Samoa Joe vs Chris Jericho was awesome, but not as awesome as the ladder match. I definatly liked it though. This match had its spots too, and glad to see you didn't over do them, and under do them. (Is that even a word?) The match flowed together pretty well, and Samoa Joe trash talking during the counts was just icing on the cake. Aftermath didn't make much sense to me though, why would Samoa Joe shake Jericho's hand? Doesn't make sense to me. Anyways, the feud looks to continue, definatly, and when the two meet again next time, it should be just like this match, if not better, good. ***3/4
Edge promo was pretty good. I always love to read Edge's promos and matches, and this wasn't an exception. He's always someone who can just grab your attention if you know what I mean. I think you're using the term "bingo hall" too much throughout the show, maybe you could use something else to not make it repetitive. Edge was in character, and he seems determined. The triple threat main event should be great. Monty Brown coming to EPW should be good, even if I don't like him a lot, it should add some more star power to the roster.
The Main Event was the second best match of the night, tied with Cage/Lesnar, but behind LAX/WGTT. It was put together pretty good, some spots to add some spice, technical wrestling, clean finish, all in all a good match. Chris Benoit wasn't going to win this one, wasn't sure on Rhino, so Edge had to take it. Edge winning was awesome, and he got the win clean too. Cage/Edge should be good, just like their other battles in the past. Chris Benoit showing sportsmanship at the end was good, but I think you shouldn't have done it, he's just lost a chance to be the first ever EPW champion, damnit! ****
Overall, the show was fantastic. I'm glad I read it. Your match writing ability is incredible, tips pls. Your promos are great, your layout is awesome, well done my friend. The only thing I could ask for is maybe another match on there, six just seemed a bit small, but you had three matches go 20 minutes+ so it doesn't really matter. Great show once again, and best of luck with this thread.
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Out of Exile Review
Firstly, congrats to making it to the first ever pay per view of EPW. Opening promo to the pay per view should've been lenghtier and better, by the way. Won't give you a great rating though. Sorry. Rating:4/10
Match 1; EPW Pacific Championship; Triple Threat Match:
Bryan Danielson v CM Punk v Austin Aries
I really liked the opening of this match. It was very original - I'm talking about the three-way strength. Loved how Danielson came back from this too. Onto the overall match now, the flow of this match wasn't really good, and I can't blame you for that. It's hard to keep a perfect flow in a match that has more than two competitors. Finish of this match wasn't that much good too. All I saw in the finish was CM Punk's destruction, and the way you gave him MOST of his moves in the finish wasn't good. Looked like CM Punk's moveset was rushed there. It was like this - GTS, Ura-nage Slam, Pepsi Plunge, Anaconda Vice, Welcome to Chicago, Motherfucker, and again, Anaconda Vice. There were just too many moves of CM Punk used there, which basically isn't realistic. Didn't like that. Apart from it, the realism was fine in this match up. Only problem in the realism was in the ending in my opinion, and that's only because of lots of Punk's moves used there. Length was fine in my opinion, and it was a nice match to kick off the action! Excitement was there, but I think it could've been better. You need to work more on the fans' reactions too by the way. But this is your first time, so I must give you credit. You have a bright future with booking and writing, dude! Rating:7/10
In this promo, I loved the intensity showed by Rhino. The promo hyped the main event nicely, and you know it, I'm excited for the main event. However, I just can't picture Rhino becoming the first ever EPW Champ. LAX's entry in this promo was fine though, but it looks a bit pointless. It should be good if you're trying to hint a upcoming feud between them, but if they won't feud, then it's pointless in my opinion. Le'ts see I guess. Rating:7/10.
Match 2; Number 1 Contenders Match:
Brock Lesnar v Christian Cage
Surprised to see this type of a match here to be honest. It should've been used after the Hassan/Colt match maybe. Okay, this match was a hit and a miss. Knowledge of the moves were perfect. However, the variety of using the moves wasn't that much good. Moves like Spear (I know it didn't got connected), Fall Away Slam, and Spinebuster in the early part of this match hurt the flow and the variety of moves for this match. The realism wasn't fine at some parts too, and I noticed that you rushed at the first powerbomb from Lesnar. Writing it in breifly would've been alot better. Christian's counter immediately after the first powerbomb into a hurricanrana wasn't realistic too. You see, it made Christian look like a superman. Yes, it did. Then the referee got out, and the chaos happened. To be honest, this would've been a perfect finish to the match, but using this in the middle part of this match up wasn't good. Would've made a better impact, and it would've been a perfect ending. Surprised to see no 'Holy Shit' chants after Brock throws the chair to Christian's face though. Loved that spot by the way, but the interactions with the fans are lacking a bit. Loved every spot in this match up, and the way you wrote this contest was filled with full of excitement! Modified Stunner from Christian is hard to imagine though, however, I'd love to see that move in real life from Christian. In last, I'd just like to say that having Lesnar getting dominated by Christian like that wasn't fair. It made Lesnar look like a weak competitor. Lesnar should've been treated like a 'monster' heel here, but that wasn't the case. By the way, if you want to write a five star match, then have the heel dominate the face for the most of the time, and then have the face comeback strongly because it creates drama. Excitement was spot on, and once again, I'm surprised because this doesn't look like your first pay per view! You're doing an awesome job! Rating:7/10
Muhammad Hassan should've create a great amount of heel heat here if the words in this promo were better. He just gained 'heel heat', and 'slight heat'. Hassan was bland in this promo, and I think out of character at some times too. And this promo always makes me believe that Hassan is going to pin Cabana tonight, and then feud with Punk for Punk's title. Right? Rating:6/10
Won't really give a rating to this short promo. This is just keeping me excited about the Ladder Match. Nice way to hype the Ladder Match man, and definitely a nice way to keep the readers excited.
Match 3; Singles Match:
Muhammad Hassan v Colt Cabana
You know, this match should've been an awesome match, but it wasn't actually. Let me tell you the weakest points here. Hassan (Heel) should've dominated Cabana (Face) to create some drama for the match. Believe me, when a heel dominates face, and then face makes a huge comeback. The fans, and the readers love it. So it basically excites, and creates a drama for the fans. CM Punk's part in this match was really bad. He's a face, and Daivari basically didn't do anything wrong. He just 'fucked up' himself (Loved that spot, btw), and then Punk comes down, hits him with the title, and makes him submit with the Anaconda Vice. Didn't really like that all because that's not realistic. A face should never do like that. Also, Hassan should've cheated more in this match up. Loved the arguing, but it was dragging in the end. Ending, and having Colt win this match wasn't good too. Hassan really needed this win because he's going to feud with Punk for the title. Doesn't look like a wise decision to me. The flow in the early part of this match was fine, but just when Punk came out, everything went downhill, and I've noticed so far in your matches that you're just having the face dominate the heel. That doesn't work actually. Hopefully I see a change in your match writing skills next time. Faces have won so far, and you're burying heels to be honest (even in the matches by getting them destroyed/dominated by the faces). Rating:6/10
Again, I just love the intensity in the promos. Joe was really intense, so that was great. However, the beginning of this promo was lame (I'm talking about when Maria said 'Fat' and Joe just responded back, mocking Y2J). Then it got better, and Joe was really intense, and spot on. Nice promo to hype their Last Man Standing, but it needed length too. Rating:7/10
Once again, not giving a rating to this short promo. Didn't like Y2J entering in this promo when he's supposed to face Samoa Joe in a Last Man Standing Match - a serious match/feud. LAX was again fine though, hyping their Ladder Match. Konnan is out, but I don't think WGTT did it. Let's find out I guess.
Match 4; Ladder Match; EPW World Tag Team Championships:
LAX v The Worlds Greatest Tag Team
Ladder Match! I'm excited. Let me start with what I liked and disliked at the start. 'Likes' - Belly to belly/German suplex combo from Hernandez/Haas at the beginning, Border Toss from the middle rope onto the ladders, Benjamin's TBone Suplex from the top, Homicide's HUGE move from the top to Haas at the outside, Mexicool's turn, and everything else that is not in disliked. Okay, now, 'Dislikes' - Even though I liked Homicide's HUGE move from the top to Haas at the outside, I still don't really like the way you booked it (It's a great move, but Homicide is a heel, and heels don't do like that. He should've just went for the titles, but he didn't, and instead, sacrificed himself - Not realistic), Realism was not fine when you made Haas and Homicide get after the huge holy shit moment too (They got up really fastly in my opinion), Mexicool's turn (Even though it was good, I didn't like it as well and that's because you made them look weak. They were destroyed by LAX, but then after it, you didn't even mention them - Really bad). Okay, they were the likes and dislikes. Now onto the overall, I loved this match - my fav. so far. The excitement, energy, flow, length, and everything else was perfect. Great match, but, do read the 'dislikes' again to improve. One more thing, it's just called T-Bone Suplex - not TBone Exploder Suplex. Great finish too, but the Mexicool's turn at the finish would've been better. Great match filled with lots of excitement. Rating:8/10
Little interaction between Heyman and Joe wasn't needed. Last Man Standing is a serious feud, and little promos won't help hyping it. Won't give it a rating too.
Okay, this is the promo of the night! Absolutely felt in love with this promo. Jamie Noble's intensity, wordings, and everything else was just spot on! Flow, length were fine too. 'The Most Dangerous Man in EPW' as a moniker would be awesome. Great promo to hype the newest member of EPW, but I believe locking in the STF to a lady wasn't right. He should've just pushed him to the floor ruthlessly. Rating:9/10
Last Man Standing Match:
Chris Jericho v Samoa Joe
First off all, let me point out what I didn't like in this match up. The starting of this match would've been better. It is a 'Last Man Standing Match', and it would've been better if you'd have create some drama here (Example: Y2J and Samoa Joe should've stare each other for a good amount of time, and the fans would've cheered along hugely - Would've been a great moment for the fans and the readers, you know). Moves like STF, Crucifix Bar, and Rear Naked Choke at the starting wasn't a good idea, and the way you said Y2J is in the Crucifix Bar for more than 2 minutes wasn't realistic. 2 minutes?? 120 seconds... can't happen to be honest, and by the way, after it, Joe then turned the Crucifix Bar into the Rear Naked Choke... so I think he made Y2J his 'bitch' for more than 3 (3 because the time was added) minutes? It doesn't look realistic, and it made Y2J look weak too. The announcing tables spot was good, but the impact wasn't there. It would've made a huge and better impact if it was at the ending. Didn't like how this was at the starting. The match really didn't have the 'Last Man Standing Match' feeling at most of the part because I just saw typical wrestling match, submission wrestling match, and those huge spots (without weapons, btw). There wasn't THAT much hardcore - Only Steel Chair was used as a weapon, and the announcing table spot. Should've used more weapons like thumb tacks, steel pipe, etc. The ending was good, but could've been better (It was great, but the way it ended with a CHAIR didn't entertain me because the chair was used so many times throughout the match - The impact wasn't there only because of that). You know, this match would've been alot better if it would just had the heel dominate the face for most of the parts. I told you this at the other matches too, but hopefully you work on that next time as well. Okay, now, I loved how the way you created drama with the submission moves. It was written perfectly. Loved how Joe turned on the fans too by not going for a huge move through the ropes to Jericho, who was at the outside that time. One more thing, I don't know why the fans would boo Joe after he surprisingly knocked out Jericho with a C.C.S. Enzuigiri. They should've went nuts for that move, you know, despite Joe being a heel. I'm picky also, so I noticed some typos. It's called forearms (Not for-arms), and skull (Not scull). Overall, the match needed more 'Last Man Standing Match' feel, which wasn't there. Don't worry though because I've just mentioned what I didn't like here, and it means that WHATEVER I didn't mention there, was great. The length, flow (was good at the most of time), realism, and everything else was perfect too. Nice match. Rating:7/10
Nice aftermath, as it makes me believe that their feud is not finished. Would love to read another match between them! Y2J gets his credibility back. Great!
Great promo from Edge. Everything was perfect, although I think it should've gone a bit lengthier. Rating:9/10
Monty Brown. Um, ok. I'm not really a fan of his. Let's see what you do with him though. Not giving a rating to this too.
Match 6; EPW World Championship Match:
Rhino v Edge v Chris Benoit
Okay, I truly loved this match after Rhino got out. You were just throwing in big moves at the starting, and you were just throwing them one after another when these three men were legal. Moves like Belly to Belly Suplex, Edge-O-Matic, Spike DDT, Spinebuster, German Suplx, and Gore at the starting wasn't a good idea as it kills the flow, and the match doesn't get a good opening. Finishing and signature moves of the wrestlers at the start of any match isn't a good idea. By the way, didn't like how Benoit turned on Rhino with a Belly to Belly Suplex at the start. I know its every man for himself but someone like Benoit won't really do like that. Rhino getting out early was a great move, and loved how the way you eliminate him too. Then, the Holy Shit moment from Benoit (When he went for the suicide dive... but crushed himself) was great. Would've been insane to watch! After Rhino got out, after the 13th minute mark, the match was handled brilliantly! Loved every second of the match after it. Flow was perfect. Can't find any mistake there. Realism was also fine, not perfect though. Examples of unrealistic - You see, 45 seconds being in a Crippler Crossface is huge. If you wanted it to go for 45 seconds then it would've suit the ending of this match. Also, no body can perform a dropkick from the top rope to someone who is in the ring. I think you mentioned the missile dropkick, right? If no, then it's unrealistic because no one can really perform a dropkick from the TOP ROPE. Some moves were over used (Like Gore, and Spear), but that's okay. Overall, length, flow, realism, and everything else was almost perfect in this match. It was an exciting read. Be proud of this because this is your best match ever written. Good booking choice too by having Edge win this match. Loved the surprise ending. Great match, again. Rating:8.5/10
Re: Presenting: Paul Heyman's Evolution Pro Wrestling.
Quote:
You are missing a few key superstars, such as Triple H and the Undertaker. Should add those key people and get rid of less needed guys
This made me laugh.
Hey Para, Out of Exile looked exellent at a first glance. Been slightly ill the last few days but don't fret, your review should be up Tuesday at the latest. Just trying to shake things off and get back to 100%, but I haven't forgotten about EPW
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Altogether, I’ll give this 9/10.
