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Good matches i enkoyed it ill send proper reveiw soon

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ok but i hope you do it very soooon

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I think this is cool so keep it up, I like the format of the shows and the Austin, DX angle came off well.

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sorry this took so long...

Okay, so i liked the austin promo at the start. That was good.
Whe the i.c. title match was announced i was already looking foward to it.
but then it want going to happen...oh well.
Nice match with benjamin and carlito, orton interfearing was good, and well planned.
Diva's match was okay.
The hardy match was okay, aswell. a bit short. oh wait, it was a finish wasnt it???
Angle/Cage match was very good.
The end when edge came along was cool.
The hardcore tag team match was cool, all in ecw fashion!!!! nice call.
It was a nice long match aswell!!!!!!!!
Hardy/Robbie match was....well i didnt really enjoy it.
HBK/Show match was very good, well written aswell.
I like your show mate, its very good.

BUT.....i qoute you...

condition has been totally gone bad. Kane injury has been good but after what happened last week to Kane. i am very sorry to

say this but kane half face has been burned and his most of body parts has been burned and he cant talk also but we are

you start a sentance..and halfway through skip a line and continue??????
This makes it hard to read, and it would have been excellent if it had have been presented properly. Anyhow, still good

Lenght: 10/10

Entertainment: 8/10

Match/Booking: 5/10

Spelling/Grammar: 8/10

Overall: 8/10 a good show, with good writing skills. Enjoyed reading, but found it hard to do so...good luck with your forthcoming shows!

ryu

thanks for the review guys. did you guyz found any mistake in my raw show. if so then please dont hesitate to tell me. i will try to improve my mistakes.

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Raw Review

Opening Promo: Just basically set all the matches up, Austin not in character, not advisable.

Carlito vs. Benjamin (Orton on commentary): Alright match which has been done before. Shouldn’t Benjamin get DQ when Randy interfered? Oh well, it sets the feud higher.

Diva Tag Match: Mickie and Victoria picking up the win, quick match.

Jeff Hardy vs. Rory: Another quick ending. Jeff Hardy picking up the win.

Angle vs. Christian: Good match with Angle picking up the win, E&C coming, back and left standing. I don’t like how you leave spaces at inappropriate times

Snistky/Umaga/Estranda Segment: Short, and not in character.

8 man Tag Team Hardcore match: You longest match by far, interesting read with sabu’s team winning.

Matt Hardy vs. Robbie: Longer then Jeff vs. Rory, Matt gets fired up, reversal, Robbie with the backbreaker, small package 1…2…3, good match. All three teams end up coming, and I can see a good fued.

Stone Cold Segment: Stone Cold a bit more in character, I don’t like how your announcing all these matches straight forward and all in one, bad booking.

HBK vs. Big Show: Decent main event. Big show with he head butts. Shawn Michael comes back, a bit of outside help from HHH. Nice win for Shawn. DX got two words for Austin, Suck it!

Overall: Good show, a lot of grammar mistakes though and some booking too. But you can fix that 6.5/10

Length 6/10
Entertainment: 6.5/10
Booking/Matches: 7/10
Spelling/Grammar: 5/10

Look forward to another review in my BTB (Link in Sig)

ryu

thanks for the review and ill try to improve

edge-O-Matic

Opening Promo: Really did not like this promo as Austin was not in character if you get him in character it will be really good for your show

Carlito vs. Benjamin: Solid opening match with Shelton winning and Randy Orton coming out to set up Unforgiven

Diva Tag Match: Decent match with Divas

Jeff Hardy vs. Rory: Nice ending but way too short

Angle vs. Christian: Great match and a really good aftermath MOTN

Hardcore match: Good Hardcore match some nice spots

Matt vs. Robbie: Good finish with a pin making it come from nowhere

Good Promo hyping Unforgiven which is looking good

HBK vs. Show: HBK winnign was a bit too predictable for my liking

Overall: 6.75/10 Not the best show I have read but was good in parts

RV11

RAW REVIEW

Stone Cold opening promo was not character but it set up the night well.

Carlito VS Benjamin (Did the ref not see Ortons knucks shot to Carlito, set up the feud well though.

Angle Vs Cage Great match, the best of the show for me, great ending and the Edge and Christian taking out Angle really came off well, E&C back toghther sounds good to me.

Wow I would not want to work at the hospital Kane is in, a wacky storyline but then thats all Kane seems to be in anyway these days, that part of the show builds up for Kane's return nicely.

HBK VS SHOW/W HHH
Decent mainevent, with a good finish and the DX/Austin stuff at the end was a good way to finish the show.


All in all a very decent show, good matches, one very good one, well built up storylines, all you need to do is get the chracters a little bit more realistic as far as promo's go.
I will keep reading and look forward to the next show.


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