View Poll Results: How is my BTB so far

ryu · 06-05-2008, 03:16 AM

Breaking News:

Im here to announce that Jack(S2H_Werd) is no longer my partner. From one week he hasnt contact me and hasnt replied to my emails and pm and today i saw him online at msn and i tried to chat with him but he quickly got offline so after that i took this decision to take him out of my BTB. He was a good booker and if he would have stick around,he would have become a great booker,i can guarantee that but its his loss not mine so Jack Your FIRED my friend.

**RKO** · 06-05-2008, 11:32 AM

I accept to be your partner but I just need you to tell me what is basically happening like fueds and things like that.

ryu · 06-06-2008, 03:14 PM

RKO i just pm you about the details of my btb. We have to put a lot in here so there should be no running away. Im sure if you stick around in this btb,you'll become a great booker without a doubt. I guarantee it.

ryu · 06-10-2008, 04:58 AM

Second Week Monday Night RAW after WM 24

Monday 7th April – Live from Albany, New York

*To Be Loved* is being played.

*PYRO*
*PYRO*
*PYRO*
*PYRO*

*Fans cheer as RAW goes live on television*

JR: Welcome to Monday Night RAW and tonight I tell you is going to be one good night!

King: I know JR! We will have so many things that will change possibly Raw forever!

JR: We are two weeks gone from the biggest event of them all that I can tell you, things are heated up for the show! You do not know what is gonna come next.

King: That’s why RAW is one heck of a show! You would not know what might happen next!

*Just then DX’s theme hits and out they come*

*Fans start cheering as they see them*

*DX now is in the ring for the silence to go down*

HHH: First of all…

*Fans cheer*

HHH: Are you ready?

*Fans go crazy*

HHH: NO! I SAID ARE YOU READY??!!!!!!!!

*Crowd goes even louder*

HHH: Then for the thousands on attendance, for the millions watching at home… LET’S GET READY TO SUCK IT!!!!!

*Crowd starts a D-X chant*

HBK: And if you’re not down with that, we got two words for ya!

Crowd: SUCK IT!!!!!!!!

HHH: We are back after a brutal wrestlemania! Right here tonight!

HBK: You know what? I think that this is a kind of moment I wanted to say this about some weirdos! Brothers of Destruction… I give you credit for a hell of a match at Wrestlemania! Man, you let us hold on for loads there and I cannot believe we actually lost! But now D-X say that BOD are one hell of a tag team and Kane and Undertaker can go take a holiday, enjoy the beer as they beat D-X.

HHH: Are you trying to say that BOD is better than us?! Shawn, where’s your mind at, you know we are so much better than them, infact we even whooped their asses ages ago!

HBK: We have?! Since when have we faced them?

HHH: Back in the day, Shawn. You really are forgetting things aren’t ya?

HBK: Never mind that; let’s talk about the future trips.

HHH: Oh yeah, that’s what we are here for. We don’t wanna waste these fans time; they must be bored to death already!

HBK: Now you all like D-X fighting, right?

*Fans cheer*

HBK: So next week, D-X is going to surprise you all! We are going to challenge anyone for a tag team match! It can be any team out there!

HHH: You think you can beat us both? So next week, me and Shawn will see who our opponents are! From that time, you can all wait for D-X to kick two people’s asses!

*DX theme hits as they leave the ring*

*Commercial Break*

JR: Welcome back to this edition of RAW and let’s get on with the show as The Hardys are facing Cade & Murdoch!

King: Hardys have had a tough time in these few weeks, especially at wrestlemania!

JR: Yes, Mr Kennedy has been screwing them both in their matches!

‘Loaded’ hits as the Hardy Boyz make their way to the ring.

‘Country theme’ hits as Cade & Murdoch make their way to the ring.

Match 1 – Tag Team Match

Hardy Boyz vs. Cade & Murdoch

Match Finish: It has been a match where both teams are fighting to win it. Right now it’s Jeff Hardy and Murdoch in the ring. Both men try to get the other one down. Murdoch is not letting go that easily as he gives a cheap punch to Jeff Hardy. Matt Hardy is trying to get to Jeff but is waiting there impatiently. Now, Murdoch grabs Jeff and punches him in the gut. Jeff then goes to the turnbuckle to take in that huge blow and gain momentum. Murdoch then tags in Cade. Now Cade is fired up as he now tries to kick Jeff and he succeeds. Cade then punches Matt and he falls to the ground feeling his face where the punch was hit. Cade then grabs Jeff but Jeff reverses and does a dropkick onto Cade. Jeff is still down and so is Cade. The ref starts counting until one of them gets up. Jeff eventually got up and tagged Matt into the match. Now Matt was hyped up as he gave 12 consecutive fatal blows onto Cade’s head. Hardys were in control of the match now. Everything seemed to be going in their way and suddenly Cade comes in and kicks Matt onto the face. Things were getting out of control as Jeff jumped in and started kicking both of them. Murdoch went outside of the ring but Cade was still there. Jeff then did a neckbreaker on him and he was going up to do the Swanton Bomb on him. As he went up, he was ready and just then Mr Kennedy comes from nowhere and punches Jeff and he falls in the ring. Then he picked up Matt and did a Mic Check on him. Then the ref did not even know Mr Kennedy had done this because he was accidentally hit by Murdoch and now the ref was back in conscience. He saw Cade pinning Matt Hardy and he counted 1…2…3!

Winners: Cade & Murdoch

Aftermath: Mr Kennedy then was on the ramp smiling at Matt and Jeff Hardy for screwing them both up again.

*Commercial Break*

King: Well Kennedy has done it once again!

JR: I think a big rivalry is up with these two and surely, the Hardy Boyz may get a chance to have a match with Kennedy!

*Backstage with Carlito and CM Punk*

*CM Punk is just looking at his IC title when Carlito walks by*

Carlito: Oh it’s CM Punk.

CM Punk: Carlito, I know you are the new contender for the Intercontinental Title. At backlash, it’s going to be a great match as I can see you are a very good wrestler and you probably think I am too.

Carlito: Ah yes, you are very good and at Backlash that title will be around my waist if I win but I respect it being round your waist too.
CM Punk: Thanks but dont forget that its a triple threat match so every man for himself and im sure the match will be made as the best Intercontinental Championship match ever!

Carlito: Carlito thinks so too and Carlito doesnt care if its a triple threat-fatal four way or one on one anyway Carlito is walking out of Backlash as the new IC champion!

*Just then Santino Marella overhears their conversation and he bumps in*

Santino: (With his accent) oh its Cm Punk and Carlito...Correct me if im wrong,didnt i beat you both last week. HUH. Smiles then. You know what Stupid Punk sice i beat you last week so Mr.Santino Marella thinks he deserves a shot at the IC title.

Carlito: Keep dreaming Santino fool because the IC Title match has already been booked for Backlash and you can wrestler Mickie James for the women's title because thats where you belong.

Punk: Thats true.

Santino: OH shut up you too no good stupid fools. This is totally unacceptable. What has Carlito and Shelton did to get a title shot,it should be me. i will talk to mr.gm Austin and i will demand a title shot. So you in the ring Cm stupid Punk.

Just as Santino leaves. Shelton comes in wearing black shaded then takes it off and looks at both Carlito and Punk then looks at IC Title

Shelton: At Backlash the IC Title will be mine. He laughs then leaves as Cm Punk goes after Shelton but Carlito stops him.

*Commercial Break*

Angle music hits and he makes his way to the ring with receiving loud boos from the crowd. Angle talks back to some fan on his way to the ring as he talks trash to that fan and gets more heat. Angle then gets in the ring and gets a mic.

Loud boos can be hear

Angle: Last week in this very ring i challenged the great technical wrestler of all time and a legend "Bret Hart" to a match against the best wrestler alive today me, your Olympic Hero "Kurt Angle. So I would cut to the chase, Bret i wont wait all long, I want to know what’s your answer right here and right now so Bret come out and tell the whole world what’s its going to be, have you still got it to face me in this ring and beat me, I know its very very difficult task for you but lets see how much of a real man are you so Bret why don’t you come out and kill the suspense.

Boos from the crowd.

Angle waits and Chris Jericho music hits and he makes his way to the ring as the fans give him a tremendous ovation. Jericho makes his way to the ring with a smile on his face as he gets in the ring, goes face to face with Angle then gets a mic.

Jericho: Sorry to break it for you Angle but Bret isn't here tonight.

Fans dont like this as they start a boos chant

Angle: This is bullshit.

Jericho: Well but Bret Hart did leave a message for you and that message i will tell you but before that let me tell you that your dream of having a match with the greatest wrestler alive today, the legend, the greatest technical wrestler EvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrRRR. Bret Hart is broken because Bret Hart refused to wrestle you because Bret said he is not totally fit and before Jericho can say anything..... Bret music hits and the crowd go nuts and suddenly Angle after not looking happy has now a smile on his face and Jericho isn’t looking happy. Bret claps some hands with the fans on his way to the ring. Bret gets in the ring takes the mic from Jericho with respect then waits before he talks because the fans are just screaming for Bret Hart.

Bret: Jericho, I know what you are trying to do but honestly just stop it. I know you are worried of my condition and all but it’s who me who decides what will I do so Jericho thanks for your concern.

Angle: WOwowowo. First all let me make this clear so this all that Jericho was saying was crap and Jericho you SOB why don’t you just go to the back where you belong because honestly you shouldn't be here. It’s between me and Bret Hart so you should stay out of this before you get hurt, real bad.

Heat from the crowd

Jericho: Why don’t you shut the hell up and let Bret Hart answer your question.

Bret: Thanks Jericho. So Angle as for your question. I have been thinking all week about this decision and I talked with my doctors, my family and several of my best buddies about this and some said I should not wrestle you and some said I should so I have made up my mind but, Angle interrupts.

Angle: But what, your scared Bret. You’re scared to get in this ring with me. Bret I promise you, I’m gonna give you the fight of your life.

Bret: Scared, that word is not in my dictionary and i have been in this business for 20 years and trust me i know a lot about it so you should not tell me what to do or not so as for your challenge i will tell you next week about it.

Angle: What! Another week, you gotta be kidding me.

Bret: Listen, next week i will make a return to a wrestling match after a very long time and i will see if i have got it in me or not and next week after my match I will answer your question.

Angle: So next week it is but who will you be facing, huh?

Jericho interrupts: Its none of your business. Even I don’t know who Bret Hart will be wrestling next week.

Bret: You all will know who ill be facing next week in my return match after many years. Kurt see you next week and Bret drops the mic and leaves as he gets massive pop from the crowd while Angle and Jericho remain in the ring and stare each other...

*Commercial Break*

Santino is now in General Manager Austin’s office*

*Crowd pops as they see Stone Cold on the desk*

Santino: Ah, Stone Cold Steve Austin, I have come to see you, for something, let’s say, important!

Austin: What?

Crowd: WHAT?

Santino: I want to ask you if I can have a match at Backlash with CM Punk for the Intercontinental Championship?

Austin: Well, you think I will just give you a shot?

Santino: Yes, because Santino Marella gets what he wants.

Austin: Son this is not your Italy. Its USA and over here you have to win to get something so next week live on raw its going to be Sanitno vs Cm Punk non title match and if you win then you will be added in the IC Title match at backlash but if you loose then you wont get anything.

Santino: Oh thank you so much mr.gm Austin. Santino can whoop Punk’s ass, don’t worry! Then Carlito and him will lose to the greatest Italiano in history, Santino Marella!

Austin: Get your ass outta ma office then!

crowd laughs

‘Obsession’ hits as Mickie James makes her way to the ring.

‘What Love Is’ hits as Candice makes her way to the ring.

‘Don’t Mess With’ hits as Victoria makes her way to the ring.

‘Sliced Bread’ hits as Jillian makes her way to the ring.

Match 2 – Tag Match

Mickie James & Candice vs. Victoria & Jillian

Match Finish: Mickie James is the women’s champion and Candice is the number one contender. Right now, in the ring are Candice and Victoria. Candice is flying all over towards Victoria and she is not even stopping. She grabs Victoria’s hair and starts pulling it. She then stops and tags in Mickie James. Mickie is on fire and she went for a spinning sole kick. Victoria goes down to the floor and Jillian waits there impatiently to get the tag. But she went in the ring illegally and kicked Mickie in the face and then she was asked to go back. Victoria finally got the tag to Jillian and she instantly started going on top of Mickie and punching the heck out of her. Mickie then reversed it by punching her right in the nose. Mickie then went to tag Candice and she made a slow start by doing a neckbreaker onto Jillian. Victoria now wants to come in and Jillian is still onto the floor. Finally, Jillian kicks Candice right in the face but she is still standing and out comes Victoria. Now, Candice and Victoria are legal in the ring and Victoria starts kicking Candice in the gut and she starts screaming. Candice is now down and Victoria lifts her up but from behind Mickie turns her around and goes for the Mick Kick but Victoria ducks and Mickie accidentally hits her partner Candice. Victoria then throws Mickie out of the ring and goes to cover Candice for the 1…2…3!

Winners: Victoria & Jillian

Aftermath: Mickie checks on Candice as Candice get to her feet then gives a angry look to Mickie before she leaves.

*Commercial Break*

JR: Ladies and Gentleman tonight we have a match between Orton and Christian in the main event!
King: But will the Rated R interfere like they always do?

JR: Well I think so!

‘No Chance in Hell’ hits as Vince returns to WWE after a long time.

JR: It’s Vince McMahon! He’s back!

King: What has come back for?

JR: He’s the chairman so he has to come back, King!

King: Okay JR, shut it then!

*Fans shocked to see Vince*

*Long pause*

Vince: I am back! After a long time and it’s all good to see you! The fans that make up the WWE and without all of you, I would have gone ages ago!

*Fans cheer*

Vince: But since I am back, I am going to make WWE different now! I am going to shake things up a little!

*Fans cheer loudly*

Vince: Well you all know what I am going to say! We are going to have a draft lottery!

*Fans go crazy*

Vince: It will go on for 5 weeks! Anyone and I mean anyone can be drafted!

*Fans love it*

Vince: It will start tonight where a superstar from smackdown is already in the building tonight!

*Fans cheer*

Vince: You will have to find out later tonight though! So long and enjoy the rest of the show!

*Vince leaves the arena*

*Backstage in Candice’s locker room*

Candice: That b****!

*Mickie enters*

Mickie: Candice, I am really sorry for what I did!
Candice remains silent before Mickie could say anything Candice sleps her hard on the face then leaves.

*Commercial break*

JR: I just can’t wait to see who our draft is!

King: I will be announcing it and I already know who it is! So you have to wait JR!

JR: Well next up is one part of the Rated R and its Muhammad Hassan going against Sandman!

‘Arabic Music’ hits as Hassan makes his way to the ring with Daivari.

‘Enter Sandman’ hits as Sandman make his way to the ring.

Match 3 – Hardcore Match

Muhammad Hassan(c) (w/ Daivari) vs. Sandman

Match Finish: It was not the best of matches as Hassan is dominating most of the match. Hassan is the only man standing as Sandman is in the floor and hurt. Hassan now punches Sandman and then does a huge kick to the head. He then shouts something at Daivari. Then as he turns around, Sandman trips him up and does a facebuster. Sandman then gets up and starts kicking Hassan. Daivari does not like this and he tries to get into the ring. Then Sandman lifts Hassan and does a DDT. He goes for the cover 1…2.. But Hassan kicks out. Sandman could not believe it and so the match still continues. Sandman goes outside the ring and brings in his Kendo Stick which the fans like it. Sandman then gets in the ring as Hassan then holds the ropes to get up as Sandman hits a hard shot to Hassan. Sandman goes for the cove but before he could get the three count, Davari attacks Sandman. Sandman then gets Davari of him and hits a right hand to him then hammers away at him with har kendo stick shots. Sandman looks back and Hassan hits him with the steel chair to the head. Hassan then hits his finisher to Sandman and covers him. 1..2..3.
Winner: Muhammad Hassan

*Commercial Break*

*King is in the ring*

King: Welcome everyone

*Fans anxious to see who the draft is*

King: I am here to announce the 1st draft pick for RAW!

*Crowd cheers*

King: This man has come all the way from Smackdown!

*Crowd waits excitedly*

King: This man wants to get some action on RAW!

*Long pause*

King: So right now, I will announce the 1st pick.

*Another long pause*

*Don’t Waste My Time* hits

King: Please welcome our newest superstar on RAW, ELIJAH BURKE!!!

*Crowd boos as they see him*

*Burke gets into the ring*

King: Welcome to Monday Nights, Elijah Burke!

Burke: Well thanks for the welcome, King.

*Crowd boos*

Burke: I am here on RAW and I will make a huge impact!

*Crowd boos*

Burke: I will become the best on this show and become the WWE Champion in years to come!

*Crowd boos heavily*

Burke: Shut up! I am the best here and I have come to prove it!

*Crowd starts a ‘you suck’ chant*

Burke: I will leave my mark on Raw and hopefully, I will end up being one of the greatest stars ever to be made in history!

*Crowd boos more*

Burke: But next week, Elijah Burke destiny begins right here on Raw. Burke music hits as he pose to the crowd but gets huge heat.

*Commercial Break*

JR: I can’t believe you were sticking up to him, King!

King: Well what can you do, he has some talent!

JR: Talent, my ass!

*Backstage in Rated R’s locker room*

Edge: So Christian, I need you to beat the crap out of Orton. That freak needs to have a good beating.

Christian: Don’t worry, Orton does not match my level and if that ass of a Kane interferes, then it shows that Orton cannot take on someone himself!

Edge: Haha. Orton is nothing compared to you. Don’t even think that. You’re Rated R and so is everyone here.

Foley, Hassan and Daivari: Yeah!

Edge: So go out there and do the job! We cannot come assist you but we know you can do this yourself!

Christian: Okay, I am going now, wish me luck!

*Christian is seen coming towards the arena*

JR: Ladies and gentleman, the match is next!

*WWE PPV: Backlash information*

‘Just close your eyes’ hits as Christian makes his way to the ring.

‘Burn in my light’ hits as Randy Orton make his way to the ring with the WWE TITLE around his wasit as he gets huge pop.

Main Event – Singles Match

Christian vs. Randy Orton

Match Finish: The match has been not much of a contest as both men are as good as each other. Right now, Christian is trying to take down Orton but Orton is always backing away and it goes on like this for a few times. Then Orton punches Christian in the face as everything changes after this attack. Orton now grabs Christian’s head and smashes it in the turnbuckle for another few times. Then Orton goes for the multiple stomps on Christian and he finally falls down. Christian is now on the floor as Orton gains lots of momentum. Orton now tries to pin Christian 1…2. But Christian kicked out and the match continues. Orton tries another few pins but eventually gave up. Christian then punches Orton and pokes him as Orton felt his eyes and went and hung on to the ropes. Christian finally got up and did a huge clothesline to Orton. Orton went to the floor fast and Christian smiled at Orton and started kicking him loads and loads. Orton could not even get up but Christian tried all his best to keep Orton down. Christian then went for a inverted facelock neckbreaker. Orton went crazy and tried to get out of this. Eventually Christian had to let him off but Christian wanted to finish him off and he kicked in Orton’s face a few more times. The match has been going Christian’s way for most of the time. It has been him doing everything to keep Orton down and he has done that job so far. Right now, Christian grabs Orton’s head and goes for a unprettier but Orton reverses it to a RKO but Christian pushes him off. Both men are now standing and both are exchanging punches until finally Christian got Orton in the chest by a huge boot. Orton goes down to the floor as Christian goes for the pin 1…2.. But Orton kicks out and Christian could not believe it. Then he went outside the ring for a few seconds and came back into the ring. He grabbed Orton and tried to go for the Missile Dropkick but he missed Orton as he moved away and fell right in the ground and he was hurt. Orton now thought he could finish him off and he went and grabbed Christian and started punching him in the face and he also did a scoop powerslam on him. Christian was beat down and could not move much so Orton took this as his advantage and got Christian up and was just going to do the RKO until Hassan and Daivari interfered and started punching Orton down. Then Foley and Edge came and all 5 men were beating down Orton. The ref counts this as a Disqualification. Then Hassan and Daivari grabbed on to Orton as Edge was going to do the spear until Kane’s music hit and he started to attack each one of them. He booted Hassan and Daivari and Foley. Kane goes into the ring and attacks Christian and was going to do the chokeslam when Edge speared him down. Hassan and Daivari both got up and got chairs to the ring. They were just in when Sabu and Sandman come from the back and running down to the ring. Sabu had a chair and Sandman had a kendo stick. The ref was down and out by a steel chair from Hassan. Sabu and Sandman went into the ring and hit their weapons on all five men of Rated R. They were down on the floor as Kane and Orton recover and the four men cleared out of the ring.

Winner via DQ: Randy Orton

*RAW goes off air*

**RKO** · 06-10-2008, 02:42 PM

I will try get a review up tonight.

Aj1992 · 06-13-2008, 05:47 PM

Hey dude just thought i would drop in and say hi since i havent ever done so.

I have followed this BTB for a while and i will get some feedback for Raw up tomorrow guaranteed. I really like the BTB and i hope it continues to be an entertaining read.

Aj1992

Aj1992 · 06-14-2008, 06:05 AM

Monday 7th April Edition of Raw Review

Opening DX Promo: Nice opening to the promo with the whole suck it thing, of course that always gets pops. I liked the whole Shawn forgetting about beating B.O.D already, really is reminiscent of the humour they were getting across when DX returned. Good to see them back next week for a match aswell

Hardy Boyz vs. Cade & Murdoch: Too me felt a bit scattered. Interesting finish with Kennedy but the actual match was just kinda stomps to the gut and punches. The Hardyz really do perform some incredible moves and it would have been nice to see something like a Whisper in the wind or just show that they have different styles to Cade N Murdoch. Despite that Kennedy and The Hardyz could have an intriguing feud.

Punk/Carlito/Santino/Benjmain promo: Good promo with some nice humour from Santino. Keeping what Benjamin said to a minimum was good and realistic. Overall it was good, got its message across but one thing i would say is the Carlito being overly nice to Punk could that mean a heel turn in the future, if that isnt on your agenda then i just felt like the praise was too over the top even for a face.

Angle/Bret/Y2J Promo: Angles bit was good and to the point. Spelling and Grammar was a bit off throughout and a lack of punctuation makes the promos too long winded, maybe like you did in the previous promo just make the lines shorter so commas etc arent needed as much and the promo flows better. Good to see Bret make a surprise appearance and i like how you dragged it out until next week, an interesting storyline for sure.

Austin/Marella Promo: Not much to say, short and sweet and very good, those to could have some rather humourous promos together.

Mickie James & Candice vs. Victoria & Jillian: A very entertaining match with a very good finish. "Tag the rivals up" is always good for a rivalry imo and this match really added some heat to the feud.

Vince McMahon Promo: Great to see a draft lottery always an interesting concept. However the promo was far too short. When Vince has promos on his own he often talks for a long time and i feel you could have dragged it out a bit more just to add even more suspense. Despite that i did enjoy for the length that it was.

Hassan/Sandman: All right match nothing great really but it was good for what it was. I did enjoy the finish however as it kept the champion looking strong but kept him as a very heelish character.

Burke as the first pick is interesting and it will be nice to see what you can do with him. The promo was kinda generic but again good for what it was meant to be.

Christian vs. Randy Orton: Good match but i really dislike the wall of text. I did it in my old BTB and i realised how annoying it was. The finish was a bit of a cluster with what 9 guys in there but you made it work all right. I would have liked some commentary at the end just to go out on a high instead of the show just stopping.

Closing Comments: Overall a decent show. Grammar however lets it down and i feel matches dont display enough moves rather just stomps and punches. I do however like the promos and also how you stick to three colours make it clear and easy to read. I also like how you leave things on a cliff hanger (hart/angle storyline) and you have some intriguing storylines working right now. I look forward to reading your next show and i hope this review was helpful.

619indahouse · 06-15-2008, 09:35 PM

Alrighty, I promised you one befor the day was up and I guess here I am. Just going to give you feed on your Wrestlemania 24. Hope it all turns out goody.

619s Feedback for ryus Wrestlemania 24

I really didn't feel the opening video package. At all. too short for Wrestlemania, firstly, and just didn't have the flow of a big PPV. I like that you had plenty of the big stars on the roster, but it just didn't click at all. Wrestlemania is a mystic, astounding event. You made it sound like just another big RAW or Smackdown.

Wow...okay getting off with things right off the bat is a big nono for Wrestlemania. You could at least mention some pre-ceremony notes, ya know? Like normally some singer would at the very least do something to start it. Kicking it off immidatley with JR killed any momentum you built in the opening promo whatsoever.

Wow. I don't think you're using a real WPM (words per minute) format here, b/c I really didn't feel this match at all. You used too many big things too early (i.e., the SuperBackcracker, the Holy Shit chants). I'm glad Kennedy won, but this is WRESTLEMANIA. I have no feel of a big even whatsoever so far. Nothing really jumped out at me there.

I think there should've been a promo between the first few matches. If you were antipating it so much, shouldn't you have offered maybe a video package?

I love how your match writing isn't really blocky. What I mean by that is there's no really big clusterfucks of writing at one time. I like the spacing, and I liked this match. It seemed to get more time than the MITB did. In terms of how you write these matches, they need more depth, to me personally. But if this is the way you want to do it, more power to ya . I still don't have a Wrestlemania kind of feel at all, though I'm curious to see why you had Rey/Chavo defend.

*Fart noise* Not exactly Wrestlemania quality promo here, but it seems to plant a seed for Hardyz/Kennedy at somepoint. Don't like that Kennedy and Jeff said too much at one time. It made it really confusing. Space it out a little, maybe get a little crowd reaction in there.

MOTN with Lesnar/Lashley so far. Nice match here, but again, I still don't have too much of a feel. The ref was down waaaaaaay too long IMO, it seemed like he was down for around 10 minutes. That aside, I liked how you went through with this one, so MOTN thus far.

You've made Randy into a face?!? How'd you manage to pull that off? (I mean this in a good way)

Well this match got to the back of the arena very quickly. I thought you would've dragged this out a little bit. Yeah, the Jeff Swanton should've been HUGE. I mean, you should've stressed that shit out like there was no tomorrow. This is an aerial maneuver through a wooden table YOU SHOULD HYPE THAT THING UP! It just seemed lackidasical, and Jeff recovered much too quickly for it to seem believable. I really don't like Kennedy getting involed. Wrestlemania isn't a good time to set up storyine. It's a time to end storyliens, continue them, and start new ones. But not like this. I really didn't like Kennedy helping here, it kinda messed with the flow the match had. Rated R winning is cool, but I still don't have a feel...

at Santino here!

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