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wrestle_freak42 · 09-17-2008, 08:22 AM

Review for Ryu

The Hardyz promo to start off was okay i have probably seen better to be honest but i guess it did its job setting up the feud for Hardyz against Kennedy and MVP. Maybe a bit unrealistic i don't know to many hugs and crap for my liking but i understand you were trying to show us the characters emotions so it is okay.

Rey getting the win in this match was good as i think he is much better than Mercury however i would have much preferred to have Morrison in action as he rules. Good match not much detail but i know that is how it is when you only do endings my matches are similar to be honest.

Kennedy and MVP as a team can be good but i believe you need to try and capture some chemistry between them as i believe there was none there.

Helms over Styles, Styles over Helms could have went either way to set up a cracking feud with Yang. I am personally hoping Helms gets the win but i guess that is up to you. Match was okay.

Hardys absolutely dominate this feud tonight this makes me think that MVP and Kennedy will probably hit back next week can not wait for that. I believe MVP and Kennedy should be put over in this feud because they can be better single stars then the Hardyz.

Rock/Noble promo to be honest i did not really like. When you have The Rock in a promo you have the chance to make a classic promo and well i just did to smell it here.

Batista vs Umaga i believe was set up just to progress the Taker/Umaga feud with the winner of that feud facing Batista. Umaga getting so close to winning is good makes me think that he may be next champ.

RVD wins pretty comfortably which makes me think that maybe Noble is not getting a push and that he was just there to have a filler match and to get RVD on the show. I hope i am wrong though as Noble can be used brilliantly.

Cena as a heel rules. I actually quite liked his promo even if it was a bit short.

Umaga evening out the odds in the main event was great build some serious heat at the moment i can see a tag match with Taker and Batista taking on Cena and Umaga however i could be wrong. Good luck with this man.

Sorry if review is not the best it is kind of rushed because i am ready for bed

ryu · 09-19-2008, 06:38 AM

Fourth Week Monday Night RAW after WM 24
Monday Live from Albany, New York

*To Be Loved* is being played.

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*Fans cheer as RAW goes live on television*

JR: Welcome to Monday Night RAW and tonight I tell you is going to be one good night!

King: I know JR! We will have so many things that will change possibly Raw forever!

JR: We are four weeks gone from the biggest event of them all that I can tell you, things are heated up for the show! You do not know what is gonna come next.

King: That’s why RAW is one heck of a show! You would not know what might happen next!

JR: Tonight the greatest matches of all time and the rematch from WrestleMania will take place right here tonight live on raw between the returning chris Jericho vs kurt Angle and just to spice things up King, our GM Stone Cold has made his match a special referee match.

King: And you know what the best part is, the special referee is none other then the man who will face Kurt Angle for the first time in an epic battle at Backlash Bret Hart.

JR: Also king tonight the loud mouth Mr.Kennedy will face Jeff hardy with both their partners in their corner.

1) Hardcore Match for No.1 Contender
Sabu v Sandman

In the end. Sabu takes the advantage after a trash can shot to the head of Sandman, Sabu then continues to hit Sandman with the trash can until the can is too compacted to use anymore, Sabu covers but only gets a two count. Sabu continues assaulting Sandman with hard punches, Sandman gets back to his feet but is met by a flying steel chair thrown by Sabu,this sends Sandman over the top rope and down to the floor where he lands hard, Sabu sets up a chair in the ring which he uses to run and jump onto the top rope; he jumps off and hits a summersault plancha on Sandman. Sabu continues attacking Sandman using anything he can find around the ring, he then whips Sandman into the barricade but when he tries to dropkick Sandman over the barricade Sandman moves which causes Sabu to miss and fall down onto the mat. Sandman gets a table he sets it up between the ring and the barricade. Sandman blasts Sabu in the face with a steel chair which busts Sabu open, Sandman then roll him onto the table as Sandman climbs onto the apron. Sandman runs and dives off the apron using his body to crush Sabu through the table, Sandman covers but somehow Sabu kicks out. After sometime Sandman roll Sabu into the ring and Sandman gets his kendo stick and hits multiple times on Sabu and the stick is broken in half , allowing him to bleed more. Sandman covers but gets a close two count. Sandman then goes outside and looks for a chair and he gets one. Sandman gets back in the ring with the chair and tries to hit him in the head with a chair but Sabu ducks and then dropkicks the chair back into Sandman’s face, Sabu then sets the chair up and attempts the triple jump moonsault and finally connects with it. Sabu covers and gets a three count.

Winner: Sabu and the new no.1 contender for Hardcore Title.

Aftermath: Sabu is still down as the fans are cheering for both of them. Sabu finally gets to his feet and the fans gives him a big ovation. Moments later Sandman also gets up and both Sabu and Sandman raise each other hands high in the air.

Backstage Kane Manager Paul Heyman is in Gm AUstin office

cheers from the crowd.

Paul: Look Austin, Kane has every right to challenge Foley and Christian for the tag team titles. Did you not see what he did to them last week. He single handly took both them out just like that so please sir i request you please give Kane a shot at the tag team titles.

Austin: Look Paul, i respect you for what you have done for the company and i respect you in person aswell so if Kane deserves a shot at the tag Titles then i will give it to him but the problem is Kane has got no partner and i don't know if anyone would want to become partner of that freak, you know what i mean.

Paul: You don't worry about that and just to let you know Kane doesn't needs a partner he can take them both out just like that and if there was someone willing to be his partner then i will make him Kane partner.

Austin: Ok so you got it. At Backlash it will be Foley and Christian vs Kane and his partner for the Tag Team Titles but if Kane didn't find a partner till backlash then the match will be a handicap match.

cheeers

Paul: Thanks a lot MR.Austin, i really appreciate that. At Backlash The tag team gold is coming home.

Cheers

Austin: And Paul just for a little preview of Backlash tonight Kane will face the tag team champs in a Handicap match

cheers

Paul: That's not a problem

Austin: And Paul do you want some beer

loud cheers

Paul: No thanks as Paul leaves and Austin opens a can of beer.

***Commercial***

2) Melina vs. Candice Michelle

In the end, Melina with a headbutt in the corner. Melina charges and puts up two knees to Candice’s stomach. Melina with a leg choke in the corner and turns it into a head scissors takedown. Candice catches Melina with a front roll for a two count. Melina slams Candice’s face to the mat and applies a bow and arrow. Candice counters into a pin for a one count. Melina chokes Candice in the ropes and charges but Candice ducks the ropes, sending Melina to the outside. In the ring, Candice nails a powerslam and falls out of her top wrestling the rest of the match in her bra and the crowd goes nuts. Candice nails the go daddy elbow drop for a two count. Candice with a running bulldog for another two count. Melina rakes Candice’s eyes and nails a backbreaker for only a two count. Candice ducks Melina and nails her spinning heel. Candice quickly covers but gets a close two count. Candice then his her famous Candywrapper (Inverted double underhook jumping facebuster)and this time Candice covers for the three count.

Winner: Candice Michelle

aftermath: Mickie comes running to the ring and jumps on Candice and both trade right hands. Both pounds each other head on the mat as the ref tries to get them seperate but is unable to do as Both the divas are busy fighting with each other. Melina then joins Mickie and both beats up Candice from the back Maria comes in to the ring to save Candice as she gets in the ring and beats up Melina then Mickie but Melina hits her with one of her kicks but this allows Candice to recover as she gets up and cleans the ring sending both Melina and Mickie outside the ring. Candice then checks on Maria as Candice yells at Mickie and the crowd cheers for the no.1 contender Candice.

***Commercial***

Backstage Paul Heyman comes out of a locker room then looks up and prays then leaves as on the door its written WWE Superstars.

3) Shelton Benjamin vs Carlito

Before the match could start, The Intercontinental Champion Cm Punk with huge pop from the crowd comes out and joins JR and Lawler for this match.

then moments later just as Shelton and Carlito goes for a tie up, Italy hits and outcomes Santino with huge boos from the crowd. Santino looking all happy as he gets a chair and sits right in front the ring to witness this match.

In the end, Shelton went up top and came off with a flying clothesline and covered for a near fall. Carlito came back with a cheap shot, and then some forearm shots to the back. Carlito choked Benjamin in the ropes and then sent him hard to the outside before tossing him back in and covering for a near fall. Carlito hit a couple of body slams and again made the cover for another two.

Benjamin fought out of the chin lock and scored with a reverse elbow and both men are down. Carlito up first with some right hands but Shelton came back with a Samoan Drop for a two. Carlito and Benjamin traded right hands with Benjamin coming out on top and then hitting a clothesline, followed by another. Benjamin hit a back body drop and then a modified backbreaker for a near fall. Benjamin went up top, but Santino distracts him and Shelton gets caught by Carlito but Benjamin thens hit a huge hangman, dropping to the floor and snapping Carlito’s neck across the ropes. Benjamin came back in with a springboard bulldog and Carlito barely kicked out.

Shelton then went to the top again and goes for the flying cross body but Carlito with a beautiful drop kick to Shelton. Carlito slowly covers but gets a close two count.
Both then gets to their feet and trade right hands as Benjamin hit some hard shots to the back of the head and then hit a side slam for two. Shelton has a cocky look on his face as he pose to the crowd then slaps Carlito across the head a couple of times and Carlito from nowhere his a big right hand to Shelton knocking him down. Carlito then runs to the ropes but Santino catches his feet as Carlito falls hard on the mat and Shelton Benjamin takes advantage of it and hits the Dragon Whip and covers but gets a two count. Shelton then goes for the Stinger Splash but Carlito gets out of the way and Shelton went head first into it and Carlito connects with the Back Cracker and covers Shelton Benjamin for the three count.

Winner: Carlito

Aftermath: Carlito celebrates his victory as Cm Punk applauds for Carlito and so as Santino. Carlito then points to Cm Punk Intercontinental Title. Carlito then grabs his apple and goes outside as he goes by Santino. Santino who is on outside is laughing and sayng to Carlito what a match. That was great but from nowhere Carlito spits the Apple on Santino as the crowd cheers and Santino is mad shoutiing at Carlito and Carlito leaves smiling before saying Dat's Coool.

***Commercial***

JR and King talks about the draft pick that took place in recent weeks.

The superstars are shown that have been drafted to Raw from Smackdown. First it was Elijah Burke who got drafted to Raw then the Samoan Bulldoser Umaga got drafted to Smackdown from Raw.

Second, Finlay was drafted to Raw and in return Matt Hardy got drafted to Smackdown and this draft pick is getting really exciting, cant wait for tonight's draft pick.

4) Two on One Handicap match
Foley(c) and Christian(c) vs Kane:

It has been a good match so far with Foley and Christian taking advantage on the handicap match and they have not missed a single chance to let Kane free. Every time Kane gains some momentum Foley or Christian comes together and beats Kane up. In the end, Foley hits a running knee in the corner to Kane. Foley covers but gets a two count.
Foley tags Christian and Christian hits some knees to Kane leg followed by elbows to Kane leg. Christian then goes for a leg lock but Kane hits christian in the back with a kick as Christian goes straight into Foley who goes flying outside the ring as Christian goes down in the ring. Soon Kane recovers and Christian goes to hit Kane and he hits but it has no effect on Kane as Christian looks worried then looks both ways and goes again to hit Christian but Kane blocks and hits a hard right hand knocking Christian out. Kane then hits some more hard right hands to Christian followed by a irish whip into the ropes and hits a sidewalk slam. Kane goes for the cover but Foley breaks the pin. Foley beats up Kane but Kane fights back and knocks Foley down with a big boot. Kane then goes to the top and waits for Christian as Christian gets to his feet, Kane goes for the flying clothesline and connects with it. Fans cheer for Kane as Kane sets his gloves for the Chokeslam. Christian gets to his feet and Kane goes for the Chokeslam but from behind Davari gets on the apron along with M.Hassan but Kane leaves Christian and knocks out both with a right hand. Kane looks back and Foley hits Kane with the Title belt knocking out Kane.

Winner: By DQ KANE.

Aftermath: Rated R gets in the ring and all beats up Kane but before they can do anymore damage Paul E comes out to the ring along with Finlay and Horns Woggle and the fans cheers. Finlay with his shelaileigh gets in the ring and beats up everyone with his stick and clears the ring. Finlay then helps Kane get to his feet but Kane gets anger and goes to Chokeslam Finlay but Paul E quickly tells something to Kane as he didn't knew it was Finlay. Moments later Finlay then shouts at Foley and Christian to get back in the ring but they leaves with talking trash to Finlay as Paul E looks happy and he thanks Finlay for the help.

Jr: Wow King so this means, Finlay is Kane new partner and it will be Kane and Finlay to take on Foley and Christian for the tag team titles match at Backlash.

King: Your damn right Jr! and i cant wait for Backlash.

Backstage Todd is with Y2J

Todd: Chris Jericho what are your thoughts on your rematch from WrestleMania tonight against Kurt Angle?

Chris with a smile on his face: First of all let me say hi to all my Jericoholic's as in return Y2J receives a pop from the crowd. Look Todd you all saw WrestleMania and trust me tonight wont be any different then WrestleMania because tonight also im gonna beat that crap As* clown again.

Todd: I don't know if you know this Chris but our GM Steve Austin has appointed a special referee for your match tonight and that special referee is Bret Hart what do you have to say about that?

Y2J with a surprise look on his face: It came as a surprise to me but you know what it will make my match more memorable and more exciting for me because i will be in the same ring as the legend Bret Hart. It will make my match more interesting because of Bret being the special ref what more could i ask for and i thank our gm Mr.Austin for appointing a special ref for this match. and i cant wait to get my hand raise in victory by the great Bret Hart.

Y2J leaves with a smile on his face as he gets huge reaction from the crowd.

***Commercial***

Thrid Draft Pick Promo

Lawler is in the ring and he is in the ring to announce the third draft to Raw from Smackdown

lawler: Recently Raw has been getting some hand full superstars from Smackdown and lets see who it is this time.

Moments later Can you Dig It Suckaaaa hits and BookerT makes his way to the ring to a good reaction from the crowd. BookerT shake hands with Jerry.

BookerT: Thank you, thank you for all the love you gave me here tonight. Im proud to be here on the superior brand RAW. Smackdown has become a total junk. its all garbage over their thats why coming to RAW looks so much great. As you all know i have beaten everyone on Smackdown roster whether its John Cena, Batista,Bobby Lashley, Undertaker

Cheers could be heard

Booker: You name them all i have beaten everyone so now im here on Raw and i hope in no time i become the most superior man on RAW. now can you dig that suckAaa.

Booker music hits and he leaves to a nice ovation from the crowd.

Backstage Kristal is with Angle

kristal: Kurt Angle, i want to ask you what are your feeling about your big match tonight with Y2J Chris Jericho?

Angle: What are my thoughts? I dont have to think about anything then my match against the legend Bret Hart at Backlash as for tonight, i will break Chris Jericho ankle just like that.

Booos from the crowd.

Kristal: But Angle just to remind you, you already lost to Jericho at WrestleMania 24

before Kristal could ask anything more Angle gets the mic from her.

Angle: Look! Jericho win at WrestleMania was fluke. He won because he was lucky but it wont happen tonight i promise you and tonight Chris Jericho get ready for the beating of your life because tonight not only will i beat you senseless but infact im gonna humilate you in front of your hero Bret Hart, that's right, it doesn't makes a difference to me if Bret is the special referee or not because i will do what i intent to do and that is break Jericho ankle. Ohhhh its True, its Damn True.

Booos from the crowd.

***Commercial***

5) Jeff Hardy w.Matt vs Kennedy w/MVP

In the end, Hardy with a baseball slide knocking Kennedy off the apron. MVP then checks on Kennedy as Jeff Hardy goes up top and connects with a crossbody to the outside onto Kennedy and MVP! Jeff then gets Kennedy In the ring and Jeff Hardy covers for a two count. Jeff Hardy with punches and kicks but Kennedy sends Jeff through the middle rope to the outside. As Kennedy distracts the ref MVP with a running kick right to the side of Jeff Hardy's head. Matt goes for MVP but MVP back away and runs for his life as Matt checks on Jeff and sends him into the ring. Kennedy quickly covers for a two count. Kennedy applies a neck vice but Jeff Hardy fights out and runs into a big DDT by Kennedy for a two count. Kennedy then applies a sleeperhold but Jeff Hardy fights out again but this time runs into a clothesline from Kennedy for another two count. Kennedy goes up top but Jeff attacks Kennedy and goes to the top as well. Jeff Hardy with a nice hurricanrana sending Mr. Kennedy to the middle of the ring! Jeff Hardy with clothesline and a sleeperslam for a two count. Jeff Hardy goes for the twist of fate but Kennedy pushes him off but Jeff jumps the turnbuckle and comes off with whisper in the wind! Jeff covers but MVP gets Kennedy foot on the ropes and gets only a two count. Matt this time has enough of MVP as Matt runs after MVP and MVP runs for his life and heads to the back where Matt follows him.In the ring Kennedy gets a boot up in the corner but Jeff counters with a mule kick knocking Kennedy down in the corner. Jeff goes for the jumping baseball slide but Kennedy moves and Jeff's head and back hit hard on the mat and Kennedy with some help form the ropes covers Jeff for the win.

Winner: Kennedy. Kennedy.

Aftermath: Kennedy celebrates then quickly goes outside and gets his MITB briefcase. Kennedy with his briefcase gets in the ring again and as Jeff gets to his feet, Kennedy hits Jeff with his briefcase then stands over him and talks trash to him as he hold his MITB briefcase high in the air.

Backstage Shelton Benjamin is with the doctor as he has some ice packs on his back and Elijah Burke who just last week got drafted to RAW. Elijah smiles and goes to Shelton.

Burke: Hey Shelton! how you doin after your tough match against Carlito?

Shelton: Im fine just a little pain in my back

Burke: Oh really! Is it the pain of the beating you took or is it the pain of loosing the match to nobody like Carlito.

Shelton: What do you mean and i lost the match because of that prick Santino otherwise the win was mine.

Burke: You see Shelton i won make excuses if i lost a match cause there is no way that Elijah Burke could lost a match/

Shelton: Oh is that so. huh! so why not next week you face of Carlito in a match and lets see how good you are?

Burke: Is that some kind of a challenge?

Shelton: Yes. Now be a man and accept it.

Burke with a smile: Ok Ok i accept it but you should have chosen a better wrestler as Carlito is not even in my league.

Burke than stabs Shelton in the back as Shelton scream in pain and Burke leaves as Shelton says, boy you aint better then me.

***Commercial***

WrestleMania 24 match Highlight is shown between Chris Jericho vs Kurt Angle in which the returning Chris Jericho placed his best friend Chris Benoit who beat Kurt Angle.

Backstage WWE Champion Randy Orton is shown walking in the backstage with his WWE title on his shoulders as from behind Edge attacks Orton along with Team Rated R superstars. Its Edge-Hassan-Christian-Foley and Davari beating up Orton. Edge then gets Orton and slams him into the steel shelters and the fans are on their feet and boooing the heels. Edge has a sadistic look on his face as he talks trash to Orton before beating up him more. Hassan then hits Orton with a trash can as Foley and Christian double teams and lifts Orton up in the air and throws him into the WWE truck. Orton has a cut on his forehead and he starts bleeding.

Edge tells his team mates to drag him to the ring as Edge on his way hits some wwe staff for getting in his way. Christian and Hassan drags Orton to the the ring as davari holding Hassan Hardocore Title and he is carrying Orton WWE Title. Soon as Edge comes through the curtain along with his team mates a huge huge booos and you suck chant could be heard from the whole arena.

Edge without a mic says shut up as Christian and Hassan drags Orton to the ring and gets him in the ring as Edge gets a Ladder to the ring and Foley gets the table in the ring as Hassan brings in some chairs to the ring. Hassan then gets Orton to his feet along with Foley as Edge hits Orton with the ladder straight to the skull. Loud boos from the crowd. Christian then sets up the table into the corner of the ring. Foley then hits his famous double arm DDT on chair followed by christian Unprettier and Hassan Camel Clutch. Edge with a sick smile on his face holds his head as he orders Christian and Hassan to get Orton on his feet as Christian and Hassan gets Orton near the table which is set in the corner and holds him for EDGE. Edge gets a mic and says Orton our match at Backlash will be a match which i made famous the Tables, Ladders and Chair match and in no time Edge then Spears Orton right into the table. Edge then gets WWE TITLE and takes a look at it then holds it high in the air as you suck chants could still be heard from the crowd. Team Rated R superstars then stands tall in the ring and raise their hand as we go to a commercial break.

***Commercial***

During the break, Orton is in very critical condition and Orton has been sent immediately to the nearest hospital.

6) Special refree Match and WrestleMania 24 rematch
Chris Jericho vs kurt Angle and the Special Refree is Bret Hart

Just as the match started, Angle slapped Jericho and Jericho slaps back. Jericho clotheslines Angle then chops him into the ropes. In the end, Jericho elevated Angle over the ropes out to the floor. As Angle was trying to come back in Jericho hit him with a springboard dropkick. On the outside Angle slammed Jericho's face into the announce table. Angle whipped Jericho into the steps. Jericho countered with a moonsault off the steps on Angle. Jericho sends Angle in the ring and covers him but gets a two count. Jericho then goes to the top but Angle quickly hits a belly to belly suplex off the top on Jericho for a two count. Angle doesn't looks happy as he gets in Bret face saying it was a three count but Bret refuses it as Angle pounds Jericho down in the corner then hits a suplex for another two count. Angle sucks chants. Angle locks on a reverse chinlock. Jericho hit a double arm hook into a backbreaker on Angle for a two count. Angle comes back with a belly to back suplex for a two count. Angle grounds Jericho again with another reverse chinlock. Angle with a arm bar takedown on Jericho for a two count. Angle pounds on Jericho in the corner again. Jericho hits Angle with a spinning heel kick. Jericho follows up with a bulldog on Angle. Jericho then hits Angle with a flying forearm for a two count. Jericho countered Angle's huricanrana but may have hurt his elbow. Angle locks on a arm bar submission. Jericho gets to the ropes but Angle doesn't release the hold as Bret counts till four then Angle releases the hold. Angle then hits his multiple german suplex and covers Jericho but Jericho kicks out! Angle can't believe it and goes out to the floor and gets a chair. The ref Bret Hart tried to take the Chair away. This enabled Jericho to lock on the walls of Jericho. Angle made it to the ropes to break the hold. This time Jericho is not letting him go as Bret counts and Jericho releases the hold. Jericho then waits for Angle to get to his feet and Jericho goes for the Code Breaker but Angle gets him in the Ankle Lock. Jericho is screaming in pain as Angle applied more pressure to it. Bret asks Y2J if he wants to tap out but Jericho refuses as Angle puts more and more pressure to it. Jericho slowly makes it to the ropes but Angle drags him back to the center of the ring. Jericho then somehow gets out of the Ankle Lock which sends Angle shoulder first into the steel post. Jericho connects with the Code Breaker this time. Jericho is still in pain as he slowly covers Angle but he gets a very close two count and Jericho can't believe it. Jericho gets a word with Bret that it was a three count. Jericho goes back to Angle but Angle with a eye rake to Jericho then Angle quickly hits the Angle Slam.
Angle covers. 1...2....3.

Winner: Kurt Angle

Aftermath: massive boos for Angle. Angle gets to his feet from the help of the ropes. Angle celebrates then order's Bret to raise his hand which is a refree job as so Bret raise his hand. Angle then looks at Bret and says this is nothing what i will do to you at Backlash. Angle leaves smiling as Bret checks on Jericho. After sometime. Jericho gets to his feet and he is mad at loosing his match but the crowd gives him a standing ovation for brilliant performance. Bret and Jericho then hugs each other as the crowd cheers for them.

**ThunderMan** · 09-19-2008, 08:43 AM

Okay 1st thing I have noticed about your opening commentary is your lack of consistent capitalisation of letters

Match 1: Now this was a fantastic opener of the show. I love how you have the Hardcore Title on RAW and Sandman and Sabu may botch more in IRL but it was a cool opening, my only problem is I don't know who is heel and face. It looks like both are faces though.

"Backstage Kane Manager Paul Heyman is in Gm AUstin office" what does this mean?

Anyway, I thought Austin was way off, by saying he respected Heyman etc.. Kane is looking strong though. Heyman was in character and I liked how he called Austin, Mr. Austin. Foley & Christian look an interesting tandem.

Match 2: I don't like Candice or Melina, so I didn't care much for this, The match was good but I feel you needed give the fans a solid midcard match next rather than this. However Mickie coming down at the end was good and made her look a strong heel.

Match 3: Carlito and Shelton was a good match and your matches are really wrote well, although sometimes hard to understand. The IC division is strong and I hope to see Carlito/Punk in the near future.

Match 4: Is Rated R (Christian & Foley?). I dunno anyway the match ending in DQ was good to build up the feud. Finlay coming out was predictable as you mentioned him being drafted just before. I did not see the need for Hornswoggle coming down though

Angle promo was good, but I wish you would sort out your grammar, so its hard to read. Still it was good and nice build up for the main event.

Match 5: Hmm, interesting match, take your time when you are writing as this was hard to understand. Kennedy gets a cheap win in a lacklsuter match. I hope you can build on this feud. But Kennedy as MITB should not be in a tag feud.

Burke stabs Shelton wtf! A Full on stab with a knife

Promo: Damn Rated R are fuckin awesome heels. This was a well done segment and I never saw it coming at all. I really hope to see Edge/Orton in a TLC match for the WWE Title, after the beating he took by all the weapons. Fantastic stuff here

Match 6: First off, it was good of you to show some action from what happened at Mania, so I know how the match came about. Tbh, The ending was a little anti-climatic. The eye rake into the Angle Slam

. I was expecting something cool and there was no WOW! Space out the matches into a few paragraphs next time, to make it easier read.

Overall: It was not by any means a bad show, But the promos and the main event weren't that good. You spelling and grammar are a problem, but as soon as you sort that out, it's all good. Best part was by far the "Orton Being Attacked" segment.

racer · 09-19-2008, 10:00 AM

RACER'S REVIEW

Sabu vs. Sandman: Great Opener, good way to get everybody tuned into the show, well done on using a good selection of moves from Sabu’s move set and I’m glad he won, he has to be one of the best if not the best ‘Hardcore’ wrestlers around.

Heyman/Austin: Honestly, Austin wasn’t in character, although I do look forward to Kane defeat Foley and Christian at backlash. I would recommend you try to improve on getting Austin in ‘Character’.

Melina vs. Candice Michelle: Good Match I guess, honestly hoping Melina picked up the win, anyway I enjoy your match writing although the seems to be a fair few grammar/spelling error’s throughout the show thus far

Shelton vs. Carlito: Very Interesting match, although I hate to see Shelton be put as a jobber, so hopefully he can fight his way back to the title scene. Lol at Santino being spat at, serves him right.

Foley and Christian vs. Kane: Good way to keep the question going on who can win at backlash seeing as Foley and Christian had to DQ themselves, “Shock” to see Finlay as his partner should be good, a Monsterish/Psycho and a Man Who loves to Fight, can’t wait to see them in action…

Y2J: Short but to the point a little hard to read, please try work on your grammar/spelling although, good to see you get a Legend like Bret Hart involved

Booker To RAW: Well Not too much to comment on…

Angle: I have to say you captured Kurt Angle’s Heel side great, I enjoyed the little promo and is making me look forward to the main event as well as Backlash with Bret Hart vs. Kurt Angle…

J.Hardy vs. Kennedy: yeah, no real surprise that MVP ran in to attack Jeff Hardy as well as to break up pins etc… would of loved to see Matt Hardy really belt MVP though.

Shelton/Bruke: Okay Firstly What The F*…Hell, Bruke stabbed Shelton is this a first? Although I would love to see where you go with this, even though it was very out of the blue.

Orton/Rated R: Awesome Promo/Segment, a TLC between Randy and Edge would be awesome, good way to put Rated R as major heels as well..can’t wait for backlash already…

Main Event: Y2J vs. Kurt Angle: alright match, I was expecting Bret Hart to interfere more with Kurt Angle’s chances of winning, but I guess you want to save it all up for backlash.

Well the show was pretty good although there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the whole of the show, anyway keep working at it, hopefully this review helped you out, good luck with your next show

**RKO** · 09-19-2008, 02:53 PM

RKO's raw review

Sabu/Sandman: Great first match. Really loved this from start to finish. It looked like a proper hardcore match and I am glad Sabu won since he is my hardcore legend.

Austin/Heyman segment: This segment was not that great, sorry. I did not like Austin's character since he was not in his usual self and seemed dull. On the other hand, Heyman was in character and I like this idea of the fued.

Melina/Candice: This was an alright match. I would rather wish Melina won this since I don't like Candice. The ending was kind of good but lots of spelling mistakes in this.

Shelton/Carlito: Very good match but kind of long. I liked the match throughout but Shelton should have won this match. He looked weak in this.

Handicap match: This was an okay match. DQ was fine by me but nice to see Finlay come in there.

Y2J segment: It was too hard to read. Could not understand what you were on here but this fued seems interesting to say the least.

Draft Pick: Nice to see Booker T is now on raw, good draft pick.

Angle segment: Too many segments together. But I liked this promo. Angle was spot on and portrayed a very good heel here. Cannot wait to see what happens next.

Hardy/Kennedy: It was not that interesting to read since I did not get half the match. I like this fued and why is Kennedy in a tag team when he also has the MITB?

Burke/Shelton segment: WTF???

Orton/Rated R: Best promo by far. I loved this and Rated R, are too damn good. Orton and Edge in a TLC match should be epic. Backlash will be awesomeness.

Angle/Y2J: It was an alright match. I would've thought Y2J would win this because of Bret Hart but its okay. The ending wasn't too good imo.

Overall: It was quite a good show but spelling/grammar let you down here.

TheGreatLorenzo · 09-20-2008, 06:38 AM

The Great Lorenzo’s Raw Review

The first match is solid. Some sentences go on for a while, and this ruins the atmosphere, to be fair. I like how the weapons were used, you obviously have knowledge of the Hardcore scene. This is good. Nice to see the pair respect each other afterwards, because they’re both ECW Originals, and you wouldn’t expect anything else. In all honesty, I was expecting an opening promo instead, but this is a strong opener.

This promo was very hard to read. Something I really notice about your shows is that your grammar and spelling is a bit of a let-down. It takes away from the professionalism of the show, and doesn’t make me feel like I’m watching a great show unfold, it feels that I’m reading a few thrown together paragraphs. This needs work. Right, I thought a lot of this promo was out of character, especially Austin. I like the idea of Kane winning both titles, and I expect that he’ll win later to show some dominance.

Now, this match was fine. Not much to say, although I will say that at this point in the Mickie/Candice feud, this is exactly what should happen, and exactly what I would have done, or anyone else, I’m sure. Nice move here, all of it.

Interesting that Santino and CM Punk are out for the match. Carlito winning is a solid result, and it sets the IC Title feud out nicely. It would be nice if there was a video package or some commentary about who was facing who at Backlash, so we know what’s going on. Seeing Shelton as a type of jobber makes me shiver, but not as much as what happens to him later, you freak…

Um, although you’ve had breaks in between each of them, you’ve had three matches in a row without a promo. That’s not very realistic. The match makes it seem very hard on Kane, and there was none of the ass-kicking I thought Kane would hand out, which is odd, but it makes Foley and Christian seem very credible Champs with the constant teamwork, which is good. Hassan and Daivari is surprising, but I didn’t read your last Raw fully, so I don’t know the situation. DQ ending is good choice. Finlay? Sweet, that’s a great team. Don’t see the point in Hornswoggle coming down, he’d just be a hindrance, but it’s your show.

Short, hard to read again, promo. Just like with SD, I can’t distinguish between speech and stage directions. This starts to get on your nerves after a while. If I’m right, Jericho was helping Bret last week, so I would expect (since the pair are being made out to be friends) that Jericho would just be saying how easy it’ll make it for him. He was out of character, too, I’m afraid – it just didn’t seem like Y2J to me, except ‘Jericholics’ and ‘A** clowns’. You got across that the fans were on his side well, though.

Booker T! I think this guy’s great, you’ve made a good choice here. Hopefully he’ll make a huge impact. He was pretty much in character here, so well done.

This Angle interview was much easier to read, and you got him dead on, well done. Now you’ve had three promos in a row, and I can’t help thinking that you couldn’t have just slipped these three in between your three matches. Still, very good promo here, so thank you for making it easy to read.

As I said in my SD review, I really like this cross-brand feud. After this, I haven’t a clue as to who will win at Backlash, but still. Good match, and as I said in the SD review, I hope you throw Kennedy and his MITB Briefcase in the deep end after this feud is done.

Holy… I can’t believe how casually you wrote this! It was like, ‘Yeah, he got stabbed, what’s for lunch?’ I was stunned. What happened to the doctor, anyway? You didn’t say much about his reaction to the incident. It’ll certainly turn heads, this promo, but any kids watching would be scarred. Poor Shelton.

This was one hell of a promo, seriously. Never saw it coming, and they gave Orton one hell of a beating. Would have been rather funny to see Orton just go wild and kick some ass, but that would be terribly unrealistic. Still, Rated R were made to come across as really awesome heels, and this was, without a doubt, your best promo. Orton/Edge will be great in TLC, and I predict it’ll be like Edge/Taker – lots of times with Orton climbing the ladder, but Edge’s stable just bringing him down each time. Looks great.

This was a very good ME, but I can’t believe that Bret didn’t interfere more than he did. I was expecting a quick count after the Codebreaker, and a slow one after the Angle Slam, but nothing. I didn’t like this. Still, this is a potential world-class feud, and it’ll be good to see where you go with it.

Overall, this was a better show than SD. Really interesting parts to it, like Orton being attacked, Shelton being stabbed and a good ME. Towards the end of the show your grammar and spelling seemed better, but it still needs work. Before you work on anything to do with storylines, you have to fix your grammar and spelling, because otherwise it’s hard for someone to take your show seriously, because they start asking themselves ‘Hey, who wrote this, a five year old?’ no matter how good the storylines are. Ups and downs all over, but a solid show. I’ll give it a 7.5/10.

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