View Poll Results: How is my BTB so far

**RKO** · 09-07-2008, 03:00 PM

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Originally Posted by WWE_kane4EVA

Sorry im really new to reviewing BTB

Oh okay, I understand then.

ryu · 09-12-2008, 07:02 AM

Thanks for the review and soon it will be returned and Smackdown will be posted Soon.

ryu · 09-12-2008, 05:17 PM

Third Week Friday Night Smackdown after WM 24

Friday Live from Albany, New York

*Rise up* is being played.

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*Fans cheer as Smackdown goes live on television*

JBL: Welcome to Friday Night Smackdown and tonight I tell you Cole itss going to be one good night!

Cole: I know JBL! Tonight history will be made again when the brash John Cena goes one on one with the Phenom, The deadmen the Umdertaker.

JBL: Cole! I cant wait for that match to happen and what about the WHC Batista taking on the freakzilla, the samoan bulldozer UUUMAAGAA.

Cole: That’s why Smackdown is one heck of a show! You would not know what might happen next!

Hardy Boys music hits and they make their way to the ring as the crowd gives them a massive pop. Hardy's clap hands with the fans and enters the ring does their pose to the crowd and gets more pop then Matt gets a mic.

Matt: I know all of you in the arena are surprised to see us on Smackdown because we both are RAW superstars but there's a reason for that so let me come to the point 1st. We are here because on WWE.com MVP challenged me to a match at Smackdown on his home turf so i had no other option but to accept his challenge and kick his ass right here on Smackdown.

Matt receives huge pop.

Matt: And secondly there is another reason im here which will make my brother very upset and sad because im the guy who has been drafted to Smackdown from Raw.

gets loads of big pop from the crowd but Jeff doesn't looks happy as he looks sad and hugs his brother.

Jeff: Its very sad that we are being seprated as you all know im still on RAW and my brother who was also on RAW before today as he has been drafted to Smackdown which is not good for the Hardy fans

Booos from crowd

Matt: So lets move on and prepare for tonight match and just to let you all know that Mr.Kennedy has challenged us into a tag team match for Backlash and it will be Matt and Jeff vs Kennedy and MVP.

Pops from crowd.

Hardy music hits and they both hug each other as the fans give them a standing ovation.

1) Tag Team Champs vs No,1 contender's for Tag Team title
Rey w/Chavo vs Mercury w/Morison

In the end, Mercury is working on Rey's arm as he hits some knee to Rey arm and locks in the arm bar but after sometime Rey finally gets out of it. Mercury goes mad at the ref as he whips Rey into the ropes but Rey ducks a right hand and hits a spring board moonsault on Mercury. Rey slowly covers but gets a two count. Rey then waits for Mercury to get as Mercury gets to his feet, Rey again goes running to the ropes but John Morison holds Rey feet allowing Rey to fall hard on the mat. Chavo goes for John but John backs off as Chavo yells at him. This allows Mercury to cover Rey but only for two count. mercury then hits a high suplex followed by his pose then goes to the top turnbuckle and show's off and goes for a leg drop but Rey got enough time to move away as Mercury goes straight on the mat. Rey then hits a running tornado DDT and covers but gets a close two count. Rey cant believe it as he hold his head but Chavo along with the fans cheer for Rey. Rey then whips him in the corner and charges at him with running clothesline followed by standing over him at hitting 10 punches to him. Rey then hits a quick suplex and Chavo tells him to hit the Frog Splash as Rey goes to the top but John gets on the apron but Rey hits him with right hand and this allows Mercury to get Rey of the top as ref was distracted to John. Chavo quickly gets in the ring and hits the Gory Bomb on Mercury as Rey the slowly gets to the top turnbuckle and hits the Frog Splash for three count.

***Commercial***

Backstage Kennedy and MVP are shown in the locker room.

Kennedy: Tonight is the night where we teach those looser's Hardy a lesson.

Mvp: Yeap! you'r damn right. No one messes with the king of bling MVP and Mr.Kennedy.

Kennedy: Those fools need to be taught a lesson because last week i lost my precious most beloved thing the US Championship and if it wasn't for the Hardy Boy's i would still be the US Champion but tonight its revenge time and tonight its your job to make them pay for what they did.

MVP: I got it man and let me tell you something, i do things my way so let it to me and you'll see what i do with Matt Hardy tonight. Smackdown is ma home man and no one dis respects me in my home.

Kennedy: That's right so lets go out there and teach them a lesson.

Through out the segment the crowd kept booing MvP and Kennedy.

2) G.Helms vs AJ Styles

Before the match could start the CW Champion Jimmy Wang Yang joins the commentators for this match. In the end. Helms is on a roll as he fights to get for the win but Aj wont quit so easily as AJ fights back with hard right hands and kicks to Helms. AJ then whips Helms into the ropes and hits a back body drop followed by three quick drop kicks. AJ fires up as the fans cheer for him. AJ then goes to the top and goes for the body splash on Helms but Helms from nowhere hits a great drop kick to AJ. Helms slowly covers AJ but he kicks out. Helms then waits for AJ and Helms then connects with his Shining Wizard and finally gets the three count.

Winner: And the no.1 contender for CW Championship G.HELMS.

Aftermath: G.Helms is in serious mood as he stares the CW Champ Wang Yang who is on the outside and stares back at Helms then holds his Title high in the air as he gets a descent pop from the crowd.

***Commercial***

3) Matt Hardy w/Jeff vs MVP w/Kennedy (MR.MITB)

In the end, Hardy then counters out dropping MVP in a modified samoan drop. They botch a belly-to-belly, so MVP goes to work on Hardy dropping elbows. MVP lifts Hardy to his shoulders and then lifts him high in the air allowing Hardy to hit the ring with force. Hardy fires back with a clothesline soon after. Both connect with rights on each other. Hardy with a big clothesline and bulldog combo from the corner. Hardy counters a Playmaker attempt into a Side Effect that results in a close two count. MVP crotches Hardy on the top rope kicking the ropes to trip up Hardy. MVP goes up, but Hardy pulls him off and hits a Side Effect off the top! MVP counters a Twist of Fate into a rollup. MVP uses the ropes and the referee sees it. MVP counters another Twist of Fate attempt sending Hardy into the corner. MVP connects with a running kick to the head. Hardy falls out of the ring and the referee starts the count. MVP distracts the ref as Kennedy hits some kicks to Hardy but soon Jeff comes in and beats up Kennedy as Hardy hits the ring at 9 and MVP can't believe it. MVP with another series of kicks to Hardy. On the outside Kennedy and Jeff are having a brawl in the crowd as in the ring MVP misses a kick in the corner and Hardy from nowhere hits a Twist of Fate. Cover...1...2...3

Winner: Matt Hardy.

Aftermath: Soon after Matt music hits Jeff throws Kennedy a side and heads to the ring to celebrate with his brother. kennedy is laying in the crowd as MVP is laying outside and the fans cheer for the Hardy's.

Backstage The Rock is shown in his office as the crowd gives him a nice pop. and once again Jamie Noble storms in his office.

Rock: Wow wowo. Who the hell do you think you are Mr.nobody.

Noble: Who i am? are you serious? Im Jamie Nob

Rock: It doesn't matter you are!

Big pops from the crowd.

Rock: What you want?

Noble: You know what. Im sick of being sidelined and ignored every time and now im taking a stand for it and i dont care what you say but i think a talented guy like me, needs a shot at the US Title.

Rock with a smile on his face: What! Are you serious?

Noble: Im damn serious mr. ROCK.

Rock: Ok then. so tonight right here on Smackdown the RoCk show it will be Jamie Noble vs the new US champion RVD.

Big pop from the crowd.

Noble: Thanks a lot mr.Rock. I really appreciate it and you will see tonight why im the man.

booos from the crowd as Noble leaves the Gm Office.

***Commerical***

4) Batista(WHC) vs Umaga

n the end, Umaga launches Batista into the corner with force. Umaga repeats this and Batista favors his back. Umaga connects with a big thrust shot to the throat of Batista. Umaga then begins pinching the nerve in Batista's neck. Umaga with a big scoop slam on Batista followed by a body splash attempt that Batista dodges. Umaga goes back to work on Batista's neck. Batista gets to his feet and fights off Umaga. Umaga comes right back with a huge spinebuster on Batista! Umaga attempts the Samoan Spike, but Batista blocks and then Umaga hits him with a headbutt. Umaga covers but gets a two count only. Umaga screams at the ref for slow count then goes to Batista but Batista who was on his knees trying to get up hits the spinebuster on Umaga out of no where. Batista goes for the Batista Bomb but Armando gets on the apron and distracts the ref as Batista leaves Umaga a side and heads to Armando and knocks him out with a right hand. Batista turns around only to be hit by the Samoan Spike from Umaga. Before Umaga could make the cover. Undertaker hits the ring and beats up Umaga. Trying to settle the score with him from last week. ref calls for the bell

Winner: Umaga by DQ

aftermath: Taker then sends Umaga outside the ring as the fans cheers for the Deadmen. Moments later Batista gets to his feet and is surprised to see Taker in the ring and Batista doesn't looks happy about being DQ as Taker yells at Umaga to come back but Armando stops Umaga from doing so. Fans cheer for Taker as his music hits.

JBL and Cole talks about the ME later tonight. Cena vs Taker.

5) US CHAMPIONSHIP
RVD(US Champ) vs Jamie Noble

In the end, Noble with a shoulder tackle and RVD does not go down. Noble with a head scissors take down. Before Noble could do anything to RVD. RVD hits an exploder suplex. RVD covers but gets a two count only. RVD with an arm bar and kicks to the face. Noble punches Regal and tries for a sunset flip but RVD with a knee to the head and then he puts Noble in a side head lock. Noble tries to get to his feet and he finally does but RVD makes him pay with a knee to the midsection. RVD with an Irish whip but Noble with a series of kicks. Noble with a drop kick from the second turnbuckle for a near fall. Noble with an Enzuigiri and then he hits a cannonball, but RVD gets his knees up and RVD with a round house kick to the head of Noble then goes to the top and connects with the 5 Star Frog Splash for the three count.

Winner: And Still US CHAMPION RVD

***Commercial***

Backstage Josh is with Cena

Josh: John Cena are you prepare for your big match, possibly the biggest match of your career because right here tonight you will face the Undertaker.

pops from crowd

Cena: Yoyoy wait.Am i prepare? what a silly question is that. Of course im prepared and yes i know Undertaker is the big daddy of WWE but unfortunately for you and his stupid fans im much bigger and much popular and much more stronger then the undertaker

gets loads of heat.

Josh: So that means you are not intimidated from the Undertaker and Cena just cuts him off by snatching the MIC from him and telling him to get out of his sight before he is hurt as Josh quickly runs to save his life. Cena then gets the MIC

Cena: Im not intimidated of the Undertaker. i have been in this business for quite some time and i have beaten the best that WWe had to offer and just to remind you all i have beaten Undertaker before aswell so this time it doesn't makes any difference because Undertaker your not on my mind because the person that's on my mind is the WHC BATISTA

cheeers for Batista

Cena: Who has my Title with him and Batista come Judgement Day im taking back whats mine as Cena makes a angry face and looks at the camera before leaving.

Backstage we see Kennedy and MVP walking around with a serious and anger look on their face.

Eva catches up with them to get a word but both ignores her then Kennedy stops and comes back and takes the mic from EVA.

Kennedy: Listen up, Hardy Boy's next week we will make a little visit to RAW for a little payback and trust me this time we will do our job done. Then both leaves as EVA just stands their.

***Commercial***

5) John Cena vs Undertaker

Cena is in the ring waiting for Taker and "Deadmen walking hits" as Undertaker comes out on his bike to the ring with huge pops from the crowd as Taker takes a round of the ring then stops his bike and gets of but from behind. Umaga comes running and attacks Undertaker. Umaga sends Taker crashing into the steel steps as Cena just waits in the ring and looks surprised to see that Umaga is doing all the work for him and the match has not started yet as Umaga is beating up Taker outside the ring. Umaga then lifts Taker up on his shoulders and hits the Samon drop on the concrete floor. Taker is outcold as Batista comes running to the ring and beats up Umaga. Cena then joins Umaga to take out Batista but Batista manages to fight out of it as he punches both Cena and Umaga and then focuses on Cena. Batista then goes for the Batista bomb on cena but Umaga hits him from behind as Cena then hits the FU on Batista outside the ring as both Taker and Batista are outcold and the fans are boooing Cena and Umaga continiously. Cena and Umaga looks at each other as Cena heads to the back with a big smile on his face as Umaga just stands their looking at Taker with a sick look on his face.

As the show goes off the air.

TheGreatLorenzo · 09-14-2008, 07:21 AM

The Great Lorenzo's SmackDown Review

Ok, opening commentary was nice. Good sounding matches for later in the night, looks to be a good show. Few spelling and grammar mistakes, but that's not that much of a problem.

Ok, Hardy's on SmackDown instead of Raw? Interesting, must be something to do with the Kennedy thing. Um, 1st? Come on, it really should be first, not 1st. Another match announced, MVP/Matt. That gives the idea that MVP will be Kennedy's partner at Backlash. Matt to SmackDown? Ouch for the Hardys. Yep, MVP's his partner. Just a couple of announcements here, nothing special to start the show. Tbh, it should have been something about Cena or Taker or Batista or someone on the Main Event scene.

The match description at the top of the match is confusing. I think you're trying to say it's for the Tag Titles, but it doesn't look like a tag team match, it looks like a one-on-one with both sides having a manager. Alright match, but no commentary after and no Winner: section just adds to the confusion. It just seems like a match out of nowhere, sorry.

This backstage segment was rather good, really. I think some punctuation here and there might help readers understand. The speech was pretty realistic, so well done here.

Some more spelling issues around the match, but a pretty solid match here. Good writing, and Helms picks up the win. Surprised Helms didn't go outside and beat up Wang Yang, but it's your show. Surely this means that Helms'll get a title shot next week. Hope he wins, too, Wang Yang isn't really a credible Champ IMO.

This was a good match here. It had the potential to be good, and you made sure of it. Nice interaction between Kennedy and Jeff outside, I was expecting Kennedy to clock Jeff with the MITB Briefcase but Jeff laid him out in the crowd! Ouch. After the Backlash encounter, I hope you'll move Kennedy to the Main Event scene so he could use the Briefcase. Then maybe keep MVP feuding with newly drafted Matt, while Jeff does stuff on Raw? Well done here, nicely hyping up the Backlash match.

The Rock as the SD GM? Sweet. Jamie Noble is a bit boring, really, but although it was a poor superstar choice, the speech was pretty good here, from both men. Only reason I can think that you're putting Noble in the RVD match is so that someone can interfere and start a feud with RVD. Just having a match between the two is a bit pointless, IMO, unless you're going to start a storyline with Noble constantly trying to beat RVD for the title, which would be quite funny.

Just to say, 'favors' is usually used when someone has hurt one leg/arm and is 'favoring' their ok leg/arm to use. You can't really 'favor' your back, you only have one. I don't know what happened last week, but Umaga really must have made Taker mad to provoke him to interfere with the match. DQ end is fine, but I'm really surprised that Taker is risking his health before his big match - that's very non-Taker-esque, as is him yelling for Umaga to come back! He just wouldn't do that, mate.

I noticed with this match (Noble/RVD) that you used long sentences lots. That makes the match go very quickly and doing it near the finish doesn't help with the tension of the finish, which I noticed a few people do here. It takes away the exciting end to the match. Anyway, RVD winning is no surprise, but I was expecting interference, so all I can think about is if Noble will demand a rematch next week, which is what I hope, to start a good funny storyline.

In the Cena interview, it was hard to distinguish between the speech and the directions. I think Cena was mighty out of character, even if he did turn heel. This surprised me, because I've noticed with your other segments that you're very good at writing superstar's speech. I found this strange. Still, I see what you're trying to do by hyping up the ME. It would be nice to see a Backlash card to know what is happening with Cena, Taker, Tista, and Umaga. I noticed Cena said Judgment Day - does that mean Batista already has an opponent for Backlash? Lots of confusion in this segment, sorry.

A few more spelling mistakes, and it's Eve, not Eva. I don't quite understand why you keep putting things in CAPS, it just makes it more confusing. I'm liking the warning from Kennedy, even though it was slightly out of Kennedy's style, it sounded more MVPish. I know I want to watch/read Raw now, just because of that, so good job there.

Ok, for a start you put 5) twice. Then, this wasn't really a match, but an all-out brawl from the four Main Eventers does replace it nicely. The actions do seem in character, like Cena leaving while Umaga just looks at Taker, but I had no idea what action was happening in the ring, and what action was happening outside.

Overall, this show was confusing. It was hard to tell what was going on most of the time, and the show just seemed like a bunch of matches thrown together without much care for how it looked from the view of someone who doesn't know much about what's been going on. On the bright side, despite the spelling issues, the matches were written nicely, with attention paid to each superstar's move-sets, plus the promos were mostly in character, except for John Cena. You have a knack for writing good promos, so use that to your advantage. I'd say for next week, maybe have some commentary after each match to explain the situation between the two superstars, like they do on TV, and clarify if a match is for a title, and what kind of match it is, just to make it easier for the reader. I really like where this going, so keep it up. Because of the constant confusion, however, a 6/10 is the best I can give it, I'm afraid.

ryu · 09-16-2008, 07:31 AM

Thanks for the review mate and you forgot to review Batista-Umaga match anyway still waiting for some more reviews before i post my next show.

TheGreatLorenzo · 09-16-2008, 01:17 PM

Hey, that's cool. I did review the Batista/Umaga match, it was the paragraph starting with 'Just to say...'. Next show has promise, that's for sure.

ryu · 09-17-2008, 06:11 AM

And i forgot just to let you know mate.

Undertaker in my btb is the American Badass Taker so he can yell at his opponents and

on RAW Bret Hart made a surprise return at WM24 and then on Raw Kurt Angle challenged Bret to a match at Backlash. Bret said he wants time to think about and after 2-3 weeks, Bret came up with a decision to accept Angle Challenge but Y2J is not happy with this desicion of Bret so tune into Raw to see wht happens next.

Also Mr.Kennedy has won the MITB match at Wm so now he is mr.MITB and he was US champ but last week Kennedy lost his US title to RVD becoz of Jeff and Matt with whom Kennedy and MVP are feuding with.

racer · 09-17-2008, 06:56 AM

Racer’s SmackDown!! Review

Spelling: A couple of typo’s around the place, be sure to read over but nothing to major

Realism: It was pretty realistic although some parts I didn’t find to good, the main event for example where Umaga runs down to attack Undertaker, and then lifts for a Samoan drop. Nothing against you but I believe the Samoan Spike would of worked better but that is just my personal opinion, other than that it was pretty good.

Entertainment: Yeah must admit, it was pretty entertaining although some boring bits like the Noble/Rock segment I didn’t really see a point for it unless you were planning on pushing Noble in which you would of made him win by luck.

Matches: Most of the matches were good although I believe you need to go into a little more depth, maybe describe more things that happen throughout the match. Otherwise matches were good

Overall: Overall a good show, good luck with next weeks, I believe this show was good I give it a Seven out of Ten (7/10) and hopefully this review helped you out, good luck in the future weeks

ryu · 09-17-2008, 07:57 AM

Thanks for the review mate and just to let you know. Due to very less time i have shortened my show thts why i couldnt describe much more then i used to do before. If you could read my previous shows then you 'll much changed show cuz i like to describe matches in details but i hardly get time thts why i just go with a short recap.

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