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Truth & Justice · 03-30-2006, 02:33 PM

Really Strong Promo with Cen and Austin right there and Love the fatal four Way for the #1 Contendership as well should maybe set up a good Fued bewteen the Winner and the Animal.

Good win for Burchill against Maven and a nice Finish with him Turning the Tide and hitting the C4 on Maven for the Win.

Genric Heel Promo with Kash there stating he is the Best and will Prove it tonight and so On and good Heel tatics with the Dissing of Grisham which is always Good to See.

Kash Picking up the win and i had a feeling this would Lead to a Upcoming Battle at No Way Out.Good Tatics having Austin coming out and he has a starring Role tonight By the Looks of things.

Good Mini Segment from Carlito but what will the Bombshell Possibly Be??

Tag team Match with Kennedy coming out and London and Kendrick Winning via DQ And ahh the Teaming of Carlito and kennedy two of My Fav Stars so you get 22 out of 10 for that.Good Promo again saying they Are cool but really Didnt Expect them to become A Team though.SHOCK FACTOR!!

Good match with JBL And holly but good to see JBL See the match out but still some good Offence from Holly there.Great seeing taker come out and do hid Usall Scared as Shit stuff on His Oppanant.

Bret Hart in the Hallf Of Fame How great is that OMG.But good to see that he is going to be in there but Hopefully you will try to use him at Mania Maybe.

Now the Main event with Cena was well written and good to see him pick up the win but it was Tottaly Obvious he would Anyway.Also you got in wrong with Benoit doing it to Beniot but see what you were doing and a good win with Batista Just smiling and Not giving Much away.

Great show Apple Spitter only Just started watching and Reading and I'm enjoying it and learning a lot from the Way you Write.

Once again a great Show Spitter and that Was Cool.

**kicKazz** · 03-30-2006, 02:56 PM

This was a very solid show.

As Maven is a glorified jobber, I wasn't surprised that Birchill won that one.

The match between Kash vs Noble is a good sign for their forthcoming laddermatch. I expect that match to be off the hooks.

Stone Cold is doing a good job as GM of Smackdown. Perhaps too good. He IS a former bad ass wrestler you know.

The London/Kendrick vs Mexicools match looked good, although it served as a purpose to make a team out of Carlito and Kennedy. Good booking.

Lashley vs Hardy was a filler match of sorts. But it's okay, as long as it's about showing new wrestler's talents. But was this a face vs face match?

JBL shouldn't have no problems beating Holly. After that the Undertaker pretty much made his match against JBL official (it's good that you haven't added it in your sig yet. It IS some sort of spoiler).

I actually expected Cena to win the main event, what with his opening promo with Stone Cold. Now I just hope that there are matches for the three remaining guys as well. Batista vs Cena will be a solid main event (you might want to reconsider your posting in your sig, though - please see my note at the JBL vs Holly match).

Overall it was a good (not mind blowing though) Smackdown. It served it's purpose which is to build their next PPV No Way Out.

Thumbs up from me and about 8 out of 10 in rating

**KING.** · 03-30-2006, 03:13 PM

Smackdown Review:

- “Stone Cold Steve Austin: First, let me tell you that this is Smackdown. This is where, I the Stone Cold Steve Austin makes matches, not you Cena! One thing is sure Cena, You did make an Impact last night!” - Smackdown was last week…
For some reason John Cena seemed out of character to me in the opening promo. Also, I thought Austin was going to make an announcement regarding WrestleMania, not No Way Out. Anyway, the Fatal 4-Way should be good. I guess Cena will get the win. 6

- Meh, a filler match between “the Pirate” Paul Burchill and Maven to continue Burchill’s winning streak. 5

- Kid Kash retains the Cruiserweight title by cheating - good call…but the Cruiserweight title in a Ladder match? Well, the match should be good anyway. By the way…
“Fans chants, "Stone Cold Steve Austin, said so" Stone Cold leaves the Entrance Ramp while Gregory Helms and Jamie Noble stare down at each other” - Gregory Helms?! 7

- Average Carlito interview. 6

- The WWE Tag Team match would be a great match in reality; shame it had to end with a DQ. What? Kennedy and Carlito are partners? To be honest, as soon as Carlito said he “had a surprise” I expected a set up. I guess Kennedy and Carlito want the Tag titles? 7

- Another average match between Lashley and Matt Hardy. You could have, and in my opinion should have put the United States Title on the line. 7

“The Announcers discuss about what happened last night here at Smackdown and then we're showed some Clips.” - tonight, not last night.

- God, what a match - JBL vs. Hardcore Holly: help!! You could’ve added a stipulation e.g. Hardcore to “spice things up a bit”. I knew the Undertaker would show up! I guess it’s Taker vs. JBL at No Way Out? 6

- Main-event time!
“Chris Benoit then grabs John Cena's arm and he rolls him and he puts his arms across Chris Benoit. Chris Benoit smiles as the Crowd cheers” - Chris Benoit is two people?!

Although Benoit costing the match is good, why would he put heel Cena over heel Angle? I was expecting Rey to get the pin there. Anyway, No Way Out is looking good: Angle/Benoit, Batista/Cena, Taker/JBL will all be great matches. I wonder who will move onto the Smackdown WrestleMania Main-event? 7

OVERALL SCORE: 58 / 9 = 6.4 = Just over average.

Conclusion: A decent show. Could be much better. For example instead of putting Paul Burchill in a filler match to continue his winning streak, you could elevate him even more by putting him in a match against e.g. Kid Kash or Kurt Angle. This way, you could continue Kash’s/Angle’s feud by an interference from their rival and continue the Burchill winning streak at the same time.
I think the main problem is your matches. You should work on the quality by giving superstars better opponents. Try to mix styles.
Double-check your shows before posting them. Punctuation and grammar are very important for me.

I’ll be checking out your next show to see if you improve…but as for this show - not that cool.

P.S. Are you using Kane in your thread? If so where is he?

**Apple Spitter!** · 03-31-2006, 12:48 AM

Thanks everyone for Reviews, I'll definitely return them.

Quote:

Originally Posted by kic-kazz

Lashley vs Hardy was a filler match of sorts. But it's okay, as long as it's about showing new wrestler's talents. But was this a face vs face match?

Yes, It was a face vs. face match.

Quote:

Originally Posted by TKoW

- Main-event time!
“Chris Benoit then grabs John Cena's arm and he rolls him and he puts his arms across Chris Benoit. Chris Benoit smiles as the Crowd cheers” - Chris Benoit is two people?!

P.S. Are you using Kane in your thread? If so where is he?

Well, It was just a mistake. I'll edit it and other thing, Kane is at RAW.

MSDavis · 03-31-2006, 05:11 AM

Great way to open the show and I was expecting Cena to get given the title shot. He has to win the #1 contendership first, and I think he will, although I’m cheering for Christian, b/c he and Batista had a great main event last week.

Good first match and it was obvious Birchill would win, but the fact that it was not a squash was good and it’s a nice way to push Birchill.

Kid Kash was good in his promo and I think he’ll retain his title against Noble. This is a good feud you have going between these two and it helps the CW title by having it defended often.

Great CW match and I’m glad Kash had to cheat to win.

Wow, great announcement for a Ladder Match. That’s the first time this title will have ever been defended in this match type.

Carlito was pretty good. I find it really hard to do his promos but I think you’ve mastered it here.

This tag title match between London/Kendrick and the Mexicools should be amazing, as they’re my favourite 2 WWE tag teams.

Great tag match but I don’t see why Kennedy interfered.

Ah, I see, Kennedy and Carlito are actually together and I think they’ll be going for the tag titles.

Another top quality match and a good win for Lashley over Matt Hardy. Your match lengths seem very long, but I guess that’s alright.

This stuff has to be from the Undertaker and it’s a good way to build up their rivalry.

Nice win for JBL as I don’t like Holly very much. The aftermath with Taker was good and typical Undertaker stuff.

Good hype for the Hall of Fame.

Awesome main event and Cena, as I thought, won. Benoit getting revenge was also good but I don’t think he should have put Cena’s arm over Angle, as Cena is a heel. You perhaps could have had Cena just crawl over Angle. Also, you out Cena over well here, as he F-U’ed everyone, which is good to see.

Overall, another great show. It seemed shorter than usual, but apart from that, the matches and segments were all well done. 8.5/10

MNM Rules · 03-31-2006, 09:12 AM

Smackdown Review

Opening Promo- Amazing promo here! What an announcement for later tonight. I am liking John Cena as a heel now. Before I didnt like him.

Burchill vs Maven- Nothing special about this match. Thank god Burchill won. If he didn't then I would be mad because Maven has no skills and Burchill owns!

Kash Promo- Nice promo for the heel Kash. I think that Kid Kash will retain the title.

Kash vs Noble- I was right. Kash retains the title. I am excited for the Ladder Match at No Way Out. It should be good.

Carlito Promo- Surprise? I wonder what it will be. But so far, what I know about you Apple Spitter, you make a lot of surprises.

Mexicools vs London/Kendrick- London and Kendrick win by DQ. At least they won. A lot of bookers misuse Paul London and Brian Kendrick.

Surprise- Carlito and Kennedy as tag team partners? WTF?! I really did not see this coming.

Lashley vs Hardy- Lashley taking 15 minutes to defeat Hardy is very VERY unrealistic. Maybe this Matt Hardy is new and improved. I would like to see how far Lashley goes in this thread.

JBL vs Hardcore Holly- JBL wins of course. Hardcore Holly is just a jobber. I like how Undertaker came out and got JBL absolutely shocked.

Main Event- CENA WINS! I knew that something like this would happen. I think it is great that he won though. Cena vs Batista should be great. I was kinda pulling fir Benoit to get the win though. Oh well.

Grade- 8/10. The end lacked some promos. No Way Out is shaping up great. GOOD JOB!

**Apple Spitter!** · 03-31-2006, 11:55 AM

Thanks everyone, I think I have returned everyone's Reviews and If anyone more wants Review then Review mine

As simple as that

Crackdasher · 03-31-2006, 01:01 PM

Solid opening promo. But Cena felt a bit out of character. It sets up a nice mainevent for the evening and i think that cena will probably win. I saw a few typos

NOTE: Its not just "cause stone cold said so" its " and thats the bottomline, cause stonecold said so"

Paul Burchill in a match where he is put over by Maven. No further comments

I didn't really like Kid Kash' interview. It just was to short and came off a bit bland.

Solid cruiserweight bout between noble and kash. Nice match setup afterwards for NWO. I'm not sure about Noble in laddermatch as there are better cruiserweights for that match. Still I hope that Kid KAsh keeps the belt cuz I'm not a big fan of Noble.

A nice little Carlito segment which makes you wonder what he will do

Solid paced tagteam match follows with Kennedy interupting it.

Then something pretty surprising happens. Carlito and Kennedy team up. I actually like this idea of a tagteam and I hope it works out well.

They Hardy/Lashley bout was ok but unrealistic. Lashley has trouble going for 11 minutes with JBL so he sure as hell can't wrestle for 15 mins. Also Lashley should whoop Hardy's ass all over the place.

JBL/Holly has to be a very stiff match. It was decent I guess although the ending was nothing special. Nice undertaker run-in afterwards to further the feud.

The mainevent had a few writing flaws but I'll look past that as other ppl have pointed them out already. It was good mainevent match pure and simple where Cena picks up the predictable win.

Overall: You could have added more promo's and you should overlook your writing better as there were quite a few flaws and typos in there. Also try putting Burchill against some more high profile workers instead of jobbers.

TR1 · 03-31-2006, 02:58 PM

Smackdown Review

Opening promo- This was good, and it set up the Main Event for tonight. Cena seemed out of character in this though. I can't wait for the Main Event.

Birchall vs. Maven- I like how you're pushing Paul Birchall, but like everyon else said, make him face better wrestler's.

Kash interview- This seemd a little out of character.

Kash vs. Noble- This was a good match. I like how Kash is your cruiserweight champion. I can't wait for the ladder match at NWO.

Tag Team match- This was a pretty good faced paced match. Kennedy then interferes. Carlito comes out to save them, NO! I couldn't believe it. Nice shocker there.

Hardy vs. Lashley- This was unrealalistic I think. Lashley can never go 15 minute in a match. Hardy also got some offense in which suprized me.

JBL vs. Holly- I didn't like this match, but it was very stiff. The Undertaker comes in, and know it's going to be Taker vs. JBL at NWO.

Main Event- This was the match of the night. You had some mistakes in this though. I didn't really like how Cena won, because I think it's a big fued, that should be at WM.

Matches- 9/10

Promo's- 8/10

Realism- 8/10

Spelling/ Grammar- 7/10

Length- 10/10

Overall- 8/10, this was a good show which set NWO very well.

**#1Stratusfan** · 03-31-2006, 08:30 PM