View Poll Results: How is my BTB so far

ryu · 10-04-2006, 08:35 AM

Smackdown Preview: Fourth week

last week a tournament took place to determine a No.1 Contender for the Cruiserweight Title.. and in the opening match it was Gregory Helms vs Jamie Noble. and Helms picked up the victory qualifying himself for the next round and what will be the next match of the tournament

last week in a brutal and vicious match Cena destroyed Funaki and won the street fight match. and aftrer the match. cena issued a open challenge to anyone next week and then boogeyman music hits as on the tron it appeared boogeyman coming next week to catchya.. will we see boogeyman making his long return to wwe and will he be the one accepting Cena challenge

last week as rey-rvd were going to take back the tag titles from mnm in a tag team match from no where viva la raza music hits and chavo came out to distract rvd-rey which he succeeded in it and rey-rvd lost the tag team match and now they wont get a 2nd chance to fight for the tag titles until they wins a no.1 contender match so what will happen between these 3 superstars.

also last week we saw the departure of Khali from the wwe thanks to batista when he beat Khali in a single match. what will ahppen between henry-batista this week. will they finally face off or will Henry play another mind games with Batista.

last week in a anticipating tag team match between master-kennedy vs finlay-lashley. as kennedy and master picked up the win but after the match it was finaly-lashley who beat the hell out of of both master and kennedy. what will happen this week.. will master-kennedy look for payback.

also last week a tag team match was scheduled to take place between benoit-sabin vs taker-hassan but before the match got underway taker attacked benoit from behind and destroyed benoit and sabin with little help
from his partner hassan. will benoit look for revenge this week

check out smackdown live on CW on friday night smackdown

-phenom- · 10-06-2006, 01:41 AM

Raw review

Realism: The show was set out reasonably realisticly and in a fashion that I may expect from a RAW broadcast. The characters were well portrayed but a few tweaks to a few characters will need to be made for a spot-on result. The thing that I felt was the most unrealistic was when Steve Austin announced the majority of matches for Unforgiven in one promo- this would never happen on a wrestling broadcast, the matches would be built up and slowly announced over time. This diminishes the hype for your PPV.
7/10

Length: The overall show is a suitable length but I think that your match endings should be enhanced slightly with the exception of your 8 man tag match which was a fantastic size.
8/10

Quality / Entertainment: Due to the horrendous spelling and grammatical errors throughout the entire show, my entertainment was extremely depleted. I also got sick of seeing your sentences split up into different lines- why are you doing this? Because of these mistakes, it was hard to see what was actually going on in your show and it was more of a chore than a pleasure to read.
4/10

Spelling / Grammar: This is the major aspect of your show that needs drastic work. You need to run your show through some form of word processor before processing and use the spellchecker. The grammer that your work shows is horrible and this is exhibited in nearly every paragraph. Acknowledge the spellchecker or pay more attention in English class.
2/10

Matches / Booking: Not too bad but you definitely need to make some improvement regarding what you book and where on the card it is booked. The 8 man match was good but why include Eugene in it?
6/10

Overall: 54/100
You are definitely improving but your show still needs work.

Return the review ASAP, link in sig.

ryu · 10-06-2006, 06:30 AM

thanks for the review but can you please point out my mistakes so i know what to correct from it.

ryu · 10-06-2006, 12:00 PM

Smackdown Results: fourth week

last week recap is shown.

Cole: welcome to Friday night smackdown and last week the Great Khali was fired from wwe and thanks to Batista who defeated
him and last week the Undertaker destroyed Benoit. and i cant wait to see what happens tonight.

JBL: welcome folks to smackdown friday night and what a show we are going to have here tonight. last week the most dominant
superstar in wwe history got fired and that was because of Batista cowardness victory. Batista won because he used weapons
and he cheated to beat the great Khali. tonight i hope M.Henry gets his revenge on Batista.

The Rock music hits as he makes his way to the ring with a huge pop from the crowd

Rock in the ring: finally The Rock has come back to Atlanta Georgia

as the crowd cheeers big for the Rock.

Rock: if you all didnt know about this last week smackdown got the higher ratings then raw and the Rock as your Gm will make
smackdown a whole lot more better then it was ever. and tonight i have some great matches booked for you guyz right here
tonight in the second match of the Cruiserweight tournament it will be

Aj Style's vs Kid kash

crowd cheers

and tonight Chavo Guerrero will face RVd.

crowd goes big for this one

and last week we saw a great match and a great win by Kenndy-Master against Lashley-Finaly. but after the match
Lashley-Finlay attacked Master-Kennedy with some help of the weapons. so since Lashley-Finlay love weapons so much then
tonight in a rematch from last week it will be Master-Kennedy vs Lashley-Finlay in a No Holds barred tag team match.

crowd goes wild for this one

and now The Rock has some serious business to deal with. tonight Chris Benoit will have his revenge after what happened to
him last week so right here tonight Chris Benoit will take on

Dead man walking hits as Undertaker makes his way to the ring on a bike. the crowd booos him big time. as Undertaker makes
his way to the ring.

Undertaker: look Rock let me tell you one thing. i dont think Benoit will be here tonight because last weeek you and all
these people saw what happened to C.Benoit. i destroyed him and so i dont think you should book Benoit for a match tonight
because he wont be here tonight.

Rock: now i dont know what the hell are you talking about and i hope what ever you are saying about Benoit is false because
Benoit will be here tonight to take his revenge on you.

Undertaker: you may not know about this but you are standing in my yard and you know what happens to people who disrespect
the Deadman.

Rock: woowooo if you think im disrespecting you then you are wrong because i havent disrespect you till now but seems to me i
will give it a try to look. what will you do when i disrespect you.

Undertaker: dont even think about it.

Rock: you come out here with your 2 cents bike and intefere the Rock and talk smack about disrespecting you. well the Rock
says shut your mouth before the Rock lays the smackdown on your candy asss.

Undertaker: acts in anger and throws his Glasses and comes face to face with the Rock.

Rock: step back because the Rock cant take your stinky breath anymore.

Undertaker: Rock since you made your choice to disrespect the Undertaker. its time for me to teach you some lesson.

from the back Chris Benoit comes running to the ring with a steel chair in the hand and attacks Undertaker. Benoit smashes
Undertaker continously on the back and one final shot to the skull as Undertaker starts bleeding from the head.

Benoit: Undertaker last week you woke up the rapid wolverine and welcome to the hell of rapid wolverine and you will find out
Chris Beniot is for real.

Rock: that was a sweet pay back but right here tonight Benoit you will take on M.Hassan in a single one on one match.

crowd roars as Benoit leaves and Undertaker is still laying outside the ring.

Rock: and as for you Deadman you will face Chris Sabin in a one on one match

Cole: what a beating did Undertaker took. Benoit really showed that he is for real and what matches we will be having
tonight.

JBL: cole were you blind. did you not saw Benoit attacked Undertaker from behind with a steel chair. even you will beat
funaki from behind with the steel chair.

Cole: JBL were you blind as well last week when Undertaker attacked Benoit from behind.

JBL: cole you better show some respect to the wrestling god.

Cole: yea yea right. now lets go to our first match

John Cena music hits as he makes his way to the ring with huge boos from the crowd.

JBL: here comes the thug. why he is on smackdown. he was good on raw. smackdown doesnt needs thug like J.Cena.

Cole: well JBL incase you have forgot Cena was sended to smackdown because he lost to Edge at Summerslam in a loser leaves
raw match.

JBL: J.Cena is a looser but why send looser's to smackdown. i say send them to velocity.

Cena: last week as you all saw what happened to Funaki, he got his ass kicked by me because he disrespect me and i teach him

some lesson so next time he wont disrespect me again. and last week i issued a open challenge to anyone back there in a
single one on one match. and from nowhere this worm eating freak music hits and he tries to scare me, John Cena but let me
tell you Boogeyman. J.Cena is not afraid of anyone and if you think you can beat me then come to daddy to get some ass
whoopin. If you want some come get some.

crowd cheeers on that one.

Boogeyman music hits and he makes his way to the ring with a good pop from the crowds.

Cole: oh my finally the Boogeymam has come back to smackdown after a long time. and what a ovation for the Boogeyman.

JBL: why the hell is he back. this is not the right place for him. he should be in a jungle. this guy is black and this guy
eats freakin worms so i double hate this guy

Boogeyman makes his way to the ring with same attire and same entrance.

Cena has a frightened look on his face as Boogeyman enter's the ring and starts doing his little dace move that he does and
that scare's Cena as Cena get's out of the ring.

Boogeyman: John Cena the Boogeyman is back and he is coming to get ya. as he eats some worms

1) John Cena vs Boogeyman ---one on one match

Finish: the match has been equally balanced as both men has been beating each other through out the match. Cena going for the
5 knuckle shuffle but Boogeyman gets up and connects with a belly to belly. Boogeyman hits some clothsline and connects with
a powerslam and covers but only gets a 2 count. Boogeyman with a big boot and do his dancing move and Boogeyman calls for his
finishing move but Cena with a poke in the eye's of Boogeyman and hits a ddt for a 2 count only. Cena call for FU, as
Boogeyman gets up and Cena connects with the Fu, Cena covers but Boogeyman get's his foot on the rope's and Cena cannot
believe it as the refree stops the count at 2. Cena is furious and goes to the out side and grabs a steel chair and brings it
in the ring as Boogeyman stands up, Cena with a hard chair shot to the head of Boogeyman and the refree calls for the bell.

Winner: by DQ Boogeyman

Aftermatch: Cena hits some more chair shots on Boogeyman as Cena leaves with a wordlife taunt

Cole: Cena has gone totally mad since he's been sent to smackdown from raw. Cena has been on a role of destroying the
wrestler's. and tonight it was Boogeyman who got the beating of his life and it was Boogeyman return after a long time.

JBL: Cole, what did i told you, that is what thugs do, they beat the holy shit of their enemies. and they walk proudly after
that like they have done some big job. that was another brutal act by that thug J.Cena

2) Aj Styles vs Kid Kash ---second match of the Cruiserweight tournament to name the no.1 contender for the Cruiserweight
Championship

Finish: some great high flying moves have been performed by these 2 wrestlers. Kash with a back breaker and on the top rope
going for the moonsault but Aj gets out of the way as Kash lands on the mat.
Aj picks up Kash and they both exchange right hands. Kash irishwhips Aj onto the ropes but Aj grabs the ropes and stops
there, kash comes running towards Aj but Aj pulls down the ropes and Kash goes outside the ring falling down. Aj stands on
the apron, faces the ring and hits the best moonsault ever down onto Kash. Aj sends Kash rolling in the ring and as Kash
stands Aj goes for the super kick and cover's but only gets a 2 count. Aj on the top turnbuckle waiting for Kash to get up as
Kash gets up, Aj goes for the flying clothsline but Kash with a beautiful dropkick to Aj as Aj goes down. Kash covers but
gets a close 2 count. Kash picks up Aj and goes for his finishing move the Brainbuster as Kash gets Aj in the suplex position
and goes for the Brainbuster but Aj counters and hits a back neck breaker. Aj connects with the Styles Clash and gets the
win.

Winner: Aj Styles. Style celebrates his victory as the crowd chants his name and cheer him

Cole: what a great match. that was a great quality of high flying moves. Aj picking up the win after the great match he had
with Kash.

JBL: it was a great match but Aj got lucky tonight and got the win, otherwise Kash victory was guaranteed

backstage we see Chavo-Rey talking and RVd comes in and intefers their conversation and Chavo leaves after sayin: see you in
the ring RVD.

RVD to Rey: what were you talking with Chavo.

Rey: ah nothing Chavo was just talking trash.

RVd: Rey i believe you and i trust you so i hope you dont turn your back on me.

Rey: dont even think about it homes. we are partner's and most important we are best buddies. they both shake hands and hugs
as they leave

3)Chavo Guerrero vs RVD with Rey Mysterio ---single one on one match

Finish: Chavo tried for a suplex, but RVD reversed it, sending Chavo down back first across the ropes. RVD hits a pair of
clotheslines, then gave Chavo a monkey flip. Van Dam hit a top rope thrust kick. Chavo slumped in a corner, and RVD
dropkicked into his face. Van Dam then hit Rolling Thunder on Chavo for a two count. Van Dam set up for another monkey flip,
but Chavo blocked it and powerbombed RVD for a two count. Chavo went to ram RVD in a corner, but Van Dam blocked it and
kicked Chavo in the head. RVd on the top turnbuckle going for the frog splash but Chavo pushes refree to the ropes and the
refree is down as well as RVd. as Chavo gets up and RVD also tries to get up, Rey throws a chair towards RVD but Chavo
quickly picks it up and smashes it on the skull of RVd and covers him for the 3 count as the refree recoverd by that time.

Winner: Chavo Guerrero. Chavo celebrates as Rey looks worried. Rey gets in the ring as Chavo leaves and Rey to Chavo without
a mic in just actions. what was that.

Aftermatch: as Rey checks on Rvd. Rvd gets up and pushes Rey. Rvd says you gave the chair to Chavo. and Rey tries to explains
but Rvd knocks him out with kick to head of Rey. and leaves

Cole: did we just saw Rvd-rey fighting. i hope this tag team is not broken and what a smart move by Chavo.

JBL: thats what Guerrero's do. they lie-cheat and steal to get a win and if the late great Eddie was here. he would have also
done the same thing. that was a impressive victory and i hope Rvd beats the hell out of Rey after what Rey did.

Cole: Rey tried to help Rvd but Rvd thought he helped Chavo. Hope we find same answeres next week betweeen Rvd and Rey

backstage we see Batista talking to Christy Hemme.

from behind M.Henry comes in and attacks Batista senseless. he throws Batista in the shelter, then beats him with some chair
shots and M.Henry does his finishing move on the concreate floor on Batista. and Batista is definitly out by that attack from
M.Henry.

Henry: Batista at No Mercy it will be you begging for your life and it will be you saying I Quit as Henry leaves

Cole: my god what a vicious and brutal attack by M.Henry. that was horrible.

JBL: finally Henry got his pay back and that was so far my best moment of the night. and i wish henry beats the hell out of
Batista at No Mercy and make Batista say those 2 words I quit

Cole: well JBL the last time that match took place it was you against Cena. and Cena made you say those two words I Quit.

JBL: shut up before i get mad and beat the holy hell out of you Cole.

Cole: ok JBL "I Surrender"

4) Chris Master- Ken Kennedy vs Lashley with Ric Flair- Finlay ---No Holds Barred Tag Team match with two refree's
Finish: after so many use of the weapons from all the four wrestlers and still the match is not finished yet. in the ring
Lashley has Master in a standing suplex and connects with it, while on the out side, Finaly is stomping and choking on
Kennedy near the steel steps. Lashley is waiting for master to get up as Lashley is going for the Spear but Master counters
it with a chair shot. Lashley is down as Master calls for the Master Lock. on the outside Finlay sends Kennedy straight to
the steel steps. and in the ring Master applies the Master Lock on lashley as Finlay concerntration is on Kennedy. Master has
lock the Master Lock on Lashley as Lashely is trying hard to break it but Master applying more pressure on Lashley as Lashley
slowly starts to fade but from behind Ric Flair low blows Master as Lashley recovers and hits a thunderous chair shot to the
skull of Master allowing him to bleed from the forehead. on the outside Finlay has taken out the little bastard as he is all
over Kennedy. little bastard is thrown again under the ring by Finlay. as finlay see's in the ring his partner is dominating
Master as Finlay goes near to Kennedy, Kennedy pulls him from his attire and sends him head first onto the steel post.
kennedy with a steel pipe to the skull of Finaly, while in the ring Lashley goes for the Dominator on Master and on the
outside Kennedy is standing on the Barricade and hits the Kenton bomb and covers Finlay while in the ring Lashley also
connects with the Dominator as Lashley also covers Master almost the same time as Kennedy does. and the refree is counting
for the 3 count and it appears has both the superstars covered their opponent at the same time and got the 3 count the same
time as well. both refree argues with each other as 1 refree is holding the hand of Lashley as the other is holding the hand
of kennedy. so who is the winner.

Rock music hits and he makes his way to the ring.

Rock: i would like to see the replay of who got the 3 count first. roll the footage. we see 1 refree in the ring counting for
Lashley and the other refree on outside counting for Kennedy and after watching the footage several times from different
angle.

Rock: this match is officially tied neither team got the win. to make things clear between you guyz, so next week it will be

Master vs Lashley and it will be Kennedy vs Finlay in a single's match.

crowd cheers for this one as Kenndy and Master leaves after posing to the crowd. and an angry Lashley is not happy about this
as he and Finlay leves in anger

we see a exclusive update on King Booker from the hospital.

we see King Booker lying on the bed with his shoulder bandaged and with the King crown on Booker head and Queen Sharmell
sitting next to her.

Booker: thank you, thank you to all of you my loyal subjects, to show your concern towrds me. the reason im here lying in the
bed and all these bandages on my shoulder is because of that peasent Benoit. he discolated my shoulder and now im here lying
in my bed. the doctors have said i will recover in about 3 or 4 weeks and i cant wait to get back in the ring and take out
that peasent Benoit who did this to me. and when i come back i will make Benoit kiss my Loyal feeet and i will make Benoit
bow down to the King. King Boooookaaaa.

Sharmell: all Hail King Booker

Cole: laughing and saying what a funny man King booker T is. he's still laughing.

JBL: why the hell are you laughing! you moron. cant you see its our King its King Booker who i call the great alexander. and
King Booker is injured because of that rabbit wolverine Benoit. he is a crazy wrestler. and when K.booker returns and when he
recover's from his injury i will personally tell K.Booker to make M.Cole bow down to him and make Cole kiss your loyal feet
and then i will laugh on you. you retarted piece of shit.

Cole: why are you so over about K.booker. and dont worry about me because i have a cure for you as well if k.booker make me
bow down or make me kiss his feet then i will personally tell my freind Benoit to make you tap out and to injure you as well.

JBL: keep dreaming you S.O.B

5) Undertaker vs Chris Sabin.

Finish: some great high flying moves have been performed by sabin early in the match but now its Undertaker domianting
through out the match. Undertaker running towards the turnbuckle for the clothslinethe on Sabin but sabin moves and
Undertaker goes straight in the expose turnbuckle and Sabin connects with a back ddt. Sabin runs at the ropes and
springboards into a leg drop and covers but only gets a two count. Sabin goes top rope for the corkscrew splash but
Undertaker gets out of the way as sabin lands on the mat. Undertaker calls for the chokeslam and connects with it followed by
a Last Ride and cover's for the three count.

Winner: Undertaker. Taker celebrates as he leaves

crowd booing the Undertaker

JBL: what a match, and what a great performance by the Undertaker. he completey knock out Sabin with that thunderous last
Ride.

Cole: that was a good match and Sabin came very close to get the victory in the the match but the Phenom got the victory. and
up next its time for our main event. last week recap is shown of Undertaker beating up Benoit with a little help from
M.hassan

6)Chris Benoit vs M.Hassan

Finish: Hassan dominating through out the match. and Hassan working on Benoit lower back. Hassan with a beautiful back
breaker as Hassan signals for the Hassan Clutch. Hassan goes for the Hassan Clutch but Benoit tries to fight back and Hassan
with some furious strikes to the back on Benoit and connects with the Hassan Clutch.
Benoit trying to reach for the ropes but is unable to do so and as Hassan applys more pressure with the Hassan Clutch, Benoit
starts to fade and refree checks on Benoit as refree is counting 1,2 and the refree is going for three but Benoit starts to
move and tries to get out of the hold, Benoit with his full strength gets on his knee's but looks like Benoit cant stand with
Hassan on his back and his back is really in pain, Benoit on his knee's and Hassan still on Benoit back, benoit drops himself
backwards as Hassan goes back first to the turnbuckle and Benoit with a quick ddt. as both men are down refree starts the
counting on five count hassan starts to get up as benoit gets up on eight count and both men are staning as Hassan goes t
punch Benoit but Benoit blocks it and hits some of his own furious chops followed by some clothsline and a beautiful drop
kick. Benoit cover's but only gets two count. benoit irishwhips Hassan in the rope's but Hassan counter's it and irishwhips
Benoit in the rope's but Benoit comes back with a multiple german suplex on Hassan and Benoit calls for the flying headbutt
after three german suplexes to Hassan. Benoit on the top turnbuckle and hits the flying headbutt. Benoit slowly cover's
Hassan but only get's a two count. Benoit Locks the cripller crossface on Hassan but Hassan get's the rope break as he was
near the rope's. Benoit goes to pick up Hassan but Hassan with a poke to the eye's of Benoit, as benoit checks his eye's,
Hassan goes for the downward spiral but Benoit counter's it in the Crippler Cross Face and Hassan tries to get to the rope's
but is unable to get to the rope's as he has no choice but to tap. Hassan taps and the refree calls for the bell but Benoit
has still Hassan in the crossface and after inflicting more pain Benoit leave's him

Winner: Benoit as Benoit pose's for the crowd with his belt up high in the air

Cole: what a greta match, and Benoit coming victorious in this match. he made Hassan tap out.

JBL: today Benoit got lucky that's all i can say

Aftermatch: from the back Undertaker come's running to the ring and as he just enter's the ring Benoit see him, Undertaker
going for the clothsline but Benoit counter's it in a multiple german suplex and locks in the crossface on Undertaker as
well. Undertaker is tapping but Benoit doesnt leave's him. after many minute's Benoit leave's Undertaker from the crossface,
as Undertaker screams in pain. and benoit taunts Undertaker and pose's to the crowd

Cole: Benoit is on fir here tonight. he took out Undertaker earlier in the nihgt also and after the match Undertaker tries to
attack Benoit from behind but Benoit caught him and lock in the Crippler Croos Face. what a night we had.

JBL: Cole today is Benoit lucky night but next week mark my words. the Phenom, The Undertaker will get his revenge on Benoit.

Benoit in the ring pose's for the crowd as the show goes off the air

RVDFan156 · 10-06-2006, 04:40 PM

What I Liked:
-Opening Promo
-I love the Boogeyamn/Cena rivalry
-AJ Styles beating Kid Kash
-The Chavo/Mysterio/RVD angle
-No Holds barred match
-Benoit vs. Hassan

What I didn't Like:
-Undertaker vs. Sabin

Realism: If the show was performed realistically, where the promos / commentary in character?
9/10 Reason:Pretty real

Length: If the show is a two hour show then it has to stay within the limits, thus no booking too many matches and promos, basically over doing the show, filling it up too much
8/10 Reason: 6 matches is getting up there. With all of the promos you had also, it is a little too full.

Quality / Entertainment: Was the show well written? Did you enjoy the reading? Was there any funny/memorable moments?
8.5/10 Reason:Show was pretty good

Spelling / Grammar: Are there noticeable spelling and grammar mistakes? Give the writer a grading on this.
6.5/10 Reason:You really need to work on this. There was lowercase letters when there should have been capitals, etc.

Matches / Booking: Were they well booked, would you have wanted to sit through the match having watch it on TV, while watching the show. Was it a realistic finish? Did you enjoy it? (long or short)
9.5/10 Reason:This was a good aspect of your show.

Overall:
83/100 Your show is fairly good, you just need to work on your spelling and grammer for one. Also you need to make sure you don't over book your show with the amount of promos and matches that you have. If you're in trouble for using superstars, then do more tag team matches or interviews. But I enjoy your show and I'll keep reviewing. Please review my 2nd Fury show. Link is in my sig. Thanks!

ryu · 10-06-2006, 04:59 PM

sure buddy and thanks for the review. i hope we continue this

RVDFan156 · 10-06-2006, 05:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ryu

sure buddy and thanks for the review. i hope we continue this

No problem. And I will if you will.

ryu · 10-06-2006, 05:19 PM

bro if you will review my show then i have no problem to review your show

**RKO** · 10-06-2006, 05:30 PM

RKO777's Smackdown! Review

Thoughts: Good show. It could've been better in some areas but you put a lot of details to this show.

Realism: 7/10

Entertainment: 7/10

Length: 5/10

Colour: 7.5/10

Spelling/Grammar: 8/10

Matches:
Cena/Boogeyman: Not a very great match. A really squash match and a DQ is just what everyone does to get out from boogeyman. Could have been a better match though. 4/10 sorry

Styles/Kash: Good match but it was way too short. It would have been better if it was longer but you did set this match really well. 6/10

Chavo/RVD: Another short match but i liked the ending to it. I liked Chavo winning this but i think you should've had a slightly better matches so the show is nearly 2 hours. 6/10

Masters/Kennedy/Lashley: Good match. I would've liked it to be a winner in this match. I see you put a bit of detail in this one. This was a great match. 8/10

Undertaker/Sabin: Again really short and a squash match. Why was everyone booin

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