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Recaps of last week are shown:

Cole: welcome to another great addition of friday night smackdown..i am michale cole and alongside me with ring side is JBL.

JBl: welcome folks to friday night smackdown..and tonight we will be having some tough matches...

The Rock is shown in his Office...and he is singing as the camera rolls in his Office and as Rock realizes that he is infront

of the camera..Rock welcomes the smackdown crowd..

Rock: last week you all saw what happened..we had new Cruiserweight Champion, New Tag Team Champion, New No.1 Contender for
the US title and New No.1 Contender for the World HeavyWeight Championship..and also last week some brutal and violent things
happen between Batista and Mark Henry and also between John Cena and Funaki..

as The Rock mentions Batista name the crowd chants for batista and also for Cena into a mix reaction...

Rock: so tonight right here in Atlanta Georgia we will be going to have our selves a Tournament to name the No.1 Contender

for the Cruiserweight Title..so tonight in the opening match of the tournament it will be

G.Helms taking on Jamie Noble in a one on one match

as you all know about this one it will be The Master piece

C.Masters and Kennedy......Kennedy vs The Irish Man Finlay and The Bold Man Bobby Lashley in a norman Tag team match..

and their will be a rematch for the Tag Team Titles as

Rey Mysterio and RVd takes on the Tag Team Champions and the papparazzi favourites MNM..in a tornado tag team match

and as the rock is going to announce another match....a frustrated cena enters the rock office in anger and the crowd

cheers/booos cena because he is a heeeel.

Cena to Rock: last week i came this close to beat the Undertaker and become the No.1 Contender for the World H.Championship

but that SOB Funaki cost me the match and tonigh i want his ass in that ring..

Rock: calm down....calm down...now i know why Funaki intefered in your match and cost you the match because you little low
life street thug attacked him and you destroy him earlier in the night..so now seeems to me both of you want revenge against
each other so tonight it will be you J.Cena vs funaki one on one in a single's match

the crowd cheers

Cena: well thank you Rock and since you have booked our match so i want you to make it a Street fight match so i get better
of that little piece of shit..

Rock: fine..you want a Street fight match you got it..now get your ass out of my office before the people's champion loose his temper..

and as i was announcing the main event..it will be Chris Benoit & Chris Sabin taking on The Undertaker & M.Hassan

Cole: wow.. what a great matches have been booked again here tonight by our new GM..The Rock

JBL: yes cole it will be a great night..and cole i cant wait for funaki to beat the crap out of cena that little thug from Boston, Masachusettes.

Cole: JBL lets go to our first match.

John Cena music hits as the crowd cheeeeers for him...cena makes his way to the ring

outcomes funaki as the crowd cheeeeeers for him and funaki still having stitches over his forehead..after what happened to him by Cena last week.

1) John Cena vs Funaki ---Street Fight Match

Finish: Cena has beat the hell out of Funaki through out the match but Fuanki also did some damaged to Cena by that chairshots..there are chairs,steel pipes,trash cans everywhere in the ring..Cena with a chair in the head waiting for Funaki to get up as Funaki stands, Cena swings the chair at him but Funaki moves and Cena hits the ropes as the chair bounce back on
the head of Cena..

JBL: what a smart move by Funaki..come on Funaki Beat his ass

Cole: that indeed was a smart move by Funaki but can cena capatalize from that chair shot..

in the ring Funaki gets the steel pipe and hits on cena lower back as Cena screams in pain..Funaki hits some chair shots on
Cena to the skull as Cena also bleeds from the head.. Funaki covers Cena but Cena kicks out at the count of 2.. Funaki sets
the chair in the ring and goes for his Tornado DDT from the turnbuckle on Cena but cena counters it and connects with the
standing suplex on the chair.. Cena slowly covers him but only gets a 2 count..Cena looks furious as he see's blood pouring
from his forehead.. Cena takes the steel pipe and smashes on Funaki skull..and Funaki bleeds more from the head..cena
through's Funaki outside the ring.. and Cena clean's the announcing table as he takes out the monitor throws at Funaki..

JBL: what the hell you want from here..get back in the ring you Thug..

Cole: JBL, looks like Cena will be using this table on Funaki..

Cena picks Funaki but Funaki fights back with punches in the guts to Cena but Cena with a knee to the gut of Funaki and sends
Funaki through the steel steps..Cena picks up Funaki over his shoulder and climbs on the steel steps and goes for the Fu from
the steel steps straight on the announcing table..

Cole: oh my god! Funaki has been out cold by that vicious Fu from the steel steps to the table..the table has been broken in half and Funaki is out cold..

JBL: what a sick move by Cena..

Cena picks up Funaki and throw's him in the ring and one more Fu to Funaki and Cena cover's Fuanki for the 3 count..

WINNER" JOHN CENA..

Cole: that really was a brutal and vicious match and Funaki really showed his true colour's tonight that he can fight in a street fight matches also.. as Funaki fought bravely against Cena in this match.. but in the end it was Cena who got victory and once again destroyed Funaki..

JBL: that is how Thug's are..they like violence and they like to be brutal and vicious..and tonight Cena proved that he really is a little low life Thug....i hope Fuanki is ok as the emt's are checking on him..

Aftermatch: Cena is celebrating and gets a mic..

Cena: that is what happens when you disrespect John Cena.. and as there is no one good around here to fight with so i John Cena Offer a open Challenge to anyone to a match next week...anyone who thinks can beat J.Cena in a single one on one match..then Your Welcome Homie..

Boogey Man music hits and the arena goes all red filled with smoke.. the crowd are cheering for him

JBL: what..dont tell me he is back again..he is black, he eats worms so i double hate this guy..

Cole: looks like the Boogey Man has accept J.Cena open challenge. but where is he?

Cena: a frightened look on his face..

JBL: we cant se him where is he..

as the smoke's clear and the arena is still all red..on the titantron its written"Boogey Man returns Next weeK"
and he is Coming To Get Ya"

JBL: thankgod he is not here tonight and why he interupted J.Cena...did B.Man accept Cena challenge or what..

Cole: well JBL..i am also a bit confused over here..did B.Man accept Cena challenge or he just wanted to tell us that he is

coming next week to get ya JBL..

JBL: shut up you moron..if the B.Man comes any where close to me i swear to god i will beat the shit out of him..

Cena leaves the arena as he still has that frightened look on his face..

Fans are chanting to Cena.......Boogey Man is coming to get ya Cena...


2)Gregory Helms vs Jamie Noble ---opening match of the tournament.. No.1 Contender for the Cruiserweight Title..

Finish: Helms hits a neckbreaker and gets a two count. Noble is thrown to the outside, then Helms dives over the top rope to
land on him for good measure. They head back into the ring where Helms continues to dominate. Helms hits a ddt and goes to
the top rope and lands a moonsault for another close two count. Helms goes for the Shining Wizard but Noble counter's it in a
school boy roll up 1...2... Helms kicks out.. as Helms got up and Noble also got up Helms came running to noble for a
clothsline but Noble hits a belly-to-belly suplex and springboards Helms from the apron with a missile dropkick for a close
near-fall. Noble hits another belly-to-belly suplex on Helms and goes to the top rope for a leg drop but Helms gets out of
the way and Noble lands on the mat.. Helms quickly gets up as Noble is on his knees, Helms connects with the Shining Wizard
and covers Noble for the 3 count.

Winner: Gregory Helms..

Cole: what a great match we just had..G.Helms was victorious and he makes his way to the second round of the tournament.

JBL: now thats what you call a impressive victory.. JBL discuss Helms’ title reign, that ended last week and JBL saying to Cole: you only care about guys like Batista and The Undertaker, JBL calling Helms: Smackdown’s best kept secret.


Batista music hits and me makes his way to the ring with huge cheer from the crowd.. looks like he is coming to have a match
as Batista is in his ring attire...last week highlights are shown when batista destroys M.Henry and announce his match for
no mercy..

Cole: here comes the animal Batista..last week JBL the animal was unleashed and he completely destroyed M.Henry..

JBl: Cole did you forgot. how Batista attack M.Henry.. Batista came from behind like a coward and attack M.Henry.

Cole: say what ever you want but seemed to me last week Batista did take out his frustrations on M.Henry.

Batista in the ring: waiting for his opponent.

M.Henry music hits and he walks out with lots of boos from the crowd and M.Henry stands on the entrance ramp.

Henry: last week Batista you attack me from behind like a coward which you are.. last week you didnt had the guts to fight me
face to face and what you did.. you attack me from behind and destroyed me.. well Batista right now i am still rehabing from
last weeks injury and i could not beat you right now but i will get my revenge on you..

Batista: M.Henry cut the crap and come to the point.. what you want, as you cant fight right now so why the hell are you
still standing there.. do you want me to come out there and throw you out..

Henry: i am out here because i have a match for you.. let's see tonight if you are a man enough to accept my challenge.

Batista: what is it.. tell me do i have to beat your ass again.. if that is your little challenge then i would love to do it all over again.. ok i accept your challenge

Henry: enough is enough and still you accept my challenge.. come out

Khali music hits as he makes his way to the ramp with davari.

Cole: what do Batista have to fight Khali.

JBL: that is a huge challeng and a very smart move by M.Henry.

Henry: Batista you will have to face The Great Khali in one on one match..right here

Batista: are you kidding me.. i beat his ass 3 weeks ago at SummerSlam and now he want another ass whoopin.. i will fight him in 1 condition..

Henry: what is it????

Batista: if i win then Khali will leave smackdown...

Davari: that will never happen. never

Rock is shown on the tron..: this is how it will go it will be Khali vs Batista in a single one on one match and looser leaves wwe..and Davari you bring your ass to the backstage because if you intefered you will be fired..

Cole: that loooks like a fair decision.. and i was hoping Davari will intefere but thanks to Rock now Davari wont intefere.

JBL: it will be great too see if Khali wins this one and force Batista to leave wwe..

Henry leaves happily as he has a big smile on his face

3) Khali vs Batista ---looser leaves wwe

Finish: Khali dominating through out the match and Batista is down after that head butts from Khali.. Khali raises his hands
in the air as Batista gets up, Khali irishwhips Batista in the corner and run towards Batista for the clothsline but Batista
moves and stomps on his knees..Batista stomping on both of his knees and Khali is now on his knees as Batista punches him and
gives him a boot straight to the face of Khali.. Batista removes the cover of the turnbuckle and Batista tries to get Khali
on his feet but Khali pushes Batista and Batista hits the refree and the refree is down.. Batista quickly gets up as Khali is
trying to get up.. Batista another boot to the face of Khali to keep him down.. Batista grabs a steel chair from outside the
ring and waits for Khali to get up.. Khali on his kness and getting up, Batista hits the steel chair right in the face of
Khali and Khali is down.. Batista hits Khali with the chair on his entire body and Batista targets Khali legs and hits the
chair on Khali both legs as Khali screams in pain.. Batista one last shot to the chest of khali.. Batista goes again to the
out side and gets a sledge hammer this time as refree is still down.. Batista hits Khali right on the skull with the Hammer
and Khali is out cold.. Batista shakes the refree as the refree moves towards Khali as Batista has covered Khali..1..2..3

Winner: Batista....and Khali leaves the raw

Cole: what a match.. Batista knew it will take a lot then a steel chair to beat the Great Khali.

JBL: look at that.. Batista cheated his way to get the victory.. Batista cheat to beat the Great Khali..

Aftermatch: Batista poses to the crowd as a Bloodied Khali is getting up.. Batista leaves and the crowd are singing the
famous song for the wrestler's who gets out of wwe...Nah nah nah nah heyy heyy heyy goodbye and so on........

Khali screams as he makes his way back to the backstage.

backsatge in rey locker room: rey is getting ready for his match as chavo comes in..rey looks in anger towards him but chavo
replies"

Chavo: look rey, i know i made a mistake last week but i really didnt meant to cost you the tag team titles.. i came out to
the ring last week because MNM were trying to use the chair on you and i tried to stop them then in the end i was about to
hit nitro with the chair but he moved and i accidentally hit you.. i really didnt meant to beat you homie..

Rey: i know chavo you came out to save us last week but you cost us the tag team titles.

Chavo: please rey forgive me and last week i didnt came out their to save you both but i came out their to only save you not
rvd.. if you forgive me rey then i was thinking about forming a tag team with you homes.. we are familia amigo. think about
it we both could bring the Los Guerrero's back and in Eddie Guerrero memory we will do what Eddie did the best Lie, Cheat &
Steal Homes..what you say rey..

Rey: look chavo as for the mistake you did last week.. i forgive you and yes we are familia but i cant betray rvd. he is my
best freind and tonight we have a tag team title shot rematch and i am focussing on that and as far as we bringing back the
Los Guerrero's.. i have to think about it..

Chavo: alright you think about it and good luck in your match out there..

Cole: what was that all about.. chavo saying about bringing back the Los Guerrero's but rey will not betray rvd..

JBL: i dont know what was that all about but seemed to me chavo wants to team up with rey as they are familia and bring
back the Los Guerrero and i liked what chavo said "we will bring the Los Guerrero's back and in Eddie Guerrero memory we will
do what Eddie did the best Lie, Cheat & Steal now that was really very touching and Cole Eddie was the best man in my
wedding. i cant and will never forget that moment.

Cole: JBL its not only you..Eddie left memories in each of our hearts.. R.I.P eddie

4)Rey Mysterio and RVd takes on the Tag Team Champions MNM---in a tornado tag team match ( Tag Team Championship Match)

Finish: its been intense and some high flying moves performed through out the match by all four competitors. Rvd and Nitro
are outside the ring fighting each other and in the ring Rey hits a pair of standing dropkicks followed up with a running leg
drop, Rey dropkick Mercury, and Rey gets the Bronco buster followed by the split-legged moonsault for another near-fall. Rey
hits nitro with a baseball slide, and arm drags Mercury into the 619 position, and Rey connects with the 619 on
Mercury..1...2.. Nitro comes in and break the pins. MNM double teaming on rey as on outside Rvd was hit by Nirto with a ddt..
as MNM double teams rey. Rvd tries to get up and get to the ring as VIVA LA RAZA hits and out comes Chavo.. Rvd got
distracted by Chavo and in the ring MNM hit the snapshot on rey as they cover rey for the 3 count.

Winner: still the Tag Team Champions MNM ...MNM celebrates and leaves

Aftermatch: Rey got up from the snapshot and Rvd just leaves rey in the ring as Chavo standing on the ramp points rey and
Chavo doing Eddie moves..shaking his body and rvd is still standing near the ring and staring at Chavo and Rey as Chavo
leaves and Rvd leaves Rey as well and Rey follows Rvd backstage..

crowd chanting Eddie-Eddie after the match and the little segement of Chavo-Rey and Rvd that just took place.

JBL: what is Chavo trying to do.. he wants Rvd and Rey to get seperate and each go on their way so Chavo could team up with Rey..

Cole: i really dont know what's going on between Chavo and Rey......hope we find out about it next week

5)Chris Master & Ken Kennedy vs Finlay & Lashley with ric flair in a normal tag team match...

Finish: Finlay throws Masters into the steel post, shoulder-first. Finlay gets another near-fall, and Master tries to fire
back, but Finlay locks in an STF-with-armbar, but Master gets to the ropes, only to get boot in the corner by Lashley. Finlay
irishwhips Master in the corner and goes runnig for a shoulderblock but Master moves and Finaly hits the turnbuckle, and
Master hits the hard clotheslines.. Master goes to tag Kennedy as Finaly moves to tag Lashley.. and the tag has been made by
both the superstars.. Kennedy comes out punches Lashley and clothsline him a couple of times and irishwhips him to the ropes
and hits the back body drop and finlay comes running towards Kennedy and Kennedy hits the back body drop on Finlay as well
and Kennedy all fired up hits Lashley with a beautiful belly-to-belly.. Kennedy sucker-punches Lashley, and snaps the arm on
the ring rope, before charging Lashley aggressively into the steel post. on the outside Finlay grabs a steelchair and enters
the ring and tries to hit kennedy with it but Master saves Kennedy by Giving a body slam to Finaly.. Master with another body
press slam on Finaly.. Master irishwhips Finaly in the ropes and hits the powerslam.. Kennedy hits Lashley with the steel
chair as the refree was distracted with Finlay and Master.. Kennedy hits the kenton bomb on Lashley from the top rope as
Kennedy covers Lashley for the 3 count..

Winners: Ken Kennedy & Chris Master's.......both celebrates

Aftermatch: as both are posing towards the crowd ric flair comes from behind and low blows Kennedy and Master see Flair in
the ring attacking Kennedy from behind as Master locks in the Master Lock on Flair and Finlay hits Master with the shillelagh
and Finlay again attacks Master and beat him sensless and Lashley hits Kennedy with the US title and Finlay throws the little
bastard over Master's as the little bastard is all over Master.. Finlay throws the little bastard back under the ring and
Lashley hits the dominator on Kennedy as Finlay and Lashley with Flair both stand tall over Master and Kennedy.....


6)Sylvester Terkay vs jobber

Finish: Sylvester Terkay with his submission move...

7)Undertaker & M.Hassan vs Chris Benoit & Chris Sabin ---tag team match.

the start: Benoit music hits as he makes his way to the ring and The Undertaker attacks Benoit from behind on the halfway
from the ring.. Undertaker throws Benoit on the barricade and slams Benoit through the steel steps.. Undertaker Chokeslam
Benoit outside the ring on the floor..

Cole: what the hell is happening.. this was suppose to be a tag team match.. but undertaker is destroying Benoit.

JBL: Cole you remember what Benoit did last week.. Benoit did the same thing that Undertaker is doing now.. and Undertaker is teaching a lesson to C.Benoit not to disrespect Undertaker..

outside the ring: Benoit is still down from the chokeslam that Undertaker gave to him.. Undertaker takes a steel chair and C.Sabin comes running to the ring and tries to help C.Benoit but M.Hassan comes from behind and attacks Sabin and Undertaker takes Sabin also out with the vicious chair shot.. Undertaker hits Benoit right across the face with the steel chair and
M.Hassan locks the Hassan Clutch on C.Benoit as Undertaker taunts Benoit.. Undertaker does the last ride on C.Benoit on the outside the ring..

Cole: my god is Undertaker gone crazy what the hell is he doing.. He will kill Benoit if someone doesnt stops this..

JBL: cole im loving every single minute of it..Undertaker beat the hell out of him..

Undertaker throws Benoit in the ring and Undertaker order's the refree to start the match and the refree starts the match and gives him the Tombstone with Undertaker pinning Benoit and Undertaker gets the 3 count..

Cole: what a disrespectfull man is the Undertaker.. you dont treat the World H.Champion like that.. Undertaker completely destroyed Benoit here tonight..and there was no one to come out here and save him from the dead man..

JBL: thats how Undertaker teaches you respect if you disrespect the deadman.. hats off to M.Hassan as well as he took out C.Sabin and Lock in the Deadly move the Hassan Clutch.. what a night we had.

in the ring Undertaker holds the World H.Championship belt high in the air as he poses towards the crowd.

as the show goes off the air

Spiron

Sorry this returning review took so long.

By the way, why not use some colors, and use the bold feaure??? it would be much easier to read. Otherwise good show.

John Cena vs Funaki ---Street Fight Match: 7/10 good match, but i dont know why you would put Funkai and Cena in a fued? its your btb, thisis just my opinion.

Gregory Helms vs Jamie Noble ---opening match of the tournament.. No.1 Contender for the Cruiserweight Title.. 8/10 Well written match. Godd preformance from gregory helms.


Khali vs Batista ---looser leaves wwe: 10/10 YAY!!!!!!! you kicked khali out!! good move!!!!! nice match ending!

Rey Mysterio and RVd takes on the Tag Team Champions MNM---in a tornado tag team match ( Tag Team Championship Match): 9/10 i was really hoping rey and rob would win!!!! good match.


Chris Master & Ken Kennedy vs Finlay & Lashley with ric flair in a normal tag team match... 10/10 These two should have one, no doubt about it!!! nice call.

Sylvester Terkay vs jobber 0/10 no point to this mate.

Undertaker & M.Hassan vs Chris Benoit & Chris Sabin ---tag team match.
6/10 was excpecting better match, but good anyway.

Spelling/Grammar: 8/10

Entertainment: 9/10

Match's/ Booking: 8/10

Overall: a very very good show wich has a bunch of potential, just use some colors and brighten it up a bit!!!!

now, done.

ryu

thanks for the review.. loooked to me you were in hurry writting the review and if the review was more detailed then it would have great and i hope you read my last show's of smackdown..so you will know why funaki-cena match took place....anyway thanks for the review

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thanks for your review but your review was the same as spiron review but you added a little more it which make me feel good...and as for using the colours..i am trying hard to learn how to use colours in my show as sooon i am able to get it right i will write my shows with colours......

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yes i did it..finally i learn it how to use color.....

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What I Liked:
-The Rock opening promo
-The Rock as GM
-Batista/Henry/Davari/Rock promo
-Batista vs. Khali
-The Chavo/Mysterio/RVD angle(although personally I would like to see Chavo & Rey go together an do a Los Guerreros gimmick)
-Taker as a heel(I always felt he could dominate more as a heel)

What I Didn't Like:
-Funaki vs. Cena:Fuanki is a jobber in my view(but it's your show!)

QUOTE]Cole: that indeed was a smart move by Funaki but can cena capatalize from that chair shot..[/quote]

I presume you mean can Funaki capitalize.

Realism: If the show was performed realistically, where the promos / commentary in character?
8/10 Reason:Pretty realistic.

Length: If the show is a two hour show then it has to stay within the limits, thus no booking too many matches and promos, basically over doing the show, filling it up too much
10/10 Reason:Filled up the show well.

Quality / Entertainment: Was the show well written? Did you enjoy the reading? Was there any funny/memorable moments?
7.5/10 Reason:It wasn't that entertaining but was average.

Spelling / Grammar: Are there noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes? Give the writer a grading on this.
6.5/10 Reason:You need to work on this.

Matches / Booking: Were they well booked, would you have wanted to sit through the match having watch it on TV, while watching the show. Was it a realistic finish? Did you enjoy it? (long or short)
8.5/10 Reason:I would have liked to see a bunch of these matches.

Overall:
81/100 I think your show is good. I feel you should put the full match but it is up to you. Please check out my and Wishmaster's UWF BTB. Link is in my sig.

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