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Old 10-10-2006, 03:34 PM   #111 (permalink)
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review will be up tomorrow, don't let me forget though
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Old 10-10-2006, 03:38 PM   #112 (permalink)
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will be waiting for your review and yea i will remind you. thanks in advance bro
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What I Liked:
Hardcore Match
-The possible reuniting of Edge & Christian (I hope they win the tag titles next week)
-Edge & Christian vs. Angle & Punk(Edge & Christian should be a force to be wrecking with-they also should have won in my opinion, but it's your show)
-6 Man Tag Match(Nice winners)

What I Didn't Like:
Eugene/Sandman promo (Eugene was not in character at all)
-Kenny winning his match (but the match itself was alright. I just would have liked to see Jeff Hardy win)

Realism: If the show was performed realistically, where the promos / commentary in character?
6/10 Reason:Eugene is way out of character! He's not even mentally challanged in your BTB! There were other superstars that were not in that much either.

Length: If the show is a two hour show then it has to stay within the limits, thus no booking too many matches and promos, basically over doing the show, filling it up too much
9.5/10 Reason:Good Length

Quality / Entertainment: Was the show well written? Did you enjoy the reading? Was there any funny/memorable moments?
7.5/10 Reeason:Some aspects were entertaining. Some just weren't.

Spelling / Grammar: Are there noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes? Give the writer a grading on this.
6/10 Reason:You need to work on this.

Matches / Booking: Were they well booked, would you have wanted to sit through the match having watch it on TV, while watching the show. Was it a realistic finish? Did you enjoy it? (long or short)
8.5/10 Reaon:Most of the matches were fairly good.

Overall:75/100. Good show I'll continue to review. Also thanks for your review.
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Old 10-10-2006, 05:10 PM   #114 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by RVDFan156
What I Liked:
Hardcore Match
-The possible reuniting of Edge & Christian (I hope they win the tag titles next week)
-Edge & Christian vs. Angle & Punk(Edge & Christian should be a force to be wrecking with-they also should have won in my opinion, but it's your show)
-6 Man Tag Match(Nice winners)

What I Didn't Like:
Eugene/Sandman promo (Eugene was not in character at all)
-Kenny winning his match (but the match itself was alright. I just would have liked to see Jeff Hardy win)

Realism: If the show was performed realistically, where the promos / commentary in character?
6/10 Reason:Eugene is way out of character! He's not even mentally challanged in your BTB! There were other superstars that were not in that much either.

Length: If the show is a two hour show then it has to stay within the limits, thus no booking too many matches and promos, basically over doing the show, filling it up too much
9.5/10 Reason:Good Length

Quality / Entertainment: Was the show well written? Did you enjoy the reading? Was there any funny/memorable moments?
7.5/10 Reeason:Some aspects were entertaining. Some just weren't.

Spelling / Grammar: Are there noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes? Give the writer a grading on this.
6/10 Reason:You need to work on this.

Matches / Booking: Were they well booked, would you have wanted to sit through the match having watch it on TV, while watching the show. Was it a realistic finish? Did you enjoy it? (long or short)
8.5/10 Reaon:Most of the matches were fairly good.

Overall:75/100. Good show I'll continue to review. Also thanks for your review.

thanks a lot for the revview but as u said eugene was out of character well he's not the stupid and retarted eugene anymore. i think u didnt notice King Lawler comment hope you read that once again and hey a big moment happened at raw. 1st Kane confirmed he will be at unforgiven and second NWO returned..i will like to hear what you say about brining back the NWo...thank you
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thanks a lot for the revview but as u said eugene was out of character well he's not the stupid and retarted eugene anymore. i think u didnt notice King Lawler comment hope you read that once again and hey a big moment happened at raw. 1st Kane confirmed he will be at unforgiven and second NWO returned..i will like to hear what you say about brining back the NWo...thank you
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Is this the comment by the King that you were referring to? Also how did Eugene become unmentally challanged? And it's hard to judge if he's in character if you totally changed his character to just a normal superstar. Also I think Kane returning will add to your show and the NWO......well that's awsome! Sorry for not commenting on Kane and NWO. I read that I just didn't comment on them. I guess I should have though. Also in my BTB why do you think that Snitsky is a low-carder? Because I was using him as a higher carder. Like when he first came into it and was rivals with Kane. That was a classic rivaly!
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as for your question about snitsky. i said snitsky is low card wrestler because he is that in reality also and i think you should come up with a strong reason to make snitsky back as the top heeel midcard. if you read my raw show's you'll see how i came up with snitsky and now snitsky is a partner of umaga in my show and they are 2 monsters on raw right now and as they both took out kane and burned him
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as for your question about snitsky. i said snitsky is low card wrestler because he is that in reality also and i think you should come up with a strong reason to make snitsky back as the top heeel midcard. if you read my raw show's you'll see how i came up with snitsky and now snitsky is a partner of umaga in my show and they are 2 monsters on raw right now and as they both took out kane and burned him
Well I am making him destroy people as on the first show he beat Al Snow and then injured him after the match badly. And he will make his way up to destroying bigger namers.
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well then it looks good. good luck with it and can you please tell me.

in my show i brought back NWo so did i done a good job or i should have not brought him
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well then it looks good. good luck with it and can you please tell me.

in my show i brought back NWo so did i done a good job or i should have not brought him
I already said about two posts ago that I think it's awsome that you brought NWO and Kan back.
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ok thank you i may have not seen it.
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