View Poll Results: How is my BTB so far

ryu · 10-23-2006, 05:38 PM

will be waiting bro and thanks in advance.

ExtreemeTest · 10-23-2006, 06:32 PM

Cruiserweight match
Short match but i could imagine as you explained with "High flying moves" Good way to end a match by missing the leg drop then the cradleshock.

Both backstage segments
Good way of showing batista was angry and maybe get unleashed today.
Finlay telling lashley how he will win tonight it shows the match will be on and as some buildup.

The Rock And Cena segment
Good way of building up a match.

Triple Threat
Nice to see rvd winning the match until rey came back. i liked it how Chavo paused with Rey, Chavo trying to get some of the hype:P i can see a rivarly going on with theese 2 men

Regal V Burchill
Great use of charecter but that was way to short.

Cena v Batista
This was the best written match , it was fun to read and i was getting excited when B.man music hits i knew impact was gona happen and so did it.
Boogeyman helping batista was good aswell then the worms came in xD. I didnt like it how they shook hands at the end though.

Contract signing
Good way how benoit said he respected Undertaker at first THEN gets into the bad points. Undertaker attacking benoit was good but when the secruity came out he should of walked off.

Overall : 7/10

Dx5221992 · 10-23-2006, 07:15 PM

Raw Review:

dx nwo promo: great match announced later tonight with good stipulations. i cant wait to find out who the other 2 ppl are nd cant wait for the match at survivor series.

Trish mickey promo - short promo but it is recapped but im wondering where this feud can go next.

kane heyman promo - wow big announcment wut is next for the big red machiene nd paulie

kane vs venis - squash match, kane wouldve won no doubt

4 way match - wow great hardcore match, wonder wut it wouldve been lke if it werent recapped but anyways great sabu won wut a good fued for sabu nd sandman.

edge promo - tipical edge promo but huge announcement for later tnoight

dx vs ss - these guys have fought so many times but glad to see nwo mix in.

hardyz vs e&c - best matchup of the night, i miss the feud hopefulyl it wil happen agen awesome how angle came out.

carlito vs nash- ok match, didnt really live up to the hype but i wonder wut is next for dx!

overall 8/10

ryu · 10-23-2006, 08:39 PM

thanks for the review. im glad we are keeping this up. as im reviewing ur show and you mine

ryu · 10-28-2006, 05:25 PM

WWE Raw Results --- Second week

Last week main event recap has been show.

Jr and King open the show as the pyro's blow off the roof.

DX music hits as HHH-HBK makes their way out to the ring
with a huge pop from the crowd.

HHH gets on the mic as he calls out DX newest member
Carlito before wasting anytime. Carlito comes out on Dx
music as he has his new black trunks on with DX on front
and apples on his side of the trunk. Carlito enters the
ring as the fans are giving bib pop to Carlito as well.
Carlito talks about its great to be in DX along with 2
greatest wrestlers in wwe history as he thanks HHH-HBK to
adding him in DX stable or faction. HHH talks about NWO and
says DX have got their third partner as 1 is more left and they will find some one within a weeks. as DX finish their promo by HBK saying We have got to words for NWO.., Suck it.

backstage in Austin Office: Austin is in his office with
Randy as Carlito storms in the Office and demands a title
shot for the IC title against Randy. Austin replies by dont
you ever come into my office like that and as for the title
shot you wont get any. Shelton then knocks on the door as
he comes to Austin office and ask for a title shot against
Randy. Randy says no one is getting a title shot tonight
because Randy is taking the night off as Austin replies by
no you are not. because right here tonight it will be Randy
vs Carlito vs Shelton in a triple threat match for the IC
Title. Cm Punks comes in and demands a title shot also as
Austin says the match has beeen booked and it will not be
changed and Austin in anger to all 3 of them now get your
asses out of my office and get ready for your match. after
the 3 of them lefts, Randy says to Austin why did you
booked the match, Austin replies by dont worry Randy you
have got your back up and i know you will win the match
tonight as Austin hypes Randy as Randy gets happy and
leaves by saying, i almost forgot about my back up.

1) Kane music hits as he makes his way to the ring with
Paul Heyman. as Kane takes on Balls Mahoney.

It has been a fast match by Kane dominating Balls but Balls
also fights back. In the end Kane gets angry and hammers
away at Balls with thunderous upper cuts and a big boot to
the face as Kane hits the thunderous Chokeslam on Balls as
he covers him for the 3 count. Kane goes for his pyro moves
as Umaga with Armando comes running to the ring and attacks
Kane. Kane fights back and beats Umaga as Snitsky also
comes from behind and attacks Kane but Kane with his full
strength takes out both Umaga and Snitsky with Chokeslams
as Armando looks in shock. Paul gets a mic and says to
Armando. You thought that your 2 cowards Monster will take
out Kane again but i think incase you forgot he his the Big
Red Monster Kane, he is not the old Kane anymore, Now he
has become more strong and more powerfull and more evil and
he will take out your so called undefeated moster and
Snitsky. Armando replies by how about next week it will be
Umaga-Snitsky vs Kane in a handicap match. Paul accepts and
says next week Kane will unleash the monster in him and
will beat both of your coward monsters as Kane does his
pyro move.

2) Sandman vs the no.1 contender Sabu for the hardcore
championship match in a hardcore match.

Both men have been beating the hell out of each as both
wrestlers have used many weapons to take out each other. In
the end, Sandman hits Sabu with a shot to the head with the
Kendo stick as Sabu was going for the springboard
clothsline. Sandman then sets up a table which was brought
by Sabu. Sandman gets Sabu in the powerbomb position as
Sabu picks a trash can as Sandman gets him over his
shoulder's, Sabu hits Sandman with the trash can to the
skull. Sabu then throws the chairs at Sandman a couple of
times as Sabu sets Sandman on the table and sets the chair
in the middle as Sabu goes for the Triple Moonsault on
Sandman through the table but Sandman gets of the table and
Sabu goes crashing through the table. Sandman then hits
Sabu with a thunderous chair shots as Sandman covers Sabu
for the 3 count. after a brutal and vicious match both the
bloodied superstars shake hands and show respect to each
other as fromt eh back Test and Dreamer attacks Sabu and
Sandman and leaves them laying in the ring.

3) Randy Orton vs Carlito vs Shelton Benjamin for the IC
Title in a triple threat match.

It has been a fast pace match as Carlito and Benjamin
performs some great high flying moves. In the end Randy
goes for the RKO but Carlito connects with the Back Cracker
and from the back NWO gets to the ringside as Nash-Hogan
distracts the refree and Show hits a big Show Stopper on
both Carlito-Shelton. Dx also comes running to the ring as
HHH fights Nash-Hogan and HBK hits Show with the Sweet Chin
Music. The refree gets distracted by HHH-Nash and Hogan as
in the ring HBK hits Randy with the Sweet Chin Music. and
HBK help HHH beat Hogan-Nash. in the ring Carlito gets up
as he goes to cover Randy, Shelton quickly rolls up Carlito
from behind and holds on the ropes for better leverage as
Shelton pins Carlito for the 3 count.

4) Mickie James vs Torrie Wilson

It has been a good match so far as Mickie has been
dominating Torrie. In the end Mickie hits Torrie with the
Tornado DDT and gets the 3 pin. Mickie celebrates as Trish
comes from behind and attacks Mickie. Trish gets a mic and
says to Mickie you want a rematch, you got it as Trish hits
Mickie with the Chick Kick.

Backstage NWO gets in Austin office as they Demands a match
against DX tonight. Austin calms NWO then announce the
match as Hogan takes on HBK in a one on one match and HHH
will be banned from the ringside.

5) Hogan with NWO vs HBK

Hogan has been dominating the match as NWO helps Hogan
every time HBK starts to build the momentum. In the end
Hogan goes for the Leg Drop but .HBK gets out of the way
and from the back Carlito comes to the ringside and beats
NWO as they were getting a chair and beat HBK. In the ring
after missing a Leg Drop HBK hits Hogan with the flying
Elbow Drop. HBK starts to kick on the mat as he is going
for the Sweet Chin Music, on the outside Show hits Carlito
with the clothsline to the back and sends him crashing
through the steel steps, in the ring as HBK goes for the
Sweet Chin Music, Nash distracts the refree and Show hits
HBK with the steel chair to the back as Hogan hits the Leg
Drop and pins HBK. Hogan gets the victory as he celebrates
with NWO. HHH comes running to the ring and fights NWO.
After giving NWO some right hands, spine busters and a
chair shot to Nash and Show, HHH gets a Sledge Hammer and
waits for Hogan to get up as from the back Randy comes
running to the ring and gives a low blow to HHH followed by
a RKO on the chair. Randy saves Hogan from getting hit by a
Sledge Hammer. On the outside Randy beats up Carlito some
more as in the ring Randy tries to get up Show and Nash as
Randy celebrates with the entire NWO.

6) Edge-Christian with Lita vs Kurt Angle in a handicap
match.

Angle was beating the hell out of Edge and Christian in the
starting as Lita distracts the ref and Christian hits Angle
with the chair shot. After that Edge-Christian has been
dominating the match. In the end, Edge goes for the Spear
but Angle gets out of the way as Edge goes shoulder first
to the steel post. At the 8 count Angle gets up as Edge
makes the tag to Christian. Angle hits Christian with some
right hands followed by clothsline and german suplexes.
Angle then gives a series of german suplexes to Edge as
well. Angle hits Christian with the Angle Slam as Angle
locks in the Ankle Lock on Christian, Lita gets on the
apron and distracts the refree as Angle caughts Lita by the
hair and Lita gets herself out of Angle. As Angle looks
back Edge hits the Spear and Christian quickly covers him
for the 3 count. Edge and Christian wins the match as they
beat up Angle after the match also. Hardy Boys comes
running to the ring as they beat up Edge and Christian and
saves Angle. Hardy Boys Taunts Edge and Christian as the
show goes off the air

**maclean69** · 10-29-2006, 05:31 AM

Maclean69’s Raw Review

What I liked

To start off I think you produce a really entertaining variety of matches. I especially liked the Hogan HBK match. Personally I would have had that as the main event but it was still good how you did it. I also enjoyed how you’re building up a tag team feud between two great teams.

What I Didn’t like

There was nothing I really disliked it was good for a recap. I noticed a few spelling mistakes and quite a bit of errors with your grammar such as “the fans are giving bib pop” and “Hardy Boyz taunts Edge and Christian”. Like I say there wasn’t much to comment on seeing as it was a recap.

I’m not going to give an overall rating because it was only results but overall some good feuds are building and I’m looking forward to seeing how you write a PPV.

ryu · 10-29-2006, 11:39 AM

thanks bro.

**Spiron** · 10-30-2006, 05:59 AM

Spiron's Raw Review

Nice opening promo from DX, I like where your'e going with them. Its so COOL that Carlito is in DX.
Great promo from Austin/Orton/Benjamin/Carlito and Punk. I was really looking foward to that match, and was awaiting with great intrest of what the outcome of the bout would be. GReat match with Balls and Kane, looking foward to the handicapped match next week! Good to see SandMan retain his hardcore title. Good call!
Shelton wins the IC title, I seriously tought Orton would thrash all of them!
Great Diva match, just the right lenght.
Good NWO promo. Hogan/HBK match was excellent! A really enjoyable match!
The Edge/Christian v Angle match was superb! Great match and leaves you longing for next week!

Matchs: 8/10

Booking: 9/10

Lenght: 7/10

Spelling: 10/10

Grammar: 7/10

Excitement: 9/10

Overall: 9/10 Great show, really looking foward to next show! Well done and keep up the good work!

ryu · 10-30-2006, 06:25 AM

thanks spiron for the review. and i will review your show by tonight.

ryu · 11-01-2006, 02:42 PM

No Mercy Card:

Cruseirweight Championship Match
1) Paul Burchill(Champion) vs Aj Styles/Low Ki/Chris Sabin/G.Helms. (Any one of them, their match will take place on smackdown this week in a fatal four way)

2) Chris Masters vs Finlay

US Championship Single Match
3) Bobby Lashley(Champion) vs Ken Kennedy

4) John Cena vs Boogey Man ( Match Type To be Announced on Smackdown)

I Quit Match
5) Batista vs Mark Henry

6) This match will be Announced on Smackdown as who will face who between RVD/REY/Chavo.

World Heavyweight Championship Single Match
7) Chris Benoit(Champion) vs Undertaker

No Mercy will be posted this sunday

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