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Old 09-25-2008, 11:26 AM   #621 (permalink)
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(Before I start, I should note that I haven’t reviewed this thread before, therefore I may be a little lost in trying to identify character changes, on going angles ect.)

Anyway, here goes!

- The opening dialogue helped to establish the show which evidently will be build around that huge main event between Lesner and Lashley. The grammar already is a little clunky, but hey, we’re not all English professor’s so it’s forgivable.

- Undertaker was almost Austin like at the start of the promo. I don’t think one can expect anything more from Umaga, he’s a heel, he jumps people from behind. I like where the Undertaker is coming from however. Ugh! Cena was out of character a little and you just threw in the lumberjack stipulation, which made no sense. Also, The Undertaker didn’t give Umaga a chance to except his challenge!

- I’m not noted for my love of reading matches in BTB. More of a storyline type of guy. Lol However this opening match was solid. Lots of action. I liked the sudden finish, which came out of nowhere. Kenny’s attack was surprising! Always like a run in. Ha.

- Oh crap. I hate Chavo Guerrero so freaking much. Would of preferred to see the wrestler with actual talent win the match, Morrison. But I guess Chavo along with Rey are faces and over, so it’s good booking on your half.

- The Rock was very much in character and this backstage segment with Noble was funny and enjoyable. Probably the best segment of the show so far.

- If Jamie Noble’s match was up next, then why the heck are we getting Jeff Hardy and MVP? This was a great match but I don’t see the need for either man to do a job here. Both need to look strong, therefore a clean finish doesn’t make sense in regards to long term booking.

- The RVD. Kenny segment wasn’t all that great. It possibly was there to set up a potential feud between the two men, but it didn’t quite work.

- Ah here is the Noble match. Against Umaga, fine by me and I don’t mind that it’s a squash, although many will argue that Noble deserves better.

- Okay, so the Estrada promo grammar wise was all over the place, but the reasoning behind the promo and what he said was spot on. Umaga sends a message to the Undertaker by squashing Noble, that works. Now the backstage segment with Batista was done very well. I particularly like the video Cena made for Batista. Good job here.

- It still baffles me that your giving away so many PPV matches on TV! I mean Taker and Cena, not even the main event on Smackdown no less. Kind of crazy. Glad u went with a shoddy finish. I don’t get the no contest decision though. Shouldn’t Cena of lost by DQ? Also you kept saying Cena hit the F5, shouldn’t that be the FU. The aftermath was logical with Taker and Umaga facing off as well as Batista and Cena.

- That Burchill and Regal segment just wasn’t schedules well. It seemed too unimportant to proceed the main event. I like the logic behind it all and What regal said was true, I just don’t think you wrote it as well as it could have been written.

- Solid main event in which both men looked strong at different times. I didn’t care who won it, so had no problem with Lesner going over. The spot after the match was sick, but it has been done for real in the WWE. Still cool though.

OVERALL: The grammar really lets the show down. An example “What a match, I cannot believe it what Brock Lesner did in this match.” Stuff like this makes the show hard to read. Your characterisation also needs work. You’re a good match writer however and it’s clear that as a match writer your skills are far superior to those of a promo writer. There was no need for so many huge matches on this show. It’s a TV show. You use a TV show to build a PPV, not give away PPV quality matches. People wouldn’t by your Judgement Day PPV is you were giving away these type of matches every week on TV. It’s also very unrealistic. The show as a whole wasn’t bad. I liked The Rock segment and you should of used him more. I’ll check out your next show though dude.

Anyway, I look forward to your next review.

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Opening was good with commentators putting over what should be a great contest Lashley and Lesnar steel cage I can not wait.

Okay Taker coming out and wanting vengeance is good and well the only thing I have against this promo is the spelling and grammar errors I do it a lot as well but it just kind of puts a dark cloud over the product. Okay well promo was okay I am not sure if Cena was in character though. The lumberjack stipulation was also quite random but I believe it is for a better cause in Umaga getting the jump on Taker.

Opening match was pretty good for recap I liked it. But ummm you may want to edit the ending as it has Jamie Noble down as a winner and yeah you need to fix that one I think mate.

Kenny Dykstra making an impact on his Smackdown debut is great hopefully you use him well because even though he is a prick he has talent.

Clip of WM 24 Lashley/Lesnar match is good as it juts adds more hype to the much anticipated main event.

NOOOOOOOO!! Why would you make Chavo beat Morrison I am sorry but I love Morrison. This match does not even deserve a response. No I only joke at least you made Morrison look strong and this just adds to the heat between these four men.

Umm okay so promo was good I love how Rocky just continues to hang shit and ruin Nobles career. Okay a couple of problems look through the promo because Noble would not say whom. And well Rock said that Nobles match was next but then it was not. These are little things that could turn people off.

Okay so this match between MVP and Jeff Hardy was probably my favourite match so far it was just a terrific contest and to be honest I was surprised yet pleased to see MVP win cleanly with the Drive By kick. Kennedy coming out after match and hitting the Mic Check is great as now the Hardyz will be fuming and looking for revenge.

Kenny is an idiot in this promo and I think these two could have and should have come to blows here as RVD would not take that shit. Just my opinion anyway.

Umaga and Noble was a squash match and also I am just wondering do you have something planned for Noble because you are giving him all this air time and letting him get his ass kicked every week. Also match would have been better with some interference from Taker.

Good with Armando hyping up Umaga and his chances at winning just wondering though will Umaga be a lumberjack or not should have been mentioned in this interview.

Batista promo was good just talking about his blatant dislike for Cena. One thing man that I do not like and I am not trying to harp on it but your errors you have words in the wrong places and stuff. Do become one of the big boys of this section you need to do better and actually take your time you do not need to produce a show every time you let off gas.

Lumberjack atch was good would have liked to see a winner though however I understand that you do not want to make either of your top two superstars seem weak. Also even in the match title it says all smackdown rosters except for some few superstars. Some few superstars does not make sense.

After the match all hell breaking loose is good as I could picture it happening as that is what usually happens. But just a question isn’t Cenas finisher the FU and not the F5 or did I miss a story line or something.

William Regal and Burchill promo was good I can not wait to see what happens with Burchill next week.

Main event easily match of the night mate I loved it. Lesnar winning was well my pick as I am not a big fan of Lashley I find him big and slow and shit in the ring and boring at least Lesnar had some potential. So yeah great match I loved it and read it a few times.

Okay so after the match Lashley maybe going heel by Dominating Flair. Then the cage falling on Lesnar was a bit random but obviously you wanted to make Lashley look strong. At least this was a great creative idea.

Overall good show mate but it can be improved by fixing your spelling and stuff. Also sorry review is not the best and is a bit shitty but I just got back from holidays.
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Thanks a lot for the review guys. Really appreciated. Now to answer your questions?

Im very sorry for my mistake of Rock telling Noble your match is next but that never happened may be it was becoz i was in a hurry and secondly i would really appreciate it if you could mark out my mistake in a promo or segment, in tht way i would knew exactly whts the mistake as my mistake is not about spelling but its the grammer so i will be thankfull to you.
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Fifth Week Monday Night RAW after WM 24

Monday Live from Cleveland, Ohio

*To Be Loved* is being played.


*PYRO*
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*Fans cheer as RAW goes live on television*


JR: Welcome to Monday Night RAW and tonight I tell you is going to be one good night!

King: I know JR! We will have so many things that will change possibly Raw forever!

JR: We are just Six days away from WWE RAW PPV Backlash and i cant tell you how excited i am and I can tell you, things are heated up for the show! You do not know what is gonna come next.

King: That’s why RAW is one heck of a show! You would not know what might happen next!

JR: Tonight, we will have a update on Randy Orton condition and also what will Rated R Superstars has to say about what they did to Randy Orton.

King: Also tonight Chris Jericho's Highlight Reel is back and he has some big guests on his show.

JR: Your right King, Bret Hart and Kurt Angle are the two guests on Jericho Highlight Reel.


Rated R Superstars music hits and out comes Edge-Christian-Mick Foley-M.Hassan and Davari as they gets massive heat from the crowd.

Rated R Superstars looks happy as the gets in the ring and pose to the crowd but the fans are continously abusing them.

Edge: Settle down little fellas!. I know you all are very angry at us for what we did to your poor WWE Champion Randy Orton

Cheers for Randy Orton

Edge: Cheer all you want for Randy Orton because this Sunday at Backlash, you all will be cheering for me because i will beat Orton for the WWE Championship match in a match that i made famous. A Tables,Ladders and chair match.

Crowd Booos

Edge: Oh and before i move on why not see what exactly happened to Randy Orton last week. Edge laughs as a video footage is shown of last week brutal and vicious attack on Orton by the hands of Rated R Superstars.

Crowd booos and chants you suck

Edge is laughing along with his team mates.

Edge: You see, i had to see this because i had no other choice. Since Orton won the WWE Title from me at WrestleMania

Cheers for Orton

Edge: I had been telling Randy Orton, that you will pay for this and weeks in, weeks out, Randy Thought that nothing has happened to him so he was thinking, Edge is all about talking but after last week, i hope Orton understood what exactly i meant. Now boo all you want to but its not my fault. Randy Orton is responsible for what happened to him last week. We the Rated R Superstars has become a dominant force in WWE and we are so far the greatest faction that WWE has to offer. Just look at us we have got all the gold that Raw has to offer and after Backlash when i beat Randy Orton for the WWE Title so then we will become the most dominant force in WWE history. Randy Orton if you are watching this from your bed at the hospital. Don't think for a sec that at Backlash i will have mercy on you because i will not and i will stop at nothing until i take whats mine and that is the WWE championship belt.

Loud Booos for Edge.

Christian then gets the mic from Edge.

Christian: Now lets move onto our match at Backlash which is for the Tag Team Championship. Kane, you have found a partner for yourself but that does not matter because at Backlash Christian and Foley will retain their title, now beat that.

Boos from the crowd.

Foley then gets the mic

Foley: You see Christian, these fans don't realize that who they are cheering for. Kane who is a monster, Finlay who is a Irish and does not even know how to wrestle, when it comes to Tag team matches. I have been in this business for a decade and trust me as the Hardcore Legend, IM best at tag team matches aswell and as tag team champion for more then 2 months and it feels great. So at Backlash we intent to remain as tag team champions.

Booos from the crowd

Hassan then gets the mic and gives his Hardcore Title to Davari

Hassan: Since joining Rated R Superstars, IM feeling like, IM on top of the world. In no time, i have become the greatest Hardcore Champion ever second to Mick Foley.

Loud boos from the crowd

Hassan: I have been Hardcore Champion for don't know how many months and i intent onto remain hardcore champ for much longer time. So Sabu come Backlash, i will make sure that i beat you so bad that you will run for your life but you will have no where to run because i will make sure of that as Hassan spits and Rated R Superstars gets together and raise their hand in victory.

crowd gives massive heat to Rated R Superstars.


***Commercial***

1) Elijah Burke vs Carlito


Through out the match, Burke has used all his dirty tactics to win the match but so far he couldn't beat Carlito. In the end, Burke traps Carlito into the ropes and then slams the back of Carlito neck to the mat for a two count. Burke with a round house kick of his own to Carlito's back. Burke applies a bow and arrow submission hold but Carlito jumps foward and kicks himself free. Carlito with the clothesline in the corner followed by a running high knee. Carlito goes up top and nails a springboard back elbow for a two count. Burke goes to the outside. As Carlito gets to the apron, Burke pulls Carlito off and he lands back first unto the floor!

Burke brings Carlito back into the ring and covers for a two count. Burke applies a Boston crab as Carlito writhes in pain. Carlito finally reaches the the bottom rope and Burke release the hold. Burke then delivers two german suplexes. On the third attempt, Carlito elbows his way out but runs into a modified leg sweep into a clothesline for a two count. Burke then applies a unique submission hold, kind of like a reverse sharpshooter! Carlito cradles through but Burke with clubs to Carlito's back as Burke demands Carlito to quit.
Carlito counters with an jumping Enziguri. Burke with a huge right hand for a two count. Burke slaps at Carlito repeatedly but Carlito with a front roll up out of nowhere for a very close two count. Burke quickly gets up and goes after Carlito but Carlito ducks a clothesline and hits a hurricarana.

Carlito whips Burke into the ropes and hits a beatifull drop kick for two count. Carlito then hammers away at Burke with hard right hands as Carlito whips him and hits a back breaker for another two count. Carlito decides to go to the top. Carlito is on top of the turnbuckle and just as Burker gets to his feet, Carlito goes for a cross body but Burke from nowhere hits a drop kick in the mid air to Carlito. Burke covers but gets a close two count and Burke Can't believe it. Burke argues with the ref about it. Burke then whips Carlito into the ropes and goes for the Elijah Express but Carlito gets out of the way and Carlito follows up with the Back Cracker but Burke hold onto the turnbuckle and Carlito falls hard on the mat. Burke covers Carlito with his both feet on the ropes for leverage as he gets the three count,


Winner: Elijah Burke.

Aftermath: Burke is all happy as he smiles and celebrates his victory and the crowd booos him.



***Commercial***

Backstage Elijah Burke is walking around as he passes by Booker T and Booker T stops him to have a word with him.

Booker T: First of all, let me congratulate you on your great win tonight against Carlito.

Burke: Thank You. I really appreciate that.

Booker T: I was watching your match closely and you know i felt something watching your match tonight.

Burke: For real? and what were you feeling?

Booker T: I felt like i was watching my self, when i was in my Twenties.

Burke: Its great to know that and i really appreciate that but i have a question for you?

Booker: What is it?

Burke: Last week You got drafted to Raw and tonight you are not even in a match, wassup with that?

Booker T: You know what? In this business you gotta take the spotlight from others and i am pissed for not being in a match tonight, but you know what, this all will change very soon and soon i will be the man with all the spotlight on me and everyone will be talking about Booker T.

Burke: That's nice to hear as IM just making a name for myself here on Raw.

Booker: You know what? I have a little offer for you?

Burke: Whats that?

Booker: If you want to make a name for yourself in no time, if you want to make a impact so why don't you join me! Together we will rule WWE RAW. So what you say?

Burke thinks then replies

Burke: I like your idea but let me think about it.

Booker: Think all you want because i have my eyes set on you and there are some other superstars aswell, so think hard about it.

Burke leaves as he tells Booker T, i will think hard on it.


2) Candice Michelle versus Jillian Hall


Jillian pushes Candice and Candice returns the favor. Jillian with a head scissors but Candice with a side head lock and shoulder tackle. Candice with a kick to Jillian followed by a springboard kick for a two count. Candice sets for a crucifix but Jillian counters with a modified Samoan Drop for a two count. Jillian works on Candice’s neck in the ropes. Jillian slams Candice’s head into the turnbuckles and then she chokes Candice in the ropes. Jillian tosses Candice by the hair. Jillian with a full nelson but Candice gets out of the hold. Jillian with a snap mare and she returns to the full nelson. Candice gets to her feet and she drops down to get out of the hold and then she kicks Jillian. Jillian and Candice with forearms with Candice taking control. Candice with flying double sledges followed by a drop kick. Candice with the breakdown for a two count. Candice sets for the Unprettier but Jillian with a belly-to-back suplex. Jillian with a forearm followed by an Irish whip. Jillian tries for the handspring into the corner, but Candice catches her and hits the Unprettier for the three count.


Winner: Candice Michelle.

Aftermath: Mickie comes running to the ring and goes on to beat Candice and both gets in a brawl but Candice over comes and beats up Mickie. Candice smashes Mickie head on the mat several times then goes onto hit her finishing move on Mickie but from behind, Jillian beats Candice as Mickie goes outside the ring and Candice then counters Jillian move and throws her outside the ring then Candice gets Mickie Women's Title and stares at her then raise it high in the air as she gets big pop, while Mickie is outside the ring looking at Candice with a mad look on his face.


***Commercial***

Austin is shown on the Tron.

Austin: Edge, last week you did a horrible thing to Randy Orton and for that you will pay for it.

Cheers for Austin

Austin: As the GM of Raw, i need to make sure my WWE Champion is save and sound before a major PPV taking place.

Austin: Edge, you piece of trash, what you did to Randy Orton was unacceptable and you SOB you will pay for it right here tonight.

Cheers

Austin: Tonight right here on Raw, Edge you will be in action as you will compete in a match against one half of DX HBK Shawn Michaels.

huge pop

Austin: And just to add a little flavour to it and just to make you ready for your match at Backlash this match will be a Street Fight match

Massive pops

Austin: Now give me a Hell Yeah

Hell Yeah


3) Interpromotional Brand Match
Mr.Kennedy vs. Matt Hardy (Smackdown superstar)


Kennedy is suplexing Hardy into the ring and going for an attempted cover. Kennedy works on the neck of Hardy wearing him down. He holds the move for almost a couple of minutes as Hardy tries to get to his feet and then manages to break out the hold before Kennedy briefly takes control again. A whip into the corner and a charge by Kennedy is met with a boot to the face from Hardy who then from the second rope drops the elbow to the head. Hardy is limping as he clotheslines Kennedy in the corner! He grabs him and goes for a bulldog but Kennedy pushes Hardy hard into the corner and as he staggers out, Kennedy takes him down with a blow to the back of the injured leg. It's Kennedy now working on the injured leg of Hardy softening him up. Hardy tries to fight back but Kennedy takes him down again with a knee breaker over his leg and then yanking the injured leg along the apron as yet another Hardy chant begins. Kennedy drops elbows and knees directly into the knee of Hardy before he exits the ring again and softens Hardy up before yanking the knee across the steel ring post! He does it again before reentering the ring and taking Hardy down with a short arm clotheslines and an attempted pin.

Kennedy hits the death lock on Matt and he continues to keep the move locked in stretching the leg of Hardy who finally manages to reverse the hold. Kennedy makes it to the ropes and the hold is broken but Hardy is favouring his knee as Kennedy beats on him. Kennedy mounts the top rope and attempts a Kenton drop but Hardy at the last moment rolls aside and Kennedy lands hard on his back! Hardy manages to get to his feet using the ropes before taking Kennedy down with a couple of clotheslines before landing a side Russian leg sweep and then going to the corner where he mounts the second rope and drops the leg onto the back of the head of Kennedy and almost getting a pin. Hardy grabs him and lands a side effect! He almost gets the cover and then gets Kennedy in a headlock. Kennedy tries to push him over but Hardy almost gets him in a small package but Kennedy drops on him straddling him and almost getting the pin himself!

It's Kennedy now who takes out the knee of Hardy again before coming off the ropes and just kicking him in the face and almost getting a cover. He picks Hardy up over the shoulders and attempts a forward rolling Samoan drop but Hardy hangs onto the ropes and Kennedy can't get the move done. Hardy slips out of it and then out of nowhere lands a Twist of Fate onto Kennedy and goes for the cover and this one is over!


Winner: Matt Hardy

Aftermath: Matt is still down as he gets massive pops from the crowd. JEff comes to the ring, to check on his brother Matt but from behind, MVP enters the ring and attacks Jeff, from behind and both gets in a brawl as Matt slowly tries to get to his feet by the help from the ropes as Kennedy from nowhere hits the face wash on Matt Hardy and Matt is outcold while outside the ring MVP and Jeff are still fighting with each other as Kennedy then goes outside and joins MVP to beat Jeff. MVP and Kennedy then double teams and sends Jeff crashing to the steel steps before Kennedy hits the MIC Check to Jeff on the concrete floor.

MVP and Kennedy gets massive heat as they both head to the back with Kennedy taking his MITB briefcase from the ref.

***Commercial***

Back from commercial and backstage Kristal is asking Kennedy how the loss tonight affects his lead up to Backlash. Kennedy has a dig at the fact that she is smiling before saying it doesn't change anything at all. None is going to beat Kennedy at the Tag Team match and that he will beat the hell out of those Hardy Boys. Im Mr. Money in the Bank..... Bank and walks off.

4) 6 Man Tag Team Match
Sabu-Finlay & Kane vs M.Hassan-Christian & Mick Foley



In the end, Hassan has Finlay locked in the camel clutch and Finlay screaming pain, trying to reach the ropes. After sometime being in the Camel Clutch,finally Sabu comes out and breaks the Camel Clutch. Ref tells Sabu to go back as Christian comes out and beats up Finlay without tagging Hassan as the ref didn't see it. Christian then hits a back breaker and covers Finlay for a two count only. Christian then tags Foley and both then hits a double suplex. Foley quickly covers but again gets a two count. Foley then whips Finlay in the corner and hits a running clothesline followed by his famous running knee in the corner. Foley covers but Sabu breaks the pin to save his team from loosing.

Foley yells at Sabu as Ref warns Sabu. Foley tags Hassan and Hassan talks trash to Finlay and slaps him a couple of times before running across the ropes and goes for the running clothesline but Finlay from nowhere hits the powerslam. Both are down as after sometime, both slowly goes to make the tag. Hassan tags Christian, who then quickly comes running to save Finaly from tagging his partner but Finlay in the last moment tags Sabu. Sabu comes in and beats up Christian with his hard, furious kicks and right and left hands. Sabu then hits the Springboard leg lariat and covers Christian but Hassan comes out and breaks the pin. Kane then comes out and goes right after Hassan with hard right hands to Hassan followed by a big boot. Foley then comes out but Kane fights him of as Kane sends Foley outside the ring then Kane goes to the top turnbuckle as in the ring Sabu and Christian are trading right and left hands. Kane then hits the flying clothesline to Foley who was standing outside the ring.

In the ring. Hassan joins Christian and both beats up Sabu as they whips him into the ropes but Sabu ducks a right hand from them as Sabu hits a Springboard cross body on both of them. Soon Finlay enters the ring and goes after Hassan as Sabu goes to hit the Springboard Tornado DDT on Christian but Christian blocks and throws Sabu right on the mat. Christian quickly follows up and hits the Unprettier for the three count.


Winner: M.Hassan-Christian & Mick Foley

Aftermath: Rated R superstars celebrate their victory as the crowd boos them as they make their way to the entrance ramp as in the ring, Kane and Finlay enters the ring and looks pissed as they both check on Sabu. Kane and Finlay then yells at Rated R superstars to come back to the ring as they are all smiling and make their way to the back.



Backstage: Rated R Superstars are in their locker room.

Rated R Superstars are not looking happy.

Edge: This is ridiculous, how can he do this to me. I have a big match in just 6 days and that stupid GM Austin puts me in a match against Shawn Michaels in a Street Fight.

Christian: This is bullSh**. So what if he is the gm. We are the champions and we are the dominant force in WWE history! so its us who should run this show not some stupid, beer drinking jerk.

Foley: But now since this match is on, so we should look forward to it and plan out how the match will go.

Hassan: Now we cant even do a single thing in that match as Austin has banned us from the ringside until the match is over.

Edge: That's it, IM going to Austin office and ill tell him to cancel this match.

Rated R Superstars that's a great idea.

throughout this segment, loud boos could be heard from the crowd.


***Commercial***


Backstage in GM Office. Edge storms in Austin office.

Edge: Austin, i want you to call of the match you made for tonight's main event.

Austin: Who the hell do you think you are?

Edge: IM Edge and IM the leader of the greatest faction in WWE ever "Rated R Superstars" and at Backlash when i beat Randy Orton in the TLC match, then i will get back my WWE TITLE.

Austin: Backlash is still 6 days away, now this match will take place right here tonight and there is nothing i can do for you.

Edge: Austin, you will pay for this, when i become the WWE Champion, you will be crying for what you did to me, because then it will be me Rated R Superstars who will run the raw show not you.

Austin: Get the hell out of my office before i open a can of whoop ass on you

Cheers

Edge then looks in anger towards Austin before leaving his office and smashing the door hard.



Jerry Lawler is in the ring.

Jerry: By now, i think you all know why im here

Crowd cheers and says Draft pick

Jerry: That's right! Tonight we will have the 4th draft pick right here on RAW so without wasting anytime, lets see who got drafted to Raw from SMackdown?

Crowd cheeers loudly as they wait in anticipation

Moments later "One OF a Kind" hits and outcomes the US Champion RVD with a huge ovation from the crowd. RVD is smiling and looks happy to be on Raw as he claps spme hands with the fans on his way to the ring. RVD gets in the ring and pose to the crowd as he still is receiving massive pop from the crowd.

Jerry: Welcome to Raw RVD and its great to see you.

RVD: Thanks Jerry Lawler and thanks to all my lovely fans.

Jerry: RVD, how are you feeling to be a part of Raw roster from now on?

RVD: It feels great and i cant wait to get started here on Raw and give the fans the best of R.V.D.

RVD then gets on the turnbuckle and holds his US title high in the air, as he gets huge pop from the crowd. RVD leaves.

JR and Jerry talks about, what will happen now as both the Intercontinental Title and the US Title are both on RAW.


5) Cm Punk vs Santino Marella


It has been a good back and forth match between these two as both is trying hard to get the win. In the end. Santino has Punk in a sleeper hold and Punk is trying to fight back as Punk finally gets himself out of the Sleep Hold and hit some elbows to Santino mid-section as he then whips Santino into the ropes and connects with the half calf kick. Both men are down and the ref starts counting. On 7 both get to their feet slowly and Santino goes for a right hand but Punk blocks and unleashed with his strikes of fury. Punk then whips him into the corner and charges with a hard running shining wizard followed by bulldog.

Punk is fire up as the fans cheers for him. Punk signals for the Go To Sleep and just as Santino gets to his feet and Punk lifts him up for his finisher but Santino gets out of it and hits a reverse DDT for a two count. Santino hits the Diving headbutt, preceeded by a salute for another two count. Santino yells at the ref for counting slow. Santino then connects with the STO and quickly covers but gets a close two count.

Santino cant believe it as he gets in ref face and argues with him. Santino then whips Punk into the corner but Punk counters and sends Santino into the corner Punk charges witha high knee and Punk then places Santino on the top turnbuckle and hits a beautiful hurricarana from the top. Both are down as Punk slowly cover Santino and Santino kicks out just before the three count. Punk then signals for the Go To Sleep and he lifts Santino up on his shoulders and from the back Shelton comes running to the ring and hits a super kick to Cm Punk.


Winner Cm Punk via DQ

Aftermath: Shelton laughs then beats up Cm Punk with hard right hands but from the back, Carlito comes running to the ring and beats up Shelton as both gets in a brawl. Moments later Santino also gets involved and he joins Shelton to beat up Carlito. Shelton then hits the Pay Dirt on Carlito as Santino laughs at him and from nowhere, Shelton then hits the T-Bone suplex to Santino and Shelton looks at him and Shelton then gets the IC Title of Cm Punk and take a looks at it as he holds it high in the air but from behind Cm Punk quickly nails him with the Go To Sleep. Cm Punk then gets his IC Title and looks at it then kisses it and leaves the ring.

crowd gives a massive pop to cm Punk.


***Commercial***

The ring is set for Y2J Highlight Reel.

The number rolls and Chris Jericho music hits and he comes out to a massive pop from the crowd. Y2J stands at the ring side and has a word with one of the fans as Jericho makes his way to the ring smiling. Jericho gets a mic and he is getting huge pop.

Jericho: Tonight right here on Raw, history will be made when his two guest will make their presence known in Chris Jericho Highlight reel.

Cheers

Y2J: As you all know, just in Six days, at Backlash it will be a epic battle between the Legendary, Bret Hart vs Kurt Angle.

Huge cheers for Bret Hart

Y2J: So lets bring out my guest. First let me call out, The best Technical Wrestler in WWE history, He is the best there is, the best there was and the best there ever will be! "Bret The Hitman Hart"

Massive cheers for Bret

Bret Hart music hits and outcomes the Legend Bret Hart to a standing ovation from the fans. Bret makes his way to the ring and clap some hands with the fans as he gets in the ring shake hands with Jericho then pose to the crowd and the fans are still going crazy for Bret Hart.

Jericho: Now my second guest on Highlight Reel. Kurt Angle.

Booos

Medal hits and here comes Kurt Angle to huge heat from the crowd. Angle ignores the fans and enters the ring and goes straight face to face with Bret Hart.

Crowd are on their feet and chants for Bret to kick Angle AS**

Jericho then comes in between them as both steps back.

Jericho: Now my first question is for Bret Hart.

Cheers

Jericho: Bret Hart, what exactly are you feeling, with just six days away from the greatest match and biggest match of your career after a long time at Backlash against Kurt Angle.?

Bret: First of all, let me thank to all my fans out here, i really appreciate the love you gave me and with this kind of support, i can beat everyone n today's wrestling.

Cheers for Bret as Bret smiles.

Bret: Now Chris, to answer your question? IM feeling great, i have trained hard for this match and i know exactly how Kurt Angle wrestles his match so that would give me a little advantage over him. I may have been away from Wrestling for a very long time, but the love, the passion and the spirit for this industry is still alive.

Cheers

Bret: Wrestling is in my blood and Kurt Angle, don't even think for a sec, that i have gotten older and i have become too slow to face you because i am not and i will give my best shot to make this match the best and the greatest match of all time.

Cheers

Jericho: Now my first question to Kurt Angle! Kurt Angle, what are your feelings about your big match against Bret Hart at Backlash?

Angle: Well Chris, my feelings are

Fans interupts and gives huge booos to Angle which makes Angle piss of.

Angle: You do not boo an Olympic Gold Medalist. I'm the best in the world. I came here for you. You dont' boo me, you idiots.

Still Huge boos followed by You Suck chant

Angle: Now if these hyprocryptes will let me answer your question.

Still huge booos

Angle: Just shut the hell up! Juniors

Y2J with a surprise look on his face looking at Angle who just steal Y2J famous line and the fans are on their feet booing Kurt Angle.

Angle: I will make this very slow so that everybody understands it. Bret Hart, you are one of the best wrestlers, we have in this business, no doubt but come this Sunday at Backlash, i will make sure to beat you and you will be another legend on my list that i beat senseless. I don't have any personal grudge on you but, its just that i cannot stand you. You maybe the best there is,the best there was and the best there ever will be but in your generation, not in this one, because in this generation, IM the best there,the best there was and the best there ever will be.

booos for Angle

Bret interupts

Bret: Say all you want Kurt because that's what you're good at and come Backlash! I will make you tap out to the greatest move in WWE History. The SharpShooter.

Cheers

Bret and Angle goes face to face and has some heated words as Y2J tries to get them away.

Crowd cheering for Bret but Austin shows up at the tron and tells them to stop it.

Austin: What the hell you think you are doing, Kurt! You have your match at Backlash so save it for Backlash and Bret i admire you and i appreciate for what you are doing but im not here to make you all happy instead i have a special announcement to make regarding your match at Backlash.

Cheers and chants 3:16

Austin: Since we will be witnessing a historic match at Backlash between Kurt Angle and Bret Hart so i dont want this match to be ruined by any way so to make sure, things dont get out of control, i have appointed a special referee for this match.

Loud cheers

Bret and Kurt looks surprised so as Jericho.

Austin: And the special referee is none other then Y2J Chris Jericho

huge cheers for Y2J

Bret looks at Y2J and is smiling as Y2J looks kinda surprised but happy and Kurt doesn't likes this as he is talking trash to Y2J.

Austin: Now if you like that, give me a HELL YEAH

crowd with a big Hell Yeah.

In the ring Bret and Angle stares at each other while Y2J remains in the center between them.


Smackdown rebound is shown.

Steel Cage match highlights is shown between, Bobby Lashley and Brock Lesner. It has been a hellicious match with Brock, In the end winning the bout.


Backstage Shelton is in his locker room and just as Shelton comes out of his locker he see Elijah Burke who was coming to him.

Burke: Hey Shelton Benjamin, how are you? remember me.

Crowd boos

Shelton: IM fine and what do you mean, remember me?

Burke: Let me put it like this, last week you got beat by Carlito and then you challenged me to beat Carlito in a match tonight

Shelton interupts

Shelton: SO?

Burke: So, tonight i beat Carlito and i proved you wrong.

Shelton: Good for you.

Burke: I did what you couldn't do last week and i beat Carlito just like that.

mix reaction for Burke

Shelton: Well since your so happy about your win so listen me here, last week i lost the match because of that stupid, Santino Marella. Because he distracted me which allowed Carlito to beat me from behind so congrats on your so called big win against Carlito because i had big things to do.

Burke: Well let me be the first one to say Good Luck in your IC Title match at Backlash.

Shelton: Thanks but no thanks.

Burke: Hey listen, if you win at Backlash then ill be the first one in line, to get a shot at your IC Title.

Shelton is far from him as he just ignores and walks away as Burke remains there, smiling.


***Commercial***

Jr and King runs the final card for RAW next PPV, Backlash.

Women's Championship Match
Mickie James(c) vs Candice Michelle

Hardcore Championship Match
Sabu vs Muhammad Hassan(c)

Interbrand Promotional Match
Jeff & Matt Hardy vs Kennedy & MVP

Fatal Four Way Intercontinental Title
CM Punk(c) vs Shelton Benjamin vs Carlito vs Santino Marella

JR and King, discuss Backlash card and are excited about it.


Special Referee match
Kurt Angle vs Bret Hart w/ Jericho as Special Ref

Tag Team CHampionship Match
Christian & Mick Foley vs Finlay & Kane

WWE Championship TLC Match
Randy Orton(C) vs Edge


Last week video footage is shown of Rated R Superstars brutal and vicious attack on the WWE Champion, Randy Orton.

Highlights are being shown of what Rated R Superstar did to Orton as they beat the hell out of Orton and in the end, Edge spears Orton onto the table in the corner and Orton is left in the ring, with all the blood pouring from his mouth and head.


7) Main EVENT Street Fight Match
Edge vs HBK



They wasted no time in brawling around the ring. HBK took control with a series of quick right hands and then stripped Edge’s shirt off. Michaels removed his belt and blasted Edge several times across the back. He went to the outside and grabbed a couple of chairs and a trash can. Back in the ring, Michaels smashed Edge in the head with the can and clotheslined him over the top rope. HBK tried to follow with a plancha to the outside, but Edge clobbered him with a trash can lid in mid-air. We then got a dreaded mid-match commercial break, but that was to be expected. Back from the break, Edge gave HBK a headbutt. Michaels had been busted open by that point.

During the break, Edge gave Michaels a running facebuster on the steel steps, which had been brought into the ring. HBK and Edge traded blows. Edge went to the outside and retrieved a steel chain. He wrapped the steel around HBK’s mid-section. Edge then grabbed a ladder and climbed to the second rope. He back dropped the ladder off the second rope onto HBK. As Michaels writhed in pain, Edge set-up a ladder b/t the two parts of the steel steps and attempted to powerbomb HBK. Michaels countered, though, and the two eventually settled back into a brawl in the center of the ring.
HBK gained control with a diving forearm, an inverted atomic drop, and a straight right hand that sent Edge crashing to the mat. Michaels grabbed the steel chain and wrapped it around Edge’s face. He proceeded to ram Edge’s steel chain-wrapped face into the turnbuckle several times. Edge got busted open in the process.

HBK bodyslammed him onto the ladder set-up b/t the two steps and went to the top rope. Edge managed to get off of the structure before HBK could attempt a high risk. The Rated-R Superstar met HBK at the top turnbuckle. The two jockeyed for position, but HBK gained momentum and gave Edge a gordbuster off the top rope and onto the ladder-steps structure. Michaels followed with a top rope elbow drop and geared up for Sweet Chin Music. He went for the superkick, but Edge countered into an awkward Electric Chair. HBK landed high and tight on his thoracic spine. Edge, meanwhile, geared up and eventually went for the Spear, but HBK countered into a Lou Thesz press. Michaels then blasted Edge with a chair shot and set him up for a one-man conchairto. Christian showed up, though, and gave HBK the Unprettier on steel chair. Edge took advantage and pinned Michaels to pick up the win.


Winner: Edge

Aftermath: Edge is still out as Christian helps him out but on other hand HBK tries to get up with the help from the ropes but Christian hits him back with furious right hands. From the back HHH comes in to the ring and starts beating Christian but from behind Rated R Superstars storms the ring and beats up HHH but HHH somehow manages to fight back and before he could do any more damage Edge Spears HHH. As Hassan hits HBK with the steel chain. Rated R Superstars goes on to beat up DX and from the crowd Randy Orton with a base ball bat in hand (gets huge huge reactions from the crowd) gets in the ring and hits every one with the baseball bat. Orton then gets the chair and hits Christian,FOley,Hassan and Edge with it followed by Davari. Orton is not in a good shape as he has a black eye and stiches on his forehead and a plaster around his waist. Orton then waits for Edge to get up and Edge gets to his feet and Orton goes for the RKO on his but M.Hassan stops Orton from doing so and Edge escaped as Orton hits Hassan with a hard RKO on steel steps. DX get to their feet as Orton yells at Edge to get back to the ring. Rated R Superstars are all beaten up and are outside the ring as in the ring Orton and DX stands tall.


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Opening the show with the Rated R Superstars is a good idea because they have the talent to deliver a promo that will hook everyone in. Edge typical stuff crapping all over Orton here in what is a very good speech your grammar seems to have improved also. Tag champs also seem very confident and well this faction is very dominate. Muhammad Hassan well done I am glad you just let them talk and they got nom interruptions and it was quite a great way to start the show.

Elijah Burke vs Carlito was a great opener as it was a fairly entertaining match to read and the first segment and match are very important because it hooks the readers in and with this match you definintely hooked me in. However I mark for both men so I was not fussed by the result. The ElijahExpress is back on track baby.

Booker T and Elijah Burke promo was interesting to say the least a faction with them two involved would be amazing so I hope he accepts.

Womens match no offense but I do not really care about it but I guess I would have preferred Jillian to win as atm I hate Candice.

MICKIE JAMES MICKIE JAMES bwAting on Candice made my day good effort mate.

Austin making a potentially great match with Edge vs Michaels definitnely one to look forward to and I just hope you make Edge win so he has momentum heading into the PPV.

Quite unhappy with Matt Hardy winning as I am a fan of Kennedy but I guess that is the way it goes. I think MVP should have interfered and won the match for Kennedy but it did not happen but it seems to me Hardyz are winning to much of this feud so hopefully Kenny and or MVP go alright on Smackdown.

MVP and Kennedy did as I wanted them to do so I am happy with that.

Kennedy interview was good he is not impressed and he seems determined to get revenge I hope he does.

Terrific match up here match of the night so far in my opinion but probably just because I like Christian he is one of my all time favorites the charisma that man has is unbelievable so I am glad you are keeping the wins piling up for the Rated R Superstars.

Kane and Finlay are a weird team and I do not see it yet but hopefully you can create some great chemistry between the two superstars.

Well LOL at Edge thinking he is going to go and tell Austin to cancel the match it ain’t happening.

Well I would love to see Austin lose his job as GM and then go one on one with Edge as I believe you do make chemistry between these two and it could be a terrific feud. Also am a big fan of just well I like most things in your thread to be honest.

Very small RVD interview seemed like just a waste of time to get him on the show and it was a bit weird in my opinion as there was no point of it.

CM Punk and Marella in a terrific match definitely expected Punk to win to have momentum but I tell you Marella put up a better fight then I expected and that is what I like Marella can be funny but I think he needs to be made to look competitive as well. Benjamin gets some heat with Punk here though could be a good feud two terrific wrestlers.

Well after this interesting confrontation after the match I smell a fatal four way.

Great Highlgiht Reel really got me into the Angle, Hart match I can not wait I don’t know but I hope you write your PPV matches in full and if you don’t I hope you make an exception for this one because it could be an absolute classic between two fo the greatest.

Burke and Benjamin feuding is great as most people make them a tag team for some reason I am glad that you are doing something different with them.

Street fight was good new match of the ngiht but I was surprised because wasn’t the Rated R Superstars barred from ringside and then Christian ran out and practically won the match for Edge. So my question is will they be punished for defying Stone Cold Steve Austin.

Great way to end the show with the all in brawl I thought Rated R Superstars were going to beat up on DX so great shock having Orton come as I really thought he would not be making an appearance tonight.

All in all another great show this was probably my favorite show of yours that I have read one more show until Backlash I am very excited. Also after your next show I will try to review and then post some predictions for PPV. Sorry fi this review has spelling erros to as I wanted to get this up quick for you and I kind of feel sick so just want to get the job done. All ion all another good show and I can not wait until Backlash.