View Poll Results: How is my BTB so far

Haidys · 09-30-2006, 04:41 AM

Smackdown Reveiw

John Cena vs Funaki: 7.5/10 Very good match with nice finish

Gregory Helms vs Jamie Noble first match of the tournament.. No.1 Contender for the Cruiserweight Title 8/10 Good match and great performances from both.

Khali vs Batista Looser leaves WWE: 6.5 Pretty slow match but you did get rid of Khali , that should bring up some points.

Rey Mysterio and RVD Vs. MNM Tornado Tag Team Match: 7/10
Good match and would like to see more of the storyline

Chris Masters & Ken Kennedy vs Finlay & Lashley with Ric Flair in 6.5/10 Good matchup.

Sylvester Terkay vs Jobber 4/10. Boring to me really...

Undertaker & M.Hassan vs Chris Benoit & Chris Sabin - 7/10 Good match and ME

Spelling/Grammar: 5/10

Entertainment: 7/10

Match's/ Booking: 8/10

Overall - Good show, please check out my BTB, links in the sig.

ryu · 09-30-2006, 09:10 AM

thanks for the review....i will review your show but what is your btb name...i cant see any sig in your post...

ryu · 09-30-2006, 09:18 AM

so far 4 fellows review my smackdown show and i liked your reviews but i have a question.....you all review about whole show but you all didnt review about boogeyman

so if you can review about him as well then it would help me more as what plans i have for him can be slightly change

RVDFan156 · 09-30-2006, 09:58 AM

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so if you can review about him as well then it would help me more as what plans i have for him can be slightly change

I think you shoud make a Cena/Boogeyman feud. That would be off the charts and Cena was scared S***less on your last show. Although so was JBL. LOL. And the fans at your last show really wanted it too, so I think a Cena/Boogeyman feud would be really cool!

Deadman_016 · 09-30-2006, 12:44 PM

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Originally Posted by ryu

thanks for your review but your review was the same as spiron review but you added a little more it which make me feel good...and as for using the colours..i am trying hard to learn how to use colours in my show as sooon i am able to get it right i will write my shows with colours......

I just read someone saying that you gave the same review as the person above and you did that with a review of mine so don't be a hypocrit.... You didn't improve on almost everything i said so im not gonna review again

ryu · 09-30-2006, 03:59 PM

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Originally Posted by Deadman_014

I just read someone saying that you gave the same review as the person above and you did that with a review of mine so don't be a hypocrit.... You didn't improve on almost everything i said so im not gonna review again

dude what are you talking about..i have never done that...i review other people shows my way....so i dont think i have review your show same as the other guy review....dont know who is the other guy but i have never done that and if you dont want to review my show.....fine then i will not review your show as well...ok brother

ryu · 10-01-2006, 06:08 AM

Raw Preview----Fourth week

last week we saw a disaster that took place...it was umaga-armando plan to send snitsky to the hospital and snitsky almost burn kane in his room...what will happen this week and we will see an update on kane condition

last week a new no.1 contender for the wwe champion was crowned and his name is k.angle after a great match against umaga and edge intefering in the match ending it in a dq and giving kurt the victory....so what will happen between these two

also last week we saw randy orton became the no.1 contender for the IC title...what will orton have to say about his great victory

and last week as the hardy boy's were going for the victory over ssquad, from no where the highlander's intefered and cost the hardy boy's to win the tag team title's..will the hardy's be looking for pay back against highlander's

last week eugene was put in a match against the sandman but thanks to test and mike knox who inteferd in the match before it got started and attacked sandman but sabu came out and save the sandman but was taken out by eugene...then eugene called out tommy dreamer who attacked sandman and sabu......so this week austin has booked a match for these wrestlers....a 8 man tag team harcore match.....and sabu-sandman have to find 2 partners or else the match will be a handicap match...will sabu-sandman be able to find a partner or will the team of eugene-tommy-test and mike knox come out on top again

last weeek austin again came out on top as he again destroyed dx.....will dx finally take their revenge or will it be again austin plan that will crush down dx again

so much questions and only one way to find out. tune into tomorow night raw.

ryu · 10-02-2006, 05:09 PM

Raw Results------fourth week

Austin is standing in his office and beside Austin is Bigshow-Kevin Nash-Randy Orton and Vince mcmahon....they all are

standing as the camera goes straight to Austin face.

the crowd boooooooos..chants of U suck

Austin: last week you also how DX got destroyed again and tonight will be no different then the last week because tonight in

the main event Bigshow will take on HBK and Nash will be in Bigshow corner and HHH will be in HBK corner.

crowd chants DX-

as our next PPV is 2 weeks away Unforgiven and no matches has beeen booked so right here tonight i will book the matches.

and tonight we got our selves a 8 man tag team hardcore match which was announced last week so it will be

Eugene-T.Dreamer-Test and M.knox vs Sabu-Sandman and they have a choice to pick any 2 partner they want and when the match

starts if Sabu and Sandman couldnt find a partner then the match will be a handicap match...

crowd chants for Sabu

tonight Trish Stratus-Torrie Wilson will team up against Mickie James-Victoria in a diva tag team match.

also tonight Jeff Hardy takes on Rory and Matt Hardy takes on Robbie in a single's match..

tonight Carlito will face Randy Orton in one on one match for the IC title..

crowd chants Carlito

Orton interupts Austin: waoo Steve hold on a sec there.. last week i won the no.1 conteder match for the IC title. but i dont

want to face Carlito tonight because i will cash in my oppurtunity to become the IC champion at the coming ppv Unforgiven.

and as for tonight why dont you book Carlito in another match while i will take the night off..

Austin: ohh ok.. since you have other plans then tonight Carlito will face S.Benjamin one on one in a non title match.

and later on tonight i will announce the matches for unforgiven..

tonight K.Angle will face C.Cage in a one on one match.

crowd chanting for angle

and if you want Stone Cold Steve Austin to Kick DX ASs tonight then give me a Hell yeah.........

crowd Hell NOoooooooo

JR: welcome folks to Monday night Raw...i am Jr and sitting next to me is Jerryt he King Lawler.

King: hello Jr and welcome to Raw folks..tonight again our raw gm has booked some great matches

Carlito music hits as he makes his way to the ring with big cheeers from the crowd

S.Benjamin comes next with boos from the crowd and a fan chants"where is your Momma Shelton"

Randy music hits and he makes his way to the announce table to join JR-King

JR: Randy what the hell are you doing here.

King: Jr show some respect for the Legend Killer.

Orton: thanks King for the comment and Jr you better show some respect to the Legend Killer "Randy Orton"

1) Carlito vs Shelton Benjamin ---one on one match

Finish: Carlito nailed some clothsline and a springboard back elbow for a near fall. Carlito missed a boot and then Benjamin

missed the dragon whip. Benjamin blocked a back cracker, and then Benjamin got a rollup and reached for the ropes but Carlito

reversed into a rollup of his own and grabbed the ropes and the refree counts 1..2.. Randy hits Carlito with hard punch

wearing brass knucks and Benjamin roll ups Carlito for the 3 count.

Winner: Shelton Benjamin...Benjamin celebrates and leaves

Aftermatch: Randy gets in the ring and continue his assault on Carlito.. Randy hits Carlito with his Title belt to the face

and then hits RKo on Carlito...as Randy poses to the crowd and carlito is left laying in the ring

JR: King i knew Randy will intefere and beat Carlito..i knew it.

King: that's what bad guy's do Jr ,they attack their enemy from behind and beats the hell out of them.

JR: bad guy's my ass King.. i hope next week Carlito get's his revenge

2) Trish Stratus-Torrie Wilson vs Mickie James-Victoria in a diva tag team match.

Finish: Torrie and Mickie are the in the ring as Trish just send Victoria outside by that clothsline and Trish also went

outside. in the ring Torrie is going for the ddt but Mickie counter's it in northlight suplex and Mickie hits the Tornado DDT

on Torrie and gets the pin..outside Trish didnt realize that Torrie has been taken out by the Tornado DDt as she was beating

down Victoria. Mickie celebrates and quickly get's out of the ring as Trish enter's the ring and checks on Torrie

JR: that was a pure diva match.what a great performance by these lovely diva's.

King: JR that match was full of excitement and i wish it should have been a bra and panties match so i could have watched

some puppies.

JR: King you keep dreaming about that King

3) Jeff Hardy vs Rory ---single one on one match

Finish: Jeff is in the corner as Rory comes running to him for a clothsline but Jeff moves and Rory gets hit in the turnbukle and Jeff connects with the Twist of Fate and hits the Swanton Bomb on Rory and pins him for 3 count.

Winner: Jeff Hardy

JR: what a impressive victory by Jeff Hardy.

King: that was a typical Jeff Hardy match with great flying moves in the match and Rory was also very good in the match

Kurt Angle music hits and the crowd goes crazy for Angle.

C.Cage comes out with a descent booos from the crowd,

4) Kurt Angle vs Christian Cage ---single one on one match.

Finish: throughout the match Cage has been dominating Angle. Cage is on the rop turnbuckle waiting for Angle to get up as

Angle stands, Cage goes for a axe handle but Angle caughts him in a belly to belly and connects with it. Angle taking some

rest as Cage is down and getting up. as Cage gets up Angle gives some punches to Cage and gives some clothsline and hits

the belly to belly again. Angle all fired up and hits Cage with multiple german suplex. Angle goes for the Angle Slam but

Cage counters it into a back ddt and covers Angle for 2 count only. Cage signals for his finishing move as Angle gets up and

Cage going for his Unprettier but Angle counters it in a Angle Slam and Angle connects with the Ankle Lock on Cage as Cage

taps out and Angle still has the lock on and leaves Cage after damaging his ankle some more.

Winner: Kurt Angle. Angle goes to the top rope and poses for the crowd and crowd cheeering for Angle.

Aftermatch: as Angle is posing towards the crowd from the back Edge comes running to the ring and attacks Angle from behind

and Edge irishwhips Angle in the ropes and Angle comes back with a german suplex on Edge and Angle hits the Ankle Lock on

Edge as well. Edge screaming in pain and Cage hits Angle with Edge title belt from behind and and Angle is out. Cage stomps

on Angle as Edge stands up and looks at Cage and Cage also looks to Edge as they both are staring each other and both shake

hands. as Edge goes outside the ring and brings two steel chairs in the ring and Cage picks one chair as Edge has the other

chair. they both slam the chair on the mat and waits for Angle to get up as Angle gets up E&C both slams the steel chair on

the side of Angle. and Angle is down and conscious. as E&C smiles at each other and leaves together after posing towars the crowd

crowd chanting You Suck

JR: my god what a chair shot was that. Angle is completey out. it seems that the brothers has reunited or what.

King: Jr that was very vicious assault by Edge and Cage but seems to me they both have reunited as they both shook hands and smile at each other..what a night we are having JR

backstage Umaga and Snitsky is shown with Armando. and they are talking with each other.

Armando: last weeek was the greatest and the scariest moment of Kane life as you Snitsky burned the big red Machimo Kane. now after that i dont think Kane will ever mess with Umaga again and i know he will never return back becausee his body will be all burned and his face will be all burned so looks to me we have finished Kane career.

Umaga: screaming and saying Samoan Bulldoser............Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Snitsky: smiling and saying. that was a great plan Armando. we finally ended the career of Kane and Kane will remember us every time he see's a fire.....all smiling

JR: what a sick man Armando is King. it was his idea to burn Kane. and he gives order to Umaga and Snitsky to do these kind

of sadistic things.

King: Jr i know that was a horrible thing what happened last night but up next Jr we will see an update on Kane condition.

JR: King i have beeen waiting for this since the show started.

via satellite. we see doctor Phillman describing Kane condition.

Doctor: after what happened to Kane last week was very sick and violent act by that man Snitsky. and after last week Kane

condition has been totally gone bad. Kane injury has been good but after what happened last week to Kane. i am very sorry to

say this but kane half face has been burned and his most of body parts has been burned and he cant talk also but we are

trying very hard to make him talk.

JR: doctor can you please tell us will Kane come back to wrestle when he is alright.

Doctor: no i dont think he will come back to wrestle because he has to rest to heel up his wounds. and the other day as we

were checking on Kane. Kane tried to get up and was in anger and i believe he wanted to come back to wrestle because that day

Kane was totally out of control and he attacked our doctor and guards also but now he is all locked up in his bed.

King: doctor can we see him??

Doctor: im afraid you cant see him now because he is not in a good condition to be shown.

JR: thanks for the update doctor and we pray for Kane to recover sooooooon.

King: i will also pray for Kane Jr .i hope he recovers sooon

5) Eugene- Tommy Dreamer- Test and Mike knox vs Sabu- Sandman- Ball Mahoney- Cm Punk-- 8 man tag team hardcore match

Finish: Dreamer has brought a barb wire bat to the ring and Dreamer beating Sabu with the wire bat. Punk with a chair shot to the skull of Dreamer as Dreamer is lying down. Knox comes from behind and hits Punk with the kendo stick, Sandman has a kendo stick of his own and beats the hell out of Knox with it. Test hits Sandman with the Barbe wire bat. as Test looks back, Sabu
does a springboard cross body but Test caught him and hit a fallaway slam sending Sabu clear across the ring, Punk on the apron, and hits a drop kick from coming of the ropes on Test. on the outside Sandman slams the chair in the head of Eugene and then cracked him with it in the back also. outside the ring Dreamer hits ddt on Balls on the floor. in the ring Sabu nailed a dropkick with the chair into the face of the Test off the top and covered for a two. Sabu has a table and tosses it into the ring. Sabu sets the table up in the corner but then Knox grabbed him by the throat but Sabu raked the eyes. Punk went up top and came off with a bulldog on Knox. Sabu set up a chair in front of the table and hit a flying bulldog off the
chair onto Knox and through the table. Sabu went up top but Dreamer got him on his shoulders and hit an electric chair drop. all the wrestler's are busted open as Dreamer drags Sabu into position. Dreamer started to climb the ropes and from no where Punk hits the Pepsi Splundge on Dreamer. Punk covers him but Knox break the pin and hits the rib breaker on Punk.
on the outside Sandman started to dismantle the ring steps, tossing both parts of the steps into the ring. Sandman then went under the ring and pulled out another table, putting that table into the ring as well. Sandman set up the steps and laid the table between them. Knox hits Sandman with a trash can on the back of Sandman. outside Balls is exchanging right hands with Eugene and Balls going for his signature punch but Eugene gives the low blow to Balls and hits the Rock Bottom on Balls on the concrete floor. in the ring Test is going for the running Big Boot on Punk but Punk moves and hits the Super Kick on Test. as Sabu went for a springboard and came off with a DDT on Knox through the table. Sabu covers knox but eugene breaks
the pin and Punk gives right hands to Eugene as Eugene goes mad and gives some of his own right hands to Punk and from no where Eugene connects with the Stunner as Eugene turns back Sabu throws the chair on Eugene as Eugene goes straight out of the ring and from the back Test connects with the Big Boot and covers Sabu but Sandman comes in the ring and breaks the count and Sandman beats up Test-Knox-dreamer with a 2 Kendo sticks and Sandman going crazy. Sandman see's Eugene outside the ring and goes out side the ring and hits Eugene with the Kendo sticks. in the ring Sabu has brought another table and sets it up in the middle of the ring. Sabu went for another springboard and came off with a DDT on Dreamer through the table as in the ring Punk has locked in his finshing move on Test and Sabu covers Dreamer for the 3 count.

Winner: Sabu-Sandman-Balls Mahoney and Cm Punk .. they all celebrates and leaves the ring with a huge cheer from the crowd

JR: my good lord. what a match that was. all the competitors were bleeding but they didnt stop and they keep fighting till the got the win. what a brutal hardcore match this was. this match will go down in the history of hardcore matches.

King: that match was very hardcore and Jr i had never saw that kind of hardcore match before. my god what a match and Jr these guys are stupid to compete in such a violent match

6) Matt Hardy vs Robbie --single one on one match

Finish: Robbie with a back drop on Matt. Robbie hits a back body drop, covers 1..2 and Matt kicks out. Robbie locks the head lock on Matt but Matt fights back with it and elbow to the abdomen of Robbie and Matt comes with a flying shoulder On Robbie. Matt hits some clothsline followed by a drop kick and cover but only gets a 2 count. Matt with the side effect on
Robbie and Matt goes for the extreme Leg drop from the turnbuckle and connects. Matt calls for the twist of fate and Matt going for the twist of fate but Robbie counters it in a back breaker. Robbie goes for the cover but only gets 2 count. Robbie in anger argues with the refree as Robbie comes back to pick up Matt, but Matt connects with the small package and gets the 3
count.

Winner: Matt Hardy. Matt celebrates

Aftermatch: as Matt is celebrating his victory Robbie attacks Matt from behind and Rory also comes to the ring to join Robbie

and the Highlander hits their finishing move on Matt. and Jeff comes running from the back and attacks the Highlander's and

SSquad also comes down and attacks the Hardy Boy's and the Highlander's. as the Hardy Boy's and Highlander's are down.

SSquad celebrates and leaves the ring

JR: what a beating SSquad gave to the Hardy's and to the Highlander's..SSquad i wish Hardy's get revenge agaisnt you as well
as Highlander's.

King: Jr that was very smart move from SSquad they were five guys and they took out 4 guy's so i think that was fair enough. SSquad continue to dominates

Austin music hits and he comes out with a lots of booos from the crowd.

Austin: shut up your asses because i have to announce the matches for the Unforgiven. which is 2 weeks away from now. at Unforgiven Trish Stratus will take on Mickie James for the Vacated Women's Title.

crowd cheers for Trish

Carlito will go one on one against Randy Orton for the IC Championship

crowd chants Carlito

it will be the Hardy Boy's vs The Highlander's vs Spirit Squad in a triple threat tag team match for the Tag Team Titles.

crowd chants for the Hardy Boy's

it will be Edge vs Kurt Angle one on one for the WWE Championship

crowd chants for Angle

Eugene will take on Sandman in a hardcore match for the Hardcore Championship.

crowd cheers huge for the Sandman

and later that night it will be Sabu- Tommy Dreamer- Cm Punk and Test in a fatal four way no.1 contender for the Hardcore

title in a Hardcore match.

crowd cheers

and as for the DX match i will announce that next week. and this is the bottom line cause Stone Cold Said So.

crowd cheers

backstage: we see Kevin Nash walking and goin to his locker room. from nowhere DX comes and attacks Nash. HHH hits Nash with
the Hammer on Nash knees as HBK slams the steel chair on Nash face. and they pick Nash and throws him in the wall. as Orton gets out of Austin locker room he see's Nash getting beaten down by DX. Orton comes running from behind and beats HHH and HBK with some right hands and clothsline. Carlito comes from behind and hammer's away on Orton. HBK smack's Orton straight on the skull with the steel chair. DX picks Nash and throws him in a Truck which was parked in the backstage area followed by orton and DX locks the Truck. DX says now its BigShow time and Carlito leaves

JR: thankgod finally we saw some pay back from DX. that was great. King i loved every single bit of it. and as DX said BigShow you are next. and Carlito also coming out to take out Orton was a sweet pay back as what Orton did to him earlier.

King: finally we got to see the Vince Mcmahon alliance fallen down at the hands of DX. that was very cool to watch. and up next is our main event

the music of DX hits in the arena as Shawn Michaels and Triple H made their way to the ring to a monster pop from the crowd.
Triple H did the ?let?s get ready to suck it? before the BigShow music hits and he makes his way down to the ring.

7) BigShow vs HBK with HHH as Manager ---single one on one match

Finish: Michaels went up top and came off with a double axe handle but Show nailed a right hand to the mid section and hits a standing suplex. Show nailed a headbutt and then chopped him against the ropes. Show nailed another headbutt and then hits a scoop slam on HBK. Show hits a body press slam on HBK and drags HBK into position. Show started to climb the ropes and came off with a Vader Bomb on HBK but HHH gets HBK out of the ring as Show lands on the mat. HBK hits some right hands on Show and comes with a couple of clothsline but Show is still standing and HBK hits the flying forearm this time and Show goes down on the mat. HBK stands up and HBK distracts the refree as HHH gets in the ring and hits Show with his spinbuster.HBK then went up top on the turnbuckle and scored with the elbow drop. The crowd was chanting for HBK and Sweet Chin Music. HBK stomping on the mat as Show gets up and HBK goes for the Sweet Chin Music but Show counter it and goes for the Chokeslam
but HBK raked the eyes and as HBk comes down he gets touched by refree by which the refree falls and HHH hits the low blow on Show as HBK connects with the Sweet Chin Music and cover's for the 3 count and the refree slowly counts and HBK gets the 3 count.

Winner: HBK.. HBK celebrates

Aftermatch: as HBK celebrates HHH comes to the ring with a Sledge Hammer in hand and knocks out Show with it a couple of times and that leads Show to bleed from the head and HHH hits the Pedigree on Show as HBK-HHH does the DX crotch

Austin music hits and Austin comes down to the ring and goes face to face with HHH-HBK.

Austin: tonight was not planned like this and from the last 3 weeks my plan has been going well but tonight it didnt went as i planned so as my Allaince couldn't do the job done so looks to me i have to take charge and kick both of your clown ass. Austin hits a right hand on HBK and HHH hammer's on Austin has HBK-HHH both are beating down our GM of raw. HHH gets the
Hammer and hits Austin with it.

HHH: Austin you were brought back by Vince to end DX. Sorry pal DX wont end that easy. and Vine this war continues between us until we DX kick all of your asses and if your not down with that.

HBK: Vince we got two words for ya

crowd: SUCK it

HBK_HHH: Suck it

JR: what a night we had and what a night DX had. finally they got their revenge against each of them.

King: JR it really was a great night and yea tonight DX kicked some ass but what will happen next week between this war???? that is going on.

JR: alright folks we hope you had enjoy the night and goodbye.

DX in the ring posing towards the crowd

as the show goes of the air

RVDFan156 · 10-02-2006, 06:08 PM

What I Liked:
-8 man Tag Hardcore Match (YOu should do more of these kinds of matches!)
What I Didn't Like:
-The opening Stone Cold Promo

Realism: If the show was performed realistically, where the promos / commentary in character?
7/10 Reason:Commentary was, but I feel you have to work on the superstars characters.

Length: If the show is a two hour show then it has to stay within the limits, thus no booking too many matches and promos, basically over doing the show, filling it up too much
7/10 Reason:Seven matches as well as quite a few promos is too much in my view, they could not fit this into a 2 hour show.

Quality / Entertainment: Was the show well written? Did you enjoy the reading? Was there any funny/memorable moments?
7.5/10 Reason:I think you put effort into this, but I don't think it lived up to what you were aiming for.

Spelling / Grammar: Are there noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes? Give the writer a grading on this.
9/10 Reason

idn't notice anything too much.

Matches / Booking: Were they well booked, would you have wanted to sit through the match having watch it on TV, while watching the show. Was it a realistic finish? Did you enjoy it? (long or short)
8.5/10 Reason:Some like the Hardcore 8 Man Tag Match were pretty good. Other like the Jeff vs. Rory match were way too short even with just the finishes of the matches.

Overall:78/100
If you are only going to put the finishes of the matches, then you should at least put 6 or 7 lines worth of match. For example for the Jeff Hardy vs. Rory match you had 3 lines and that is just not enough (in my view). If you want to become a top booker.My next (2nd) Fury show will probably be up Thursday or Friday. When it is posted I would appreciate it if you reviewed it. In the meantime, my partner (Wishmaster)'s 1st Energy show if you would kindly review it.

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