View Poll Results: How is my BTB so far

ryu · 10-17-2006, 11:48 AM

im very very sorry for the triple post but guy's iam anxiously waiting for your kind review's on my my first ever pppv so im excited to see your review's as it will be returned. thanks

forrest01 · 10-17-2006, 12:12 PM

Forrest01s PPV Report

The JR And King opening had a few teething problems with

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we will be having a great night and the WWE title will be on the line as Edge fights K.Angle and we got to find out will DX be dominant as they were before.

Write wrestlers names out in full and u wrote will dx be dominant like they were before. Recap on how they were dominant.Also on the next line u didnt have to write i dont know spanish, just miss out the spanish announce table, people will understand.

Spirit Squad vs the hardys vs the highlanders - Ok well first things first, in ppvs it is common place to right matches out in full. The match was written in past tense and this is rather annoying. It felt like recap.Ok finish in which u described the events well and had both hardys perform their finishers. 6.5/10 (not ppv quility but not a bad match)

Trish vs Mickie James - far too short, not a good length atall. You had me in the match but with a quick finish like that i was left disappointed. 4.5/10

Sandman Vs Euguene - This match was ok but your grammar and the way in which it was the finish only, let u down. You said things like

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Sandman goes to hit Eugene with the chair but Eugene low blows Sandman and hits the Stunner. Eugene covers but only gets a close 2 count.

You could have just said Sandman goes to hit Euguene with the chair but he counters and low blows the sandman before hitting a stunner. Euguene then goes for the cover and gets a 1....2... No only a two count.

This would have been much more fluent. 6/10

Kane Vs Umaga - good starting promo to make Kane come out in old attire. It was an ok match and with a double count out the fued can continue. 7/10 best match of the night so far.

Carlito Vs Randy Orton - to short to judge again man. It was going ok but you described the interference the most and not the match. PPVs are about matches.The build up works usually on the tv show. 5/10

NWO V.s DX - Much better. Good description of action and good ending. simply a good match. If it was in full you would be looking at a 9/10 but since it was finish only 8/10 still good tho.

Main Event - Another better match which shows the quality of match writing you posses. Not as good as the NWO V DX match but still deserving of the 8/10 status.

Your show was rather disappointing, but i believe u were unaware of ppvs being full shows and not just finish, so im sure you'll build on this. Fluency is also a problem. read others btbs and you should pick that up as well. Sorry if i seem a bit harsh but the reason ppl arent reviewing is because they dont want to give a bad review for a bad show. Pick yourself back up from this review and hopefully you improve as a booker.

PPV Score 6/10

ryu · 10-17-2006, 12:26 PM

thanks for the review bro and i will review your show as well.

RVDFan156 · 10-17-2006, 06:42 PM

What I Liked:
-Hardy Boyz winning the titles
-Eugene not winning the Hardcore Title (I like Eugene in real but I don't know what his character is in your BTB)
-Edge retaining the Heavyweight Title in his hometown-It was so stupid htat he lost the title in real in his hometown and the match that he had never lost!(ELC will most definetly be a force to be wrecking with)

What I Didn't Like:
-Except for the Heavyweight Title all of the titles changed hands (that's too many in my view)

Realism: If the show was performed realistically, where the promos / commentary in character?
8/10 Reason:Most was but there was some that weren't as in character

Length: If the show is a two hour show then it has to stay within the limits, thus no booking too many matches and promos, basically over doing the show, filling it up too much
10/10 Reason:Length was good

Quality / Entertainment: Was the show well written? Did you enjoy the reading? Was there any funny/memorable moments?
9/10 Reason:Pretty Entertaining

Spelling / Grammar: Are there noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes? Give the writer a grading on this.
8/10 Reason

idn't notice much but instead of putting K.Angle you should put Kurt Angle

Matches / Booking: Were they well booked, would you have wanted to sit through the match having watch it on TV, while watching the show. Was it a realistic finish? Did you enjoy it? (long or short)
9.5/10 Reason:It was pretty much done like real pay-per-views

Overall:
89/100 YOur pay-per-view was pretty good. I'll continue reviewing

ryu · 10-17-2006, 07:43 PM

thanks bro but if you could possibly describe it in a bit more detail then it would be great like match to match. hope you do that and thanks

Duke Coolieo · 10-17-2006, 10:04 PM

Ight I didn't really have time to leave a full review but I'll give you some feedback because I'm in the giving mood right now. First gotta say if you really wanted to be considered a good booker you have to write your ppv matches in full. For your weekly shows recap is good but for ppv it's gotta be in full. I didn't really see any glaring booking errors just maybe two many title changes. I liked how Edge retained was nice. I would have liked to see Angle as champ but that would just be to many title changes. In the Dx match found it pretty predictable. I never thought DX was going to lose. I thought the promo with Austin maybe set some feud possiblities down the line. Again I'm really not key on any of your story lines so I just kind of commented on the things that stuck out.

**RKO** · 10-18-2006, 04:33 AM

i'll drop in a review later

ryu · 10-18-2006, 07:58 AM

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Originally Posted by Coolieo69er

Ight I didn't really have time to leave a full review but I'll give you some feedback because I'm in the giving mood right now. First gotta say if you really wanted to be considered a good booker you have to write your ppv matches in full. For your weekly shows recap is good but for ppv it's gotta be in full. I didn't really see any glaring booking errors just maybe two many title changes. I liked how Edge retained was nice. I would have liked to see Angle as champ but that would just be to many title changes. In the Dx match found it pretty predictable. I never thought DX was going to lose. I thought the promo with Austin maybe set some feud possiblities down the line. Again I'm really not key on any of your story lines so I just kind of commented on the things that stuck out.

thanks for your comments and this was my first time writing a ppv so next time i will correct my mistakes and i hope you drop a full review.. thanks

and rko777 i will be waiting for your review.

**Spiron** · 10-18-2006, 01:45 PM

Okay.....

Finally....Spirons Unforgivin Review!

The start of the show was good. Before the spirit squad/hardy's match you mentioned that the match would be from the middle? < you could have done this in a separate post, not in the actual show.
But a really good match and good to see hardy's win the the titles. even from the midle it was a good match lenght.
The Trish match was good. Good to see her picking up a title.
A very exciting show so far.
Eugene as Hardcore champ was crazy. But we all knew who would win the thrid piece of gold of the night...Sandman!
Kane back in his old ways??? Good call, very well done and really exciting.
Another title change!!!!!!! Randy deserves the title, so another good call.
NWO/DX was okay..seemed a bit boring, even if it was lenghty.
Finally some one keeps thier title. Good to see edge the champ still, and hope he gets a long heathly title reign!!!
Great show, enjoyed reading it!

Match's/Booking: 8/10 Titles seemed to change alot, wich can be a good thing. The booking end of the show was excellent!

Lenght: 8/10 Okay, just the bit at the start lost some pionts.

Spelling/Grammar: 4/10 A good few grammar mistakes.

Entertainment: 9/10

Overall: 8/10 Really good show, looking foward to see how your next pay-per-view will progress.

ryu · 10-18-2006, 02:46 PM

thanks men for your review. and sorry for the mistakes as i will progress and how was the poster for the unforgiven.

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