Hollywood Quality Feedback:
Hey man this is my first time reading your work but multiple people have told me your a great writer so I figured i'd drop you some feedback while I have some free time right now.
AWESOME match to kick the show off with! I always imagined a feud between London and Kendrick would be awesome and this match was great. I thought the ending was perfect with London hitting Kendrick with Sliced Bread then hitting the 450 instead of covering after Sliced Bread, Because that's something I just can't see a face doing. I will say you may have used too much caps during the match but maybe that's just me.
Hmm looks like you may be starting up with Nick Nemeth and Paul London feud. That may be good as Nemeth is a great worker and London always put on good matches as well.
Okay maybe this is because i'm new to your thread but why would Orton being on Arn's team at Survivor Series lead to Arn being fired?
Would have liked more detail in the Burke vs MVP match but it was only a 5 minute match so that's more so just me being one for full matches.
Going into the NO DQ Match I must say something tells me The Animal is going to DESTROY Garrison Cade. Hopefully i'm wrong and it turns into a good match possibly with Cade even winning as I never liked Batista.
The No DQ Match was a fun hardcore match with a good pace to it throughout the match which is always good. Looks like Undertaker may be after Batista but with no sign of him showing up maybe Cade had something up his sleeve all along here? I guess time will tell, Perhaps even as soon as the main event title match. None the less Cade seems to have Batista's number.
MNM coming to Smackdown! Love it. Always liked MNM and always will.
Uh oh Batista is having roid rage!
That segment with Layla and Jamie Noble was gold, Mainly because of the way Layla spoke to Jamie Noble. Seems next week he gets his hands on TBK so that should be a fun match considering the 2 out of 3 falls stip.
AMW retain which is good as they may be one of the greatest teams ever. Seems like your setting up The Murdoch's to feud with Carlito and Kofi. Not sure how to feel about that as I've yet to see either team compete in a full match but i'll give it a chance and see how it goes. The question is who will step up to end the incredible title run of AMW? My guess is maybe Hardy and Bourne.
Okay NOW I get how Orton can end up costing Arn his job. Of course I can't see Arn giving a spot on his team to someone who would possibly throw the match and cause him to lose his job though.
Guess Batista won't be costing Taker the match...or will he? Main event time so lets find out.
Well 3 main events in 1 here, Same trick Teddy Long used on Edge a few years ago I believe but none the less an effective one. It makes sense when you had Batista come out as he thought the match was over but now it seems we may be getting a triple threat at Survivor Series.
Overall a good episode of Smackdown and a very big one at that. Very fun read and i'll be tuning in from now on for sure.