A good opening promo with Austin announcing the RTWM-tournament. Like others have said said, the middle part felt a bit out of character but it was still a very good promo and we have a tournament to look forward to now.
Burchill/Hardy was an average match with Burchill picking up the predictable win. The match was well written though and I'm glad that you're pushing Burchill.
Nice promo to hype up the Noble/Kash bout at NWO. I'm not sure about Noble in a ladder match though as I haven't seen him do much aerial moves so far. I guess Kash will pick up the win at NWO because the one who has the momentum going into a PPV usually loses the match.
The triple threat was good except for a part that didn't make sense
"Referee counts but Kennedy comes up and stops the count by falling on Lashley
How did he suddenly fall on Carlito? He just came in so he could fall on him
Anyway this match gave Lashley a huge victory and it looks like he's gonna go far on SD. And I really like the idea of Carlito and Kennedy together.
And then come the Mexicools to attack Carlito/Kennedy and we have ourselves a tag team titles match at NWO.
The JBL promo was very JBL-like which means its good. It was just the right lenght for him and then taker comes and says the standard Taker stuff and we have a final hype for NWO match.
Mysterio/Benoit was excellent as it should with these two men in a match. I didn't like that Mysterio was made to look so weak in the end by needing Angle to win this match but still the runin furthered the feud with Benoit and Angle.
The Christian interview was very incharacter and I liked it.
Angle/Christian was a great match and should have been the mainevent of tonight. Benoit gives Angle payback for earlier and Christian advances! Wooot!
The tagmatch felt out of place and just thrown in there. I think you should have left this out because it didn't really serve a purpose and you already had a great mainevent in Angle/Christian.
Overall: 5 matches which were all ranging from decent to excellent(except for the tagmatch) and the promo's were ok. You have improved bit on your grammar and I hope you get NWO up quickly/